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--> '''Floyd:''' Why, I'm '''''Friendly Floyd'''''. Need a toothbrush? Lightbulb? [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Electronic ignition for your car]]? You '''''name''''' it, I've '''''got''''' it!
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--> '''Floyd:''' Why, I'm '''''Friendly Floyd'''''. Need a toothbrush? Lightbulb? [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Electronic ignition for your car]]? car? You '''''name''''' it, I've '''''got''''' it!
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* When the scene changes to Mario in the cell, a mouse is seen eating the text box that says "Meanwhile".
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--> (The ''([[PuffOfLogic The Octopus realizes the situation)situation]])''
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--> '''Floyd''': That's the story in a '''''nutshell'''''[=--=]or should I say, '''''eggshell'''''.
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--> '''Floyd''': That's the story in a '''''nutshell'''''[=--=]or should I say, '''''eggshell'''''.'''''[[{{Pun}} eggshell]]'''''.
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** She panics and runs away, only to run into Friendly Floyd. [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotHeinous She panics even more.]]
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** She panics and runs away, only to run into Friendly Floyd. [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotHeinous [[FauxHorrific She panics even more.]]
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* Luigi disguising himself as the Princess, dress and all. [[VideoGame/MarioAndLuigiSuperstarSaga It won't be the only time, either.]]
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* This scene with Pako:
--> '''Pako:''' '''''HALT!''''' I'll '''''not''''' let you '''''pass!'''''
--> '''Pako:''' '''''HALT!''''' I'll '''''not''''' let you '''''pass!'''''
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* This scene with Pako:
the Octopus:
-->'''Pako:''' '''Octopus:''' '''''HALT!''''' I'll '''''not''''' let you '''''pass!'''''
-->
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--> (Pako realizes the situation)
--> '''Pako:''' That would '''''explain''''' why I've been '''''feeling sickly'''''...
--> '''Pako:''' That would '''''explain''''' why I've been '''''feeling sickly'''''...
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--> (Pako (The Octopus realizes the situation)
-->'''Pako:''' '''Octopus:''' That would '''''explain''''' why I've been '''''feeling sickly'''''...
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** Mario then proceeds to pour what he thinks is salt into the marsh, although it was actually sugar, causing Pako to faint.
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** Mario then proceeds to pour what he thinks is salt into the marsh, although it was actually sugar, causing Pako the Octopus to faint.
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--> '''Floyd:''' Why, I'm '''''Friendly Floyd'''''. Need a toothbrush? Lightbulb? [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Electronic ignition for your car]]? You '''''name''''' it, I've '''''got''''' it!
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--> '''Floyd:''' Why, I'm '''''Friendly Floyd'''''. Need a toothbrush? Lightbulb? [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Electronic ignition for your car]]? You '''''name''''' it, I've '''''got''''' it!
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--> '''Floyd''': That's the story in a '''''nutshell'''''[=--=]or should I say, '''''[[IncrediblyLamePun eggshell]]'''''.
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--> '''Floyd''': That's the story in a '''''nutshell'''''[=--=]or should I say, '''''[[IncrediblyLamePun eggshell]]'''''.'''''eggshell'''''.
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* As Princess Toadstool chases after Bowser by jumping out of a window, some Toads start to ''run down a wall'' with a bedsheet and try to stop her. She instead bounces perfectly off of the bedsheet and continues pursuing Bowser on foot. And as she landed perfectly, [[FunnyBackgroundEvent another Toad awarded her with 10 points]].
* The Minister of Massage (yes, [[HisNameReallyIsBarkeep that's his name]]) turns a statued Mario back to normal by giving him a massage... ''for a [[OverlyLongGag week]]''.
--> '''Mario:''' I feel kind of '''''[[IncrediblyLamePun slap happy]]'''''...
* The Minister of Massage (yes, [[HisNameReallyIsBarkeep that's his name]]) turns a statued Mario back to normal by giving him a massage... ''for a [[OverlyLongGag week]]''.
--> '''Mario:''' I feel kind of '''''[[IncrediblyLamePun slap happy]]'''''...
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* As Princess Toadstool chases after Bowser by jumping out of a window, some Toads start to ''run down a wall'' with a bedsheet and try to stop her. She instead bounces perfectly off of the bedsheet and continues pursuing Bowser on foot. And as she landed perfectly, [[FunnyBackgroundEvent [[HoldUpYourScore another Toad awarded her with 10 points]].
* The Minister of Massage (yes, [[HisNameReallyIsBarkeep that's his name]]) turns astatued petrified Mario back to normal by giving him a massage... ''for a [[OverlyLongGag week]]''.
--> '''Mario:''' I feel kind of'''''[[IncrediblyLamePun slap happy]]'''''...'''''slap happy'''''...
