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--->'''Mouse Conductor:''' ''(dazed)'' Next stop: mouth, throat, stomach, intestine, and – you guessed it – [[ToiletHumor Green River]]!
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--->'''Mouse Conductor:''' ''(dazed)'' ''[dazed]'' Next stop: mouth, throat, stomach, intestine, and – you guessed it – [[ToiletHumor Green River]]!
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** Tiger going full rabid-dog mode when Miss Kitty gets taken hostage. The cat mooks all get freaked out by the sight before getting on the receiving end of a CurbStompBattle. An impressed Wylie could only watch proudly at the carnage.
--->'''Wylie:''' I didn't teach him that.
--->'''Wylie:''' I didn't teach him that.
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** Tiger going full rabid-dog mode when Miss Kitty gets taken hostage. The cat mooks all get freaked out by the sight before getting on the receiving end of a CurbStompBattle. An impressed Wylie could only watch proudly at the carnage.
carnage, especially when he catches a knife with his teeth and spits it back at one of the cats.
--->'''Wylie:''' Ididn't teach never taught him that.''that'' one.
--->'''Wylie:''' I
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* After Tiger falls off a cliff.
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* After Tiger falls off a cliff.cliff, being propelled by his own breath after "sucking in his paunch", as if he were a deflating balloon:
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-->'''Tiger''': Ahhh! [[BuffySpeak It's a spi... a spee... a spid-d-d-d...]] [[PorkyPigPronunciation an arachnid!]]
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-->'''Tiger''': Ahhh! [[BuffySpeak It's a spi...spa... a spee... a spid-d-d-d...]] [[PorkyPigPronunciation an arachnid!]]
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* Cat R. Waul having a singing audition at his saloon. He looks disgusted at a fat opera singing mouse, then promptly drops her down a trap door before calling in the next audition.
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** Tiger going full rabid-dog mode when Miss Kitty gets taken hostage. The cat mooks all get freaked out by the sight before getting on the receiving end of a CurbStompBattle. An impressed Wylie could only watch proudly at the carnage.
--->'''Wylie:''' I didn't teach him that.
--->'''Wylie:''' I didn't teach him that.
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-->'''Tiger''': (acts as though nothing happened) I hurt myself.
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-->'''Tiger''': (acts ''[acts as though nothing happened) happened]'' I hurt myself.
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* Tanya getting [[ProducePelting fruit thrown at her]] for singing "Somewhere Out There," a [[RealitySubtext clear reflection on]] [[HypeBacklash how sick everyone was of that song]]. There's also the dialogue which follows:
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* Tanya getting [[ProducePelting fruit thrown at her]] for singing "Somewhere Out There," a [[RealitySubtext clear reflection on]] [[HypeBacklash how sick everyone was of that song]]. There's also the dialogue which that follows:
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-->'''Mama Mousekewitz:''' ''(scooping up some tomato from the wall)'' Hmph, another night without cheese.
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* You just can't help but laugh at how funny the Cat Attack horn sounded as it was playing.
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* You just can't help but laugh at how funny the Cat Attack horn sounded as it was playing.played.
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** And that was a moment before he swore to himself he'll be tough and brave when he saw the mice running in fear.
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** [[ImmediateSelfContradiction And that was a moment before he swore to himself he'll he'd be tough and brave when he saw the mice running in fear.fear]].
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WljJMrwSlbk The dog chase scene.]] Poor Tiger can't catch a break when he's trying to get to the train station to say good-bye to Fievel, boards the train only to discover the train conductor also has an angry dog, then ends up on another train only to discover another angry dog, and when he falls into the water, he gets confronted by... a ''fish with the face of a dog'' (and it's angry as well). His deadpan response sells it:
--> "[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe Dogfish.]]"
--> "[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe Dogfish.]]"
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WljJMrwSlbk The dog chase scene.]] Poor Tiger can't catch a break when he's trying to get to the train station to say good-bye goodbye to Fievel, boards the train only to discover the train conductor also has an angry dog, then ends up on another train only to discover another angry dog, and when he falls into the water, he gets confronted by... a ''fish with the face of a dog'' (and it's angry as well). His deadpan response sells it:
--> -->'''Tiger:''' "[[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe Dogfish.]]"
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-->'''Mouse Conductor:''' Last call, all passengers bound FOR ALTUNA, AKRON, ELKHART, OSKALOOSA AND '''GREEN RIVER!!!!'''"
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-->'''Mouse Conductor:''' Last call, all passengers bound FOR ALTUNA, AKRON, ELKHART, OSKALOOSA OSKALOOSA, AND '''GREEN RIVER!!!!'''"
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* How Cat R. Waul catches Fievel eavesdropping. He is about the eat the Mouse Conductor before Fievel throws his mouse puppet into the sandwich. The moment he takes a bite, he realizes what he is eating, spits it out and looks up to see Fievel. From there, he is debating whether or not to eat Fievel before letting him go to have Chula deal with him.
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* How Cat R. Waul catches Fievel eavesdropping. He is about the eat the Mouse Conductor before Fievel throws his mouse puppet into the sandwich. The moment he takes a bite, he [[IAteWhat realizes what he is eating, spits it out out]], and looks up to see Fievel. From there, he is debating whether or not to eat Fievel before letting him go to have Chula deal with him.
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'''Fieval:''' ''(falling)'' AAAAAAAAHHH!!
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'''Fieval:''' ''(falling)'' ''[falling]'' AAAAAAAAHHH!!
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-->'''Tiger''': I'm lost and all alone, in a million acre catbox.
** Tiger's whole trip into the west was funny in a CosmicPlaything kind of way.
** Tiger's whole trip into the west was funny in a CosmicPlaything kind of way.
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** Tiger's whole trip into the
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-->'''Fievel:''' Hi, mirage of Tiger.
-->'''Tiger:''' Hi, mirage of Fievel.
-->'''Tiger:''' Hi, mirage of Fievel.
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-->'''Fievel:''' Hi, mirage of Tiger.
-->'''Tiger:'''Tiger.\\
'''Tiger:''' Hi, mirage of Fievel.
-->'''Tiger:'''
'''Tiger:''' Hi, mirage of Fievel.
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-->'''Wylie:''' Now... '''''ROOOAAAARRRR!!!'''''\\
'''Tiger:''' ''(meekly)'' Bark!
'''Tiger:''' ''(meekly)'' Bark!
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'''Tiger:'''
