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* When Haraket find the Gold of Honor (given to him at the hands of the great King himself) in Ari's clothes chest, the Overseer complains to Vetch that Ari had just packed them all away "like present from an inconvenient relative." Come Sanctuary, it is revealed that Ari's father was the King's Brother and the Royal Commander of the Armies of Tia, making Haraket's statement HilariousInHindsight.
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* When Haraket find the Gold of Honor (given to him at the hands of the great King himself) in Ari's clothes chest, the Overseer complains to Vetch that Ari had just packed them all away "like present presents from an inconvenient relative." Come Sanctuary, it is revealed that Ari's father was the King's Brother and the Royal Commander of the Armies of Tia, making Haraket's statement HilariousInHindsight.
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--> '''Orest''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Oh? So what is it?]]
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--> '''Orest''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Oh? So So, what is it?]]
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* The part in ''Alta'' when Heklatis "came on" to the Magus not only and Kiron in stitches, my sides started to ''ACHE'' from laughing so hard!
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* The part in ''Alta'' when Heklatis "came on" to the Magus not only and Kiron in stitches, my stitches. In the end poor Kiron's sides started to ''ACHE'' ''ache'' from laughing so hard!hard.
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* When Tathulan and Khaleph first meet, and start to play keepaway with Tathulan's ball.
* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decided to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. The idea of a baby dragon the size of a Rottweiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is just to much.
* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decided to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. The idea of a baby dragon the size of a Rottweiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is just to much.
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* When Tathulan and Khaleph first meet, and start to play keepaway keep away with Tathulan's ball.
* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decided to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. The idea of a baby dragon the size of a Rottweiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is justto too much.
* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decided to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. The idea of a baby dragon the size of a Rottweiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is just
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* When Haraket find the Gold of Honor (given to him at the hands of the great King himself) in Ari's clothes chest, the Overseer complains to Vetch that Ari had just packed them all away "like present from an inconvenient relative." Come Sanctuary, it is revealed that Ari's father was the King's Brother and the Royal Commander of the Armies of Tia, making Haraket's statement [HilariousInHindsight].
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* When Haraket find the Gold of Honor (given to him at the hands of the great King himself) in Ari's clothes chest, the Overseer complains to Vetch that Ari had just packed them all away "like present from an inconvenient relative." Come Sanctuary, it is revealed that Ari's father was the King's Brother and the Royal Commander of the Armies of Tia, making Haraket's statement [HilariousInHindsight].
HilariousInHindsight.
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* When Haraket find the Gold of Honor (given to him at the hands of the great King himself) in Ari's clothes chest, the Overseer complains to Vetch that Ari had just packed them all away "like present from an inconvenient relative." Come Sanctuary, it is revealed that Ari's father was the King's Brother and the Royal Commander of the Armies of Tia, making Haraket's statement [HilariousinHindsight].
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* When Haraket find the Gold of Honor (given to him at the hands of the great King himself) in Ari's clothes chest, the Overseer complains to Vetch that Ari had just packed them all away "like present from an inconvenient relative." Come Sanctuary, it is revealed that Ari's father was the King's Brother and the Royal Commander of the Armies of Tia, making Haraket's statement [HilariousinHindsight].
[HilariousInHindsight].
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* When Haraket find the Gold of Honor (given to him at the hands of the great King himself) in Ari's clothes chest, the Overseer complains to Vetch that Ari had just packed them all away "like present from an inconvenient relative." Come Sanctuary, it is revealed that Ari's father was the King's Brother and the Royal Commander of the Armies of Tia, making Haraket's statement [[HilariousinHindsight]].
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* When Haraket find the Gold of Honor (given to him at the hands of the great King himself) in Ari's clothes chest, the Overseer complains to Vetch that Ari had just packed them all away "like present from an inconvenient relative." Come Sanctuary, it is revealed that Ari's father was the King's Brother and the Royal Commander of the Armies of Tia, making Haraket's statement [[HilariousinHindsight]].
[HilariousinHindsight].
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* When Haraket find the Gold of Honor (given to him at the hands of the great King himself) in Ari's clothes chest, the Overseer complains to Vetch that Ari had just packed them all away "like present from an inconvenient relative." Come Sanctuary, it is revealed that Ari's father was the King's Brother and the Royal Commander of the Armies of Tia, making Haraket's statement [[HilariousinHindsight]].
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* One of the funerary goods for [[spoiler: Vech's fake grave]] is a pair of sandals. Which are far to big for him to wear.
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* One of the funerary goods for [[spoiler: Vech's fake grave]] is a pair of sandals. Which are far to too big for him to wear.
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* Orest often has a bad habit of walking straight into jokes at his expence, for example...
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* Orest often has a bad habit of walking straight into jokes at his expence, expense, for example...
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* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decided to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. The idea of a baby dragon the size of a rottweiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is just to much.
