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* Minto's name can be written as 美人 - "beautiful person".
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** Potentially worse? They were chosen precisely because [[spoiler:Deep Blue thought younger people would be easier to manipulate.]]
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** One fanfiction author on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn decided to make [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16182518/chapters/37814111 those]] [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16193708 possibilities]]. (Warning: Dark Themes ahead!)
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* The whole concept of the Mew Project, if you think about it, is actually disturbing: Five girls, ages from 10 to 15, had their bodies altered ''without their permission'' and became half-humans, half-humans, and then have to fight aliens. Besides the psychological burden of having the fate of humanity on your shoulders, the violation of their basic rights and the physical alteration (despite played lightly) is ''bound'' to have effects as well. No wonder Retasu freaked out at first and Zakuro wanted nothing to do with the people responsible!!!
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* The whole concept of the Mew Project, if you think about it, is actually disturbing: Five girls, ages from 10 to 15, had their bodies altered ''without their permission'' and permission'', became half-humans, half-humans, half-human, half-animal hybrids, and then have to fight aliens. Besides the psychological burden of having the fate of humanity on your shoulders, the violation of their basic rights and the physical alteration (despite played lightly) is ''bound'' to have effects as well. No wonder Retasu freaked out at first and Zakuro wanted nothing to do with the people responsible!!!
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* The first monster in the series is a mutated rat. And, in real life, cats eat rats, explaining how Ichigo was able to take him down with ease.
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* The first monster in the series is a mutated rat. And, in real life, cats eat are known for killing rats, explaining how Ichigo was able to take him down with ease.
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* The whole concept of the Mew Project, if you think about it, is actually disturbing: Five girls, ages from 10 to 15, had their bodies altered ''without their permission'' and became half-humans, half-humans, and then have to fight aliens. Besides the psychological burden of having the fate of humanity on your shoulders, the violation of their basic rights and the physical alteration (despite played lightly) is ''bound'' to have effects as well. No wonder Retasu freaked out at first and Zakuro wanted nothing to do with the people responsible!!!
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* The first monster in the seires is a mutated rat. And, in real life, cats eat rats, explaining how Ichigo was able to take him down with ease.
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* The first monster in the seires series is a mutated rat. And, in real life, cats eat rats, explaining how Ichigo was able to take him down with ease.
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* The Mew Mew Mark is the point on the body where the girls were injecting with their genes. No one's is particularly concerning except for Purin's, which is on her forehead, meaning she got injected [[NoRangeLikePointBlankRange at point blank to the head.]] Let's hope it didn't cause any long term brain injuries...
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* The Mew Mew Mark is the point on the body where the girls were injecting injected with their genes. No one's is particularly concerning except for Purin's, Bu-Ling's, which is on her forehead, meaning she got injected [[NoRangeLikePointBlankRange at point blank to the head.]] Let's hope it didn't cause any long term brain injuries...
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* The Mew Mew Mark is the point on the body where the girls were injecting with their genes. No one's is particularly concerning except for Purin's, which is on her forehead, meaning she got injected [[NoRangeLikePointBlankRange at point blank to the head.]] Let's hope it didn't cause any long term brain injuries...
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per Trope Repair Shop, Jerkass Facade is being cut in favor of Jerk With A Heart Of Gold.
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* As mentioned before, [[spoiler: Ryou's incompatible genes will kill him by the age of 20. Ryou is already 15]] It's even implied (particularly in A La Mode) that [[spoiler:he knows, even putting on an JerkassFacade so they won't be that sad when he passes.]]
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* As mentioned before, [[spoiler: Ryou's incompatible genes will kill him by the age of 20. Ryou is already 15]] It's even implied (particularly in A La Mode) that [[spoiler:he knows, even putting on an JerkassFacade [[HiddenHeartOfGold pretending be mean so they won't be that sad when he passes.passes]].]]
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* Everyone else still has their animal parts in Re-Turn, but Retasu is missing her antennae. Did they disappear when everyone got their offscreen FrillyUpgrade, or [[EyepatchAfterTimeskip did something happen to her]]?
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* As mentioned before, [[spoiler: Ryou's incompatible genes will kill him by the age of 20. Ryou is already 15]]
**15]] It's even implied (particularly in A La Mode) that [[spoiler:he knows, even putting on an JerkassFacade so they won't be that sad when he passes.]]]]
** He's still alive in Re-Turn, albeit [[spoiler:without the marking that he usually hid with a collar,]] so it looks like he and Keiichirou figured out how to reverse it.
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** He's still alive in Re-Turn, albeit [[spoiler:without the marking that he usually hid with a collar,]] so it looks like he and Keiichirou figured out how to reverse it.
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** Or are there not enough healthy people?
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* Some Bible scholars posit that the Fruit of the Knowledge of Good and Evil was a pomegranate; see Zakuro.
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* Some Bible scholars posit [[https://www.beliefnet.com/news/2005/11/a-pomegranate-for-all-religions.aspx posit]] that the Fruit of the Knowledge of Good and Evil was a pomegranate; see Zakuro.
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* The reveal that [[spoiler: Deep Blue is actually Aoyama]] actually explains why all the alien activity centers around Tokyo. [[spoiler: The aliens get their orders from a being that lives in the mind of a 13 year old in Tokyo; it wouldn't be a stretch to assume that Deep Blue doesn't know much about the rest of the planet at all]].
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* The backstory of the aliens in general is extremely sad, but it gets worse when you consider the fact that, despite being desperate, only three of them could go on the mission. One being a child. Just how low are their numbers?
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** Or are there not enough healthy people?
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** It's even implied that [[spoiler:he knows, even putting on an JerkassFacade so they won't be that sad when he passes.]]
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*The Mew Mews' outfits designs being a tad risqué and flashy make sense since while Ryo's a genius, he's still a teenager boy. It's a wonder how Ichigo hasn't chewed him out for it.
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!! FridgeHorror
* As mentioned before, [[spoiler: Ryou's incompatible genes will kill him by the age of 20. Ryou is already 15]]
*In episode 17, Quiche turns up at Ichigo's window and tries to take her with him. He knows where she lives, which probably means he's been stalking her all the way to her house. He also knows where Cafe Mew Mew is (the only alien to know until he told Pie and Tart). How much time has he spent stalking Ichigo?
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** In addition, this would also explain why Ichigo and the other girls have to call out punny names when summoning their weapons. Voice-activated nanobots.
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* With the introduction of the Mew Berry Rod, we can assume that Ryou has constructed all the previous weapons as well, ruling out the theory of magic being the cause behind the materialization of their weapons. Nanotechnology would better explain this.
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* The creation of the Mew Mews is more scientifically plausible than one would think, though it's not quite LegoGenetics in real life, you wouldn't turn anyone into a magical girl, and Ryou [[spoiler:Ryou would probably die by the age of twenty due to his incompatible genes.genes]].
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* The creation of the Mew Mews is more scientifically plausible than one would think, though it's not quite LegoGenetics in real life, you wouldn't turn anyone into a magical girl, and [[spoiler:Ryou would probably die by the age of twenty due to his incompatible genes]]. Porpoises are victimized by dolphins just for being different; see Retasu. Some Bible scholars posit that the Fruit of the Knowledge of Good and Evil was a pomegranate; see Zakuro. And so on.
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