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* Sara finds a handmade pincushion and knows instantly it's from Becky - only to be confused when she finds a card from Miss Amelia on it. The pincushion actually ''was'' from Becky but she borrowed Miss Amelia's card because she wanted to give Sara a card with her present.
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* Sara finds a handmade pincushion and knows instantly it's from Becky - only to be confused when she finds a card from Miss Amelia on it. The pincushion actually ''was'' from Becky but she borrowed fished Miss Amelia's card out of the trash because she wanted to give Sara a card with her present.
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--> "I'm going to be quiet!" Donald shouted "We'll all be as quiet as mice!"
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--> [[WithCatlikeTread "I'm going to be quiet!" Donald shouted shouted, "We'll all be as quiet as mice!"mice!"]]
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* When Musing to Ermengarde, Sara wonders if she's a nice child only because she has no trials. Ermengarde phlegmatically points out that the nasty Lavinia has no trials either. either and she is quite nasty without them. Sarah's seven-year-old response (borrowed from overhearing Miss Minchin discussing Lavinia's temper) is quite quaint.
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* Sara writing back to her father's letter asking whether she would like a doll for her eleventh birthday.
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* Sara writing writes back to her father's letter asking whether she would like a doll for her eleventh birthday.birthday. The response actually makes Captain Crewe, now sick with the illness that will kill him, laugh out loud.
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* The entire scene of the girls stealing Sara's locket from Minchin's office. Lottie pretends to be crying so loudly that it distracts Amelia. After trying to quieten Lottie, Amelia runs down to the kitchen to get Sara (because she can calm Lottie down). By the time they get back upstairs, the girls have the locket, and Lottie [[MoodWhiplash cheerfully walks past Amelia and Sara]]. Additionally Minchin comes back early and opens the door to her office, so Becky screams to distract her. Becky stutters for a few seconds while the rest of the girls clear out of the door before saying "I thought I saw a mouse". Minchin rolls her eyes and turns to walk into her office, bumping into the door (which had been closed by Ermengarde).
* When the girls wake up to find their room decorated with all the finery, Becky reacts with an "oh my ''Lord''" and tells Sara she may have gone too far - because apparently her imagination can do anything.
** When they see the food:
--> '''Becky:''' I'm a little scared by all of this.
--> '''Sara:''' Me too. You think we shouldn't eat it?
--> '''Becky:''' I'm not ''that'' scared!
* Lavinia believing her hair is falling out thanks to Sara's 'curse'. She sees a couple of stray hairs in her brush and does an EyeTake before fainting.
* Sara and Becky getting their revenge on Miss Minchin for abusing that poor chimney sweep: pouring soot into the drawing room chimney and giving Minchin a face full.
* Miss Amelia's reaction to Sara suggesting she elope with Francis. She gives the girl a "how dare you", while doing her best to sound like she's not turned on by the idea.
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--> What were you thinking? How dare you think! What were you thinking?
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--> "What ''is'' she crying for?" [Miss Michin] almost yelled.
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--> "What ''is'' she crying for?" [Miss Michin] Minchin] almost yelled.
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* Sara writing back to her father's letter asking whether she would like a doll for her eleventh birthday.
--> "I am getting very old," she wrote; "you see, I shall never live to have another doll given me. This will be my last doll. There is something solemn about it. If I could write poetry, I am sure a poem about 'A Last Doll' would be very nice. But I cannot write poetry. I have tried, and it made me laugh. It did not sound like Watts or Coleridge or Shakespeare at all."
--> "I am getting very old," she wrote; "you see, I shall never live to have another doll given me. This will be my last doll. There is something solemn about it. If I could write poetry, I am sure a poem about 'A Last Doll' would be very nice. But I cannot write poetry. I have tried, and it made me laugh. It did not sound like Watts or Coleridge or Shakespeare at all."
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--> "What ''is'' she crying for?" [Miss Michin] almost yelled.
--> "Oh—oh—oh!" Sara heard; "I haven't got any mam-ma-a!"
