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-->The genetically engineered penguin stared at his back for several long, long seconds before continuing into the kitchen, retrieving a can from Misato's stash, stopping in consideration, retrieving a second, and retreating into his fridge.

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-->The genetically engineered penguin stared at his back for several long, long seconds before continuing into the kitchen, [[INeedAFreakingDrink retrieving a can can]] from Misato's stash, stopping in consideration, retrieving a second, and retreating into his fridge.
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--> ''Or the kitten gets it.''

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--> ''Or -->''Or the kitten gets it.''
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-->"'''PILOT THE EVANGELION!'''
-->''Or the kitten gets it.''"

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-->"'''PILOT -->'''PILOT THE EVANGELION!'''
-->''Or --> ''Or the kitten gets it.''"''

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-->"'''PILOT THE EVANGELION!''' ''or the kitten gets it.''"

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-->"'''PILOT THE EVANGELION!''' ''or EVANGELION!'''
-->''Or
the kitten gets it.''"

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* Kaji gives Shinji a picture of Gendo holding a gun in one hand, an adorable kitten in the other, and a caption reading: "'''PILOT THE EVANGELION!''' ''or the kitten gets it.''"

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* Kaji gives Shinji a picture of Gendo holding a gun in one hand, an adorable kitten in the other, and a caption reading: "'''PILOT reading:
-->"'''PILOT
THE EVANGELION!''' ''or the kitten gets it.''"
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* Kaji gives Shinji a picture of Gendo holding a gun in one hand, an adorable kitten in the other, and a caption reading:
--- "'''PILOT THE EVANGELION!''' ''or the kitten gets it.''"

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* Kaji gives Shinji a picture of Gendo holding a gun in one hand, an adorable kitten in the other, and a caption reading:
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reading: "'''PILOT THE EVANGELION!''' ''or the kitten gets it.''"
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"'''PILOT THE EVANGELION!''' ''or the kitten gets it.''"

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--- "'''PILOT THE EVANGELION!''' ''or the kitten gets it.''"

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* Kaji gives Shinji a picture of Gendo holding a gun in one hand, an adorable kitten in the other, and a caption reading: "'''PILOT THE EVANGELION!''' ''or the kitten gets it.''"

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* Kaji gives Shinji a picture of Gendo holding a gun in one hand, an adorable kitten in the other, and a caption reading: reading:
"'''PILOT THE EVANGELION!''' ''or the kitten gets it.''"
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* Shinji compliments Asuka over breakfast and she feels so awkward that she leaves the room to hide it. Shinji thinks he's screwed up and angered her somehow... then Pen-Pen walks over and seems to inquire what happened...

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* Shinji compliments Asuka over breakfast and she feels so awkward that she leaves the room to hide it. Shinji thinks he's screwed up and angered her somehow... then Pen-Pen ''Pen-Pen'' walks over and seems to inquire what happened...



-->"It's simple" Shinji said to the Penguin, suddenly feeling dangerously whimsical, leaning in and dropping his voice to a conspiratorial whisper. "See, I'm actually a time traveler from the future who's come back to stop my Father and/or SEELE from kicking off Third Impact. During the pre-game entertainment to the main event last time, I managed to utterly betray Asuka and abandon her when she needed me the most, despite the fact that I thought I had fallen in love with her and thought I'd do anything for her, up to and including dying… so I feel a little guilty right now whenever I look at her. But don't tell anyone, it's a secret" he finished with an admonishing look before he rocked to his knees and started to gather the plates.

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-->"It's simple" Shinji said to the Penguin, suddenly feeling dangerously whimsical, leaning in and dropping his voice to a conspiratorial whisper. "See, I'm actually a time traveler from the future who's come back to stop my Father and/or SEELE from kicking off Third Impact. During the pre-game entertainment to the main event last time, I managed to utterly betray Asuka and abandon her when she needed me the most, despite the fact that I thought I had fallen in love with her and thought I'd do anything for her, up to and including dying… ''dying''… so I feel a little guilty right now whenever I look at her. But don't tell anyone, it's a secret" he finished with an admonishing look before he rocked to his knees and started to gather the plates.
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-->The genetically engineered penguin stared at his back for several long, long seconds before continuing into the -->kitchen, retrieving a can from Misato's stash, stopping in consideration, retrieving a second, and retreating into his fridge.

