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-->'''Asakawa:''' ''[in a sweet voice]'' You're so sweet, and kind to everyone, but... ''[in a sudden adult voice]'' For some reason, I feel like throwing up just imagining you as a lover. I'm sorry!\\
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-->'''Asakawa:''' ''[in a sweet voice]'' You're so sweet, and kind to everyone, but... ''[in a sudden adult voice]'' [[UnnecessarilyCruelRejection For some reason, I feel like throwing up just imagining you as a lover. I'm sorry!\\sorry!]]\\
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--->'''Dog:''' Bark. (Excuse me, could you move aside?) ''(as Shizuka rolls down the stairs)'' Whine. (That's a bit over the top...)
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-->'''Hakari:''' No cutting in line, Mother! / Not so fast, I have been here since Episode 1!\
'''Kusuri:''' Only Kusuri is allowed to deflower Rentaro! / Hey, Rentaro is Kusuri's to deflower!\
'''Nano:''' I don't think Aijo Rentaro can be deflowered. / I would conjecture that he has more of a stone than a-\
'''Karane:''' It doesn't matter! I bet she doesn't even know what she's talking about! / Doesn't know what she's saying! She's a chemist, not a biologist!\
'''Shizuka:''' ''[slight whimper]''
'''Kusuri:''' Only Kusuri is allowed to deflower Rentaro! / Hey, Rentaro is Kusuri's to deflower!\
'''Nano:''' I don't think Aijo Rentaro can be deflowered. / I would conjecture that he has more of a stone than a-\
'''Karane:''' It doesn't matter! I bet she doesn't even know what she's talking about! / Doesn't know what she's saying! She's a chemist, not a biologist!\
'''Shizuka:''' ''[slight whimper]''
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-->'''Hakari:''' No cutting in line, Mother! / Not so fast, I have been here since Episode 1!\
1!\\
'''Kusuri:''' Only Kusuri is allowed to deflower Rentaro! / Hey, Rentaro is Kusuri's todeflower!\
deflower!\\
'''Nano:''' I don't think Aijo Rentaro can be deflowered. / I would conjecture that he has more of a stone thana-\
a-\\
'''Karane:''' It doesn't matter! I bet she doesn't even know what she's talking about! / Doesn't know what she's saying! She's a chemist, not abiologist!\
biologist!\\
'''Shizuka:''' ''[slightwhimper]''whimper as she runs after them]''
'''Kusuri:''' Only Kusuri is allowed to deflower Rentaro! / Hey, Rentaro is Kusuri's to
'''Nano:''' I don't think Aijo Rentaro can be deflowered. / I would conjecture that he has more of a stone than
'''Karane:''' It doesn't matter! I bet she doesn't even know what she's talking about! / Doesn't know what she's saying! She's a chemist, not a
'''Shizuka:''' ''[slight
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*** Or, as the English dub puts it:
--->'''Hanazonos:''' ''(thinking)'' She's easier than we are...
* Something Nano says in the anime, and Karane's response to it:
-->'''Nano:''' It makes sense to observe your partner's body, to alleviate tension and prepare for what is to come.\\
'''Karane:''' ''Come?!''
--->'''Hanazonos:''' ''(thinking)'' She's easier than we are...
* Something Nano says in the anime, and Karane's response to it:
-->'''Nano:''' It makes sense to observe your partner's body, to alleviate tension and prepare for what is to come.\\
'''Karane:''' ''Come?!''
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-->'''Hakari:''' No cutting in line, Mother! / Not so fast, I have been here since Episode 1!\
'''Kusuri:''' Only Kusuri is allowed to deflower Rentaro! / Hey, Rentaro is Kusuri's to deflower!\
'''Nano:''' I don't think Aijo Rentaro can be deflowered. / I would conjecture that he has more of a stone than a-\
'''Karane:''' It doesn't matter! I bet she doesn't even know what she's talking about! / Doesn't know what she's saying! She's a chemist, not a biologist!\
'''Shizuka:''' ''[slight whimper]''
'''Kusuri:''' Only Kusuri is allowed to deflower Rentaro! / Hey, Rentaro is Kusuri's to deflower!\
'''Nano:''' I don't think Aijo Rentaro can be deflowered. / I would conjecture that he has more of a stone than a-\
'''Karane:''' It doesn't matter! I bet she doesn't even know what she's talking about! / Doesn't know what she's saying! She's a chemist, not a biologist!\
'''Shizuka:''' ''[slight whimper]''
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** Despite ''being'' the one dragging them in this scenario, [[ViolationOfCommonSense Karane somehow ends up dead too]].
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'''#7:''' And just seeing an [[UsefulNotes/AppleMacintosh apple]] makes me wanna eat a [[UsefulNotes/McDonalds Mac.]]\\
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'''#7:''' And just seeing an [[UsefulNotes/AppleMacintosh [[Platform/AppleMacintosh apple]] makes me wanna eat a [[UsefulNotes/McDonalds Mac.]]\\
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'''[[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Nano]]:''' [[https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=oyakodon Oyakodon]]...
