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--> '''Dani:''' I [[spoiler: woke up in a mansion, met a Grim Reaper-wannabe, found a friend who was kidnapped a month ago, escaped with her through an underground river, and was attacked by a werewolf.]] [[SnarkBait After that, you can say anything you like and I won't think you're insane]].
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--> '''Dani:''' I [[spoiler: woke up in a mansion, met a Grim Reaper-wannabe, found a friend who was kidnapped a month ago, escaped with her through an underground river, and was attacked by a werewolf.]] [[SnarkBait After that, you can say anything you like and I won't think you're insane]].insane.
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Back to ''WebOriginal/{{Vampiru}}''
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* "[[ItMakesSenseInContext All we need is some music and we'll be playing Pass the Parcel]] - Gothic Horror [[XMeetsY meets]] Science Fiction Style."
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* "[[ItMakesSenseInContext All we need is some music and we'll be playing Pass the Parcel]] - Gothic Horror [[XMeetsY [[JustForFun/XMeetsY meets]] Science Fiction Style."
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* When Dani says she saw Edward on TV, Lucius thinks she means he's an actor.
* Lucius describing the President as "a sort of elected monarch", and later refers to him and his family as "American royalty".
* Dani hears Lucius snoring and immediately thinks, "Who let a pig in?"
* The scene where Leslie sneaks into Claude's bed and turns him into a human teddy bear (it's NotWhatItLooksLike). Then Sirius walks in. Cue a hilariously awkward conversation where Claude insists it's completely platonic, "of course".
--> "Of course," [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal Sirius said shakily]], in the tone of a man who had learned [[TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow something humanity was not meant to know]] and was [[GoMadFromTheRevelation on the brink of madness as a result]].
* Lucius describing the President as "a sort of elected monarch", and later refers to him and his family as "American royalty".
* Dani hears Lucius snoring and immediately thinks, "Who let a pig in?"
* The scene where Leslie sneaks into Claude's bed and turns him into a human teddy bear (it's NotWhatItLooksLike). Then Sirius walks in. Cue a hilariously awkward conversation where Claude insists it's completely platonic, "of course".
--> "Of course," [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal Sirius said shakily]], in the tone of a man who had learned [[TheseAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow something humanity was not meant to know]] and was [[GoMadFromTheRevelation on the brink of madness as a result]].
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* Leslie's exploration of Grievous's base [[MoodWhiplash swings between]] hilarious and NightmareFul.
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* Leslie's exploration of Grievous's base [[MoodWhiplash swings between]] hilarious and NightmareFul.NightmareFuel.
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* "Psychopaths are going up in the world these days."
* Leslie's exploration of Grievous's base [[MoodWhiplash swings between]] hilarious and NightmareFul.
* Leslie's exploration of Grievous's base [[MoodWhiplash swings between]] hilarious and NightmareFul.
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* The entire scene where Vlad goes to see Victor (yes, [[Literature/{{Frankenstein}} that one]]) is full of funny moments.
** He starts by describing how Victor's house hasn't changed since 1819.
--> Vlad wasn't entirely sure how Victor kept his house the same for so long. He wished he'd tell him the secret, though; maybe then he wouldn't have to renovate or just plain rebuild the castle every other century.
** This is promptly followed by [[FrankensteinsMonster Adam]] hugging Vlad. Yes, really!
--> Vlad would deny till the day he died (if that ever came) that he screamed. Or, if he admitted it, he'd deny how loudly he screamed.
--> '''Vlad:''' Put me down!
--> Wrong thing to say. Adam Frankenstein might not be the shambling, inarticulate zombie-like creature that humans liked to think of him as, but some things went right over his head. Some things, like not going overboard in doing what someone told him. And that was how Vlad went from dangling helplessly in mid-air to lying on the floor.
** And then, when Victor shows up:
--> '''Victor:''' Why didn't you appear a few decades ago? You'd have saved us the expense of the funeral your cousin insisted on, even though no one believed you were really dead.
** He starts by describing how Victor's house hasn't changed since 1819.
--> Vlad wasn't entirely sure how Victor kept his house the same for so long. He wished he'd tell him the secret, though; maybe then he wouldn't have to renovate or just plain rebuild the castle every other century.
** This is promptly followed by [[FrankensteinsMonster Adam]] hugging Vlad. Yes, really!
--> Vlad would deny till the day he died (if that ever came) that he screamed. Or, if he admitted it, he'd deny how loudly he screamed.
--> '''Vlad:''' Put me down!
--> Wrong thing to say. Adam Frankenstein might not be the shambling, inarticulate zombie-like creature that humans liked to think of him as, but some things went right over his head. Some things, like not going overboard in doing what someone told him. And that was how Vlad went from dangling helplessly in mid-air to lying on the floor.
** And then, when Victor shows up:
--> '''Victor:''' Why didn't you appear a few decades ago? You'd have saved us the expense of the funeral your cousin insisted on, even though no one believed you were really dead.
