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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/who-loves-the-sun-jojo-pillarman-si.695968/ Who Loves the Sun]] is a [[Franchise/JojosBizarreAdventure Jojo's Bizarre Adventure]] fanfiction by Scranity starring a Pillarman self-insert, with a twist. Unlike most SI stories, ''Who Loves the Sun'' is told from every point of view ''but'' hers (except for a single chapter).
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/who-loves-the-sun-jojo-pillarman-si.695968/ Who Loves the Sun]] is a [[Franchise/JojosBizarreAdventure Jojo's Bizarre Adventure]] ''Manga/JoJosBizarreAdventure'' fanfiction by Scranity starring a Pillarman self-insert, with a twist. Unlike most SI stories, ''Who Loves the Sun'' is told from every point of view ''but'' hers (except for a single chapter).
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* AdaptationDeviation: The overall plot structure remains the same as in the original, but every scene of the story plays out differently. Swapping opponents and adding original characters help to keep the Stand battles fresh.
** Invoked: Velvet's limited agency in how she can affect the plot is the major theme of her character arc.
** Invoked: Velvet's limited agency in how she can affect the plot is the major theme of her character arc.
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* CharacterSignatureSong: Almost every character with a Stand, given the naming scheme. The relevant music tracks tend to be linked in the fic during their establishing fight scene.
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* CharacterSignatureSong: Almost every character with a Stand, given the naming scheme. The relevant music tracks tend to be Most characters get this linked in the fic during their establishing fight scene.scene, especially those with Stands named after said song.
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Velvet Underground is determined to fight against Gravity. But in a world dominated by the fate that brings Stand users and Hamon wielders, Vampires and Pillar Men together, can her actions ever really matter?
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* CharacterSignatureSong: Almost every character with a Stand, given the naming scheme. The relevant music tracks tend to be linked in the fic during their establishing fight scene.
** The last of these is, of course, [[{{Music/Loaded}} ''Who Loves the Sun'']].
** The last of these is, of course, [[{{Music/Loaded}} ''Who Loves the Sun'']].
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* YouCantFightFate: A heavy theme of this work is Velvet's inability to effectively oppose the force of narrative fate in Jojo's setting, or Gravity, as she calls it, in spite of her complete metaknowledge concerning the series and its characters.
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* YouCantFightFate: A heavy theme of this work is Velvet's inability to effectively oppose the force of narrative fate in Jojo's setting, or Gravity, as she calls it, in spite of her complete metaknowledge concerning the series and its characters. What makes the story interesting is not the results of the altered plotline, but just how those results come about.
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/who-loves-the-sun-jojo-pillarman-si.695968/ Who Loves the Sun]] is a Franchise/JojosBizarreAdventure fanfiction by Scranity starring a Pillarman self-insert, with a twist. Unlike most SI stories, ''Who Loves the Sun'' is told from every point of view ''but'' hers (except for a single chapter).
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/who-loves-the-sun-jojo-pillarman-si.695968/ Who Loves the Sun]] is a Franchise/JojosBizarreAdventure [[Franchise/JojosBizarreAdventure Jojo's Bizarre Adventure]] fanfiction by Scranity starring a Pillarman self-insert, with a twist. Unlike most SI stories, ''Who Loves the Sun'' is told from every point of view ''but'' hers (except for a single chapter).
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''When Joseph Joestar and Ceasar Zeppeli encounter the Pillarmen underneath the Colosseum in Rome, they find not three waiting for them but four. And the Ripples this causes quickly affects the futures of both Joseph and his descendants forever.''
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When Joseph Joestar and Ceasar Zeppeli encounter the Pillarmen underneath the Colosseum in Rome, they find not three waiting for them but four. And the Ripples this causes quickly affects the futures of both Joseph and his descendants forever.
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'''Warning:''' The marked spoilers below cover major plot elements and twists for the entire story. Looking at them before reading the story is ''highly'' discouraged.
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* DecoyProtagonist: Joseph, at the beginning, as the story is told mostly from his point of view. He continues as something of a SupportingProtagonist and TheRival to Velvet through the majority of the story.
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* DecoyProtagonist: Joseph, Joseph at the beginning, as the story is told mostly from his point of view. He continues as something of a SupportingProtagonist and TheRival to Velvet through the majority of the story.
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* WifeHusbandry: [[spoiler:Kars raised Velvet with this intent.]]
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* CosmicPlaything: Velvet sees herself, and everyone around her, as this. The focus of the story is her attempts to ScrewDestiny. [[spoiler:It doesn't work...until the end.]]
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* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Velvet's metaknowledge, [[spoiler:particularly in the fates of the other Pillar Men]].
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* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Velvet's metaknowledge, [[spoiler:particularly in the fates of the other Pillar Men]]. Overlaps with YouCantFightFate.
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* VillainProtagonist: Velvet.
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* VillainProtagonist: Velvet.Velvet.
