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---> '''Guard:''' Ah, I think she saw me. ''[cowers behind fireworks]]''. [[BlatantLies G- go away! There's no one here!]]
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---> '''Guard:''' Ah, I think she saw me. ''[cowers behind fireworks]]''.fireworks]''. [[BlatantLies G- go away! There's no one here!]]
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---> '''Nariko''': AAAAARGH!!!\\
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** Considering Bohan is a madman, any scene with him in it has the potential for hilarity.
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---> '''Guard:''' Ah, I think she saw me. ''[cowers behind [[WhatAnIdiot fireworks]]]''. [[BlatantLies G- go away! There's no one here!]]
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---> '''Guard:''' Ah, I think she saw me. ''[cowers behind [[WhatAnIdiot fireworks]]]''.fireworks]]''. [[BlatantLies G- go away! There's no one here!]]
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--> '''Guard:''' Ah, I think she saw me. ''[cowers behind [[WhatAnIdiot fireworks]]]''. [[BlatantLies G- go away! There's no one here!]]
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-->'''Kai:''' ''HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!''
-->'''Guard:''' OW!
-->'''Guard:''' OW!
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-->'''Kai:''' ''HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!''
-->'''Guard:'''''HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!''\\
'''Guard:''' OW!
-->'''Guard:'''
'''Guard:''' OW!
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--> '''Nariko''': AAAAARGH!!!
--> '''Bohan''': BLEEEEEEEHHH! (Utterly Deadpan) Kill her.
--> '''Bohan''': BLEEEEEEEHHH! (Utterly Deadpan) Kill her.
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'''Bohan''': BLEEEEEEEHHH! (Utterly Deadpan) Kill her.
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--> '''Bohan''': There's something about that man I don't entirely trust...
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* When she comes to a locked door with a megaphone intercom, and does what any young kid would when presented with a device that is clearly used for transmission of voices, to the misfortune of the guard on the other end...
-->'''Kai:''' ''HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!''
-->'''Guard:''' OW!
-->'''Kai:''' ''HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!''
-->'''Guard:''' OW!
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* The death of Nariko's father, while tragic, is followed up by:
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* The death torture of Nariko's father, while tragic, is followed up by:
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* Much of [[CloudCuckoolander Kai's]] dialogue is there purely for laughs.
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* Much of [[CloudCuckoolander [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} Kai's]] dialogue is there purely for laughs.
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** Considering Bohan is a madman, any scene with him in it has the potential for hilarity.* The "Generals" cutscene has a number of these, but one of Bohan's lines regarding [[ObviouslyEvil Flying]] [[AxCrazy Fox]] stands out.
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** Considering Bohan is a madman, any scene with him in it has the potential for hilarity.hilarity.
* The "Generals" cutscene has a number of these, but one of Bohan's lines regarding [[ObviouslyEvil Flying]] [[AxCrazy Fox]] stands out.
* The "Generals" cutscene has a number of these, but one of Bohan's lines regarding [[ObviouslyEvil Flying]] [[AxCrazy Fox]] stands out.
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* The "Generals" cutscene has a number of these, but one of Bohan's lines regarding [[ObviouslyEvil Flying]] [[AxCrazy Fox]] stands out.
--> '''Bohan''': There's something about that man I don't entirely trust...
** Considering Bohan is a madman, any scene with him in it has the potential for hilarity.
--> '''Bohan''': There's something about that man I don't entirely trust...
** Considering Bohan is a madman, any scene with him in it has the potential for hilarity.
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** Considering Bohan is a madman, any scene with him in it has the potential for hilarity.* The "Generals" cutscene has a number of these, but one of Bohan's lines regarding [[ObviouslyEvil Flying]] [[AxCrazy Fox]] stands out.
--> '''Bohan''': There's something about that man I don't entirelytrust...
** Considering Bohan is a madman, any scene with him in it has the potential for hilarity.trust...
--> '''Bohan''': There's something about that man I don't entirely
** Considering Bohan is a madman, any scene with him in it has the potential for hilarity.
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**Considering Bohan is a madman, any scene with him in it has the potential for hilarity.
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* The "Generals" cutscene has a number of these, but one of Bohan's lines regarding [[ObviouslyEvil Flying]] [[AxCrazy Fox]] stands out.
--> '''Bohan''': There's something about that man I don't entirely trust...
--> '''Bohan''': There's something about that man I don't entirely trust...
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* The death of Nariko's father, while tragic, is followed up by:
--> '''Nariko''': AAAAARGH!!!
--> '''Bohan''': BLEEEEEEEHHH! (Utterly Deadpan) Kill her.
--> '''Nariko''': AAAAARGH!!!
--> '''Bohan''': BLEEEEEEEHHH! (Utterly Deadpan) Kill her.
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** Before that when guard notices her coming:
--> '''Guard:''' Ah, I think she saw me. ''[cowers behind [[WhatAnIdiot fireworks]]]''. [[BlatantLies G- go away! There's no one here!]]
--> '''Guard:''' Ah, I think she saw me. ''[cowers behind [[WhatAnIdiot fireworks]]]''. [[BlatantLies G- go away! There's no one here!]]
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* A bit of BlackComedy from Flying Fox, during his and Nariko's first encounter he sends a couple waves of mooks for her to fight. After she wipes them out, he asks for more volunteers, turning to one guy who cowers away. He then just slaps him, killing him.
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* Much of [[CloudCuckoolander Kai's]] dialogue is there purely for laughs.
** "Maybe I'll shoot your [[GroinAttack weak point]] for [[MemeticMutation MASSIVE DAMAGE!!!]]"
** "Maybe I'll shoot your [[GroinAttack weak point]] for [[MemeticMutation MASSIVE DAMAGE!!!]]"