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* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decided to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. The idea of a baby dragon the size of a rottweiler Rottweiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is just to much.
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* One of the funerary goods for [[spoiler: Vech's fake grave]] is a pair of sandals. Which are far to big for him to wear.
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* Kiron discreetly giving Ari a kick in the shins very time he's about to stick his foot in his mouth and argue with Nofret.
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* Kiron discreetly giving Ari a kick in the shins very every time he's about to stick his foot in his mouth and argue with Nofret.
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* Kiron discreetly giving Air a kick in the shins very time he's about to stick his foot in his mouth and argue with Nofret.
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* Kiron discreetly giving Air Ari a kick in the shins very time he's about to stick his foot in his mouth and argue with Nofret.
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* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decided to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. The idea of a baby dragon the size of a rottweiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is just to much!much.
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* Kiron discreetly giving Air a kick in the shins very time he's about to stick his foot in his mouth and argue with Nofret.
--> '''Ari''': (''furious'') Why did you ''kick'' me?
--> '''Kiron''': I was saving you from doing something stupid.
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* Kiron discreetly giving Air a kick in the shins very time he's about to stick his foot in his mouth and argue with Nofret.
--> '''Ari''': (''furious'') Why did you ''kick'' me?
--> '''Kiron''': I was saving you from doing something stupid.
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--> '''Kiron''': It' the hitting the ground that kills you.
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--> '''Kiron''': It' It's the hitting the ground that kills you.
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* Near the end of the first book, Ari discovers the truth behind Avatar... his reaction is priceless.
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* Near the end of the first book, Ari discovers the truth behind Avatar...Avatre... his reaction is priceless.
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* The part in (Alta) when Heklatis "came on" to the Magus not only ahd Kiron in stitches, my sides started to ''ACHE'' from laughing so hard!
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* The part in (Alta) ''Alta'' when Heklatis "came on" to the Magus not only ahd and Kiron in stitches, my sides started to ''ACHE'' from laughing so hard!
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** Perhaps made funnier by Heklatis' comment after the Magus leaves.
--> '''Heklatis''': *rude noise* As if I would touch ''him'' with a barge pole.
--> '''Heklatis''': *rude noise* As if I would touch ''him'' with a barge pole.
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* Orest often has a bad habit of walking strat into a joke at his expence, for example...
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* Orest often has a bad habit of walking strat straight into a joke jokes at his expence, for example...
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--> '''Orest''': It's a long way to the ground. I wouldn't like to fall...
--> '''Kiron''': (''straight faced'') Oh, I'm not worried about falling. The Tian Jousters used to say that it isn't the fall that kills you.
--> '''Orest''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Oh? So what is it?]]
--> '''Kiron''': It' the hitting the ground that kills you.
--> '''Orest''': It's a long way to the ground. I wouldn't like to fall...
--> '''Kiron''': (''straight faced'') Oh, I'm not worried about falling. The Tian Jousters used to say that it isn't the fall that kills you.
--> '''Orest''': [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Oh? So what is it?]]
--> '''Kiron''': It' the hitting the ground that kills you.
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* Near the end of the first book, Ari discovers the truth behind Avatar... his reaction is priceless.
--> '''Ari''': [[OhMyGods By Sheshet's belly!]] I can scarcely believe it!
--> '''Ari''': [[OhMyGods By Sheshet's belly!]] I can scarcely believe it!
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* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decided to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. The idea of a baby dragon the size of a rottweiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is just to much!
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* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decided to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. The idea of a baby dragon the size of a rottweiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is just to much!
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* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decided to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. They idea of a baby dragon the size of a rotwiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is just to much!
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* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decided to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. They The idea of a baby dragon the size of a rotwiler rottweiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is just to much!
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* The part in (Alta) when Heklatis "came on" to the Magus not only ahd Kiron in stitches, my sides started to ''ACH'' from laughing so hard!
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* The part in (Alta) when Heklatis "came on" to the Magus not only ahd Kiron in stitches, my sides started to ''ACH'' ''ACHE'' from laughing so hard!
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* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decidede to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. They idea of a baby dragon the size of a rotwiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is just to much!
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* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decidede decided to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. They idea of a baby dragon the size of a rotwiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is just to much!
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* The part in (Alta) when Heklatis "came on" to the Magus not only ahd Kiron in stitches, my sides started to ''ACH'' from laughing so hard!
--> '''Kiron''': Did-you-see-his-''face!?''
* When Tathulan and Khaleph first meet, and start to play keepaway with Tathulan's ball.
* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decidede to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. They idea of a baby dragon the size of a rotwiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is just to much!
--> '''Kiron''': Did-you-see-his-''face!?''
* When Tathulan and Khaleph first meet, and start to play keepaway with Tathulan's ball.
* I loved it when little-baby Bethlan decidede to go look for her food and her mother, rather than wait. They idea of a baby dragon the size of a rotwiler walking around, while looking for ''Mama'' is just to much!
