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'''Kankurou''': I don't know man, [[WhatAnIdiot some people are dumbasses]].\\
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'''Kankurou''': I don't know man, [[WhatAnIdiot some people are dumbasses]].dumbasses.\\
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* Chapter 9: Shikako takes a moment to make a comment to throw some shade at Tazuna, as she knows what he's doing.
--> "We are ninja of Konoha," I spoke levelly. "When we accept a mission, we do our best to see that it is fulfilled… provided the mission parameters are a true and accurate rendition of information."\\
He gulped. Definitely a sign of nervous behaviour.
--> "We are ninja of Konoha," I spoke levelly. "When we accept a mission, we do our best to see that it is fulfilled… provided the mission parameters are a true and accurate rendition of information."\\
He gulped. Definitely a sign of nervous behaviour.
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* A large part of the fic's humor comes from Shikako's running commentary on numerous situations. One such point is when the squad first encounters Zabuza as he scares them by... talking to them while hiding in the mist. While the effect ''is'' actually scary, Shikako can't help but remark on this in her mind and wonder why he's still talking.
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* A large part of the fic's humor comes from Shikako's running commentary on numerous situations. One such point is when the squad first encounters Zabuza as he scares them by... talking to them while hiding in the mist. While the effect ''is'' actually scary, Shikako can't help but [[DeadpanSnarker remark on this in her mind and wonder why he's still talking.talking]].
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* Chapter 5: Shikako attempts to win the bell test by [[MundaneSolution simply asking Kakashi for them]]. When that doesn't work, she tries to see if there's anything she can give for them. She didn't expect either to work, but felt it was worth a shot.
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* Chapter 4: Strangely, Naruto's reaction to the Team 7 line-up is both this and a CMOH. After wanting to be put on a team with Sakura and ''not'' with Sasuke, he gets Sasuke, but Shikako instead of Sakura... and after ''booing'' about Sasuke, he sends Shikako a look that implies he wants to give her TheGlomp. Which shows just how much her kindness has impacted him:
--> "… seven is Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki and Shikako Nara," Iruka continued, and my attention snapped back to him. Naruto booed at Sasuke, then cheered, looking like he wanted to jump over the test and tackle-hug me. I gave him a weak smile.
--> "… seven is Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki and Shikako Nara," Iruka continued, and my attention snapped back to him. Naruto booed at Sasuke, then cheered, looking like he wanted to jump over the test and tackle-hug me. I gave him a weak smile.
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* Chapter 4: Strangely, Naruto's reaction to the Team 7 line-up is both this and a CMOH. After wanting to be put on a team with Sakura and ''not'' with Sasuke, he gets Sasuke, but Shikako instead of Sakura... and after ''booing'' about Sasuke, he sends Shikako a look that implies he wants to give her TheGlomp. Which shows just how much her kindness has impacted him:
--> "… seven is Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki and Shikako Nara," Iruka continued, and my attention snapped back to him. Naruto booed at Sasuke, then cheered, looking like he wanted to jump over the test and tackle-hug me. I gave him a weak smile.
--> "… seven is Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki and Shikako Nara," Iruka continued, and my attention snapped back to him. Naruto booed at Sasuke, then cheered, looking like he wanted to jump over the test and tackle-hug me. I gave him a weak smile.
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* Chapter 4: Strangely, Naruto's reaction to the Team 7 line-up is both this and a CMOH. After wanting to be put on a team with Sakura and ''not'' with Sasuke, he gets Sasuke, but Shikako instead of Sakura... and after ''booing'' about Sasuke, he sends Shikako a look that implies he wants to give her TheGlomp. Which shows just how much her kindness has impacted him:
--> "… seven is Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki and Shikako Nara," Iruka continued, and my attention snapped back to him. Naruto booed at Sasuke, then cheered, looking like he wanted to jump over the test and tackle-hug me. I gave him a weak smile.
--> "… seven is Sasuke Uchiha, Naruto Uzumaki and Shikako Nara," Iruka continued, and my attention snapped back to him. Naruto booed at Sasuke, then cheered, looking like he wanted to jump over the test and tackle-hug me. I gave him a weak smile.
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* A large part of the fic's humor comes from Shikako's running commentary on numerous situations. One such point is when the squad first encounters Zabuza as he scares them by... talking to them while hiding in the mist. While the effect ''is'' actually scary, Shikako can't help but remark on this and wonder why he's still talking.
--> '''Shikako:''' (''internally'') Hello, my name is Zabuza Momochi and I'll be your assassin this evening.
* The entirety of the water fight scene. Especially when Haku pushed Zabuza into the water.
--> '''Shikako:''' (''internally'') Hello, my name is Zabuza Momochi and I'll be your assassin this evening.
* The entirety of the water fight scene. Especially when Haku pushed Zabuza into the water.
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* A large part of the fic's humor comes from Shikako's running commentary on numerous situations. One such point is when the squad first encounters Zabuza as he scares them by... talking to them while hiding in the mist. While the effect ''is'' actually scary, Shikako can't help but remark on this in her mind and wonder why he's still talking.
-->'''Shikako:''' (''internally'') Hello, ''Hello, my name is Zabuza Momochi and I'll be your assassin this evening.
evening.''
* The entirety of the water fightscene.scene in Chapter 14. Especially when Haku pushed Zabuza into the water.
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* The entirety of the water fight
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** The water fight starts when a bored Shikako surprise tackles Sasuke from behind, causing the later to let out a [[ScreamsLikeALittleGirl girlish shriek]].