--> "Oh, Lottie!" screamed Miss Amelia. "Do stop, darling! Don't cry! Please don't!"
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--> '''Sara:''' Well, perhaps - perhaps that is because Lavinia is ''growing''.
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* Sara finds a handmade pincushion from Becky right before her eleventh birthday party, only to be confused when she finds a card from Miss Amelia on it. The pincushion actually was from Becky but she borrowed Miss Amelia's card because she wanted to give Sara a card with her present.
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* Sara finds a handmade pincushion and knows instantly it's from Becky right before her eleventh birthday party, - only to be confused when she finds a card from Miss Amelia on it. The pincushion actually was ''was'' from Becky but she borrowed Miss Amelia's card because she wanted to give Sara a card with her present.
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* Sara finds a handmade pincushion from Becky right before her eleventh birthday party, only to be confused when she finds a card from Miss Amelia on it. The pincushion actually was from Becky but she borrowed Miss Amelia's card because she wanted to give Sara a card with her present.
* Miss Minchin's flights of rage in the face of Sara's composure. Even Lavinia and Jessie find it funny to watch.
--> What were you thinking? How dare you think! What were you thinking?
* Three of the Carmichael children go to visit the Indian Gentleman to cheer him up, though Janet (the eldest) says that they have to do it very quietly because he is ill. Her younger brother doesn't quite understand this.
--> "I'm going to be quiet!" Donald shouted "We'll all be as quiet as mice!"
* Sara finds a handmade pincushion from Becky right before her eleventh birthday party, only to be confused when she finds a card from Miss Amelia on it. The pincushion actually was from Becky but she borrowed Miss Amelia's card because she wanted to give Sara a card with her present.
* Miss Minchin's flights of rage in the face of Sara's composure. Even Lavinia and Jessie find it funny to watch.
--> What were you thinking? How dare you think! What were you thinking?
* Three of the Carmichael children go to visit the Indian Gentleman to cheer him up, though Janet (the eldest) says that they have to do it very quietly because he is ill. Her younger brother doesn't quite understand this.
--> "I'm going to be quiet!" Donald shouted "We'll all be as quiet as mice!"
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** When they see the food:
--> '''Becky:''' I'm a little scared by all of this.
--> '''Sara:''' Me too. You think we shouldn't eat it?
--> '''Becky:''' I'm not ''that'' scared!
--> '''Becky:''' I'm a little scared by all of this.
--> '''Sara:''' Me too. You think we shouldn't eat it?
--> '''Becky:''' I'm not ''that'' scared!
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* When the girls wake up to find their room decorated with all the finery, Becky reacts with an "oh my ''lord''" and tells Sara she may have gone too far - because apparently her imagination can do anything.
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* When the girls wake up to find their room decorated with all the finery, Becky reacts with an "oh my ''lord''" ''Lord''" and tells Sara she may have gone too far - because apparently her imagination can do anything.
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* When the girls wake up to find their room decorated with all the finery, Becky reacts with an "oh my ''lord''" and tells Sara she may have gone too far - because apparently her imagination can do anything.
* Lavinia believing her hair is falling out thanks to Sara's 'curse'. She sees a couple of stray hairs in her brush and does an EyeTake before fainting.
* Sara and Becky getting their revenge on Miss Minchin for abusing that poor chimney sweep: pouring soot into the drawing room chimney and giving Minchin a face full.
* Miss Amelia's reaction to Sara suggesting she elope with Francis. She gives the girl a "how dare you", while doing her best to sound like she's not turned on by the idea.
* Lavinia believing her hair is falling out thanks to Sara's 'curse'. She sees a couple of stray hairs in her brush and does an EyeTake before fainting.
* Sara and Becky getting their revenge on Miss Minchin for abusing that poor chimney sweep: pouring soot into the drawing room chimney and giving Minchin a face full.
* Miss Amelia's reaction to Sara suggesting she elope with Francis. She gives the girl a "how dare you", while doing her best to sound like she's not turned on by the idea.
