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[[horrifyingthehorror]]
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Behold the face of death \\
[[Anothermansterror]]
Behold the face of death \\
[[Anothermansterror]]
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[[Anothermansterror]]
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[[horrifyingthehorror]]
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Behold the face of death \\[[horrifyingthehorror]]
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[[namestorunawayfromreallyfast]]
Behold the face of death\\[[horrifyingthehorror]]\\
[[Anothermansterror]]
Behold the face of death
[[Anothermansterror]]
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HorrifyingtheHorror
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Even the devil knows fear
Flame destroys shadow
Rage will kill the xeno
Hell shall have its corpse
Justice thy name is Amanda Ripley
Flame destroys shadow
Rage will kill the xeno
Hell shall have its corpse
Justice thy name is Amanda Ripley
to:
Even the devil knows fear
fear\\
Flame destroysshadow
shadow \\
Rage will kill thexeno
xeno \\
Hell shall have itscorpse
corpse \\
Justice thy name is AmandaRipleyRipley \\
Flame destroys
Rage will kill the
Hell shall have its
Justice thy name is Amanda
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The Alien thought it could kill us \\
But now WE are the hunters\\
[[TheHunterBecomesTheHunted]]
->-- @/{{Erebus42}}
We shall not be denied our vengeance \\
Not while we still have breath
Your blood for those of our children
Hell awaits you \\
[[RageBreakingPoint*]]
->-- @/{{Erebus42}}
But now WE are the hunters\\
[[TheHunterBecomesTheHunted]]
->-- @/{{Erebus42}}
We shall not be denied our vengeance \\
Not while we still have breath
Your blood for those of our children
Hell awaits you \\
[[RageBreakingPoint*]]
->-- @/{{Erebus42}}
to:
Flame destroys shadow
Rage will kill
But now WE are
[[TheHunterBecomesTheHunted]]
->-- @/{{Erebus42}}
We
Hell shall
Not while we still
Your blood for those of our children
Hell awaits you \\
[[RageBreakingPoint*]]
->-- @/{{Erebus42}}
Justice thy name is Amanda Ripley
HorrifyingtheHorror
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The devil is loose \\
we're all going to die \\
[[DoNotGoGentle weapons in hand]]
we're all going to die \\
[[DoNotGoGentle weapons in hand]]
to:
The devil is loose \\
we're all going to die \\
[[DoNotGoGentle weapons in hand]]Alien thought it could kill us \\
But now WE are the hunters\\
[[TheHunterBecomesTheHunted]]
we're all going to die \\
[[DoNotGoGentle weapons in hand]]
But now WE are the hunters\\
[[TheHunterBecomesTheHunted]]
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the end comes \\
it's name is the xeno- \\
[[KilledMidSentence *Sound of falling down*]]
it's name is the xeno- \\
[[KilledMidSentence *Sound of falling down*]]
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Your blood for those of our children
Hell awaits you \\
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The devil is loose
we're all going to die
weapons in hand
the end comes
it's name is the xeno
we're all going to die
weapons in hand
the end comes
it's name is the xeno
to:
The devil is loose
loose \\
we're all going todie
die \\
[[DoNotGoGentle weapons inhand
hand]]
->-- @/{{Erebus42}}
the endcomes
comes \\
it's name is thexenoxeno- \\
[[KilledMidSentence *Sound of falling down*]]
->-- @/{{Erebus42}}
we're all going to
[[DoNotGoGentle weapons in
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the end
it's name is the
[[KilledMidSentence *Sound of falling down*]]
->-- @/{{Erebus42}}
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The devil is loose
we're all going to die
weapons in hand
the end comes
it's name is the xeno
we're all going to die
weapons in hand
the end comes
it's name is the xeno