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-->The genetically engineered penguin stared at his back for several long, long seconds before continuing into the -->kitchen, kitchen, retrieving a can from Misato's stash, stopping in consideration, retrieving a second, and retreating into his fridge.
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-->The genetically engineered penguin stared at his back for several long, long seconds before continuing into the -->kitchen, retrieving a can from Misato's stash, stopping in consideration, retrieving a second, and retreating into his -->fridge.

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-->The genetically engineered penguin stared at his back for several long, long seconds before continuing into the -->kitchen, retrieving a can from Misato's stash, stopping in consideration, retrieving a second, and retreating into his -->fridge.fridge.
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-->"It's simple" Shinji said to the Penguin, suddenly feeling dangerously whimsical, leaning in and dropping his voice to a conspiratorial whisper. "See, I'm actually a time traveler from the future who's come back to stop my Father and/or SEELE from kicking off Third Impact. During the pre-game entertainment to the main event last time, I managed to utterly betray Asuka and abandon her when she needed me the most, despite the fact that I thought I had fallen in love -->with her and thought I'd do anything for her, up to and including dying…so I feel a little guilty right now whenever I -->look at her. But don't tell anyone, it's a secret" he finished with an admonishing look before he rocked to his knees -->and started to gather the plates.

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-->"It's simple" Shinji said to the Penguin, suddenly feeling dangerously whimsical, leaning in and dropping his voice to a conspiratorial whisper. "See, I'm actually a time traveler from the future who's come back to stop my Father and/or SEELE from kicking off Third Impact. During the pre-game entertainment to the main event last time, I managed to utterly betray Asuka and abandon her when she needed me the most, despite the fact that I thought I had fallen in love -->with with her and thought I'd do anything for her, up to and including dying…so dying… so I feel a little guilty right now whenever I -->look look at her. But don't tell anyone, it's a secret" he finished with an admonishing look before he rocked to his knees -->and and started to gather the plates.
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-->"It's simple" Shinji said to the Penguin, suddenly feeling dangerously whimsical, leaning in and dropping his voice to -->a conspiratorial whisper. "See, I'm actually a time traveler from the future who's come back to stop my Father and/or SEELE from kicking off Third Impact. During the pre-game entertainment to the main event last time, I managed to -->utterly betray Asuka and abandon her when she needed me the most, despite the fact that I thought I had fallen in love -->with her and thought I'd do anything for her, up to and including dying…so I feel a little guilty right now whenever I -->look at her. But don't tell anyone, it's a secret" he finished with an admonishing look before he rocked to his knees -->and started to gather the plates.

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-->"It's simple" Shinji said to the Penguin, suddenly feeling dangerously whimsical, leaning in and dropping his voice to -->a a conspiratorial whisper. "See, I'm actually a time traveler from the future who's come back to stop my Father and/or SEELE from kicking off Third Impact. During the pre-game entertainment to the main event last time, I managed to -->utterly utterly betray Asuka and abandon her when she needed me the most, despite the fact that I thought I had fallen in love -->with her and thought I'd do anything for her, up to and including dying…so I feel a little guilty right now whenever I -->look at her. But don't tell anyone, it's a secret" he finished with an admonishing look before he rocked to his knees -->and started to gather the plates.
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-->"It's simple" Shinji said to the Penguin, suddenly feeling dangerously whimsical, leaning in and dropping his voice to -->a conspiratorial whisper. "See, I'm actually a time traveler from the future who's come back to stop my Father and/or -->SEELE from kicking off Third Impact. During the pre-game entertainment to the main event last time, I managed to -->utterly betray Asuka and abandon her when she needed me the most, despite the fact that I thought I had fallen in love -->with her and thought I'd do anything for her, up to and including dying…so I feel a little guilty right now whenever I -->look at her. But don't tell anyone, it's a secret" he finished with an admonishing look before he rocked to his knees -->and started to gather the plates.

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-->"It's simple" Shinji said to the Penguin, suddenly feeling dangerously whimsical, leaning in and dropping his voice to -->a conspiratorial whisper. "See, I'm actually a time traveler from the future who's come back to stop my Father and/or -->SEELE SEELE from kicking off Third Impact. During the pre-game entertainment to the main event last time, I managed to -->utterly betray Asuka and abandon her when she needed me the most, despite the fact that I thought I had fallen in love -->with her and thought I'd do anything for her, up to and including dying…so I feel a little guilty right now whenever I -->look at her. But don't tell anyone, it's a secret" he finished with an admonishing look before he rocked to his knees -->and started to gather the plates.

