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* Shantae feeling jealous and depressed about Bran-son's epic adventures. She defines herself as being a bad influence for having a bad temper and dressing inappropriately. Keep in mind: as {{Stripperiffic}} as Shantae's outfit it, Bran-son's is far skimpier and more ridiculous.
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* Shantae feeling jealous and depressed about Bran-son's epic adventures. She defines herself as being a bad influence for having a bad temper and dressing inappropriately. Keep in mind: as {{Stripperiffic}} as Shantae's outfit it, is, Bran-son's is far skimpier and more ridiculous.
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* Shantae feeling jealous and depressed about Brandon's epic adventures. She defines herself as being a bad influence for having a bad temper and dressing inappropriately.
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* Shantae feeling jealous and depressed about Brandon's Bran-son's epic adventures. She defines herself as being a bad influence for having a bad temper and dressing inappropriately. Keep in mind: as {{Stripperiffic}} as Shantae's outfit it, Bran-son's is far skimpier and more ridiculous.
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** Cutscene for Shantae entering the Coral Siren's boss room:
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* Squid Baron's planned video game being basically the game being played, as said with {{Anaphora}}:
--> '''Squid Baron:''' [[gold:EVERYTHING]] will be [[gold:AQUATIC THEMED]]!\\
[[gold:AQUATIC LOCATIONS]]!\\
[[gold:AQUATIC TRANSFORMATIONS]]!\\
[[gold:AQUATIC BOSSES]]!\\
'''Sky:''' [[VisibleSilence ...]]\\
'''Shantae:''' [[VisibleSilence ...]]\\
'''Squid Baron:''' And then...\\
As you reach [[gold:THE END]]...\\
There's a [[gold:HUUUGE SQUID BOSS]]!\\
[[gold:A BOSS TO END ALL BOSSES]]!\\
'''Shantae:''' Is that all?
--> '''Squid Baron:''' [[gold:EVERYTHING]] will be [[gold:AQUATIC THEMED]]!\\
[[gold:AQUATIC LOCATIONS]]!\\
[[gold:AQUATIC TRANSFORMATIONS]]!\\
[[gold:AQUATIC BOSSES]]!\\
'''Sky:''' [[VisibleSilence ...]]\\
'''Shantae:''' [[VisibleSilence ...]]\\
'''Squid Baron:''' And then...\\
As you reach [[gold:THE END]]...\\
There's a [[gold:HUUUGE SQUID BOSS]]!\\
[[gold:A BOSS TO END ALL BOSSES]]!\\
'''Shantae:''' Is that all?
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* Throughout the entire game, Squid Baron is attempting to pitch his game idea to Shantae, having now fleshed it out a lot more since mentioning the SpinOff idea in the previous game. At one point, he outlines the structure of the game to a captive Shantae... an aquatic-themed {{Metroidvania}}. Guess what ''Seven Sirens'' is?
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* Squid Baron:
** Throughout the entire game,Squid Baron he is attempting to pitch his game idea to Shantae, having now fleshed it out a lot more since mentioning the SpinOff idea in the previous game. At one point, he {{Anaphora}}-ically outlines the structure of the game to a captive Shantae... an aquatic-themed {{Metroidvania}}. Guess what ''Seven Sirens'' is?is?
---> '''Squid Baron:''' [[gold:EVERYTHING]] will be [[gold:AQUATIC THEMED]]!\\
[[gold:AQUATIC LOCATIONS]]!\\
[[gold:AQUATIC TRANSFORMATIONS]]!\\
[[gold:AQUATIC BOSSES]]!\\
'''Sky:''' [[VisibleSilence ...]]\\
'''Shantae:''' [[VisibleSilence ...]]\\
'''Squid Baron:''' And then...\\
As you reach [[gold:THE END]]...\\
There's a [[gold:HUUUGE SQUID BOSS]]!\\
[[gold:A BOSS TO END ALL BOSSES]]!\\
'''Shantae:''' Is that all?
** Throughout the entire game,
---> '''Squid Baron:''' [[gold:EVERYTHING]] will be [[gold:AQUATIC THEMED]]!\\
[[gold:AQUATIC LOCATIONS]]!\\
[[gold:AQUATIC TRANSFORMATIONS]]!\\
[[gold:AQUATIC BOSSES]]!\\
'''Sky:''' [[VisibleSilence ...]]\\
'''Shantae:''' [[VisibleSilence ...]]\\
'''Squid Baron:''' And then...\\
As you reach [[gold:THE END]]...\\
There's a [[gold:HUUUGE SQUID BOSS]]!\\
[[gold:A BOSS TO END ALL BOSSES]]!\\
'''Shantae:''' Is that all?
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** The Belly Dancer not understanding aging:
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** The Belly Dancer People not understanding aging:
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---> '''Girl:''' Who am I? And why am I so small?