* The Minister of Massage (yes, [[HisNameReallyIsBarkeep that's his name]]) turns a
--> '''Mario:''' I feel kind of
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* Princess Toadstool and her troops are in the desert and are out of water. The Toads see a bunch of clouds and start to do a RainDance. [[spoiler:They're actually Lakitu clouds and start to drop Spinys. This is made funnier when one of the Toads thinks they did the wrong dance]].
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* Princess Toadstool and her troops are in the desert and are out of water. The Toads see a bunch of clouds and start to do a RainDance. [[spoiler:They're They're actually Lakitu clouds and start to drop Spinys. This is made funnier when one of the Toads thinks they did the wrong dance]].dance.
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* Mario and Luigi buy a Yoshi translation book at the bargain price of 10 coins (which was originally 3,000 coins, but discounted since they're "friends of Yoshi"). It's made funnier [[spoiler:when every phrase in the book [[PokemonSpeak translates to "Yoshi"]].]]
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* Mario and Luigi buy a Yoshi translation book at the bargain price of 10 coins (which was originally 3,000 coins, but discounted since they're "friends of Yoshi"). It's made funnier [[spoiler:when when every phrase in the book [[PokemonSpeak translates to "Yoshi"]].]]
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* This scene when Mario thinks that the [[spoiler:haunted]] haunted house they found is a trap.
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* Luigi telling Mario not to look down [[spoiler:as as he's standing on the snout of a Blargg]].Blargg.
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** Mario then proceeds to pour [[spoiler:what what he thinks is]] is salt into the marsh, although [[spoiler:it it was actually sugar, causing Pako to faint]].faint.
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** Mario then proceeds to pour [[spoiler:what he thinks is]] salt into the marsh, although [[spoiler:it was actually sugar, causing the Pako to faint]].
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** Mario then proceeds to pour [[spoiler:what he thinks is]] salt into the marsh, although [[spoiler:it was actually sugar, causing the Pako to faint]].
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This is his official name
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* This scene with the monster octopus:
--> '''Octopus:''' '''''HALT!''''' I'll '''''not''''' let you '''''pass!'''''
--> '''Octopus:''' '''''HALT!''''' I'll '''''not''''' let you '''''pass!'''''
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* This scene with the monster octopus:
Pako:
-->'''Octopus:''' '''Pako:''' '''''HALT!''''' I'll '''''not''''' let you '''''pass!'''''
-->
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--> (Octopus realizes the situation)
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--> '''Octopus:''' That would '''''explain''''' why I've been '''''feeling sickly'''''...
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--> (Octopus (Pako realizes the situation)
-->'''Octopus:''' '''Pako:''' That would '''''explain''''' why I've been '''''feeling sickly'''''...
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** Mario then proceeds to pour [[spoiler:what he thinks is]] salt into the marsh, although [[spoiler:it was actually sugar, causing the octopus Pako to faint]].
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[[folder: Chapter 1]]
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--> '''Luigi''': '''Wait!''' Let me grab what's left of my '''lunch!'''
--> '''Mario''': '''Forget''' the crush canneloni! Let's '''beat feet!'''
--> '''Mario''': '''Forget''' the crush canneloni! Let's '''beat feet!'''
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--> '''Luigi''': '''Wait!''' '''''Wait!''''' Let me grab what's left of my '''lunch!'''
'''''lunch!'''''
--> '''Mario''':'''Forget''' '''''Forget''''' the crush crushed canneloni! Let's '''beat feet!''''''''beat feet!'''''
--> '''Mario''':
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--> '''Luigi:''' '''HELP!''' I'm being '''[[ARareSentence devoured]]''' [[ARareSentence by vile]] '''[[ARareSentence vegetation!]]'''
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--> '''Luigi:''' '''HELP!''' ''Help!'' I'm being '''[[ARareSentence devoured]]''' '''''[[ARareSentence devoured]]''''' [[ARareSentence by vile]] '''[[ARareSentence vegetation!]]'''by]] '''''[[ARareSentence vile vegetation!]]'''''
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* As Peach chases after Bowser by jumping out of a window, some Toads starts to ''run down a wall'' with a bedsheet and try to stop her. She instead bounces perfectly off of the bedsheet and continues pursuing Bowser on foot. And as she landed perfectly, [[FunnyBackgroundEvent another Toad awarded her with 10 points]].
* As Peach chases after Bowser by jumping out of a window, some Toads starts to ''run down a wall'' with a bedsheet and try to stop her. She instead bounces perfectly off of the bedsheet and continues pursuing Bowser on foot. And as she landed perfectly, [[FunnyBackgroundEvent another Toad awarded her with 10 points]].
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* As
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* Luigi's reaction to seeing Yoshi for the first time after he pops out of his egg at the end of the chapter.
