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* Also from Chapter 21: Jasper and Wilkes' double date with Kurokawa and Kuribayashi. Shino surprises them with a trip to...a cutesy Catgirl-themed maid cafe!
--> '''Wilkes:''' Bruh...what the ''hell'' is this!?
** The image of two battle-hardened United States Marines wearing fake cat ears and saying "Nya Nya" to order their meals.
** A cute scene of Mari sharing part of her meal with Jasper is interrupted by Shino trying the same thing...by shoving a whole cupcake in Wilkes' mouth.
--> '''Wilkes:''' Bruh...what the ''hell'' is this!?
** The image of two battle-hardened United States Marines wearing fake cat ears and saying "Nya Nya" to order their meals.
** A cute scene of Mari sharing part of her meal with Jasper is interrupted by Shino trying the same thing...by shoving a whole cupcake in Wilkes' mouth.
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* [[CreepyAwesome Rory]] [[HorrifyingTheHorror freaking out]] on a Tokyo subway train, because the underworld is Hardy's domain, and she fears Hardy might find her. Not because Hardy wants her dead, mind you. No, [[AbhorrentAdmirer Hardy]] has...[[HoYay other ideas]].
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* [[CreepyAwesome Rory]] [[HorrifyingTheHorror freaking out]] on a Tokyo subway train, because the underworld is Hardy's domain, and she fears Hardy might find her. Not because Hardy wants her dead, mind you. No, [[AbhorrentAdmirer Hardy]] has...[[HoYay [[LesYay other ideas]].
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--> '''Wilkes:''' You and fuckin' Kuro-wawa over there playing Disney romance deep throat edition with food.
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--> '''Wilkes:''' You and fuckin' Kuro-wawa over there playing Disney romance deep throat edition Romance Deep Throat Edition with food.
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--> '''Wilkes:''' You and fuckin Kuro-wawa over there playing Disney romance deep throat addition with food.
--> '''Kincaid:''' Like that cupcake? And its [=KuroKAWA=].
--> '''Kincaid:''' Like that cupcake? And its [=KuroKAWA=].
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--> '''Wilkes:''' You and fuckin fuckin' Kuro-wawa over there playing Disney romance deep throat addition edition with food.
--> '''Kincaid:''' Like that cupcake? Andits it's [=KuroKAWA=].
--> '''Kincaid:''' Like that cupcake? And
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* Wilkes and Kincaid discussing the pronunciation of Mari's last name.
--> '''Wilkes:''' You and fuckin Kuro-wawa over there playing Disney romance deep throat addition with food.
--> '''Kincaid:''' Like that cupcake? And its [=KuroKAWA=].
--> '''Wilkes:''' Yeah? Kuro-kuh-Kiss my black ass.
--> '''Wilkes:''' You and fuckin Kuro-wawa over there playing Disney romance deep throat addition with food.
--> '''Kincaid:''' Like that cupcake? And its [=KuroKAWA=].
--> '''Wilkes:''' Yeah? Kuro-kuh-Kiss my black ass.
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* Benitez getting "voluntold" to chaperone Rory, Tuka, and Lelei on their Tokyo shopping spree. When Kincaid texts him later, he texts back, "Seriously, suck my dick through a garden hose, ''[[GratuitousSpanish pendejo]].''
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* Benitez getting "voluntold" to chaperone Rory, Tuka, and Lelei on their Tokyo shopping spree. When Kincaid texts him later, he texts back, "Seriously, suck my dick through a garden hose, ''[[GratuitousSpanish pendejo]].''"''
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* Benitez getting "voluntold" to chaperone Rory, Tuka, and Lelei on their Tokyo shopping spree. When Kincaid texts him later, he texts back, "Seriously, suck my dick through a garden hose, ''[[GratuitousSpanish pendejo]].''
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* Rory [[CreepyAwesome Rory]] [[HorrifyingTheHorror freaking out out]] on a Tokyo subway train, because the underworld is Hardy's domain, and she fears Hardy might find her. Not because Hardy wants her dead, mind you. No, [[AbhorrentAdmirer Hardy]] has...[[HoYay other ideas]].
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** "Of all the ones you could choose, it had to be Medusa herself? That's fucking bizarre, man!
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** "Of all the ones you could choose, it had to be Medusa herself? That's fucking bizarre, man!man!"
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** "Of all the ones you could choose, it had to be Medusa herself? That's fucking bizarre, man!
