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--->'''Ramen lady:''' I'M CLOSING THE SHOP FOR GOOD!
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--->'''Ramen lady:''' I'M CLOSING THE UP SHOP FOR GOOD!
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* After Yamame asks everyone if they want to go to the field to get fruits and veggies, [[BigEater Kurumi]] tearfully says, "I want to leave!" Upon eating some of the food there, Kurumi just as tearfully says, "I want to live here!"
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* After Yamame asks everyone if they want to go to the field to get fruits and veggies, [[BigEater Kurumi]] tearfully says, "I want to leave!" Upon eating some of the food there, Kurumi just as tearfully says, "I want to live here!"here!" Making it better is that its a clear [[ShoutOut reference]] to [[Manga/OnePiece Nico Robin's "I want to live!" moment]], the second time even having Kurumi undergo an ArtShift making her look like she was drawn by Eiichiro Oda.
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* After Yamame kisses Rentarou, all the other girls proceed to kiss him while towering over him. The narration points out it looks like a scene from ''Manga/AttackOnTitan'', while some onlookers think Rentarou is being devoured.
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* After Yamame kisses Rentarou, all the other girls proceed to kiss him while towering over him. The narration points out it looks like a scene from ''Manga/AttackOnTitan'', while some onlookers think Rentarou is being devoured.
devoured, said onlookers clearly being the [[Characters/AttackOnTitanTheShiganshinaTrio Shiganshina Trio]].
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-->'''Babies:''' D'ere d'ere.\\
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-->'''Babies:''' D'ere d'ere.Dhere, dhere...\\
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* The others did not see Karane get swallow any of the drug, so they're noting how she must be stone-sober. [[CoverInnocentEyesAndEars Meanwhile Kurumi is covering Shizuka's eyes]].
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* The others did not see Karane get swallow any of the drug, so they're noting how she must be stone-sober. [[CoverInnocentEyesAndEars Meanwhile Kurumi is covering Shizuka's eyes]].
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* Naddy compliments Mimimi's eyelashes as she receives the drug from her. Even though her speech is muffled, it's clear that Mimimi is saying, "[[{{Catchphrase}} Hmhmm, naturally!"]] in response.
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* Naddy compliments Mimimi's eyelashes as she receives the drug from her. Even though her speech is muffled, it's clear that Mimimi is saying, "[[{{Catchphrase}} "[[CharacterCatchphrase Hmhmm, naturally!"]] in response.
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* Tina's {{Catchphrase}} while training everyone is "Qually! Tee!"
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* Tina's {{Catchphrase}} [[CharacterCatchphrase catchphrase]] while training everyone is "Qually! Tee!"
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* The first dish is a spicy-as-hell challenge ramen which already hospitalized three customers as well as the ramen lady herself. The Yakusens order two servings and [[UnaffectedBySpice barely display any reaction]], with Yaku saying it "doesn't stack up to proper medicine".
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* The first dish is a spicy-as-hell challenge ramen which already hospitalized three customers as well as the ramen lady herself. The Yakusens Yakuzens order two servings and [[UnaffectedBySpice barely display any reaction]], with Yaku saying it "doesn't stack up to proper medicine".
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Life is but a treat.\\
'''Karane: She's way too easy.'''
'''Karane: She's way too easy.'''
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Life is but a treat.\\
'''Karane: She's waytreat.
** Karane comments that Kishika's "way tooeasy.'''easy". Nano, Mimimi, Momiji, [[HidingBehindYourBangs Meme]], and [[EyesAlwaysShut Mei]] give Karane, [[NotSoAboveItAll who's not exactly innocent in that department herself]], a collective Look.
'''Karane: She's way
** Karane comments that Kishika's "way too
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* The RunningGag of Ahko's {{Catchphrase}} and PhraseCatcher.
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* The RunningGag of Ahko's {{Catchphrase}} CharacterCatchphrase and PhraseCatcher.
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* Kusuri and Chiyo run a drug stall. When Ahko describes it as dope, Kusuri asks if Ahko wants dope while holding a vial with a skull on it, which Chiyo refuses to let her sell. Kusuri then demonstrates her "laughing drug" by forcing Chiyo to drink it. While the drug causes Chiyo to laugh constantly, when Ahko takes it, she just says, "That so totally seriously sends mee," while acting no different than normal. (Implying that her {{Catchphrase}} is how she laughs.) Chiyo tries to tell Kusuri to give her the "negation drug" while laughing, but Kusuri doesn't notice.
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* Kusuri and Chiyo run a drug stall. When Ahko describes it as dope, Kusuri asks if Ahko wants dope while holding a vial with a skull on it, which Chiyo refuses to let her sell. Kusuri then demonstrates her "laughing drug" by forcing Chiyo to drink it. While the drug causes Chiyo to laugh constantly, when Ahko takes it, she just says, "That so totally seriously sends mee," while acting no different than normal. (Implying that her {{Catchphrase}} CharacterCatchphrase is how she laughs.) Chiyo tries to tell Kusuri to give her the "negation drug" while laughing, but Kusuri doesn't notice.
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** She proceeds to say a much longer version of her usual {{catchphrase}}.
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** She proceeds to say a much longer version of her usual {{catchphrase}}.[[CharacterCatchphrase catchphrase]].
