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[[caption-width-right:350:Even in a black and white drawing, you can tell Flum and Milkit suffer from ColorFailure.]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Maid/Embarrassed Flum = Happy Milkit]]
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--->'''Flum:''' (While holding a fork of genofish meat towards Milkit's lips) "Say 'aah.'"
--->'''Milkit:''' "M-master, I can feed myself. Please don't bother yourself."
--->'''Flum:''' (sarcastic) "Right, and here you are just smiling away while we eat. now open wide!"
--->'''Milkit:''' "Aaaah ..."
--->'''Milkit:''' "M-master, I can feed myself. Please don't bother yourself."
--->'''Flum:''' (sarcastic) "Right, and here you are just smiling away while we eat. now open wide!"
--->'''Milkit:''' "Aaaah ..."
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--->'''Milkit:''' "M-master,
'''Milkit:''' M-master, I can feed myself. Please don't bother yourself.
--->'''Flum:''' (sarcastic) "Right,
'''Flum:''' ''[sarcastic]'' Right, and here you are just smiling away while we eat. now open
--->'''Milkit:''' "Aaaah ..."
'''Milkit:''' Aaaah...
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--->'''Sara:''' "Well, they sure are friendly."
--->'''Eterna:''' "It's pretty much alwasy like that nowadays."
--->'''Sara:''' "Aww, I'm jealous. he, Milkit, I've been beaning to ask someting. Why do you still wear bandages over your face? Weren't you cured?"
--->'''Eterna:''' "She said she'll only show her face to Flum."
--->'''Sara:''' "They sure are ... close."
--->'''Eterna:''' "Right? Annoyingly so."
* It is funny that a ten year old like Sara can see Flum and Milkit's relationship has gotten rather close.
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--->'''Eterna:''' "It's pretty much alwasy like that nowadays."
--->'''Sara:''' "Aww, I'm jealous. he, Milkit, I've been beaning to ask someting. Why do you still wear bandages over your face? Weren't you cured?"
--->'''Eterna:''' "She said she'll only show her face to Flum."
--->'''Sara:''' "They sure are ... close."
--->'''Eterna:''' "Right? Annoyingly so."
* It is funny that a ten year old like Sara can see Flum and Milkit's relationship has gotten rather close.
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--->'''Eterna:''' "It's
'''Eterna:''' It's pretty much
--->'''Sara:''' "Aww,
'''Sara:''' Aww, I'm jealous. he, Milkit, I've been beaning to ask
--->'''Eterna:''' "She
'''Eterna:''' She said she'll only show her face to Flum.
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'''Sara:''' They sure
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* The narration emphasizes how dumbfounded Flum is that all it took for Milkit to join her was to tell her that she was her master now, and that was all it took.
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* It is mixed with Heartwarming when Flum tells Milkit to open her mouth to feed her since she hasn't been eating dinner with her, Sara, and Eterna. It enters SickeningSweethearts territory for those that witness this exchange.
--->'''Flum:''' (While holding a fork of genofish meat towards Milkit's lips) "Say 'aah.'"\\
'''Milkit:''' "M-master, I can feed myself. Please don't bother yourself."
'''Flum:''' (sarcastic) "Right, and here you are just smiling away while we eat. now open wide!"
'''Milkit:''' "Aaaah ..." (she can't bring herself to disobey her Master Flum)
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'''Milkit:''' "M-master, I can feed myself. Please don't bother yourself."
'''Flum:''' (sarcastic) "Right, and here you are just smiling away while we eat. now open wide!"
'''Milkit:''' "Aaaah ..." (she can't bring herself to disobey her Master Flum)
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* It is mixed with Heartwarming when Flum tells Milkit to open her mouth to feed her since she hasn't been eating dinner with her, Sara, and Eterna. It enters SickeningSweethearts territory for those that witness this exchange.
exchange. The narration even states Milkit goes along with it because she can't bring herself to disobey her Master Flum.
--->'''Flum:''' (While holding a fork of genofish meat towards Milkit's lips) "Say 'aah.'"\\
'''Milkit:''''"
--->'''Milkit:''' "M-master, I can feed myself. Please don't bother yourself."
'''Flum:''' --->'''Flum:''' (sarcastic) "Right, and here you are just smiling away while we eat. now open wide!"