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* Horsemen Platoon are invited to the Formal Estate as honored guests of the Countess. First, they improv an episode of ''MTV Cribs'' in the courtyard, then they meet the estate's maids. While most of the Marine tankers are surprised and/or weirded out by the cat girls, bunny girls, gorgon girls, etc., anime nerds Kincaid and Benitez have this exchange:
-->'''Kincaid:''' Benitez, the Promised Land...''it has found us!''
-->'''Benitez:''' Life is good, man.
-->'''Elton:''' Fucking nerds.
** Followed by this gem:
-->'''Elton:''' Yo, Kincaid!
-->'''Kincaid:''' What?
-->'''Elton:''' Didn't we kill some guy named Formal?
-->'''Kincaid:''' ...We did?
-->'''Elton:''' Yeah, you don't remember? Ginza? The guy that charged at us with the fucking spear? Those guys with him kept yelling "Formal," or some shit.
-->'''Kincaid:''' ...They did?
-->'''Elton:''' Yeah, I could hear 'em over the engine, I shit you not.
-->'''Kincaid:''' ...Oh yeah, that guy...''whoops.''
-->'''Kincaid:''' Benitez, the Promised Land...''it has found us!''
-->'''Benitez:''' Life is good, man.
-->'''Elton:''' Fucking nerds.
** Followed by this gem:
-->'''Elton:''' Yo, Kincaid!
-->'''Kincaid:''' What?
-->'''Elton:''' Didn't we kill some guy named Formal?
-->'''Kincaid:''' ...We did?
-->'''Elton:''' Yeah, you don't remember? Ginza? The guy that charged at us with the fucking spear? Those guys with him kept yelling "Formal," or some shit.
-->'''Kincaid:''' ...They did?
-->'''Elton:''' Yeah, I could hear 'em over the engine, I shit you not.
-->'''Kincaid:''' ...Oh yeah, that guy...''whoops.''
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-->‘’"Surprise, motherfuckers!"''
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* The entire tank platoon cracking up over [[PunnyName Pina's]] full name.
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* The first meeting with Italica. The city's defenders are scared shitless to see [[TheDreaded Rory]], a mage, an elf, and the strange newcomers in the green "iron wagons" at their gates, backed by four of the notorious [[TankGoodness "iron chariots"]]. Itami calmly knocks, indicating that they come in peace. Then an overly-excited princess accidentally knocks him out cold with the door.
** Horsemen Platoon, fearing the worst, comes rolling in hard, ready to flatten the city if need be, only to stop in laughter when they realize what happened (and see how utterly terrified the locals are).
-->‘’"Surprise, motherfuckers!"''
** The entire tank platoon cracking up over [[PunnyName Pina's]] full name.
** Horsemen Platoon, fearing the worst, comes rolling in hard, ready to flatten the city if need be, only to stop in laughter when they realize what happened (and see how utterly terrified the locals are).
-->‘’"Surprise, motherfuckers!"''
** The entire tank platoon cracking up over [[PunnyName Pina's]] full name.
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* When Rory joins Charlie Company's barbecue and is creeping everyone out as usual, Kincaid promptly throws the JSDF tankers under the bus, claiming, "''Their'' tanks are even more fun than ours!" Itami, not wanting to make his own tankers hate him, [[FunnyBackgroundEvent gives him a "Dude, what the FUCK??!!" look]].
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* When Rory joins Charlie Company's Marine Corps Birthday barbecue and is creeping everyone out as usual, Kincaid promptly throws the JSDF tankers under the bus, claiming, "''Their'' tanks are even more fun than ours!" Itami, not wanting to make his own tankers hate him, [[FunnyBackgroundEvent gives him a "Dude, what the FUCK??!!" look]].
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* When Rory joins Charlie Company's barbecue and is creeping everyone out as usual, Kincaid promptly throws the JSDF tankers under the bus, claiming, "''Their'' tanks are even more fun than ours!" Itami, not wanting to make his own tankers hate him, [[FunnyBackgroundEvent gives him a "Dude, what the FUCK??!!" look]].
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* Kincaid voicing his opinion on using untested "Storks" to transport their 70-ton tanks to Japan.
-->'''Aldritch:''' Command wants us to get nice and pretty for the whole watching world and do a parade to the frontof the gate, what better way to show off then flying tanks into the mainland in new helicopters?\\
'''Kincaid:''' Well, sir, a better way would be some important component malfunctioning and us all getting dropped into a building or worse.\\
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'''Kincaid:''' With the whole world watching, sir.
