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* In Ironforge, Magni is showing Lothar the gun the dwarf are crafting and turns toward a messenger carrying a letter. In the background, we see Lothar brandishing the gun with no idea of how it works, [[JugglingLoadedGuns even looking directly into the barrel for a few seconds]].
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* In Ironforge, Magni is showing Lothar the gun the dwarf dwarces are crafting and turns toward a messenger carrying a letter. In the background, we see Lothar brandishing the gun with no idea of how it works, [[JugglingLoadedGuns even looking directly into the barrel for a few seconds]].
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* When they enter Kharazan, Lothar asks Moroes where Medivh is. Cue the old butler gesturing toward the absurdly high staircase and both of them beginning the ascension. At one point, the scene cuts from Khadgar snooping around to Lothar and Moroes climbing. Lothar is exhausted and has to stop to regain his breath while the old man isn't even breathing hard and tells him to take deep breathes. When they finally reach Medivh, Lothar can barely stand and Moroes has to fetch him a drink.
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* When they enter Kharazan, Lothar asks Moroes where Medivh is. Cue the old butler gesturing toward the absurdly high staircase and both of them beginning the ascension. At one point, the scene cuts from Khadgar snooping around to Lothar and Moroes climbing. Lothar is exhausted and has to stop to regain his breath while the old man isn't even breathing hard and tells him to take deep breathes.breaths. When they finally reach Medivh, Lothar can barely stand and Moroes has to fetch him a drink.
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* Every time he's put into a teleport spell, Lothar is closing his eyes, even the mages are not. It's like watching a kid expecting to get drenched in water.
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* Orgrim's musings on fel and the Portal (paraphrased):
-->'''Orgrim:''' Gods! You want power, you only have to build them a statue.
-->'''Orgrim:''' Gods! You want power, you only have to build them a statue.
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* Orgrim's musings on fel and the Portal (paraphrased):
Portal:
-->'''Orgrim:'''Gods! You want power, you only have to build them Whole world in exchange for a statue.statue. Gods are strange creatures.
-->'''Orgrim:'''
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** Becomes a bit of a BrickJoke when he uses it in desperation on Blackhand, then looks at it as if realizing in horror that back in Ironforge, he was looking down the part that did ''that'' to an Orc, with his finger on the trigger.