'''Milkit:''' --->'''Milkit:''' "Aaaah ..." (she can't bring herself to disobey her Master Flum)"
--->'''Flum:''' (While holding a fork of genofish meat towards Milkit's lips) "Say 'aah.
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--->'''Milkit:''' "M-master, I can feed myself. Please don't bother yourself."
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--->'''Sara:''' "Aww, I'm jealous. he, Milkit, I've been beaning to ask someting. Why do you still wear bandages over your face? Weren't you cured?"
--->'''Eterna:''' "She said she'll only show her face to Flum."
--->'''Sara:''' "They sure are ... close."
--->'''Eterna:''' "Right? Annoyingly so."
--->'''Eterna:''' "It's pretty much alwasy like that nowadays."
--->'''Sara:''' "Aww, I'm jealous. he, Milkit, I've been beaning to ask someting. Why do you still wear bandages over your face? Weren't you cured?"
--->'''Eterna:''' "She said she'll only show her face to Flum."
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--->'''Flum:''' (While holding a fork of genofish meat towards Milkit's lips) "Say 'aah.'"\\
'''Milkit:''' "M-master, I can feed myself. Please don't bother yourself."
'''Flum:''' (sarcastic) "Right, and here you are just smiling away while we eat. now open wide!"
'''Milkit:''' "Aaaah ..." (she can't bring herself to disobey her Master Flum)
--->'''Flum:''' (While holding a fork of genofish meat towards Milkit's lips) "Say 'aah.'"\\
'''Milkit:''' "M-master, I can feed myself. Please don't bother yourself."
'''Flum:''' (sarcastic) "Right, and here you are just smiling away while we eat. now open wide!"
'''Milkit:''' "Aaaah ..." (she can't bring herself to disobey her Master Flum)
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!'''The Girl Who Wanted To Be Boring'''
!'''Flum's Blessing in Disguise'''
* While the chapter is rather dark, it is rather funny how often the slave merchant apparently gets ripped off.
* The narration emphasizes how dumbfounded Flum is that all it took for Milkit to join her was to tell her that she was her master now, and that was all it took.
!'''Intermission 1: The Tiny Damaged Cog'''
* While it isn't quite the comeuppance he deserves, it rather funny to see how Jean selling Flum into slavery repeatedly backfires on him throughout the chapter.
!'''There Are Good People Out There! Maybe We have a Chance Yet?'''
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[[folder:Episode 2]]
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!'''Side Story: Settling Into A Daily Routine'''
* Eterna's Gladfly tendencies toward Flum are this consistently throughout this chapter. She loves teasing Flum regarding her developing relationship with Milkit.
[[/index]]
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[[folder:Episode 3]]
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!'''The Scoundrel Laughs On'''
* Eterna and Sara have an interesting back and forth regarding the relationship between Flum and Milkit.
* It is funny that a ten year old like Sara can see Flum and Milkit's relationship has gotten rather close.
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[[folder:Episode 1]]
[[index]]
!'''The Girl Who Wanted To Be Boring'''
!'''Flum's Blessing in Disguise'''
* While the chapter is rather dark, it is rather funny how often the slave merchant apparently gets ripped off.
* The narration emphasizes how dumbfounded Flum is that all it took for Milkit to join her was to tell her that she was her master now, and that was all it took.
!'''Intermission 1: The Tiny Damaged Cog'''
* While it isn't quite the comeuppance he deserves, it rather funny to see how Jean selling Flum into slavery repeatedly backfires on him throughout the chapter.
!'''There Are Good People Out There! Maybe We have a Chance Yet?'''
[[/index]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Episode 2]]
[[index]]
!'''Side Story: Settling Into A Daily Routine'''
* Eterna's Gladfly tendencies toward Flum are this consistently throughout this chapter. She loves teasing Flum regarding her developing relationship with Milkit.
[[/index]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Episode 3]]
[[index]]
!'''The Scoundrel Laughs On'''
* Eterna and Sara have an interesting back and forth regarding the relationship between Flum and Milkit.
* It is funny that a ten year old like Sara can see Flum and Milkit's relationship has gotten rather close.
[[/index]]
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[[folder:Episode 4]]
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