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* Shinji compliments Asuka over breakfast and she feels so awkward that she leaves the room to hide it. Shinji thinks he's screwed up and angered her somehow...
-->"Wark".
-->Opening his eyes, Shinji glanced at what he couldn't help but think of as a sympathetic look in Shinji's third -->housemate's eyes as he Pen-Pen waddled over to place his own now empty bowl on the table.
-->"Well I screwed that up royally, didn't I?"

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* Shinji compliments Asuka over breakfast and she feels so awkward that she leaves the room to hide it. Shinji thinks he's screwed up and angered her somehow...
-->"Wark".
-->Opening his eyes, Shinji glanced at what he couldn't help but think of as a sympathetic look in Shinji's third -->housemate's eyes as he
somehow... then Pen-Pen waddled walks over and seems to place his own now empty bowl on the table.
-->"Well I screwed that up royally, didn't I?"
inquire what happened...



-->"It's simple" Shinji said to the Penguin, suddenly feeling dangerously whimsical, leaning in and dropping his voice to -->a conspiratorial whisper. "See, I'm actually a time traveler from the future who's come back to stop my Father and/or -->SEELE from kicking off Third Impact. During the pre game entertainment to the main event last time, I managed to -->utterly betray Asuka and abandon her when she needed me the most, despite the fact that I thought I had fallen in love -->with her and thought I'd do anything for her, up to and includingdying…so I feel a little guilty right now whenever I -->look at her. But don't tell anyone, it's a secret" he finished with an admonishing look before he rocked to his knees -->and started to gather the plates.

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-->"It's simple" Shinji said to the Penguin, suddenly feeling dangerously whimsical, leaning in and dropping his voice to -->a conspiratorial whisper. "See, I'm actually a time traveler from the future who's come back to stop my Father and/or -->SEELE from kicking off Third Impact. During the pre game pre-game entertainment to the main event last time, I managed to -->utterly betray Asuka and abandon her when she needed me the most, despite the fact that I thought I had fallen in love -->with her and thought I'd do anything for her, up to and includingdying…so including dying…so I feel a little guilty right now whenever I -->look at her. But don't tell anyone, it's a secret" he finished with an admonishing look before he rocked to his knees -->and started to gather the plates.
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Opening his eyes, Shinji glanced at what he couldn't help but think of as a sympathetic look in Shinji's third housemate's eyes as he Pen-Pen waddled over to place his own now empty bowl on the table.
"Well I screwed that up royally, didn't I?"
"Wark wark, wark?" the genetically engineered penguin inquired, moving over to join him.
Shinji snorted.
"It's simple" Shinji said to the Penguin, suddenly feeling dangerously whimsical, leaning in and dropping his voice to a conspiratorial whisper. "See, I'm actually a time traveler from the future who's come back to stop my Father and/or SEELE from kicking off Third Impact. During the pre game entertainment to the main event last time, I managed to utterly betray Asuka and abandon her when she needed me the most, despite the fact that I thought I had fallen in love with her and thought I'd do anything for her, up to and includingdying…so I feel a little guilty right now whenever I look at her. But don't tell anyone, it's a secret" he finished with an admonishing look before he rocked to his knees and started to gather the plates.
The genetically engineered penguin stared at his back for several long, long seconds before continuing into the kitchen, retrieving a can from Misato's stash, stopping in consideration, retrieving a second, and retreating into his fridge.
"Yeah" Shinji muttered as he stacked the plates in the dishwasher. "That's about what I thought you'd say".

