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* [[ItMakesSenseInContext Your dad acting like a dog, with your mom egging it on.]]
-->'''Mom:''' Wiener.
-->'''Ako:''' Don't take your pants off! What the hell!?
-->'''Mom:''' Wiener.
-->'''Ako:''' Don't take your pants off! What the hell!?
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* [[PluckyComicRelief Sayaka.]]
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* [[PluckyComicRelief Sayaka.]]
* Your mom finding the..."stamina" drink you bought earlier and forgot about, [[RightThroughTheWalls and putting it to good use.]]
* Your mom finding the..."stamina" drink you bought earlier and forgot about, [[RightThroughTheWalls and putting it to good use.]]
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-->'''Dad:''' Those oblivious old bastards are always running around with their dicks out! And you never know when they'll turn violent! They'll try to bite Ako with their false teeth! I'll start running around with my dick out too!
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-->'''Dad:''' Those oblivious old bastards are always running around with their dicks out! And you never know when they'll turn violent! They'll try to bite Ako with their false teeth! I'll start running around with my dick out too!too!
* [[PluckyComicRelief Sayaka.]]
* [[PluckyComicRelief Sayaka.]]
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* The entire scene at the burger joint, particularly Sayaka.
-->'''Sayaka:''' I can't take it anymore. Make love to me right here, right now! I'm a B-cup with a chest like a cutting board with a couple of red beans on top, but...! My pussy should be tight enough!
-->'''Sayaka:''' I can't take it anymore. Make love to me right here, right now! I'm a B-cup with a chest like a cutting board with a couple of red beans on top, but...! My pussy should be tight enough!
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* The entire scene at the burger joint, particularly Sayaka.
-->'''Sayaka:''' I can't take it anymore. Make love to me right here, right now! I'm a B-cupYour dad's description of an old folks' home.
-->'''Dad:''' Those oblivious old bastards are always running around witha chest like a cutting board their dicks out! And you never know when they'll turn violent! They'll try to bite Ako with a couple of red beans on top, but...! My pussy should be tight enough!their false teeth! I'll start running around with my dick out too!
-->'''Sayaka:''' I can't take it anymore. Make love to me right here, right now! I'm a B-cup
-->'''Dad:''' Those oblivious old bastards are always running around with
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-->'''Ako:''' Don't take your pants off! What the hell!?
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-->'''Ako:''' Don't take your pants off! What the hell!?hell!?
* The entire scene at the burger joint, particularly Sayaka.
-->'''Sayaka:''' I can't take it anymore. Make love to me right here, right now! I'm a B-cup with a chest like a cutting board with a couple of red beans on top, but...! My pussy should be tight enough!
* The entire scene at the burger joint, particularly Sayaka.
-->'''Sayaka:''' I can't take it anymore. Make love to me right here, right now! I'm a B-cup with a chest like a cutting board with a couple of red beans on top, but...! My pussy should be tight enough!
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-->'''Reina:''' You do realize that the girls who take the initiative and serve caesar salads are all secretly tossing salads behind your back, don't you?
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-->'''Reina:''' You do realize that the girls who take the initiative and serve caesar salads are all secretly tossing salads behind your back, don't you?you?
!!Ako
* [[ItMakesSenseInContext Your dad acting like a dog, with your mom egging it on.]]
-->'''Mom:''' Wiener.
-->'''Ako:''' Don't take your pants off! What the hell!?
!!Ako
* [[ItMakesSenseInContext Your dad acting like a dog, with your mom egging it on.]]
-->'''Mom:''' Wiener.
-->'''Ako:''' Don't take your pants off! What the hell!?
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* Most of [[VitriolicBestBuds Kakeru's]] scenes.
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* Reina asks you to smile, and you ahegao instead.
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* [[UglyCute Hamjiro the Hamster.]] That is all.
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* [[UglyCute Hamjiro the Hamster.]] That is all.all.
!!Reina
* This line from Reina:
-->'''Reina:''' You do realize that the girls who take the initiative and serve caesar salads are all secretly tossing salads behind your back, don't you?
!!Reina
* This line from Reina:
-->'''Reina:''' You do realize that the girls who take the initiative and serve caesar salads are all secretly tossing salads behind your back, don't you?
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-->'''You:''' Are you a demon!?
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-->'''You:''' Are you a demon!?demon?!?
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* Ako and the MC's [[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents parents.]]
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* Any scene with Ako and the MC's [[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents parents.]]
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* Nearly anytime [[VitriolicBestBuds Kakeru]] is on screen.
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* Nearly anytime Most of [[VitriolicBestBuds Kakeru]] is on screen.Kakeru's]] scenes.
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-->'''Saki:''' ''I was going to shut him down for all eternity.''
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-->'''Saki:''' ''I '''I was going to shut him down for all eternity.'''''
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* [[CreepyCute Hamjiro the Hamster.]] That is all.
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* [[CreepyCute [[UglyCute Hamjiro the Hamster.]] That is all.
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* Hamjiro the Hamster. That is all.
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* [[CreepyCute Hamjiro the Hamster. Hamster.]] That is all.