-->'''Aldritch:''' Command wants us to get nice and pretty for the whole watching world and do a parade to the frontof the gate, what better way to show off then flying tanks into the mainland in new helicopters?\\
'''Kincaid:''' Well, sir, a better way would be some important component malfunctioning and us all getting dropped into a building or worse.\\
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'''Kincaid:''' With the whole world watching, sir.
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'''Wilkes:''' Bitch! Fuck your five minutes!
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'''Wilkes:''' Bitch! Fuck your five minutes!minutes!
* Chapter 21 has Aldritch treating a BL manga he took from [[YaoiFangirl Pina and Bozes]] like hazmat.
* Chapter 24 has Lelei trying to speak in modern Earth slang.
* Chapter 21 has Aldritch treating a BL manga he took from [[YaoiFangirl Pina and Bozes]] like hazmat.
* Chapter 24 has Lelei trying to speak in modern Earth slang.
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* Chapter 14 brings back the RunningGag of Itami's MistakenForGay trope.
-->'''Kincaid:''' (''to himself'') Oh god, he's gonna come out and I have to tell him I don't swing that way.
-->'''Kincaid:''' (''to himself'') Oh god, he's gonna come out and I have to tell him I don't swing that way.
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* Kinciad voicing his opinion on using untested "Storks" to transport their 70-ton tanks to Japan.
-->'''Aldritch:''' Command wants us to get nice and pretty for the whole watching world and do a parade to the frontof the gate, what better way to show off then flying tanks into the mainland in new helicopters?\\
'''Kinciad:''' Well, sir, a better way would be some important component malfunctioning and us all getting dropped into a building or worse. (''{{Beat}}'') With the whole world watching, sir.
-->'''Aldritch:''' Command wants us to get nice and pretty for the whole watching world and do a parade to the frontof the gate, what better way to show off then flying tanks into the mainland in new helicopters?\\
'''Kinciad:''' Well, sir, a better way would be some important component malfunctioning and us all getting dropped into a building or worse. (''{{Beat}}'') With the whole world watching, sir.
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'''Wilkes:''' Naw, you.
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'''Wilkes:''' Naw, you.you.
* The entire tank platoon cracking up over [[PunnyName Pina's]] full name.
* Elton finding out just how much Jasper is rubbing off him.
-->'''Van Hauser''': Who taught you how to talk like black Shakespeare by the way?\\
'''Elton''': My dumbass gunner's [[{{Anime}} cartoons]].
* Chapter 15 probably brings out the only true way to wake up in the Marine Corps.
-->'''Wilkes:''' Oh Jasper-kuuuun, rise and shine.\\
'''Jasper:''' No... five more minutes...\\
'''Wilkes:''' Bitch! Fuck your five minutes!
* The entire tank platoon cracking up over [[PunnyName Pina's]] full name.
* Elton finding out just how much Jasper is rubbing off him.
-->'''Van Hauser''': Who taught you how to talk like black Shakespeare by the way?\\
'''Elton''': My dumbass gunner's [[{{Anime}} cartoons]].
* Chapter 15 probably brings out the only true way to wake up in the Marine Corps.
-->'''Wilkes:''' Oh Jasper-kuuuun, rise and shine.\\
'''Jasper:''' No... five more minutes...\\
'''Wilkes:''' Bitch! Fuck your five minutes!
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-->'''Wilkes:''' Naw, you.
-->'''Wilkes:''' Naw, you.
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!The Fan Fiction
Written by a former [[SemperFi US Marine]] [[TankGoodness tank crewman]], the author brings out the [[DeadpanSnarker inherent humor]] of the Marine Corps.
* Traveling through the black nothingness in the gate.
-->'''Wilkes:''' I spy with my little eyes... something black.\\
-->'''Elton:''' Oh shit Rampage, lemme fucking guess, uh nothing?\\
-->'''Wilkes:''' Naw, you.
Written by a former [[SemperFi US Marine]] [[TankGoodness tank crewman]], the author brings out the [[DeadpanSnarker inherent humor]] of the Marine Corps.
* Traveling through the black nothingness in the gate.
-->'''Wilkes:''' I spy with my little eyes... something black.\\
-->'''Elton:''' Oh shit Rampage, lemme fucking guess, uh nothing?\\
-->'''Wilkes:''' Naw, you.
