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* Laura can only give him an [[FascinatingEyebrow oh really eyebrow as if to say]] "cheap shot bro."
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* Laura can only give him an [[FascinatingEyebrow oh really eyebrow as if to say]] "cheap shot bro.""
[[AC: Episode 5 - Lemon Scented You]]
* Media showing up at the police station in the form of Marilyn Monroe.
[[AC: Episode 5 - Lemon Scented You]]
* Media showing up at the police station in the form of Marilyn Monroe.
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-->'''Audrey''': I found out you two were dead and having an affair in the same sentence. The same breath.
-->'''Laura''': Might have been a run-on sentence.
-->'''Laura''': Might have been a run-on sentence.
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-->'''Audrey''': I found out you two were dead and having an affair in the same sentence. The same breath.\\
'''Laura''': Might have been a run-on sentence.
* Discussing Audrey's odd grieving process.
'''Laura''': Might have been a run-on sentence.
* Discussing Audrey's odd grieving process.
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* In a messed up kind of way, when Audrey says that trying to have sex with Shadow on Laura's grave was "only fair", Laura immediately agrees with her.
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-->'''Mr Ibis:''' Please don't move , your [[StealthInsult still tacky.]]
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-->'''Mr Ibis:''' Please don't move , your move, you're [[StealthInsult still tacky.]]
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* Laura can only give him an [[FascinatingEyebrow oh really eyebrow as if to say]] "cheap shot bro."
* Laura can only give him an [[FascinatingEyebrow oh really eyebrow as if to say]] "cheap shot bro."
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-->'''Mr Ibis:''' Uh Please don't move , your [[StealthInsult still tacky.]]
* Laura can only give him an [[FascinatingEyebrow oh really eyebrow as if tosay]] say]] "cheap shot bro."
* Laura can only give him an [[FascinatingEyebrow oh really eyebrow as if to
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-->'''Mr Ibis:''' Please Uh don't move , your [[StealthInsult still tacky.]]
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* As Ibis and Anubis are repairing Laura's arm and working on her stiching, Mr Ibis gets a shot in.
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* As Ibis and Anubis Jacquel are repairing Laura's arm and working on her stiching, Mr Ibis gets a shot in.
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-->'''MrIbis:''' Please don't movie, your [[StealthInsult still tacky.]]
Laura can only give him an [[FascinatingEyebrow oh really eyebrow as if to say]] ''''cheap shot bro.''''
Laura can only give him an [[FascinatingEyebrow oh really eyebrow as if to say]] ''''cheap shot bro.''''
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Laura can only give him an [[FascinatingEyebrow oh really eyebrow as if to
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* Laura is annoyed her obituary is so short and meaningless.
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* Laura is annoyed her obituary is so short and meaningless.meaningless.
* As Ibis and Anubis are repairing Laura's arm and working on her stiching, Mr Ibis gets a shot in.
-->'''MrIbis:''' Please don't movie, your [[StealthInsult still tacky.]]
Laura can only give him an [[FascinatingEyebrow oh really eyebrow as if to say]] ''''cheap shot bro.''''
* As Ibis and Anubis are repairing Laura's arm and working on her stiching, Mr Ibis gets a shot in.
-->'''MrIbis:''' Please don't movie, your [[StealthInsult still tacky.]]
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* Despite everything that's happened, Audrey helps Laura by sewing her arm back on. The attempts at awkward small talk are hilarious.
-->'''Laura:''' Thoughtful of you to make us a scrapbook.
-->'''Audrey:''' Fuck you, Laura.
-->'''Laura:''' Thoughtful of you to make us a scrapbook.
-->'''Audrey:''' Fuck you, Laura.
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-->'''Audrey''': '''Get out of my house, you zombie whore!'''
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-->'''Audrey''': '''Get ''Get out of my house, you zombie whore!'''whore!''
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-->'''Audrey''': '''Get out of my house, you zombie whore!'''
