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* CastFromHitPoints: In ''The Perils of Lorindar'', [[spoiler:Snow White is forced to summon the seven dwarves, which are magical spirits that she can only summon at the cost of seven years of her life; the Doctor is able to transfer some of his life energy to Snow so that she can summon the dwarves without losing any years herself]].
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* CastFromHitPoints: CastFromLifespan: In ''The Perils of Lorindar'', [[spoiler:Snow White is forced to summon the seven dwarves, which are magical spirits that she can only summon at the cost of seven years of her life; the Doctor is able to transfer some of his life energy to Snow so that she can summon the dwarves without losing any years herself]].
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''Twilight Storm'' by Creator/{{Marcus S Lazarus}} begins when [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella Swan]] takes her cliff dive in ''New Moon''. Instead of Jacob, Bella is rescued by [[Series/DoctorWho the Tenth Doctor]] who, intrigued by the young woman, takes Bella on a journey in the TARDIS across time and space.
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''Twilight Storm'' by Creator/{{Marcus S Lazarus}} begins when [[Literature/{{Twilight}} [[Literature/TheTwilightSaga Bella Swan]] takes her cliff dive in ''New Moon''.''Literature/NewMoon''. Instead of Jacob, Bella is rescued by [[Series/DoctorWho the Tenth Doctor]] who, intrigued by the young woman, takes Bella on a journey in the TARDIS across time and space.
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*TokenEvilTeammate: Caius is basically this when the Doctor, Bella and the Cullens meet the Volturi, as Aro is more AffablyEvil and the Doctor and Bella know that Marcus can be better than this [[spoiler:based on their experience with his alternate timeline counterpart]], but Caius acts as though humans like Bella and (he believes) the Doctor are only of value as food or new vampires.
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''Twilight Storm'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/561615/Marcus-S-Lazarus Marcus S Lazarus]] begins when [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella Swan]] takes her cliff dive in ''New Moon''. Instead of Jacob, Bella is rescued by [[Series/DoctorWho the Tenth Doctor]] who, intrigued by the young woman, takes Bella on a journey in the TARDIS across time and space.
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''Twilight Storm'' by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/561615/Marcus-S-Lazarus Marcus Creator/{{Marcus S Lazarus]] Lazarus}} begins when [[Literature/{{Twilight}} Bella Swan]] takes her cliff dive in ''New Moon''. Instead of Jacob, Bella is rescued by [[Series/DoctorWho the Tenth Doctor]] who, intrigued by the young woman, takes Bella on a journey in the TARDIS across time and space.
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* CharacterDevelopment: The normally passive and self-defeating Bella slowly grows more courageous and assertive while also learning to love herself throughout the series.
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* CharacterDevelopment: The normally passive and self-defeating Bella slowly grows more courageous courageous, compassionate, driven, and assertive while also learning to love herself self-love throughout the series.
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* TookALevelInBadass: ''Bella''. The plot largely revolves around her to become more competent, emotionally and independently. [[spoiler: Not only does she become more assertive and capable of valuing her self-worth, she's able to coldcock people and develops a quicker wit. Her trademark clumsiness becomes almost nonexistent throughout the series thanks to the Doctor's adventures inspiring her to improve]].
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* TookALevelInBadass: ''Bella''. The plot largely revolves around her to become becoming more competent, emotionally and independently.independently, as opposed to her canon fixation on her relationship with Edward. [[spoiler: Not only does she become more assertive and capable of valuing her self-worth, she's able to coldcock people and develops a quicker wit. Her trademark clumsiness becomes almost nonexistent throughout the series thanks to the Doctor's adventures inspiring her to improve]].
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** This also ends up being why [[spoiler: Bella eventually breaks it off with Edward when returning to her time as it's best for both of them.]]
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** This also ends up being why [[spoiler: Bella [[spoiler:Bella eventually breaks it off with Edward when returning to her time as she comes to recognise that it's best for both of them.]]them, feeling that their dependence on each other was basically unhealthy and holding them back]].
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* TapOnTheHead: In ''The Legacy of Weng-Chiang'', Bella [[spoiler: manages to knock out Kwok cold with the Doctor's "TARDIS sniffer-outer", hitting Kwok on the side of his head when he's charging for the Doctor]].
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* TapOnTheHead: In ''The Legacy of Weng-Chiang'', Bella [[spoiler: manages to knock out Kwok cold ''out cold'' with the Doctor's "TARDIS sniffer-outer", hitting Kwok on the side of his head when he's charging for the Doctor]].
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* TookALevelInBadass: ''Bella''. [[spoiler: Not only does she become more assertive and capable of valuing her self-worth, she's able to knock people out and develop a quicker wit. Her trademark clumsiness becomes almost nonexistent throughout the series thanks to the Doctor's adventures inspiring her to improve]].
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* TookALevelInBadass: ''Bella''. The plot largely revolves around her to become more competent, emotionally and independently. [[spoiler: Not only does she become more assertive and capable of valuing her self-worth, she's able to knock coldcock people out and develop develops a quicker wit. Her trademark clumsiness becomes almost nonexistent throughout the series thanks to the Doctor's adventures inspiring her to improve]].
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* TookALevelInBadass: ''Bella''. [[spoiler: Not only does she become more assertive and capable of valuing her self-worth, she's able to knock out people and being quick-witted. Her trademark clumsiness becomes almost nonexistent throughout the series thanks to the Doctor's adventures.]]
** Another example; [[spoiler: while at their adventures in Lorinbar, and with the help of Red Riding Hood's cloak, Bella turns into a large wolf, managing to hold her own against the Monk's minions.]]
** Another example; [[spoiler: while at their adventures in Lorinbar, and with the help of Red Riding Hood's cloak, Bella turns into a large wolf, managing to hold her own against the Monk's minions.]]
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* TookALevelInBadass: ''Bella''. [[spoiler: Not only does she become more assertive and capable of valuing her self-worth, she's able to knock out people out and being quick-witted. develop a quicker wit. Her trademark clumsiness becomes almost nonexistent throughout the series thanks to the Doctor's adventures.]]
adventures inspiring her to improve]].
** Another example; [[spoiler:while at during their adventures time in Lorinbar, Lorindar, and with the help of Red Riding Hood's cloak, Bella turns into a large wolf, managing to hold her own against the Monk's minions.]]Omega's forces]].
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* TransformationTrinket: During ''The Perils of Lorinbar'', [[spoiler: Talia gives Bella a cloak that gives the latter the ability to shapeshift into a wolf while they battle Omega. This is to give the battle-inexperienced Bella an edge in combat. Turns out said cloak belonged to ''Little Red Riding Hood''.]]
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* TransformationTrinket: During ''The Perils of Lorinbar'', Lorindar'', [[spoiler: Talia gives Bella a cloak that gives the latter the ability to shapeshift into a wolf while they battle Omega. This is to give the battle-inexperienced Bella an edge in combat. Turns out said cloak belonged to ''Little Red Riding Hood''.]]
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** Another example; [[spoiler: while at their adventures in Lorinbar, and with the help of Red Riding Hood's cloak, Bella turns into a large wolf, managing to hold her own against the Monk's minions.]]
