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* The introduction to the completely out-of-nowhere "Grandma's Spendin' Christmas with the Superstars" number:
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** "Your share as Grandpa's financial advisor is.....'woof'." "WOOF?!?!"
* Theintroduction to the completely out-of-nowhere way "Grandma's Spendin' Christmas with the Superstars" number:gets started:
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* "Your share as Grandpa's financial advisor is.....'woof'." "WOOF?!?!" And the infamous [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=91Hm8Hqp0ys song]] mentioned above that occurs afterwards.
* The whole special--if not for the cheesy {{Plot Hole}}s, how {{Narm}}y everyone acts, and the shoehorned fruitcake 'jokes'.
** It's pure unadulterated NarmCharm. Most people would be lying if they said they didn't enjoy the hell out of this show.
* The whole special--if not for the cheesy {{Plot Hole}}s, how {{Narm}}y everyone acts, and the shoehorned fruitcake 'jokes'.
** It's pure unadulterated NarmCharm. Most people would be lying if they said they didn't enjoy the hell out of this show.
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* "[[BigLippedAlligatorMoment Grandpa's Gonna Sue the Pants Off of Santa]]" is sort of hilarious in a way, I.M. Slime's deadpan voice in the background spouting out random Spanish and Latin lines such as "No pantalones!" and "Vamanos!".
** Also because Mel and Slime are doing the samba with fruit baskets on their heads with Hawaiian/Brazillian music in the background, singing with voices that sound like roosters screaming.
** Also because Mel and Slime are doing the samba with fruit baskets on their heads with Hawaiian/Brazillian music in the background, singing with voices that sound like roosters screaming.
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* "[[BigLippedAlligatorMoment Grandpa's Gonna Sue the Pants Off of Santa]]" is sort of hilarious in a way, with I.M. Slime's deadpan voice in the background spouting out random Spanish and Latin lines such as "No pantalones!" and "Vamanos!".
**Also Also, because Mel and Slime are doing the samba with fruit baskets on their heads with Hawaiian/Brazillian Hawaiian/Brazilian music in the background, singing with voices that sound like roosters screaming.
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* "Your share as Grandpa's financial advisor is.....'woof'." "WOOF?!?!" And the infamous [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=91Hm8Hqp0ys song]] that occurs afterwards.
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* "Your share as Grandpa's financial advisor is.....'woof'." "WOOF?!?!" And the infamous [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=91Hm8Hqp0ys song]] mentioned above that occurs afterwards.
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* Grandma getting run over [[spoiler: again.]]
* IM Slime introducing herself and Jake's reaction (along with a out-of-nowhere beat).
* IM Slime introducing herself and Jake's reaction (along with a out-of-nowhere beat).
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* Grandma getting run over [[spoiler: again.[[spoiler:again.]]
*IM I.M. Slime introducing herself and Jake's reaction (along with a an out-of-nowhere beat).
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* Narrator!Jake's line about fruit cake.
-->'''Jake:''' The way I see it you can divide the world up into two groups: people who ''like'' fruit cake, [[DeadpanSnarker and all the rest of us!]]
** And in the resulting sequence, the shot for "one's enough to give whole state of Kentucky a great big bellyache" is of Kentucky burping.
-->'''Jake:''' The way I see it you can divide the world up into two groups: people who ''like'' fruit cake, [[DeadpanSnarker and all the rest of us!]]
** And in the resulting sequence, the shot for "one's enough to give whole state of Kentucky a great big bellyache" is of Kentucky burping.
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* Narrator!Jake's Narrator Jake's line about fruit cake.
-->'''Jake:''' The way I seeit it, you can divide the world up into two groups: people who ''like'' fruit cake, [[DeadpanSnarker and all the rest of us!]]
** And in the resulting sequence, the shot for "one's enough to give the whole state of Kentucky a great big bellyache" is of Kentucky burping.
-->'''Jake:''' The way I see
** And in the resulting sequence, the shot for "one's enough to give the whole state of Kentucky a great big bellyache" is of Kentucky burping.
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* When everyone dreses in black after Grandma's disappearance, Daphne uses it as an excuse to have a goth phase.
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* When everyone dreses dresses in black after Grandma's disappearance, Daphne uses it as an excuse to have a goth phase.
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* "[[BigLippedAlligatorMoment Grandpa's Gonna Sue the Pants Off of Santa]]" is sort of hilarious in a way, especially the deadpan voice in the background spouting out random Spanish and Latin lines such as "No pantalones!" and "Vamanos!".
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* "[[BigLippedAlligatorMoment Grandpa's Gonna Sue the Pants Off of Santa]]" is sort of hilarious in a way, especially the I.M. Slime's deadpan voice in the background spouting out random Spanish and Latin lines such as "No pantalones!" and "Vamanos!".
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** [[WebVideo/TheNostalgiaCritic "I think this guy's way too accepting of violence to the elderly."]]
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** [[WebVideo/TheNostalgiaCritic "I love how he describes his Grandma being pummeled as incredible, and then follows it up with the actual bad news, that it almost ended Christmas. I think this guy's way too accepting of violence to the elderly."]]
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* When everyone dreses in black after Grandma's disappearance, Daphne uses it as an excuse to have a goth phase.
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** Also because Mel and Slime are doing the samba with fruit baskets on their heads with Hawaiian/Brazillian music in the background, singing with voices that sound like roosters screaming.
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-->'''Grandpa''': I'd rather ''sing''!
* "Your share as Grandpa's financial advisor is.....'woof'." "WOOF?!?!"
* "Your share as Grandpa's financial advisor is.....'woof'." "WOOF?!?!"
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-->'''Grandpa''': [[ThatRemindsMeOfASong I'd rather ''sing''!
sing!]]
* "Your share as Grandpa's financial advisor is.....'woof'.""WOOF?!?!""WOOF?!?!" And the infamous [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=91Hm8Hqp0ys song]] that occurs afterwards.
* "Your share as Grandpa's financial advisor is.....'woof'."
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--> (cue beat){{beat}})