--> '''Luigi:''' [[{{Literature/Frankenstein}} It's]] '''[[{{Literature/Frankenstein}} alive]]!'''
* Luigi's reaction to seeing Yoshi for the first time after he pops out of his egg at the end of the chapter.
--> '''Luigi:''' [[{{Literature/Frankenstein}} It's]] '''[[{{Literature/Frankenstein}} alive]]!'''
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--> '''Mario:''' I feel kind of '''[[IncrediblyLamePun '''''[[IncrediblyLamePun slap happy]]'''...
happy]]'''''...
* Luigi's reaction to seeing Yoshi for the first time after he pops out of his egg at the end of thechapter.
episode.
--> '''Luigi:'''[[{{Literature/Frankenstein}} [[Film/Frankenstein1931 It's]] '''[[{{Literature/Frankenstein}} alive]]!''''''''[[Film/Frankenstein1931 alive]]!'''''
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--> '''Luigi:'''
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* Peach and the Toads are in the desert and are out of water. The Toads see a bunch of clouds and start to do a RainDance. [[spoiler: They're actually Lakitu clouds and start to drop Spinys. This is made funnier when one of the Toads thinks they did the wrong dance]].
* Peach and the Toads are in the desert and are out of water. The Toads see a bunch of clouds and start to do a RainDance. [[spoiler: They're actually Lakitu clouds and start to drop Spinys. This is made funnier when one of the Toads thinks they did the wrong dance]].
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*
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--> '''Floyd:''' Why, I'm '''Friendly Floyd'''. Need a toothbrush? Lightbulb? [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Electronic ignition for your car]]? You '''name''' it, I've '''got''' it.
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--> '''Floyd:''' Why, I'm '''Friendly Floyd'''. '''''Friendly Floyd'''''. Need a toothbrush? Lightbulb? [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Electronic ignition for your car]]? You '''name''' '''''name''''' it, I've '''got''' it.'''''got''''' it!
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--> '''Floyd''': That's the story in a '''nutshell'''-- or should I say, '''[[IncrediblyLamePun eggshell]]'''.
* Mario and Luigi buy a Yoshi translation book at the bargain price of 10 coins (which was originally 3000 coins, but discounted since they're "friends of Yoshi"). It's made funnier [[spoiler: when every phrase in the book [[PokemonSpeak translates to "Yoshi"]].]]
--> '''Mario Bros.''': Wait 'til I get my '''hands''' on that '''Friendly Floyd!!'''
* Mario and Luigi buy a Yoshi translation book at the bargain price of 10 coins (which was originally 3000 coins, but discounted since they're "friends of Yoshi"). It's made funnier [[spoiler: when every phrase in the book [[PokemonSpeak translates to "Yoshi"]].]]
--> '''Mario Bros.''': Wait 'til I get my '''hands''' on that '''Friendly Floyd!!'''
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--> '''Floyd''': That's the story in a '''nutshell'''-- or '''''nutshell'''''[=--=]or should I say, '''[[IncrediblyLamePun eggshell]]'''.
'''''[[IncrediblyLamePun eggshell]]'''''.
* Mario and Luigi buy a Yoshi translation book at the bargain price of 10 coins (which was originally3000 3,000 coins, but discounted since they're "friends of Yoshi"). It's made funnier [[spoiler: when [[spoiler:when every phrase in the book [[PokemonSpeak translates to "Yoshi"]].]]
--> '''Mario Bros.''': Wait 'til I get my'''hands''' '''''hands''''' on that '''Friendly Floyd!!''''''''Friendly Floyd!!'''''
* Mario and Luigi buy a Yoshi translation book at the bargain price of 10 coins (which was originally
--> '''Mario Bros.''': Wait 'til I get my
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[[folder:Chapter 4]]
* Mario and Luigi [[BreakingTheFourthWall rolling up the bottom right of the chapter's last page]]. Luigi then says that Peach "stole the spotlight this month".[[note]]The comic was originally released in Nintendo Power, which was a monthly magazine. Oddly, every reference to the one month span between issues (such as this one) was unchanged in the graphic novel version.[[/note]]
* Mario and Luigi [[BreakingTheFourthWall rolling up the bottom right of the chapter's last page]]. Luigi then says that Peach "stole the spotlight this month".[[note]]The comic was originally released in Nintendo Power, which was a monthly magazine. Oddly, every reference to the one month span between issues (such as this one) was unchanged in the graphic novel version.[[/note]]
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* Early in the chapter, Mario gets shot to Bowser's castle by a Bullet Bill. He says this gem.
--> '''Mario''': This must be the '''Koopa Express'''!
* Early in the chapter, Mario gets shot to Bowser's castle by a Bullet Bill. He says this gem.
--> '''Mario''': This must be the '''Koopa Express'''!