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-->'''A Maiden's Illustrated Guide to Romance: How to Handle Your Younger Boyfriend!! So Easy, Even a Virgin Can Do It!!'''
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-->'''A Maiden's Illustrated Guide to Romance: How to Handle Your Younger Boyfriend!! So Easy, Even a Virgin Can Do It!!'''It!!'''
* Hamjiro the Hamster. That is all.
* Hamjiro the Hamster. That is all.
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-->'''A Maiden's Illustrated Guide to Romance: How to Handle Your Younger Boyfriend!! So Easy, Even a Virgin Can Do It!!"
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-->'''A Maiden's Illustrated Guide to Romance: How to Handle Your Younger Boyfriend!! So Easy, Even a Virgin Can Do It!!"It!!'''
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** Later on, Saki asks what ahegao is, and the MC explains it without question. Saki, [[TheIngenue being who she is]], says she'll go back to work and talk about it with her coworkers.
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** Later on, Saki asks what ahegao is, and the MC explains it without question. Saki, [[TheIngenue being who she is]], says she'll go back to work and talk about it with her coworkers.coworkers.
* Saki's very specific self-help magazine.
-->'''A Maiden's Illustrated Guide to Romance: How to Handle Your Younger Boyfriend!! So Easy, Even a Virgin Can Do It!!"
* Saki's very specific self-help magazine.
-->'''A Maiden's Illustrated Guide to Romance: How to Handle Your Younger Boyfriend!! So Easy, Even a Virgin Can Do It!!"
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* His elation at starting a relationship with Saki.
-->'''MC:''' The night we decided to start a relationship, I danced wildly in my room, rolling around the floor and ahegaoing.
-->'''MC:''' The night we decided to start a relationship, I danced wildly in my room, rolling around the floor and ahegaoing.
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-->'''MC:''' The night we decided to start a relationship, I danced wildly in my room, rolling around the floor and ahegaoing.
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-->'''You:''' Are you a demon!?
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-->'''You:''' Are you a demon!?demon!?
* The MC's elation at starting a relationship with her.
-->'''MC:''' The night we decided to start a relationship, I danced wildly in my room, rolling around the floor and ahegaoing.
** Later on, Saki asks what ahegao is, and the MC explains it without question. Saki, [[TheIngenue being who she is]], says she'll go back to work and talk about it with her coworkers.
* The MC's elation at starting a relationship with her.
-->'''MC:''' The night we decided to start a relationship, I danced wildly in my room, rolling around the floor and ahegaoing.
** Later on, Saki asks what ahegao is, and the MC explains it without question. Saki, [[TheIngenue being who she is]], says she'll go back to work and talk about it with her coworkers.
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* His elation at starting a relationship with Saki.
-->'''MC:''' The night we decided to start a relationship, I danced wildly in my room, rolling around the floor and ahegaoing.
-->'''MC:''' The night we decided to start a relationship, I danced wildly in my room, rolling around the floor and ahegaoing.
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* "You dingbat! You twit! You limp-dick! [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall If this were an eroge, I still wouldn't have any CGs unlocked in my gallery!"]]
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!!The MC
* Declares that he's such an "ultra-monogamist" that he refuses to touch [[HaremGenre harem games]].
* Declares that he's such an "ultra-monogamist" that he refuses to touch [[HaremGenre harem games]].
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-->'''Saki:''' '''I was going to shut him down for all eternity.'''
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-->'''Saki:''' '''I ''I was going to shut him down for all eternity.'''''
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-->'''Saki:''' I '''I was going to shut him down for all eternity.'''
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As a RomCom visual novel, ''Making Lovers'' is full of hilarious moments.
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As a RomCom visual novel, RomCom, ''Making Lovers'' is full of hilarious moments.
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* Nearly anytime [[VitriolicBestBuds Kakeru]] makes an appearance.
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* Nearly anytime [[VitriolicBestBuds Kakeru]] makes an appearance.is on screen.
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!!General
* Nearly anytime [[VitriolicBestBuds Kakeru]] makes an appearance.
* Nearly anytime [[VitriolicBestBuds Kakeru]] makes an appearance.
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As a RomCom-type visual novel, ''Making Lovers'' naturally provides plenty of hilarious moments.
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As a RomCom-type RomCom visual novel, ''Making Lovers'' naturally provides plenty is full of hilarious moments.
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As a RomCom-type visual novel, ''Making Lovers'' naturally provides plenty of hilarious moments.
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!!Saki
* During the MC's first date with Saki, she explains that she only came out so that she could turn her original date down in person.
-->'''You:''' So you were planning on shutting that guy down here tonight?
-->'''Saki:''' ''(innocent smile)'' No, I wouldn't say that exactly...
-->''*{{Beat}}*''
-->'''Saki:''' I was going to shut him down for all eternity.
-->'''You:''' Are you a demon!?
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!!Saki
* During the MC's first date with Saki, she explains that she only came out so that she could turn her original date down in person.
-->'''You:''' So you were planning on shutting that guy down here tonight?
-->'''Saki:''' ''(innocent smile)'' No, I wouldn't say that exactly...
-->''*{{Beat}}*''
-->'''Saki:''' I was going to shut him down for all eternity.
-->'''You:''' Are you a demon!?