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--> '''Lucius:''' The boogeyman invited me to bed.
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--> '''Lucius:''' The boogeyman invited me to bed.tea.
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* "[[ItMakesSenseInContext All we need is some music and we'll be playing Pass the Parcel]] - Gothic Horror [[XMeetsY meets meets]] Science Fiction]] Fiction Style.""
* While Sirius is on the plane, Christian starts annoying him by requesting a minute-by-minute update. Sirius gives him one.
--> '''Sirius:''' ''Man behind me is snoring. Would it be considered a crime to sellotape his mouth shut?''
--> '''Sirius:''' ''The scenery needs improvement. You should ask Jack Frost to paint the clouds as well as the leaves this autumn.''
* The RunningGag of people meeting Leslie and not believing their eyes.
--> '''Dandelion:''' Tell me, someone, did your adventures today involve a multi-armed shadow?
--> '''Dani:''' How'd you know?
--> '''Dandelion:''' It's sitting on the windowsill. And it's waving at me.
--> '''Hazel:''' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis What. The.]] ''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis Hell]]''?
--> '''Lucius:''' What. Is. That?
--> '''Leslie:''' [[LampshadeHanging I am getting so sick of this reaction.]]
* When the doctor finds Lucius hiding under the bed, he comes up with a... creative explanation.
--> '''Lucius:''' The boogeyman invited me to bed.
* While Sirius is on the plane, Christian starts annoying him by requesting a minute-by-minute update. Sirius gives him one.
--> '''Sirius:''' ''Man behind me is snoring. Would it be considered a crime to sellotape his mouth shut?''
--> '''Sirius:''' ''The scenery needs improvement. You should ask Jack Frost to paint the clouds as well as the leaves this autumn.''
* The RunningGag of people meeting Leslie and not believing their eyes.
--> '''Dandelion:''' Tell me, someone, did your adventures today involve a multi-armed shadow?
--> '''Dani:''' How'd you know?
--> '''Dandelion:''' It's sitting on the windowsill. And it's waving at me.
--> '''Hazel:''' [[PunctuatedForEmphasis What. The.]] ''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis Hell]]''?
--> '''Lucius:''' What. Is. That?
--> '''Leslie:''' [[LampshadeHanging I am getting so sick of this reaction.]]
* When the doctor finds Lucius hiding under the bed, he comes up with a... creative explanation.
--> '''Lucius:''' The boogeyman invited me to bed.
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* Dani gets sick of David's telepathy. In a shopping mall filled with people.
--> '''Dani:''' I told you to stop reading my mind!
--> '''David:''' Why don't you scream that a little louder, Miss Tamari? Because I'm sure there's some poor, deaf soul in Australia who ''didn't'' hear you!
--> '''Dani:''' I told you to stop reading my mind!
--> '''David:''' Why don't you scream that a little louder, Miss Tamari? Because I'm sure there's some poor, deaf soul in Australia who ''didn't'' hear you!
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--> '''Murray:''' "Sir? This is Officer John Murray speaking. [[GoMadFromTheRevelation I'd like to apply for a psychiatric evaluation.]] When? Right now.
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--> '''Murray:''' "Sir? Sir? This is Officer John Murray speaking. [[GoMadFromTheRevelation I'd like to apply for a psychiatric evaluation.]] When? Right now.
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--> '''Murray:''' "Sir? This is Officer John Murray speaking. I'd like to apply for a psychiatric evaluation. When? Right now.
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--> '''Murray:''' "Sir? This is Officer John Murray speaking. [[GoMadFromTheRevelation I'd like to apply for a psychiatric evaluation. evaluation.]] When? Right now.now.
* Leslie and Claude in general are pretty funny.
--> '''Leslie:''' It's dead.
--> '''[[DeadpanSnarker Claude]]:''' [[SarcasmMode I would never have guessed it. Your powers of observation stagger me, Mr. Holmes.]]
** And so is Claude's summation of Leslie.
--> Leslie might be a genderless, literally shadowy alien that caused fear and unease everywhere they went [...] but they also had a knack for finding out things you wanted to keep hidden with more skill than the average gossip columnist and asked more awkward questions than the average teenager.
* Leslie and Claude in general are pretty funny.
--> '''Leslie:''' It's dead.
--> '''[[DeadpanSnarker Claude]]:''' [[SarcasmMode I would never have guessed it. Your powers of observation stagger me, Mr. Holmes.]]
** And so is Claude's summation of Leslie.
--> Leslie might be a genderless, literally shadowy alien that caused fear and unease everywhere they went [...] but they also had a knack for finding out things you wanted to keep hidden with more skill than the average gossip columnist and asked more awkward questions than the average teenager.
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--> '''Murray:''' "Sir? This is Officer John Murray speaking. I'd like to apply for a psychatric psychiatric evaluation. When? Right now.