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* Early in the
--> '''Mario''': This must be the
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* Peach waking up and seeing [[http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/super_mario_adventures_yoshi_face_7192.png this image]] in her face.
* Peach waking up and seeing [[http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/super_mario_adventures_yoshi_face_7192.png this image]] in her face.
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--> '''Mario:''' I'm '''telling''' you, Weege, I have a '''weird feeling''' about this...
--> '''Koopalings:''' THE '''JIG'S UP'''-- THEY KNOW IT'S A '''TRAP'''!
--> '''Bowser:''' '''Mark my words!''' They're tired, hungry, and, best of all, '''lost'''. This cozy little bungalow is just '''too tempting''' for a snoopy pair like the '''Mario Bros.'''. And it's '''unlocked''', which makes it '''irresistible!'''
--> '''Mario:''' '''Wait''', Luigi. We may be tired, lost, and worst of all, '''hungry'''. But we must keep our '''wits''' about us. There's '''something strange''' about this place... My GutFeeling is that it's a '''trap!''' C'mon-- let's get '''out''' of here.
--> '''Koopalings:''' THE '''JIG'S UP'''-- THEY KNOW IT'S A '''TRAP'''!
--> '''Bowser:''' '''Mark my words!''' They're tired, hungry, and, best of all, '''lost'''. This cozy little bungalow is just '''too tempting''' for a snoopy pair like the '''Mario Bros.'''. And it's '''unlocked''', which makes it '''irresistible!'''
--> '''Mario:''' '''Wait''', Luigi. We may be tired, lost, and worst of all, '''hungry'''. But we must keep our '''wits''' about us. There's '''something strange''' about this place... My GutFeeling is that it's a '''trap!''' C'mon-- let's get '''out''' of here.
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--> '''Mario:''' I'm '''telling''' '''''telling''''' you, Weege, I have a '''weird feeling''' '''''weird feeling''''' about this...
--> '''Koopalings:'''THE '''JIG'S UP'''-- THEY KNOW IT'S A '''TRAP'''!
The '''''jig's up'''''[=--=] They know it's a '''''trap!'''''
--> '''Bowser:''''''Mark '''''Mark my words!''' words!''''' They're tired, hungry, hungry and, best of all, '''lost'''. '''''[[RuleOfThree lost]]'''''. This cozy little bungalow is just '''too tempting''' '''''too tempting''''' for a snoopy pair like the '''Mario '''''Mario Bros.'''. ''''' And it's '''unlocked''', '''''unlocked''''', which makes it '''irresistible!'''
'''''irresistible!'''''
--> '''Mario:''''''Wait''', '''''Wait''''', Luigi. We may be tired, lost, and lost and, worst of all, '''hungry'''. But '''''[[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking hungry]]''''', but we must keep our '''wits''' '''''wits''''' about us. There's '''something strange''' '''''something strange''''' about this place... place...My GutFeeling {{gut feeling}} is that it's a '''trap!''' C'mon-- let's '''''trap!''''' C'mon[=--=]let's get '''out''' '''''out''''' of here.here!
--> '''Koopalings:'''
--> '''Bowser:'''
--> '''Mario:'''
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* Mario dressing up as VideoGame/DrMario and Luigi dressing up as a nurse, which is HilariousInHindsight, because an actual game called "Dr. Luigi" was released years after the comic.
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* Mario dressing up as
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* Luigi telling Mario not to look down [[spoiler: as he's standing on the snout of a Blargg]].
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* Luigi telling Mario not to look down
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[[folder: Chapter 12]]
* The narrator reading the recap for the last chapter. It seems normal until the last sentence.
--> They arrived just in time to witness the compliant princess pledge her love for... '''[[MoodWhiplash BOWSER?!!?]]''' [[MoodWhiplash Can it]] '''[[MoodWhiplash be??!!]]'''
* The narrator reading the recap for the last chapter. It seems normal until the last sentence.
--> They arrived just in time to witness the compliant princess pledge her love for... '''[[MoodWhiplash BOWSER?!!?]]''' [[MoodWhiplash Can it]] '''[[MoodWhiplash be??!!]]'''
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[[folder: Mario Vs. Wario]]
* This scene with Pako:
--> '''Pako:''' '''HALT!''' I'll '''not''' let you '''pass!'''
--> '''Mario:''' '''Whoa!''' A monster '''octopus'''! I don't get it-- what's an '''octopus''' doing in this '''fresh water marsh?''' Everybody knows that [[ArtisticLicenseBiology an octopus]] '''[[ArtisticLicenseBiology can't live]]''' [[ArtisticLicenseBiology in]] '''[[ArtisticLicenseBiology fresh water.]]'''
--> (Pako relizes the situation)
--> '''Pako:''' That would '''explain''' why I've been '''feeling sickly'''.
--> '''Mario:''' I '''knew''' it!