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* Laura crawls out of her own grave, looks around at the cemetery, takes a deep breath... and pukes up a gallon of embalming fluid.
-->'''Laura:''' Oh, that's disgusting...
-->'''Laura:''' Oh, that's disgusting...
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-->'''Audrey:''' I tried to fuck Shadow on your grave.\\
'''Laura:''' That's fair.
* Since neither of them know how Laura came back, there are some incorrect but logical implications they have to work through.
-->'''Laura:''' Is Robbie dead too?\\
'''Audrey:''' Yes.\\
'''Laura:''' Is he ''still'' dead?\\
'''Audrey:''' Oh, Jesus Christ...
'''Laura:''' That's fair.
* Since neither of them know how Laura came back, there are some incorrect but logical implications they have to work through.
-->'''Laura:''' Is Robbie dead too?\\
'''Audrey:''' Yes.\\
'''Laura:''' Is he ''still'' dead?\\
'''Audrey:''' Oh, Jesus Christ...
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* The look on Anibus' face when Laura suddenly flies up out of the afterlife. It's as if he's thinking "...well...''that's'' different."
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* The look on Anibus' Anubis' face when Laura suddenly flies up out of the afterlife. It's as if he's thinking "...well...''that's'' different."
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* In a messed up kind of way, when Audrey says that trying to have sex with Shadow on Laura's grave was "only fair", Laura immediately agrees with her.
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* In a messed up kind of way, when Audrey says that trying to have sex with Shadow on Laura's grave was "only fair", Laura immediately agrees with her.her.
-->'''Audrey''': I found out you two were dead and having an affair in the same sentence. The same breath.
-->'''Laura''': Might have been a run-on sentence.
* Laura is annoyed her obituary is so short and meaningless.
-->'''Audrey''': I found out you two were dead and having an affair in the same sentence. The same breath.
-->'''Laura''': Might have been a run-on sentence.
* Laura is annoyed her obituary is so short and meaningless.
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* Laura's adorable "Oh" and OhCrap face when Audrey asks if she just happens to remember how she died.
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* Laura's adorable "Oh" and OhCrap face when Audrey asks if she just happens to remember how she died.died.
* In a messed up kind of way, when Audrey says that trying to have sex with Shadow on Laura's grave was "only fair", Laura immediately agrees with her.
* In a messed up kind of way, when Audrey says that trying to have sex with Shadow on Laura's grave was "only fair", Laura immediately agrees with her.
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* Laura quite calmly talking to Audrey, who's naturally freaking out given how A) her dead best friend is standing before her; B) she's missing an arm and C) needs to use the toilet.
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* Laura quite calmly talking to Audrey, who's naturally freaking out given how A) her dead best friend is standing before her; B) she's missing an arm and C) needs to use the toilet.toilet.
* Laura's adorable "Oh" and OhCrap face when Audrey asks if she just happens to remember how she died.
* Laura's adorable "Oh" and OhCrap face when Audrey asks if she just happens to remember how she died.
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* Laura quite calmly talking to Audrey, who's naturally freaking out given how A) her dead best friend is standing before her; B) she's missing an arm and C) needs to use the toliet.
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* Laura quite calmly talking to Audrey, who's naturally freaking out given how A) her dead best friend is standing before her; B) she's missing an arm and C) needs to use the toliet.toilet.
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* The look on Anibus' face when Laura suddenly flies up out of the afterlife. It's as if he's thinking "...well...''that's'' different."
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* The look on Anibus' face when Laura suddenly flies up out of the afterlife. It's as if he's thinking "...well...''that's'' different.""
* Laura quite calmly talking to Audrey, who's naturally freaking out given how A) her dead best friend is standing before her; B) she's missing an arm and C) needs to use the toliet.
* Laura quite calmly talking to Audrey, who's naturally freaking out given how A) her dead best friend is standing before her; B) she's missing an arm and C) needs to use the toliet.
