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* In the second StoryArc, the EDF liasons who were invited to Arrat's ship [[spoiler:tried to blew up the ship via remote controllled bombs they put inside the ship previously]] just to find out The Net prevented them from doing so. Their faces and reaction are ''priceless'':
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* In the second StoryArc, the EDF liasons who were invited to Arrat's ship [[spoiler:tried to blew blow up the ship via remote controllled remote-controlled bombs they put inside the ship previously]] just to find out The Net prevented them from doing so. Their faces and reaction are ''priceless'':
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--> '''EDF liason''': Oh, Commander.
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--> '''EDF liason''': [[OhCrap Oh, Commander.Commander]].
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--> '''Erma:''' Only if the neighbors don't object.
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--> '''Erma:''' Only if the neighbors don't object.object.
* In the second StoryArc, the EDF liasons who were invited to Arrat's ship [[spoiler:tried to blew up the ship via remote controllled bombs they put inside the ship previously]] just to find out The Net prevented them from doing so. Their faces and reaction are ''priceless'':
--> '''EDF liason''': Oh, Commander.
--> '''Arrat''': [[DeadpanSnarker Oh Whaat?]]
* In the second StoryArc, the EDF liasons who were invited to Arrat's ship [[spoiler:tried to blew up the ship via remote controllled bombs they put inside the ship previously]] just to find out The Net prevented them from doing so. Their faces and reaction are ''priceless'':
--> '''EDF liason''': Oh, Commander.
--> '''Arrat''': [[DeadpanSnarker Oh Whaat?]]
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--> '''Alfon (Erma's boyfriend)''':So, we get to do it on the front lawn?
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--> '''Alfon (Erma's boyfriend)''':So, '''Alfon''':So, we get to do it on the front lawn?
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--> '''Alfon (Erma's boyfriend)''':So, we get to [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean do it on the front lawn?]]
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--> '''Alfon (Erma's boyfriend)''':So, we get to [[IfYouKnowWhatIMean do it on the front lawn?]]lawn?