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Opening -->Opening his eyes, Shinji glanced at what he couldn't help but think of as a sympathetic look in Shinji's third housemate's -->housemate's eyes as he Pen-Pen waddled over to place his own now empty bowl on the table.
"Well -->"Well I screwed that up royally, didn't I?"
"Wark -->"Wark wark, wark?" the genetically engineered penguin inquired, moving over to join him.
Shinji -->Shinji snorted.
"It's -->"It's simple" Shinji said to the Penguin, suddenly feeling dangerously whimsical, leaning in and dropping his voice to a -->a conspiratorial whisper. "See, I'm actually a time traveler from the future who's come back to stop my Father and/or SEELE -->SEELE from kicking off Third Impact. During the pre game entertainment to the main event last time, I managed to utterly -->utterly betray Asuka and abandon her when she needed me the most, despite the fact that I thought I had fallen in love with -->with her and thought I'd do anything for her, up to and includingdying…so I feel a little guilty right now whenever I look -->look at her. But don't tell anyone, it's a secret" he finished with an admonishing look before he rocked to his knees and -->and started to gather the plates.
The -->The genetically engineered penguin stared at his back for several long, long seconds before continuing into the kitchen, -->kitchen, retrieving a can from Misato's stash, stopping in consideration, retrieving a second, and retreating into his fridge.
"Yeah"
-->fridge.
-->"Yeah"
Shinji muttered as he stacked the plates in the dishwasher. "That's about what I thought you'd say".
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* Shinji compliments Asuka over breakfast and she feels so awkward that she leaves the room to hide it. Shinji thinks he's screwed up and angered her somehow...
-->"Wark".
Opening his eyes, Shinji glanced at what he couldn't help but think of as a sympathetic look in Shinji's third housemate's eyes as he Pen-Pen waddled over to place his own now empty bowl on the table.
"Well I screwed that up royally, didn't I?"
"Wark wark, wark?" the genetically engineered penguin inquired, moving over to join him.
Shinji snorted.
"It's simple" Shinji said to the Penguin, suddenly feeling dangerously whimsical, leaning in and dropping his voice to a conspiratorial whisper. "See, I'm actually a time traveler from the future who's come back to stop my Father and/or SEELE from kicking off Third Impact. During the pre game entertainment to the main event last time, I managed to utterly betray Asuka and abandon her when she needed me the most, despite the fact that I thought I had fallen in love with her and thought I'd do anything for her, up to and includingdying…so I feel a little guilty right now whenever I look at her. But don't tell anyone, it's a secret" he finished with an admonishing look before he rocked to his knees and started to gather the plates.
The genetically engineered penguin stared at his back for several long, long seconds before continuing into the kitchen, retrieving a can from Misato's stash, stopping in consideration, retrieving a second, and retreating into his fridge.
"Yeah" Shinji muttered as he stacked the plates in the dishwasher. "That's about what I thought you'd say".
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* Misato caughts Asuka tiptoeing out of Shinji's room at the morning, and Asuka has to explain that it is NotWhatItLooksLike.
-->"It had taken some fast talking in the living room and not a little angry indignation to convince Misato that nothing untoward had happened between her and Shinji last night."
-->"And that she did have a good reason to be sleeping in Shinji's bedroom."
-->"In his bed."
-->"With him in said bed, at the same time."
-->"Not that in her opinion it was any of Misato's business what she and Shinji chose to do -or not do- together"
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* After Shinji is found after vanishing from the hospital without warning, Misato storms off to meet him. Aoba mutters he would like she did welcome him personally, and Hyuga replies he does not think he would like the welcome what Shinji is going to get. Then Shinji finds himself in a MarshmallowHell. Misato nearly suffocates him to death, but he thought it was not a bad way to die.
-->'''Makoto''': "Yup. He's clearly terrified."

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* After When Shinji is found after vanishing from the hospital without warning, Misato storms off to meet him. Aoba mutters he would like she did welcome him personally, and Hyuga replies he does not think he would like the welcome what that Shinji is going to get. Then Shinji finds himself in a MarshmallowHell. Misato nearly suffocates him to death, but he thought it was [[CovertPervert not a bad a]] ''[[CovertPervert bad]]'' [[CovertPervert way to die.
die]].
-->'''Makoto''': [[DeadpanSnarker "Yup. He's clearly terrified.""]]
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* Shinji compares the thought of Asuka and his father facing off against each other to watching someone play with the arming codes to N2 bombs...and considers the latter to be safer.

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* Shinji compares the thought of Asuka and his father facing off against each other to watching someone play with the arming codes to N2 bombs...and considers the latter to be safer.safer.
* After Shinji is found after vanishing from the hospital without warning, Misato storms off to meet him. Aoba mutters he would like she did welcome him personally, and Hyuga replies he does not think he would like the welcome what Shinji is going to get. Then Shinji finds himself in a MarshmallowHell. Misato nearly suffocates him to death, but he thought it was not a bad way to die.
-->'''Makoto''': "Yup. He's clearly terrified."
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* Shinji horrified that he will have to eat Misato's food again.

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* Shinji is horrified that he will have to eat Misato's food again.
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* Shinji horrified of he will have to eat Misato's food again.

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* Shinji horrified of that he will have to eat Misato's food again.
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* Kaji and Shinji buying Misato a book titled "Parenting for Dummies", and Shinji joking the bookstore had ran out of "Parenting for Guardians of Temperamentl Germans" to Asuka's face.