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* Upon hearing Hahari's reason for trying to seize Hakari from Rentarou, he tearfully begs her to believe that his feelings are genuine. The tears cause the eye drops to be cleaned out of his eyes, allowing him to see Hahari's face and--'''''[[WhamShot ZING!!]]'''''
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* Upon hearing Hahari's reason for trying to seize Hakari from Rentarou, he tearfully starts crying out of sympathy for her plight, but still begs her to believe realize that his feelings are genuine. The tears cause the eye drops to be cleaned out of his eyes, allowing him to see Hahari's face and--'''''[[WhamShot ZING!!]]'''''
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--> '''Narrator:''' ''(sounding serious, with the intensity growing near the end)'' For the noble Hahari, who lost her lover at the age of thirteen, it had been sixteen long years since she had last felt sparks fly. In her youth, the feeling overwhelmed and blinded her. It had stained the rest of her days so deeply with regret, that she had grown to despise love itself. Faced with the emotion she had detested for years, Hahari...\\
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-->'''English Dub!Karane:''' You're just as pervy as your sicko daughter, huh?!
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-->'''English Dub!Karane:''' You're just as perky as your sicko daughter, huh?!
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-->'''English Dub!Karane:''' You're just as perky pervy as your sicko daughter, huh?!
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* When a maid ([[EarlyBirdCameo whose eyes aren't shown in the anime]]) barges in to tell everyone that Hakari is about to jump out a window, Karane grabs Hahari in a chokehold and threatens to snap her neck if anyone moves. Rentarou warns everyone that Karane really is capable of doing that while looking terrified.
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* When a maid ([[EarlyBirdCameo whose eyes aren't shown in the anime]]) barges in to tell everyone that Hakari is about to jump out a window, Karane grabs Hahari in a chokehold and threatens to snap her neck if anyone moves.moves (in the English dub: "I'll snap her neck faster than you can say tax evasion!"). Rentarou warns everyone that Karane really is capable of doing that while looking terrified.
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-->'''Crunchy roll comment:''' Subjecting a Tsundere to a lie detector test. Isn't that a form of torture?
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-->'''English Dub!Karane:''' You're just as perky as your sicko daughter, huh?!
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* The anime shows Rentarou reabsorbing the blood like a sponge.
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** The English Dub's rendition:
--> '''Narrator:''' ''(sounding serious, with the intensity growing near the end)'' For the noble Hahari, who lost her lover at the age of thirteen, it had been sixteen long years since she had last felt sparks fly. In her youth, the feeling overwhelmed and blinded her. It had stained the rest of her days so deeply with regret, that she had grown to despise love itself. Faced with the emotion she had detested for years, Hahari...\\
'''Hahari:''' ''(sounding'' much ''less haughty than she had previously)'' Rentarou baby, end this madness and just go out with me!\\
'''Narrator:''' ''(sounding utterly tired and unsurprised)'' ... Yep, Hahari was blinded again.
--> '''Narrator:''' ''(sounding serious, with the intensity growing near the end)'' For the noble Hahari, who lost her lover at the age of thirteen, it had been sixteen long years since she had last felt sparks fly. In her youth, the feeling overwhelmed and blinded her. It had stained the rest of her days so deeply with regret, that she had grown to despise love itself. Faced with the emotion she had detested for years, Hahari...\\
'''Hahari:''' ''(sounding'' much ''less haughty than she had previously)'' Rentarou baby, end this madness and just go out with me!\\
'''Narrator:''' ''(sounding utterly tired and unsurprised)'' ... Yep, Hahari was blinded again.
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** The anime has a different lead-in to that moment. Karane is snapped out of freaking out at Hahari's confession by seeing the 'ba-dump ba-dump' sound effect bouncing across the bottom of the screen. When she looks over, she sees Rentarou blushing and stammering.
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-->'''Crunchy roll comment:''' Subjecting a Tsundere to a lie detector test. Isn't that a form of torture?
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* When the guard goes looking for Rentarou the first time, he immediately leaves while concluding "must've been the wind" like a video game character.
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* The anime shows Rentarou reabsorbing the blood like a sponge.
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** In the anime, Hahari buys out the ending sequence, which she revamps into a DreamSequence of herself and Rentarou in a fairytale sequence with the other girls serving as background characters. The title of her song roughly translates as [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9hiTaB9zJFQ "I bought today's ending, so you can do whatever you like♡"]]. It's every bit as insane as you think it is.
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---->'''Rentarou:''' ''You loved the juice that much!!?''
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---->'''Rentarou (dub):''' "Wow! I had no idea you were [[DoubleEntendre so thirsty]]!!?"
