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* AthleticallyChallenged: Crockett, Fink, Spaz, Hardware, and Wheels are absolutely ''horrible'' at basketball. When they face off against Camp Mohawk, their only points come when Fink gets startled by an opposing player, tosses the ball in the air, and accidentally scores. Seeing that the guys are completely incapable of winning the game, Tripper decides that North Star is going to "lose with some self-respect" (which means pantsing the players on the Mohawk team and then running away).
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* AthleticallyChallenged: Crockett, Fink, Spaz, Hardware, and Wheels are absolutely ''horrible'' at basketball. When they face off against Camp Mohawk, their only points come when Fink gets startled by an opposing player, tosses the ball in the air, and accidentally scores.scores by accident. Seeing that the guys are completely incapable of winning the game, Tripper decides that North Star is going to "lose with some self-respect" (which means pantsing the players on the Mohawk team and then running away).
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* FatBestFriend: Fink is this to Spaz, of the Type A variety.
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* FatBestFriend: Fink is this to Spaz, of Spaz. In general the Type A variety.two form a FatAndSkinny dynamic, with Fink's weight and BigEater tendencies and Spaz' dorkiness and GeekPhysiques both being PlayedForLaughs.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Spaz and Wheels. Downplayed for Tripper and Hardware, who both get surnames ("Harrison" and "Renzetti" respectively) but their first names remain unknown.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Spaz Spaz, Wheels, and Wheels.A.L. Downplayed for Tripper and Hardware, who both get surnames ("Harrison" and "Renzetti" respectively) but their first names remain unknown. Averted outright for Fink, whose real name is Larry Finkelstein and who gets called by his real name on several occasions.
* PantsPullingPrank: The female counselors-in-training do this to Fink when he gets stuck under their cabin while spying on them.
* PantsPullingPrank: The female counselors-in-training do this to Fink when he gets stuck under their cabin while spying on them.
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** Also: "Well, the zone is not working..."
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** Also: "Well, the zone is zone's not working..."
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Tripper, Spaz, Wheels, and Hardware.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Tripper, Spaz, Wheels, Spaz and Hardware.Wheels. Downplayed for Tripper and Hardware, who both get surnames ("Harrison" and "Renzetti" respectively) but their first names remain unknown.
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* AthleticallyChallenged: Crockett, Fink, Spaz, Hardware, and Wheels are absolutely ''horrible'' at basketball. When they face off against Camp Mohawk, their only points come when, after being startled by a Mohawk player, Fink tosses the ball in the air and accidentally scores. Seeing that they're completely incapable of winning the game, Tripper decides that North Star is going to "lose with some self-respect" (which means pantsing the guys on the Mohawk team and then running away).
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* AthleticallyChallenged: Crockett, Fink, Spaz, Hardware, and Wheels are absolutely ''horrible'' at basketball. When they face off against Camp Mohawk, their only points come when, after being when Fink gets startled by a Mohawk an opposing player, Fink tosses the ball in the air air, and accidentally scores. Seeing that they're the guys are completely incapable of winning the game, Tripper decides that North Star is going to "lose with some self-respect" (which means pantsing the guys players on the Mohawk team and then running away).
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* AthleticallyChallenged: Crockett, Fink, Spaz, Hardware, and Wheels are absolutely ''horrible'' at basketball. When they face off against Camp Mohawk, their only points come when, spooked by a Mohawk player, a startled Fink tosses the ball in the air and accidentally scores. Seeing that they're completely incapable of winning the game, Tripper decides that North Star is going to "lose with some self-respect" (which means pantsing the guys on the Mohawk team and then running away).
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* AthleticallyChallenged: Crockett, Fink, Spaz, Hardware, and Wheels are absolutely ''horrible'' at basketball. When they face off against Camp Mohawk, their only points come when, spooked after being startled by a Mohawk player, a startled Fink tosses the ball in the air and accidentally scores. Seeing that they're completely incapable of winning the game, Tripper decides that North Star is going to "lose with some self-respect" (which means pantsing the guys on the Mohawk team and then running away).