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* Kaji and Shinji buying Misato a book titled "Parenting for Dummies", and Shinji joking the bookstore had ran out of "Parenting for Guardians of Temperamentl Temperamental Germans" to Asuka's face.
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* Shinji waves back to [[AlphaBitch Chihiro]], the hottest girl in school (second after Asuka arrives), who has expressed an interest in him. Shinji then thinks that "thanks to his limited understanding of women, this could be taken to mean anything from 'hi there' to 'yes, I would like to marry you'."

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* Shinji waves back to [[AlphaBitch Chihiro]], the hottest girl in school (second after Asuka arrives), who has expressed an interest in him. Shinji then thinks that "thanks to his limited understanding of women, this could be taken to mean anything from 'hi there' to 'yes, I would like to marry you'.""
* Shinji compares the thought of Asuka and his father facing off against each other to watching someone play with the arming codes to N2 bombs...and considers the latter to be safer.
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* Kaji gives Shinji a picture of Gendo holding a gun in one hand, an adorable kitten in the other, and a caption reading: "'''PILOT THE EVANGELION!''' ''or the kitten gets it.''"

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* Kaji gives Shinji a picture of Gendo holding a gun in one hand, an adorable kitten in the other, and a caption reading: "'''PILOT THE EVANGELION!''' ''or the kitten gets it.''"''"
* Shinji waves back to [[AlphaBitch Chihiro]], the hottest girl in school (second after Asuka arrives), who has expressed an interest in him. Shinji then thinks that "thanks to his limited understanding of women, this could be taken to mean anything from 'hi there' to 'yes, I would like to marry you'."
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* "I need to change the logo on my NERV patch to 'Asuka is angry with me, all is right with the world'" ~Shinji shortly after reuniting with Asuka.
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* In this fic, we learn that Kaji was the one who taught Misato to [[DrivesLikeCrazy Drive]], much to Shinji's horror.



* Rei -Rei!- shouting to Kensuke.

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* Rei -Rei!- shouting to Kensuke.Kensuke.
* Kaji gives Shinji a picture of Gendo holding a gun in one hand, an adorable kitten in the other, and a caption reading: "'''PILOT THE EVANGELION!''' ''or the kitten gets it.''"

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* Shinji calling his father out ''twice''. The first of them when his father planned goading him into piloting Unit-01 for -what Gendo believed- first time. And the second when Shinji walked into his office and communicated him what he was piloting ON HIS TERMS, and he also demanded a prize for risking his neck (all the while trying not showing he was still frightened of his father).
* Asuka and Shinji fighting Gaghiel in Unit-02. They are losing because Shinji can not focusing properly, when he [[spoiler:thinks of reminding Kyoko her daughter is about of dying. Instantly Unit-02 goes berserker and easily opens Gaghiel's jaws.]] Asuka and Unit-02 reached perfect synchronization right then.

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* Shinji calling his father out ''twice''. The first horrified of them when his father planned goading him into piloting Unit-01 for -what Gendo believed- first time. And the second when he will have to eat Misato's food again.
*
Shinji walked into his office slaying Samshel and communicated him what he was piloting ON HIS TERMS, then asking "Who is up for fried squid?"
* Hikari
and he also demanded a prize for risking his neck (all Touji's sister chewing Touji and Kensuke out after they leave the while trying not showing he was still frightened of his father).
shelter during a battle.
* Shinji's reaction when Asuka and Rei were apparently bonding.
* Kaji
and Shinji fighting Gaghiel in Unit-02. They are losing because buying Misato a book titled "Parenting for Dummies", and Shinji can not focusing properly, when he [[spoiler:thinks joking the bookstore had ran out of reminding Kyoko her daughter is about "Parenting for Guardians of dying. Instantly Unit-02 goes berserker and easily opens Gaghiel's jaws.]] Asuka and Unit-02 reached perfect synchronization right then.Temperamentl Germans" to Asuka's face.
* Rei -Rei!- shouting to Kensuke.
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* Shinji calling his father out ''twice''. The first of them when his father planned goading him into piloting Unit-01 for -what Gendo believed- first time. And the second when Shinji walked into his office and communicated him what he was piloting ON HIS TERMS, and he also demanded a prize for risking his neck (all the while trying not showing he was still frightened of his father).
* Asuka and Shinji fighting Gaghiel in Unit-02. They are losing because Shinji can not focusing properly, when he [[spoiler:thinks of reminding Kyoko her daughter is about of dying. Instantly Unit-02 goes berserker and easily opens Gaghiel's jaws.]] Asuka and Unit-02 reached perfect synchronization right then.

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