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** [[spoiler:Jossed, I'm afraid. Lorenz got smothered to death by Kei, only for it all to have turned out to be a dream and for him to still be alive]]. They could always turn up later, however, awesome as that would be. ;)
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** [[spoiler:Jossed, I'm afraid. Lorenz got smothered to death by Kei, only for it all to have turned out to be a dream and for him to still be alive]]. They could always turn up later, however, awesome as that would be. ;)
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** They were 'forgotten'. Seriously, they were 'forgotten' due to the shear size of this fic.
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** They were 'forgotten'. Seriously, they were 'forgotten' due to the shear sheer size of this fic.
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* Alright, I know this is already there under ArtMajorPhysics, bbut I gotta go over it again: ''plasma focusing crystals?'' how can that POSSIBLY work? I guess you could say that it's simply a crystaline solid with vents running through it that focus the plasma into a coherent stream, but that causes a whole bunch of other problems!
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* Alright, I know this is already there under ArtMajorPhysics, bbut but I gotta go over it again: ''plasma focusing crystals?'' how can that POSSIBLY work? I guess you could say that it's simply a crystaline solid with vents running through it that focus the plasma into a coherent stream, but that causes a whole bunch of other problems!
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** it semi-invalidated the events of chapter 71-through-102. However, there were plot threads and hints that not the entire world was immersed in the dream- South America under Armisael was unaffected, and had the author not quit the story it would have been revealed Australia (Six AIs, One Continent) was unaffected as well. Basically, places affected by a strong AT Field (Armisael, Baraqiel) were able to resist Arael.
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** it It semi-invalidated the events of chapter 71-through-102. However, there were plot threads and hints that not the entire world was immersed in the dream- South America under Armisael was unaffected, and had the author not quit the story it would have been revealed Australia (Six AIs, One Continent) was unaffected as well. Basically, places affected by a strong AT Field (Armisael, Baraqiel) were able to resist Arael.
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** Same way that construction machinery was welded together into a giant robot: AT Field.
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* So what exactly did [[spoiler: Chapter 102/71]] invalidate? As in, what has [[spoiler: no longer happened]]? Everything was already getting very complicated, and now...
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* So what exactly did [[spoiler: Chapter 102/71]] invalidate? As in, what has [[spoiler: no longer happened]]? Everything was already getting very complicated, and now...now...
**it semi-invalidated the events of chapter 71-through-102. However, there were plot threads and hints that not the entire world was immersed in the dream- South America under Armisael was unaffected, and had the author not quit the story it would have been revealed Australia (Six AIs, One Continent) was unaffected as well. Basically, places affected by a strong AT Field (Armisael, Baraqiel) were able to resist Arael.
**it semi-invalidated the events of chapter 71-through-102. However, there were plot threads and hints that not the entire world was immersed in the dream- South America under Armisael was unaffected, and had the author not quit the story it would have been revealed Australia (Six AIs, One Continent) was unaffected as well. Basically, places affected by a strong AT Field (Armisael, Baraqiel) were able to resist Arael.
