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* CoolAunt[=/=]CoolOldLady: Witek's aunt, who at the same time is capable of scolding him like a little boy, show genuine affection, replace his mother and be both supportive to and frightened of his dissident activities.
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* CoolAunt[=/=]CoolOldLady: CoolOldLady: [[CoolAunt Witek's aunt, aunt]], who at the same time is capable of scolding him like a little boy, show genuine affection, replace his mother and be both supportive to and frightened of his dissident activities.
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* DownerEnding[=/=]CallBack: [[spoiler: The scream during the opening was Witek screaming before the plane explodes in the finale]].
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* DownerEnding[=/=]CallBack: DownerEnding: [[spoiler: The scream during the opening was Witek screaming before the plane explodes in the finale]].
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* MagicRealism[=/=]MaybeMagicMaybeMundane[=/=]RiddleForTheAges: There is no real explaination of ''WHY'' Witek lives through the story three times - ''if'' he really does. The events simply restart on their own accord, each time with minor changes at the train station, which are also left unexplained. There is also [[spoiler: his wife sensing something wrong about the flight and asking him not to go]].
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* MagicRealism[=/=]MaybeMagicMaybeMundane[=/=]RiddleForTheAges: MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: There is [[RiddleForTheAges no real explaination explanation]] of ''WHY'' Witek lives through the story three times - ''if'' he really does. The events simply restart on their own accord, each time with minor changes at the train station, station, which are also left unexplained. There is also [[spoiler: his wife sensing something wrong about the flight and asking him not to go]].
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* TimeSkip: Used frequenly and without any direct indication of happening. It's most notable when Witek's son goes from being barely detectable fetus to few months old infant within span of two scenes. In all three iterations, there are few ''years'' between the opening railway station scene and the airport finale - this is easiest to spot in the third one, as we see Witek's university yearbook and then his growing up son.
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* TimeSkip: Used frequenly frequently and without any direct indication of happening. It's most notable when Witek's son goes from being barely detectable fetus to few months old infant within span of two scenes. In all three iterations, there are few ''years'' between the opening railway station scene and the airport finale - this is easiest to spot in the third one, as we see Witek's university yearbook and then his growing up son.
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** His terminally ill father calls Witek from the hospital, only to have very ambiguous exchange, pretty hard to translate due to the sheer ambiguity and the difference in grammatical structures between Polish and English.
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** His terminally ill father calls Witek from the hospital, only to have very ambiguous exchange, pretty hard to translate due to the sheer ambiguity and the difference in grammatical structures between Polish and English.English[[note]]The following comes from the official English subtitles, but it already heavily downplays how ambiguous the exchange is in Polish[[/note]].
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* TimeSkip: Used frequenly and without any direct indication of happening. It's most notable when Witek's son goes from being barely detectable fetus to few months old infant within span of two scenes.
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* TimeSkip: Used frequenly and without any direct indication of happening. It's most notable when Witek's son goes from being barely detectable fetus to few months old infant within span of two scenes. In all three iterations, there are few ''years'' between the opening railway station scene and the airport finale - this is easiest to spot in the third one, as we see Witek's university yearbook and then his growing up son.
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Link correction, but not changing the acronym - despite changing the official name, "ZMP" and "Zetempowiec" (a member) became in coloquial use all the way until the fall of communist, as it was simply easier to pronounce.
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Link correction, but not changing the acronym - despite changing the official name,
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* AntiRoleModel: Witek becomes an active member of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Union_of_Polish_Youth ZMP]] and a pawn for the Party. Everybody but him understands what that really means.
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* AntiRoleModel: Witek becomes an active member of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Union_of_Polish_Youth org/wiki/Polish_Socialist_Youth_Union ZMP]] and a pawn for the Party. Everybody but him understands what that really means.
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-->'''Witek''': Then what do you want?
-->'''Junky''': Can't you read? (points to a nearby board that has demands written on it)
-->'''Junky''': Can't you read? (points to a nearby board that has demands written on it)
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-->'''Witek''': Then what do you want?
-->'''Junky''':want?\\
'''Junky''': Can't you read? (points to a nearby board that has demands written on it)
-->'''Junky''':
'''Junky''': Can't you read? (points to a nearby board that has demands written on it)
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-->'''Father''': I wanted to tell you this, because you might not make it on time[[note]]To his father's deathbed[[/note]]. You don't have to do anything.
-->'''Witek''': I don't have to do anything in what way?
-->'''Father''': In any way.
-->'''Witek''': I don't have to do anything in what way?
-->'''Father''': In any way.
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-->'''Witek''':
'''Witek''': I don't have to do anything in what
-->'''Father''':
'''Father''': In any way.
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-->'''Werner''': Didn't want to run away?
-->'''Witek''': No.
-->'''Werner''': Sometimes people don't run away. Because they don't want to.
-->'''Witek''': No.
-->'''Werner''': Sometimes people don't run away. Because they don't want to.
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-->'''Werner''': Didn't want to run away?
-->'''Witek''': No.
-->'''Werner''':away?\\
'''Witek''': No.\\
'''Werner''': Sometimes people don't run away. Because they don't want to.
-->'''Witek''': No.
-->'''Werner''':
'''Witek''': No.\\
'''Werner''': Sometimes people don't run away. Because they don't want to.