** Mario then proceeds to pour [[spoiler:what he thinks is]] salt into the marsh, although [[spoiler:it was actually sugar, causing Pako to faint]].
* This scene with Pako:
--> '''Pako:''' '''HALT!''' I'll '''not''' let you '''pass!'''
--> '''Mario:''' '''Whoa!''' A monster '''octopus'''! I don't get it-- what's an '''octopus''' doing in this '''fresh water marsh?''' Everybody knows that [[ArtisticLicenseBiology an octopus]] '''[[ArtisticLicenseBiology can't live]]''' [[ArtisticLicenseBiology in]] '''[[ArtisticLicenseBiology fresh water.]]'''
--> (Pako relizes the situation)
--> '''Pako:''' That would '''explain''' why I've been '''feeling sickly'''.
--> '''Mario:''' I '''knew''' it!
** Mario then proceeds to pour [[spoiler:what he thinks is]] salt into the marsh, although [[spoiler:it was actually sugar, causing Pako to faint]].
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* This scene with
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--> '''Mario:'''
-->
-->
--> '''Mario:''' I
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[[folder: Meta]]
* A fan dub of [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBu21dE-AbY Mario Vs. Wario]] adds this gem to epilouge:
--> '''Narrator:''' "Will Wario ever '''get over''' the '''inequites''' of his '''childhood?''' Will he ever '''get even''' with '''Mario?''' And will he ever get to be '''sheriff''' again???" Find out... [[CreatorBacklash Eh, probably never]] (chuckles).
* A fan dub of [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBu21dE-AbY Mario Vs. Wario]] adds this gem to epilouge:
--> '''Narrator:''' "Will Wario ever '''get over''' the '''inequites''' of his '''childhood?''' Will he ever '''get even''' with '''Mario?''' And will he ever get to be '''sheriff''' again???" Find out... [[CreatorBacklash Eh, probably never]] (chuckles).
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--> '''Narrator:''' "Will Wario ever
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* Mario dressing up as DrMario VideoGame/DrMario and Luigi dressing up as a nurse, which is HilariousInHindsight, because an actual game called "Dr. Luigi" was released years after the comic.
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** She panics and runs away, only to run into Friendly Floyd. [[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotHeinous She panics even more.]]
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* Mario dressing up as DrMario and Luigi dressing up as a nurse, which is HilariousInHindsight with HilariousInHindsight, because an actual game called "Dr. Luigi".Luigi" was released years after the comic.
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* Mario dressing up as DrMario and Luigi dressing up as a nurse, which is HilariousInHindsight with the recently announced "Dr. Luigi".
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--> '''Mario:''' '''Whoa!''' A monster '''octopus'''! I don't get it-- what's an '''octopus''' doing in this '''fresh water marsh?''' Everybody knows that [[ArtisticLicenseBiology an octopus]] '''[[ArtisticLicenseBiology can't live]] live]]''' [[ArtisticLicenseBiology in]] '''[[ArtisticLicenseBiology fresh water.]]'''
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[[folder: Meta]]
* A fan dub of [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBu21dE-AbY Mario Vs. Wario]] adds this gem to epilouge:
--> '''Narrator:''' "Will Wario ever '''get over''' the '''inequites''' of his '''childhood?''' Will he ever '''get even''' with '''Mario?''' And will he ever get to be '''sheriff''' again???" Find out... [[CreatorBacklash Eh, probably never]] (chuckles).
[[folder: Meta]]
* A fan dub of [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DBu21dE-AbY Mario Vs. Wario]] adds this gem to epilouge:
--> '''Narrator:''' "Will Wario ever '''get over''' the '''inequites''' of his '''childhood?''' Will he ever '''get even''' with '''Mario?''' And will he ever get to be '''sheriff''' again???" Find out... [[CreatorBacklash Eh, probably never]] (chuckles).
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--> '''Mario:''' '''Wait''', Luigi. We may be tired, lost, and worst of all, '''hungry'''. But we must keep our '''wits''' about us. There's '''something strange''' about this place... My gut feeling is that it's a '''trap!''' C'mon-- let's get '''out''' of here.
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--> '''Mario:''' '''Wait''', Luigi. We may be tired, lost, and worst of all, '''hungry'''. But we must keep our '''wits''' about us. There's '''something strange''' about this place... My gut feeling GutFeeling is that it's a '''trap!''' C'mon-- let's get '''out''' of here.
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--> '''Koopalings:''' THE '''JIG'S UP''-- THEY KNOW IT'S A '''TRAP'''!
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--> '''Koopalings:''' THE '''JIG'S UP''-- UP'''-- THEY KNOW IT'S A '''TRAP'''!
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--> '''Mario Bros.''': Wait 'til I get my '''hands''' on that '''Friendly Floyd!!'''