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-->'''Shadow''': Why are you talking to me about marshmallows? Like I'm worried about marshmallows. ''(Beat)'' [[NotSoAboveItAll ...yeah, I like marshmallows.]]
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-->'''Shadow''': Why are you talking to me about marshmallows? Like I'm worried about marshmallows. ''(Beat)'' [[NotSoAboveItAll ...yeah, I like marshmallows.]]]]
[[AC: Episode 4 - The Git Gone]]
* The look on Anibus' face when Laura suddenly flies up out of the afterlife. It's as if he's thinking "...well...''that's'' different."
[[AC: Episode 4 - The Git Gone]]
* The look on Anibus' face when Laura suddenly flies up out of the afterlife. It's as if he's thinking "...well...''that's'' different."
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* Shadow's furious declaration that he likes marshmallows. ItMakesSenseInContext.
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* Shadow's furious declaration that he likes marshmallows. ItMakesSenseInContext.ItMakesSenseInContext.
-->'''Wednesday''': ''(handing Shadow a paper cup)'' Got you marshmallows in your cocoa. You like marshmallows?
-->'''Shadow''': Why are you talking to me about marshmallows? Like I'm worried about marshmallows. ''(Beat)'' [[NotSoAboveItAll ...yeah, I like marshmallows.]]
-->'''Wednesday''': ''(handing Shadow a paper cup)'' Got you marshmallows in your cocoa. You like marshmallows?
-->'''Shadow''': Why are you talking to me about marshmallows? Like I'm worried about marshmallows. ''(Beat)'' [[NotSoAboveItAll ...yeah, I like marshmallows.]]
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* Shadow and Wednesday have a discourse about the various incarnations of Jesus. When Wednesday gets up to make some copies for their bank robbery, you can see what is clearly white Jesus working the desk at the copy shop, for just a second, a bit out of focus.
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* Shadow and Wednesday have a discourse about the various incarnations of Jesus. When Wednesday gets up to make some copies for their bank robbery, you can see what is clearly white Jesus working the desk at the copy shop, for just a second, a bit out of focus.focus.
* Shadow's furious declaration that he likes marshmallows. ItMakesSenseInContext.
* Shadow's furious declaration that he likes marshmallows. ItMakesSenseInContext.
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* Shadow drinking coffee from a tiny cup. The contrast is hilarious.
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**Even better is that it come from under the table rather than the ceiling it was flipped towards.
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* Most of Shadow and Wednesday's interaction with the Zorya sisters, from Zorya Vechernyaya guzzling half a bottle of vodka (with Shadow's impressed reaction) to the deadpan reading of Shadow's future that everyone involved obviously knows is bullshit.
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* Most of Shadow and Wednesday's interaction with the Zorya sisters, from Zorya Vechernyaya guzzling half a bottle of vodka (with Shadow's impressed reaction) to the deadpan reading of Shadow's future that everyone involved obviously knows is bullshit.bullshit.
[[AC:Episode 3 - Head Full of Snow]]
* Wednesday greeting Shadow when he wakes up.
-->'''Wednesday''': Hey, you're up! We're gonna rob a bank. You want some coffee?
* A StealthPun that wouldn't have been possible when the book was published: the jinn is a taxi driver who originated from the lost city of Ubar. He's an ''Ubar driver''.
* Shadow and Wednesday have a discourse about the various incarnations of Jesus. When Wednesday gets up to make some copies for their bank robbery, you can see what is clearly white Jesus working the desk at the copy shop, for just a second, a bit out of focus.
[[AC:Episode 3 - Head Full of Snow]]
* Wednesday greeting Shadow when he wakes up.
-->'''Wednesday''': Hey, you're up! We're gonna rob a bank. You want some coffee?
* A StealthPun that wouldn't have been possible when the book was published: the jinn is a taxi driver who originated from the lost city of Ubar. He's an ''Ubar driver''.