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* Rentarou blames himself for Hakari's lust and decides to use the "removes-all-feeling drug" Kusuri gave him earlier on himself instead of Hakari. Rentarou finds himself drifting through space next to a pair of photorealistic cats, while his body now has BlankWhiteEyes and a CatSmile.
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* Rentarou blames himself for Hakari's lust and decides to use the "removes-all-feeling drug" Kusuri gave him earlier on himself instead of Hakari. Rentarou finds himself drifting through space next to a pair of photorealistic cats, while his body now has BlankWhiteEyes and a CatSmile.PlayfulCatSmile.
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* The others did not see Karane get swallow any of the drug, so they're noting how she must be stone-sober. [[CoverInnocentEyesAndEars Meanwhile Kurumi is covering Shizuka's eyes]].
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* Another one of Hahari's maids, Mai Meido ([[PunnyName Yes, really.]] And no actual relation to Mei there.) ends up becoming #20. But unlike Mei, she hasn't locked eyes with Rentarou until now because she ''refused'' to look at him out of sheer jealousy from how much attention he gets from her beloved [[SwornBrothers sister]] Mei.
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* Another one of Hahari's maids, Mai Meido ([[PunnyName Yes, really.]] And no actual relation to Mei there.) ends up becoming #20. But unlike Mei, she hasn't locked eyes with Rentarou until now because she ''refused'' to look at him out of sheer jealousy from how much attention he gets from her beloved [[SwornBrothers sister]] sister Mei.
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* Another one of Hahari's maids, Mai Meido ([[PunnyName Yes, really.]] And no actual relation to Mei there.) ends up becoming #20. But unlike Mei, she hasn't locked eyes with Rentarou until now because she ''refused'' to look at him out of sheer jealousy from how much attention he gets from her beloved [[BloodBrothers sister]] Mei.
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* Another one of Hahari's maids, Mai Meido ([[PunnyName Yes, really.]] And no actual relation to Mei there.) ends up becoming #20. But unlike Mei, she hasn't locked eyes with Rentarou until now because she ''refused'' to look at him out of sheer jealousy from how much attention he gets from her beloved [[BloodBrothers [[SwornBrothers sister]] Mei.
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** Hakari is "a yank" (Naddy), dressed in an America themed bikiki while cheerleading, Karane chiming in that she might as well be one with her level of sex education. While Hakari and Karane go at it again, Yaku is confused by what a "Yank" even is.
** Momiji is "real shy" (Meme), groping Hahari's breasts with a bashful look. Momiji asks Kurumi if she could grope her stomach like a shy schoolgirl with a crush. After she's shot down, she can be seen being {{glomp}}ed by Hahari.
** Momiji is "real shy" (Meme), groping Hahari's breasts with a bashful look. Momiji asks Kurumi if she could grope her stomach like a shy schoolgirl with a crush. After she's shot down, she can be seen being {{glomp}}ed by Hahari.
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** Hakari is "a yank" (Naddy), dressed in an America themed bikiki American FlagBikini while cheerleading, Karane chiming in that she might as well be one with her level of sex education. While Hakari and Karane go at it again, Yaku is confused by what a "Yank" even is.
** Momiji is "real shy" (Meme), groping Hahari's breasts with a bashfullook.look while Kurumi quips she isn't shy enough. Momiji asks Kurumi if she could grope her stomach like a shy schoolgirl with a crush. After she's shot down, she can be seen being {{glomp}}ed by Hahari.
** Momiji is "real shy" (Meme), groping Hahari's breasts with a bashful
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* Up next is the "tough-as-hell meat" ramen, which was so hard to chew that the ramen lady chipped a tooth.
** The ramen lady makes a smug, cheerful smile while Karane futilely tries to bite through her "tough-as-hell meat"... before Momiji massages the meat until it's tender enough for Karane to enjoy it.
--->'''Ramen lady:''' Are you a wizard?!
** The ramen lady makes a smug, cheerful smile while Karane futilely tries to bite through her "tough-as-hell meat"... before Momiji massages the meat until it's tender enough for Karane to enjoy it.
--->'''Ramen lady:''' Are you a wizard?!
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* Up next is the "tough-as-hell meat" ramen, which was so hard to chew that the ramen lady chipped a tooth.
**tooth. The ramen lady makes a smug, cheerful smile while Karane futilely tries to bite through her "tough-as-hell meat"... before Momiji massages the meat until it's tender enough for Karane to enjoy it.
--->'''Ramen -->'''Ramen lady:''' Are you a wizard?!
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* She then decides to make the name of the challenge dish so long and convoluted that nobody could possibly remember the whole thing. As Shizuka and Nano take their seats, the owner hides the challenge dish poster. Shizuka struggles to remember what the dish was called, but Nano manages to recite the OverlyLongName of the challenge ramen [[PhotoGraphicMemory with just a glance]]. The ramen lady can only think, "OH MY GOD."
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* She then decides to make the name of the challenge dish so long and convoluted that nobody could possibly remember the whole thing. As Shizuka and Nano take their seats, the owner hides the challenge dish poster. Shizuka struggles to remember what the dish was called, but Nano manages to recite the OverlyLongName of the challenge ramen [[PhotoGraphicMemory [[PhotographicMemory with just a glance]]. The ramen lady can only think, "OH MY GOD."