* YouCantFightFate: A heavy theme of this work is Velvet's inability to effectively oppose the force of narrative fate in Jojo's setting, or Gravity, as she calls it, in spite of her complete metaknowledge concerning the series and its characters.
* YouCantFightFate: A heavy theme of this work is Velvet's inability to effectively oppose the force of narrative fate in Jojo's setting, or Gravity, as she calls it, in spite of her complete metaknowledge concerning the series and its characters.
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* DecoyProtagonist: Joseph, at the beginning, as the story is told mostly from his point of view. He continues as something of a SupportingProtagonist and TheRival to Velvet through the majority of the story.
* NonPOVProtagonist: Velvet, except for one chapter.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Caesar survives the events of Part 2.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler:Caesar survives the events of Part 2.]]]]
* VillainProtagonist: Velvet.
* VillainProtagonist: Velvet.
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** Part 7: [[spoiler:Johnny Joestar, Steven Steel.]
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** Part 7: [[spoiler:Johnny Joestar, Steven Steel.][[spoiler:Steven Steel and Johnny Joestar.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Stroheim, Speedwagon, and Lisa Lisa all die to the Pillar Men before the events of Part 2. On a lighter note, Joseph's arm.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: Hoo boy...there are a few.
** Part 2: [[spoiler:Stroheim, Speedwagon,and Lisa Lisa all die to the Pillar Men before the events of Part 2. On a lighter note, Lisa, and Joseph's arm.]]]]
** Part 3: [[spoiler:Hundreds of innocents when Velvet has Cairo firebombed.]]
** Part 7: [[spoiler:Johnny Joestar, Steven Steel.]
** Part 2: [[spoiler:Stroheim, Speedwagon,
** Part 3: [[spoiler:Hundreds of innocents when Velvet has Cairo firebombed.]]
** Part 7: [[spoiler:Johnny Joestar, Steven Steel.]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[Caesar survives the events of Part 2.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[Caesar [[spoiler:Caesar survives the events of Part 2.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Stroheim, Speedwagon, and Lisa Lisa all die to the Pillar Men before the events of Part 2. On a lighter note, Joseph's arm.]]
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* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Velvet's metaknowledge, [[spoiler:particularly in the fates of the other Pillar Men]].
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* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Velvet's metaknowledge, [[spoiler:particularly in the fates of the other Pillar Men]].Men]].
* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[Caesar survives the events of Part 2.]]
* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[Caesar survives the events of Part 2.]]
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Velvet Underground, the Pillar Woman,
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* FakeArmDisarm: Joseph's fake arm gets trashed [[spoiler: in his final confrontation with Velvet.]]
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* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Velvet's metaknowledge, particularly in the fates of the other Pillar Men.
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* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Velvet's metaknowledge, particularly [[spoiler:particularly in the fates of the other Pillar Men.Men]].
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/who-loves-the-sun-jojo-pillarman-si.695968/ Who Loves the Sun]] is a Franchise/JojosBizarreAdventure fanfiction by Scranity starring a Pillarman self-insert, with a twist. Unlike most SI stories, ''Who Loves the Sun'' is told from every point of view {{but}} ''but'' hers (except for a single chapter).
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/who-loves-the-sun-jojo-pillarman-si.695968/ Who Loves the Sun]] is a Franchise/JojosBizarreAdventure fanfiction by Scranity starring a Pillarman self-insert, with a twist. Unlike most SI stories, ''Who Loves the Sun'' is told from every point of view {{but}} hers (except for a single chapter).
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''Who Loves the Sun'' is now completed, and features characters and events from Parts 2, 3, 4, 7, and [[spoiler:6]] of Jojo's Bizarre Adventure.
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!!''Who Loves the Sun'' contains examples of:
* FakeArmDisarm: Joseph's fake arm gets trashed [[spoiler: in his final confrontation with Velvet.]]
* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: Played with. Velvet is scarily dangerous, and survives where other Jojo villains die, but no matter what she does, she can't change the future in any meaningful way. Her self-insert metaknowledge is ''always'' fulfilled, one way or another.
* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Velvet's metaknowledge, particularly in the fates of the other Pillar Men.
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''Who Loves the Sun'' is now completed, and features characters and events from Parts 2, 3, 4, 7, and [[spoiler:6]] of Jojo's Bizarre Adventure.
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!!''Who Loves the Sun'' contains examples of:
* FakeArmDisarm: Joseph's fake arm gets trashed [[spoiler: in his final confrontation with Velvet.]]
* IneffectualSympatheticVillain: Played with. Velvet is scarily dangerous, and survives where other Jojo villains die, but no matter what she does, she can't change the future in any meaningful way. Her self-insert metaknowledge is ''always'' fulfilled, one way or another.
* SelfFulfillingProphecy: Velvet's metaknowledge, particularly in the fates of the other Pillar Men.