* Shadow and Wednesday have a discourse about the various incarnations of Jesus. When Wednesday gets up to make some copies for their bank robbery, you can see what is clearly white Jesus working the desk at the copy shop, for just a second, a bit out of focus.
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* In the opening segment with the Vikings, the amount of arrows that are shot upon landing is... [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill excessive.]]
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* Most of Shadow and Wednesday's interaction with the Zorya sisters, from Zorya Vechernyaya guzzling half a bottle of vodka to the deadpan reading of Shadow's future that everyone involved obviously knows is bullshit.
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* Most of Shadow and Wednesday's interaction with the Zorya sisters, from Zorya Vechernyaya guzzling half a bottle of vodka (with Shadow's impressed reaction) to the deadpan reading of Shadow's future that everyone involved obviously knows is bullshit.
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* Audrey's drunken ranting about Robbie and Laura, especially her reaction to Shadow refusing her proposal: "I'm trying to reclaim my dignity here!"
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* Sweeney's coin flip. He flips a coin, Shadow waits to see it come down, and when it doesn't, he turns to talk to Sweeney for about 30 seconds... [[BrickJoke and then the coin loudly falls to the table.]]
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'''Sweeney:''' That's a stereotype, that is.
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'''Sweeney:''' That's a stereotype, that is.is.
[[AC:Episode 2 - The Secret of Spoon]]
*When Shadow buys Wednesday a burner phone and tells him he might need it if he needs to talk to anyone, Wednesday responds with an incredulous "Why the hell would I want to ''talk'' to anyone?" and throws the burner phone ''and'' Shadow's phone out the car window.
*Shadow glancing over at his and Laura's framed wedding picture and instead seeing Robbie's dick pic. The entire idea of a framed dick pic is hilariously absurd.
*Most of Shadow and Wednesday's interaction with the Zorya sisters, from Zorya Vechernyaya guzzling half a bottle of vodka to the deadpan reading of Shadow's future that everyone involved obviously knows is bullshit.
[[AC:Episode 2 - The Secret of Spoon]]
*When Shadow buys Wednesday a burner phone and tells him he might need it if he needs to talk to anyone, Wednesday responds with an incredulous "Why the hell would I want to ''talk'' to anyone?" and throws the burner phone ''and'' Shadow's phone out the car window.
*Shadow glancing over at his and Laura's framed wedding picture and instead seeing Robbie's dick pic. The entire idea of a framed dick pic is hilariously absurd.
*Most of Shadow and Wednesday's interaction with the Zorya sisters, from Zorya Vechernyaya guzzling half a bottle of vodka to the deadpan reading of Shadow's future that everyone involved obviously knows is bullshit.
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[[AC:Episode 1 - The Bone Orchard]]
* Wednesday's "senile old man" act to get himself bumped to first class. When Shadow ends up sitting next to him, he can't help but chuckle at the cleverness of it.
* Wednesday claims to have two talents: He can sleep absolutely anywhere at any time, and he generally eventually gets what he wants. Sure enough, when he decides to go to sleep on an airplane flying through the storm of the century, he's out like a light. Shadow does a double take when he realizes how fast he went to sleep.
* Shadow is a little disbelieving when Sweeney claims to be a leprechaun.
-->'''Shadow:''' Shouldn't you be shorter?\\
'''Sweeney:''' That's a stereotype, that is.
* Wednesday's "senile old man" act to get himself bumped to first class. When Shadow ends up sitting next to him, he can't help but chuckle at the cleverness of it.
* Wednesday claims to have two talents: He can sleep absolutely anywhere at any time, and he generally eventually gets what he wants. Sure enough, when he decides to go to sleep on an airplane flying through the storm of the century, he's out like a light. Shadow does a double take when he realizes how fast he went to sleep.
* Shadow is a little disbelieving when Sweeney claims to be a leprechaun.
-->'''Shadow:''' Shouldn't you be shorter?\\
'''Sweeney:''' That's a stereotype, that is.
