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Changed line(s) 9 (click to see context) from:
-->"And Megatronus – err, Megatron will love you for it," and Buzzsaw bribed.
to:
-->"And Megatronus – err, Megatron will love you for it," and Buzzsaw bribed.bribed.
* The chapter 14.
** First we have Megatron and Soundwave's HeldGaze moment ruined by Shockwave insisting that Soundwave shall rest. Soundwave is not happy.
** The first time Starscream joins Decepticons. Especially his first meeting with Soundwave. He calls Soundwave "floozy", much to Soundwave's irritation. Megatron immediately corrects him about this.
** Not only that, but he interrupts Megatron and Soundwave's private sparring. Soundwave silently wills Starscream "to scamper off somewhere with Shockwave and leave well-enough alone".
** Soundwave noticing Starscream's interest in Megatron. He really tries to convince himself that he isn't jealous of him. Of course, [[CrazyJealousGuy we don't buy it.]]
*** Not to mention that Starscream sounds as jealous of Soundwave as Soundwave is of Starscream.
* The chapter 14.
** First we have Megatron and Soundwave's HeldGaze moment ruined by Shockwave insisting that Soundwave shall rest. Soundwave is not happy.
** The first time Starscream joins Decepticons. Especially his first meeting with Soundwave. He calls Soundwave "floozy", much to Soundwave's irritation. Megatron immediately corrects him about this.
** Not only that, but he interrupts Megatron and Soundwave's private sparring. Soundwave silently wills Starscream "to scamper off somewhere with Shockwave and leave well-enough alone".
** Soundwave noticing Starscream's interest in Megatron. He really tries to convince himself that he isn't jealous of him. Of course, [[CrazyJealousGuy we don't buy it.]]
*** Not to mention that Starscream sounds as jealous of Soundwave as Soundwave is of Starscream.
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Changed line(s) 5 (click to see context) from:
-->"Okay, so we don't gotta off 'im. What if we just . . . casually told him to back off?"
to:
-->"Okay, so we don't gotta off 'im. What if we just . . . casually told him to back off?"off?"
** Or this part:
-->"Do it, Boss! That fresh-sparked librarian's got nothin' on you!" And no matter how much Rumble urged.
-->"There ain't no security system you can't crack!" And Frenzy flattered.
-->"And Megatronus – err, Megatron will love you for it," and Buzzsaw bribed.
** Or this part:
-->"Do it, Boss! That fresh-sparked librarian's got nothin' on you!" And no matter how much Rumble urged.
-->"There ain't no security system you can't crack!" And Frenzy flattered.
-->"And Megatronus – err, Megatron will love you for it," and Buzzsaw bribed.
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Changed line(s) 4,6 (click to see context) from:
-->"You want me to take 'im out, Boss?" Frenzy asked, punching his own open palm, psyching himself up for a fight.
As tempting as the idea was, Soundwave had to decline.
"Okay, so we don't gotta off 'im. What if we just . . . casually told him to back off?"
As tempting as the idea was, Soundwave had to decline.
"Okay, so we don't gotta off 'im. What if we just . . . casually told him to back off?"
to:
-->"You want me to take 'im out, Boss?" Frenzy asked, punching his own open palm, psyching himself up for a fight.
fight. As tempting as the idea was, Soundwave had to decline.
"Okay, -->"Okay, so we don't gotta off 'im. What if we just . . . casually told him to back off?"
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* Knockout's first appearance in the story. He is just so focused on making Megatron looking beautiful again without noticing that Megatron is blind after the Senate's episode. Megatron [[DeadpanSnarker points out that he just needs getting his optics back.]]
* Everytime Rumble and Frenzy acting ShipperOnDeck for Megatron and Soundwave. Especially after Orion Pax is in the picture.
** Especially this part.
-->"You want me to take 'im out, Boss?" Frenzy asked, punching his own open palm, psyching himself up for a fight.
As tempting as the idea was, Soundwave had to decline.
"Okay, so we don't gotta off 'im. What if we just . . . casually told him to back off?"
* Everytime Rumble and Frenzy acting ShipperOnDeck for Megatron and Soundwave. Especially after Orion Pax is in the picture.
** Especially this part.
-->"You want me to take 'im out, Boss?" Frenzy asked, punching his own open palm, psyching himself up for a fight.
As tempting as the idea was, Soundwave had to decline.
"Okay, so we don't gotta off 'im. What if we just . . . casually told him to back off?"