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* The entire scene of the girls stealing Sara's locket from Minchin's office. Lottie pretends to be crying so loudly that it distracts Amelia. After trying to quieten Lottie, Amelia runs down to the kitchen to get Sara (because she can calm Lottie down). By the time they get back upstairs, the girls have the locket and Lottie [[MoodWhiplash cheerfully walks past Amelia and Sara]]. Additionally Minchin comes back early and opens the door to her office, so Becky screams to distract her. Becky stutters for a few seconds while the rest of the girls clear out of the door before saying "I thought I saw a mouse". Minchin rolls her eyes and turns to walk into her office, bumping into the door (which had been closed by Ermengarde).
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* The entire scene of the girls stealing Sara's locket from Minchin's office. Lottie pretends to be crying so loudly that it distracts Amelia. After trying to quieten Lottie, Amelia runs down to the kitchen to get Sara (because she can calm Lottie down). By the time they get back upstairs, the girls have the locket locket, and Lottie [[MoodWhiplash cheerfully walks past Amelia and Sara]]. Additionally Minchin comes back early and opens the door to her office, so Becky screams to distract her. Becky stutters for a few seconds while the rest of the girls clear out of the door before saying "I thought I saw a mouse". Minchin rolls her eyes and turns to walk into her office, bumping into the door (which had been closed by Ermengarde).
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* The entire scene of the girls stealing Sara's locket from Minchin's office. Lottie pretends to be crying so loudly that it distracts Amelia. After trying to quieten Lottie, Amelia runs down to the kitchen to get Sara (because she can calm Lottie down). By the time they get back upstairs, the girls have the locket and Lottie [[MoodWhiplash cheerfully walks past Amelia and Sara]]. Additionally Minchin comes back early and opens the door to her office, so Becky screams to distract her. Becky stutters for a few seconds while the rest of the girls clear out of the door before saying "I thought I saw a mouse". Minchin rolls her eyes and turns to walk into her office, bumping into the door (which had been closed by Ermengarde).
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* The entire scene of the girls stealing Sara's locket from Minchin's office. Lottie pretends to be crying so loudly that it distracts Amelia. After trying to quieten Lottie, Amelia runs down to the kitchen to get Sara (because she can calm Lottie down). By the time they get back upstairs, the girls have the locket and Lottie [[MoodWhiplash cheerfully walks past Amelia and Sara]]. Additionally Minchin comes back early and opens the door to her office, so Becky screams to distract her. Becky stutters for a few seconds while the rest of the girls clear out of the door before saying "I thought I saw a mouse". Minchin rolls her eyes and turns to walk into her office, bumping into the door (which had been closed by Ermengarde).Ermengarde).
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* The entire scene of the girls stealing Sara's locket from Minchin's office. Lottie pretends to be crying so loudly that it distracts Amelia. After trying to quieten Lottie, Amelia runs down to the kitchen to get Sara (because she can calm Lottie down). By the time they get back upstairs, the girls have the locket and Lottie [[MoodWhiplash cheerfully walks past Amelia and Sara]]. Additionally Minchin comes back early and opens the door to her office, so Becky screams to distract her. Becky stutters for a few seconds while the rest of the girls clear out of the door before saying "I thought I saw a mouse". Minchin rolls her eyes and turns to walk into her office, bumping into the door (which had been closed by Ermengarde).
* The entire scene of the girls stealing Sara's locket from Minchin's office. Lottie pretends to be crying so loudly that it distracts Amelia. After trying to quieten Lottie, Amelia runs down to the kitchen to get Sara (because she can calm Lottie down). By the time they get back upstairs, the girls have the locket and Lottie [[MoodWhiplash cheerfully walks past Amelia and Sara]]. Additionally Minchin comes back early and opens the door to her office, so Becky screams to distract her. Becky stutters for a few seconds while the rest of the girls clear out of the door before saying "I thought I saw a mouse". Minchin rolls her eyes and turns to walk into her office, bumping into the door (which had been closed by Ermengarde).