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* Mario and Luigi buy a Yoshi translation book at the bargain price of 10 coins (which was originally 3000 coins, but discounted since thier "friends of Yoshi"). It's made funnier [[spoiler: when every phrase in the book [[PokemonSpeak translates to "Yoshi"]].]]
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* Mario and Luigi buy a Yoshi translation book at the bargain price of 10 coins (which was originally 3000 coins, but discounted since thier they're "friends of Yoshi"). It's made funnier [[spoiler: when every phrase in the book [[PokemonSpeak translates to "Yoshi"]].]]
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* Luigi's reaction to seeing Yoshi for the first time after he pops out of his egg at the end of the chapter.
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* The Minister of Massage (yes [[HisNameReallyIsBarkeep that's his name]]) returns Mario back to normai by giving him a massage... ''for a [[OverlyLongGag week]]''
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* The Minister of Massage (yes (yes, [[HisNameReallyIsBarkeep that's his name]]) returns turns a statued Mario back to normai normal by giving him a massage... ''for a [[OverlyLongGag week]]''
**week]]''.
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[[folder:Chaper 4]]
* Mario and Luigi [[BreakingTheFourthWall rolling up the bottom right of the chapter's last page]]. Luigi then says that Peach "stole the spotlight this month"[[note]]The comic was originally released in Nintendo Power, which was a monthly magazine. Oddly, every reference to the one month span between issues (such as this one) were unchanged in the graphic novel version.[[/note]]
* Mario and Luigi [[BreakingTheFourthWall rolling up the bottom right of the chapter's last page]]. Luigi then says that Peach "stole the spotlight this month"[[note]]The comic was originally released in Nintendo Power, which was a monthly magazine. Oddly, every reference to the one month span between issues (such as this one) were unchanged in the graphic novel version.[[/note]]
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* Mario and Luigi [[BreakingTheFourthWall rolling up the bottom right of the chapter's last page]]. Luigi then says that Peach "stole the spotlight this
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--> '''Mario:''' I'm '''telling''' toy Weege, I have a '''wierd feeling''' about this...
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--> '''Mario:''' I'm '''telling''' toy you, Weege, I have a '''wierd '''weird feeling''' about this...
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--> '''Bowser:''' '''Mark my words!''' They're tired, hungry, and, best of all, '''lost'''. This cozy little bungalow is just '''too tempting''' for a snoopy pair like the '''Mario Bros.'''. And its '''unlocked''', which makes it '''irresistible!'''
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--> '''Bowser:''' '''Mark my words!''' They're tired, hungry, and, best of all, '''lost'''. This cozy little bungalow is just '''too tempting''' for a snoopy pair like the '''Mario Bros.'''. And its it's '''unlocked''', which makes it '''irresistible!'''
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* The narrator reading the prolouge for the chapter. It seems normal until the last sentence.
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* The narrator reading the prolouge recap for the last chapter. It seems normal until the last sentence.
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--> They arrived just in time to witness the compliant princess pledge her love for... '''BOWSER?!!?''' Can it '''be??!!'''
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--> They arrived just in time to witness the compliant princess pledge her love for... '''BOWSER?!!?''' '''[[MoodWhiplash BOWSER?!!?]]''' [[MoodWhiplash Can it '''be??!!'''it]] '''[[MoodWhiplash be??!!]]'''
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--> '''Mario:''' '''Whoa!''' A monster '''octopus'''! I don't get it-- what's an '''octopus''' doing in this '''fresh water marsh?''' Everybody knows that [[ArtisticLicenseBiology an octopus]] '''[[ArtisticLicenseBiology can't live]] in '''[[ArtisticLicenseBiology fresh water.]]'''
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--> '''Mario:''' '''Whoa!''' A monster '''octopus'''! I don't get it-- what's an '''octopus''' doing in this '''fresh water marsh?''' Everybody knows that [[ArtisticLicenseBiology an octopus]] '''[[ArtisticLicenseBiology can't live]] in [[ArtisticLicenseBiology in]] '''[[ArtisticLicenseBiology fresh water.]]'''
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[[folder: Chapter 1]]
* As Warp Pipes manage to appear all over the castle basement, Mario runs out with him dragging Luigi. Luigi then gives us this gem.
--> '''Luigi''': '''Wait!''' Let me grab what's left of my '''lunch!'''
--> '''Mario''': '''Forget''' the crush canneloni! Let's '''beat feet!'''
* One of the Toads says that the Warp Pipes [[ComicallyMissingThePoint uprooted the palace petunias]].
* This gem:
--> '''Luigi:''' '''HELP!''' I'm being '''[[ARareSentence devoured]]''' [[ARareSentence by vile]] '''[[ARareSentence vegetation!]]'''
