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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Rainbow's brother Riley does things like putting worms in her bed, to the point where Riley apparently cries every night.
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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Rainbow's brother Riley does things like putting worms in her bed, and harasses her to the point where Riley apparently cries every night.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Rainbow briefly has a moment in Chapter 6 where she regrets killing a random Fire Nation soldier, but she quickly gets over it once she realizes how sexy Zuko is.
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* AerithAndBob: Perfectly ordinary names coexist like Cindy or Riley coexist with more unusual names like Jeb or Rainbow, and this is never remarked upon.
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* AerithAndBob: Perfectly ordinary names coexist like Cindy or Riley coexist with more unusual names like Jeb or Rainbow, and this is never remarked upon. There's also a character named Angle, and everyone treats this as perfectly normal.
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* CreepyMonotone: Implied with Ari, who says "hello" to Rainbow "evilly".
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* FunetikAksent: Max has a inexplicable thick southern drawl that is spelt out phonetically.
-->'''Max''': I hope that we get rid of that Rainbow girl soon. She's movin in on mah mand and stealin' my little sister Angle from me!
-->'''Max''': I hope that we get rid of that Rainbow girl soon. She's movin in on mah mand and stealin' my little sister Angle from me!
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* RealMenEatMeat: Rainbow's father tells her to eat bacon because she won't build muscle otherwise, despite her protests that she's a "veegin".
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Rainbow dreams of meeting [[WingedHumanoid six strangers with bird wings]], and she meets them later that day.
* RealMenEatMeat: Rainbow's father tells her to eat bacon because she won't build muscle otherwise, despite her protests that she's a"veegin"."veegin".
* TokenMinority:
**Nudge is the token disabled character.
**Iggy is the token person of color.
* WingedHumanoid: Rainbow suddenly grows white angel wings upon meeting Jeb.
* RealMenEatMeat: Rainbow's father tells her to eat bacon because she won't build muscle otherwise, despite her protests that she's a
* TokenMinority:
**Nudge is the token disabled character.
**Iggy is the token person of color.
* WingedHumanoid: Rainbow suddenly grows white angel wings upon meeting Jeb.
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!! ''Ultimate Avatar'' provides examples of:
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!! ''Ultimate Avatar'' provides examples of:of:
*AerithAndBob: Perfectly ordinary names coexist like Cindy or Riley coexist with more unusual names like Jeb or Rainbow, and this is never remarked upon.
*AlliterativeFamily: Rainbow and her brother Riley's names both start with an R.
*AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Rainbow's brother Riley does things like putting worms in her bed, to the point where Riley apparently cries every night.
*RealMenEatMeat: Rainbow's father tells her to eat bacon because she won't build muscle otherwise, despite her protests that she's a "veegin".
*AerithAndBob: Perfectly ordinary names coexist like Cindy or Riley coexist with more unusual names like Jeb or Rainbow, and this is never remarked upon.
*AlliterativeFamily: Rainbow and her brother Riley's names both start with an R.
*AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Rainbow's brother Riley does things like putting worms in her bed, to the point where Riley apparently cries every night.
*RealMenEatMeat: Rainbow's father tells her to eat bacon because she won't build muscle otherwise, despite her protests that she's a "veegin".
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5771089/1/Ultimate_Avatar Ultimate Avatar]]'' is a TrollFic crossover between ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' and ''Literature/MaximumRide'' by [=EllaHayBoyz1234=], which can be read on [[Website/FanfictionDotNet Fanfiction.Net]]. As it ends abruptly and hasn't been updated since 2011, it is safe to consider it a DeadFic.
Rainbow Tracey Midnite Patterson Cullen joins the flock from ''Maximum Ride'' and develops bird wings. She ''then'' also is revealed to be ''a'' Avatar - as in not the only one - after going through a portal. Follow her as she meets (heavily-flanderized) characters from both ''Avatar: The Last Airbender'' and ''Maximum Ride'', becomes a [[MarySueClassic Mary Sue]], and generally acts out badly-written teenage girl fantasies à la Fanfic/MyImmortal.
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!! ''Ultimate Avatar'' provides examples of:
Rainbow Tracey Midnite Patterson Cullen joins the flock from ''Maximum Ride'' and develops bird wings. She ''then'' also is revealed to be ''a'' Avatar - as in not the only one - after going through a portal. Follow her as she meets (heavily-flanderized) characters from both ''Avatar: The Last Airbender'' and ''Maximum Ride'', becomes a [[MarySueClassic Mary Sue]], and generally acts out badly-written teenage girl fantasies à la Fanfic/MyImmortal.
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!! ''Ultimate Avatar'' provides examples of:
