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Yue Qingyuan from ''Fanfic/SalvageTheRemnants'' pretended he didn't care a whit about Shen Qingqiu in order to protect him from enemies bent on attacking the Emperor by hurting his beloved. His indifferent facade is so convincing that Shen Qingqiu loses any trust in his love and now believes Yue Qingyuan merely tolerates him out of obligation.
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* Yue Qingyuan from ''Fanfic/SalvageTheRemnants'' pretended he didn't care a whit about Shen Qingqiu in order to protect him from enemies bent on attacking the Emperor by hurting his beloved. His indifferent facade is so convincing that Shen Qingqiu loses any trust in his love and now believes Yue Qingyuan merely tolerates him out of obligation.
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* Yue Qingyuan from ''Fanfic/SalvageTheRemnants'' pretended he didn't care a whit about Shen Qingqiu in order to protect him from enemies bent on attacking the Emperor by hurting his beloved. His indifferent facade is so convincing that Shen Qingqiu loses any trust in his love and now believes Yue Qingyuan merely tolerates him out of obligation.
* Yue Qingyuan from ''Fanfic/SalvageTheRemnants'' pretended he didn't care a whit about Shen Qingqiu in order to protect him from enemies bent on attacking the Emperor by hurting his beloved. His indifferent facade is so convincing that Shen Qingqiu loses any trust in his love and now believes Yue Qingyuan merely tolerates him out of obligation.
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Yue Qingyuan from ''Fanfic/SalvageTheRemnants'' pretended he didn't care a whit about Shen Qingqiu in order to protect him from enemies bent on attacking the Emperor by hurting his beloved. His indifferent facade is so convincing that Shen Qingqiu loses any trust in his love and now believes Yue Qingyuan merely tolerates him out of obligation.
Yue Qingyuan from ''Fanfic/SalvageTheRemnants'' pretended he didn't care a whit about Shen Qingqiu in order to protect him from enemies bent on attacking the Emperor by hurting his beloved. His indifferent facade is so convincing that Shen Qingqiu loses any trust in his love and now believes Yue Qingyuan merely tolerates him out of obligation.
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* ''Fanfic/TaylorHebertMedhallIntern'':
** Victor makes his confrontation with Principal Blackwell go faster and easier by draining rational thinking and self control from several other participants, especially Sophia. [[spoiler:Which contributes to her going nuts, breaking out of police custody and murdering Crusader, then infiltrating Medhall and shooting Victor.]]
** Max Anders tests Taylor's competence and loyalty by raising her clearance level and having her audit some employee records that include an Empire 88 member, to see what she'll find and what she'll do with it. [[spoiler:Not only does she spot his Empire connections, she also uses her new access to investigate the Fergusons and discover their family relationship with Max himself, making her suspect that Max's judgement is compromised regarding family, and motivating her to keep digging even further.]]
** Victor makes his confrontation with Principal Blackwell go faster and easier by draining rational thinking and self control from several other participants, especially Sophia. [[spoiler:Which contributes to her going nuts, breaking out of police custody and murdering Crusader, then infiltrating Medhall and shooting Victor.]]
** Max Anders tests Taylor's competence and loyalty by raising her clearance level and having her audit some employee records that include an Empire 88 member, to see what she'll find and what she'll do with it. [[spoiler:Not only does she spot his Empire connections, she also uses her new access to investigate the Fergusons and discover their family relationship with Max himself, making her suspect that Max's judgement is compromised regarding family, and motivating her to keep digging even further.]]
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* ''Fanfic/ThePriceOfRevenge'': After kidnapping Tim, Jason taunted him by assuring that Batman wouldn't waste time seeking for him and replace Robin as soon as possible. When Tim finally gains the opportunity to meet with Bruce, they are interrupted by [[spoiler:Damian]] in full Robin costume. Even Jason was horrified to see his prediction apparently coming true.
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* ''Fanfic/ThePriceOfRevenge'': After kidnapping Tim, Jason taunted him by assuring that Batman wouldn't waste time seeking for him and replace Robin as soon as possible. When Tim finally gains the opportunity to meet with Bruce, they are interrupted by [[spoiler:Damian]] in full Robin costume.costume [[spoiler:talking about how he will be Tim's SuperiorSuccessor]]. Even Jason was horrified to see his prediction apparently coming true.
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* ''Fanfic/WishfulThinking'': Makima's scheme in Chapter 7's [[GroundhogPeggySue time loop]] is to have the government execute the Gun Fiend to break Denji's trust in Public Safety. [[spoiler:Denji joins the Chainsaw Man Church as a result.]]
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* ''Fanfic/WishfulThinking'': Makima's scheme in Chapter 7's [[GroundhogPeggySue time loop]] is to have the government execute the Gun Fiend to break Denji's trust in Public Safety. [[spoiler:Denji marries Fami and joins the Chainsaw Man Church as a result.]]
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* ''Fanfic/ThePriceOfRevenge'': After kidnapping Tim, Jason taunted him by assuring that Batman wouldn't waste time seeking for him and replace Robin as soon as possible. When Tim finally gains the opportunity to meet with Bruce, they are interrupted by [[spoiler:Damian]] in full Robin costume. Even Jason was horrified to see his prediction apparently coming true.
** Jason also played with the possibility of converting Tim to his way of dealing with crime. Following the aforementioned event, Tim took the philosophy and ran with it to such an extreme Jason ultimately freaked and enlisted Batman's help.
** Jason also played with the possibility of converting Tim to his way of dealing with crime. Following the aforementioned event, Tim took the philosophy and ran with it to such an extreme Jason ultimately freaked and enlisted Batman's help.
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* ''[[Fanfic/KirbyOfTheStarsTheAfterStory Kirby's Dream Land 2]]'': Fumu attempts to give a mob of villagers a Rousing Speech to unite them in protecting themselves against the mysterious creature in Whispy Woods' Forest. It works... then the now-united mob heads off to kill the creature.
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* ''[[Fanfic/KirbyOfTheStarsTheAfterStory Kirby's Dream Land 2]]'': Fumu attempts to give a mob of villagers a Rousing Speech RousingSpeech to unite them in protecting themselves against the mysterious creature in Whispy Woods' Forest. It works... then the now-united mob heads off to kill the creature.
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* ''[[Fanfic/KirbyOfTheStarsTheAfterStory Kirby's Dream Land 2]]'': Fumu attempts to give a mob of villagers a Rousing Speech to unite them in protecting themselves against the mysterious creature in Whispy Woods' Forest. It works... then the now-united mob heads off to kill the creature.
* ''[[Fanfic/KirbyOfTheStarsTheAfterStory Kirby's Dream Land 2]]'': Fumu attempts to give a mob of villagers a Rousing Speech to unite them in protecting themselves against the mysterious creature in Whispy Woods' Forest. It works... then the now-united mob heads off to kill the creature.
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* ''Fanfic/FirstHoofAccount'': As part of her plan to deal with Blueblood, Sunset [[spoiler:sets up a fencing contest and sabotages his equipment's safety feature so that it will look like he actually tried to hurt her. This works a little too well and lands her in the hospital for days as a result of a fencing foil stabbing into her chest]].
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* ''Fanfic/TheLegendOfGobberTheBelch'': From Will's perspective: after he soothes the Boneknapper's anger and gives it back the missing bone piece, he finds he's now befriended the dragon. Gobber cites that it's better than the dragon still attacking him.