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 2]]
* The Minister of Massage (yes [[HisNameReallyIsBarkeep that's his name]]) returns Mario back to normai by giving him a massage... ''for a [[OverlyLongGag week]]''
**
--> '''Mario:''' I feel kind of '''[[IncrediblyLamePun slap happy]]'''...
*
--> '''Luigi:''' [[{{Literature/Frankenstein}} It's]] '''[[{{Literature/Frankenstein}} alive]]!'''
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[[folder: Chapter 3]]
* Peach and the Toads are in the desert and are out of water. The Toads see a bunch of clouds and start to do a RainDance. [[spoiler: They're actually Lakitu clouds and start to drop Spinys. This is made funnier when one of the Toads thinks they did the wrong dance]].
* This:
--> '''Mario:''' Who are you?
--> '''Floyd:''' Why, I'm '''Friendly Floyd'''. Need a toothbrush? Lightbulb? [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Electronic ignition for your car]]? You '''name''' it, I've '''got''' it.
* And later...
--> '''Floyd''': That's the story in a '''nutshell'''-- or should I say, '''[[IncrediblyLamePun eggshell]]'''.
* Mario and Luigi buy a Yoshi translation book at the bargain price of 10 coins (which was originally 3000 coins, but discounted since thier "friends of Yoshi"). It's made funnier [[spoiler: when every phrase in the book [[PokemonSpeak translates to "Yoshi"]].]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Chaper 4]]
* Mario and Luigi [[BreakingTheFourthWall rolling up the bottom right of the chapter's last page]]. Luigi then says that Peach "stole the spotlight this month"[[note]]The comic was originally released in Nintendo Power, which was a monthly magazine. Oddly, every reference to the one month span between issues (such as this one) were unchanged in the graphic novel version.[[/note]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 5]]
* Early in the chapter, Mario gets shot to Bowser's castle by a Bullet Bill. He says this gem.
--> '''Mario''': This must be the '''Koopa Express'''!
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[[folder: Chapter 6]]
* Peach waking up and seeing [[http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/super_mario_adventures_yoshi_face_7192.png this image]] in her face.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 7]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 8]]
* Mario asks Luigi if they survived the fall. Luigi then tells him not to ask. Made funnier by the fact that his head is underground.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 9]]
* This scene when Mario thinks that the [[spoiler:haunted]] house they found is a trap.
--> '''Mario:''' I'm '''telling''' toy Weege, I have a '''wierd feeling''' about this...
--> '''Koopalings:''' THE '''JIG'S UP''-- THEY KNOW IT'S A '''TRAP'''!
--> '''Bowser:''' '''Mark my words!''' They're tired, hungry, and, best of all, '''lost'''. This cozy little bungalow is just '''too tempting''' for a snoopy pair like the '''Mario Bros.'''. And its '''unlocked''', which makes it '''irresistible!'''
--> '''Mario:''' '''Wait''', Luigi. We may be tired, lost, and worst of all, '''hungry'''. But we must keep our '''wits''' about us. There's '''something strange''' about this place... My gut feeling is that it's a '''trap!''' C'mon-- let's get '''out''' of here.
--> (cut to the Koopalings and Bowser looking disappointed)
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[[folder: Chapter 10]]
* Mario dressing up as DrMario and Luigi dressing up as a nurse, which is HilariousInHindsight with the recently announced "Dr. Luigi".
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 11]]
* Luigi telling Mario not to look down [[spoiler: as he's standing on the snout of a Blargg]].
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 12]]
* The narrator reading the prolouge for the chapter. It seems normal until the last sentence.
--> They arrived just in time to witness the compliant princess pledge her love for... '''BOWSER?!!?''' Can it '''be??!!'''
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Mario Vs. Wario]]
* This scene with Pako:
--> '''Pako:''' '''HALT!''' I'll '''not''' let you '''pass!'''
--> '''Mario:''' '''Whoa!''' A monster '''octopus'''! I don't get it-- what's an '''octopus''' doing in this '''fresh water marsh?''' Everybody knows that [[ArtisticLicenseBiology an octopus]] '''[[ArtisticLicenseBiology can't live]] in '''[[ArtisticLicenseBiology fresh water.]]'''
--> (Pako relizes the situation)
--> '''Pako:''' That would '''explain''' why I've been '''feeling sickly'''.
--> '''Mario:''' I '''knew''' it!
** Mario then proceeds to pour [[spoiler:what he thinks is]] salt into the marsh, although [[spoiler:it was actually sugar, causing Pako to faint]].
[[/folder]]
* As Warp Pipes manage to appear all over the castle basement, Mario runs out with him dragging Luigi. Luigi then gives us this gem.
--> '''Luigi''': '''Wait!''' Let me grab what's left of my '''lunch!'''
--> '''Mario''': '''Forget''' the crush canneloni! Let's '''beat feet!'''
* One of the Toads says that the Warp Pipes [[ComicallyMissingThePoint uprooted the palace petunias]].
* This gem:
--> '''Luigi:''' '''HELP!''' I'm being '''[[ARareSentence devoured]]''' [[ARareSentence by vile]] '''[[ARareSentence vegetation!]]'''
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 2]]
* The Minister of Massage (yes [[HisNameReallyIsBarkeep that's his name]]) returns Mario back to normai by giving him a massage... ''for a [[OverlyLongGag week]]''
**
--> '''Mario:''' I feel kind of '''[[IncrediblyLamePun slap happy]]'''...
*
--> '''Luigi:''' [[{{Literature/Frankenstein}} It's]] '''[[{{Literature/Frankenstein}} alive]]!'''
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 3]]
* Peach and the Toads are in the desert and are out of water. The Toads see a bunch of clouds and start to do a RainDance. [[spoiler: They're actually Lakitu clouds and start to drop Spinys. This is made funnier when one of the Toads thinks they did the wrong dance]].
* This:
--> '''Mario:''' Who are you?
--> '''Floyd:''' Why, I'm '''Friendly Floyd'''. Need a toothbrush? Lightbulb? [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking Electronic ignition for your car]]? You '''name''' it, I've '''got''' it.
* And later...
--> '''Floyd''': That's the story in a '''nutshell'''-- or should I say, '''[[IncrediblyLamePun eggshell]]'''.
* Mario and Luigi buy a Yoshi translation book at the bargain price of 10 coins (which was originally 3000 coins, but discounted since thier "friends of Yoshi"). It's made funnier [[spoiler: when every phrase in the book [[PokemonSpeak translates to "Yoshi"]].]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Chaper 4]]
* Mario and Luigi [[BreakingTheFourthWall rolling up the bottom right of the chapter's last page]]. Luigi then says that Peach "stole the spotlight this month"[[note]]The comic was originally released in Nintendo Power, which was a monthly magazine. Oddly, every reference to the one month span between issues (such as this one) were unchanged in the graphic novel version.[[/note]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 5]]
* Early in the chapter, Mario gets shot to Bowser's castle by a Bullet Bill. He says this gem.
--> '''Mario''': This must be the '''Koopa Express'''!
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[[folder: Chapter 6]]
* Peach waking up and seeing [[http://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/super_mario_adventures_yoshi_face_7192.png this image]] in her face.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 7]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 8]]
* Mario asks Luigi if they survived the fall. Luigi then tells him not to ask. Made funnier by the fact that his head is underground.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 9]]
* This scene when Mario thinks that the [[spoiler:haunted]] house they found is a trap.
--> '''Mario:''' I'm '''telling''' toy Weege, I have a '''wierd feeling''' about this...
--> '''Koopalings:''' THE '''JIG'S UP''-- THEY KNOW IT'S A '''TRAP'''!
--> '''Bowser:''' '''Mark my words!''' They're tired, hungry, and, best of all, '''lost'''. This cozy little bungalow is just '''too tempting''' for a snoopy pair like the '''Mario Bros.'''. And its '''unlocked''', which makes it '''irresistible!'''
--> '''Mario:''' '''Wait''', Luigi. We may be tired, lost, and worst of all, '''hungry'''. But we must keep our '''wits''' about us. There's '''something strange''' about this place... My gut feeling is that it's a '''trap!''' C'mon-- let's get '''out''' of here.
--> (cut to the Koopalings and Bowser looking disappointed)
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 10]]
* Mario dressing up as DrMario and Luigi dressing up as a nurse, which is HilariousInHindsight with the recently announced "Dr. Luigi".
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 11]]
* Luigi telling Mario not to look down [[spoiler: as he's standing on the snout of a Blargg]].
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Chapter 12]]
* The narrator reading the prolouge for the chapter. It seems normal until the last sentence.
--> They arrived just in time to witness the compliant princess pledge her love for... '''BOWSER?!!?''' Can it '''be??!!'''
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Mario Vs. Wario]]
* This scene with Pako:
--> '''Pako:''' '''HALT!''' I'll '''not''' let you '''pass!'''
--> '''Mario:''' '''Whoa!''' A monster '''octopus'''! I don't get it-- what's an '''octopus''' doing in this '''fresh water marsh?''' Everybody knows that [[ArtisticLicenseBiology an octopus]] '''[[ArtisticLicenseBiology can't live]] in '''[[ArtisticLicenseBiology fresh water.]]'''
--> (Pako relizes the situation)
--> '''Pako:''' That would '''explain''' why I've been '''feeling sickly'''.
--> '''Mario:''' I '''knew''' it!
** Mario then proceeds to pour [[spoiler:what he thinks is]] salt into the marsh, although [[spoiler:it was actually sugar, causing Pako to faint]].
[[/folder]]