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** Togaru Kamakiri is part of the same friend group as Tokage, Monoma, and Pony. He starts off as openly antagonist towards Tokage after she refuses to train with him, citing their quirk synergy, before growing to become a close friend of the three.
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** Togaru Kamakiri is part of the same friend group as Tokage, Monoma, and Pony. He starts off as openly antagonist antagonistic towards Tokage after she refuses to train with him, citing their quirk synergy, before growing to become a close friend of the three.
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* SwitchingPOV: Rather than being the omniscient point of view, the points of view switch from one character to another.
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* SliceOfLife: Rather than having the dramatic tension that the manga has this story lets teenagers acting as teenagers. There are still very serious moments though, and making clear the very real and sadistic threats of Re-Destro, All For One, and Shigaraki.
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* SliceOfLife: Downplayed, there are still moments of action, as seen with the battle trial in the opening chapters, and showing class 1-B's battle trials in a flashback, but the fic mostly focuses on the personal lives and struggles of the characters and their interactions with one another.
* SoapOpera: The last tag jokingly describes this fic as such.
* SwitchingPOV: Rather thanhaving being the dramatic tension that omniscient point of view, the manga has this story lets teenagers acting as teenagers. There are still very serious moments though, and making clear the very real and sadistic threats points of Re-Destro, All For One, and Shigaraki. view switch from one character to another.
* SoapOpera: The last tag jokingly describes this fic as such.
* SwitchingPOV: Rather than
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** More information is given on the lives on the previous users of [One For All]
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** More Togaru Kamakiri is part of the same friend group as Tokage, Monoma, and Pony. He starts off as openly antagonist towards Tokage after she refuses to train with him, citing their quirk synergy, before growing to become a close friend of the three.
** Pony Tsunotori is the unwilling leader of the 'Pony Squad,' consisting of herself, Monoma, and Tokage.
**More information is given on the lives on the previous users of [One For All]
** Pony Tsunotori is the unwilling leader of the 'Pony Squad,' consisting of herself, Monoma, and Tokage.
**More information is given on the lives on the previous users of [One For All]
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Aizawa is subject to this in-universe. Monoma outright hates the man, and Tokage is mortally afraid of him, and a lot of Monoma's more recent issues stem to the man's performance as a teacher; which a growing number of students have concerns about as well. On the flipside, they are LockedOutOfTheLoop on the rationality behind many of Aizawa's decisions, generally made with the joint approval of Kan and Nezu, which come off much more as a ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Aizawa is subject to this in-universe. Monoma outright hates the man, and Tokage is mortally afraid of him, and a lot of Monoma's more recent issues stem to from the man's performance as a teacher; which a growing number of students have concerns about as well. On the flipside, they are LockedOutOfTheLoop on the rationality behind many of Aizawa's decisions, generally made with the joint approval of Kan and Nezu, which come off much more as a ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
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* Entertainingly Wrong: Uraraka, influenced by Aoyama and Ashido's earlier comments about her and Midoriya's relationship, thinks that Midoriya wanting to tell her something means that he wants to confess to her. In actuality, Midoriya wants to tell her about [One For All].
* {{Foil}}: Kamakiri is very much this to Bakugo. The former starts his time in 1-B as a BloodKnight, gives offensive nicknames to everyone, is short-tempered, has surprising control and skill with a dangerous Quirk, loud and verbally offensive mom paired with a soft-spoken dad, and generally has a foul personality. Except Kamakiri develops and grows into a close and genuine friend with all his classmates, and works hard to mature beyond his worst traits.
* {{Foil}}: Kamakiri is very much this to Bakugo. The former starts his time in 1-B as a BloodKnight, gives offensive nicknames to everyone, is short-tempered, has surprising control and skill with a dangerous Quirk, loud and verbally offensive mom paired with a soft-spoken dad, and generally has a foul personality. Except Kamakiri develops and grows into a close and genuine friend with all his classmates, and works hard to mature beyond his worst traits.
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* Entertainingly Wrong: EntertaininglyWrong: Uraraka, influenced by Aoyama and Ashido's earlier comments about her and Midoriya's relationship, thinks that Midoriya wanting to tell her something means that he wants to confess to her. In actuality, Midoriya wants to tell her about [One For All].
* {{Foil}}: Kamakiri is very much this to Bakugo. The former starts his time in 1-B as a BloodKnight, gives offensive nicknames to everyone, is short-tempered, has surprising control and skill with a dangerous Quirk, loud and verbally offensive mom paired with a soft-spoken dad, and generally has a foul personality. Except Kamakiri develops and grows into a close and genuine friend with all his classmates, discovers Endeavour's abuse the same way, and works hard to mature beyond his worst traits.
* {{Foil}}: Kamakiri is very much this to Bakugo. The former starts his time in 1-B as a BloodKnight, gives offensive nicknames to everyone, is short-tempered, has surprising control and skill with a dangerous Quirk, loud and verbally offensive mom paired with a soft-spoken dad, and generally has a foul personality. Except Kamakiri develops and grows into a close and genuine friend with all his classmates, discovers Endeavour's abuse the same way, and works hard to mature beyond his worst traits.
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* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Bakugo's current situation, as he is well aware by now that if it gets out what he did to Izuku growing up, which he does not at all regret, he will be kicked out of the hero course. More and more people are becoming aware of this though, and Monoma takes glee in spelling out that Bakugo remaining in the hero course will end the instant that Izuku finally accepts what an awful person Bakugo is, and should never be a hero. The very same Izuku's whose new Quirk development has left him functionally immune to Bakugo's explosions, can fly like him, and easily bests him at strength. As things are, Bakugo concludes that the only way out for him is to prove that he is too indispensable for his combat power to be rid of, and even that falls flat when Kamakiri decisively beats him twice in a row in the same match.
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* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Bakugo's current situation, as he is well aware by now that if it gets out what he did to Izuku growing up, which he does not at all regret, he will be kicked out of the hero course. More and more people are becoming aware of this though, and or are noting inconsistencies in what they assume happened in the past, with Monoma takes glee in spelling out that Bakugo remaining in the hero course will end the instant that Izuku finally accepts what an awful person Bakugo is, and how Bakugo should never be a hero. The very same Izuku's whose new Quirk development has left him functionally immune to Bakugo's explosions, can fly like him, and easily bests him at strength. As things are, Bakugo concludes that the only way out for him is to prove that he is too indispensable for his combat power to be rid of, and even that falls flat when Kamakiri decisively beats him twice in a row in the same match.
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* InsistentTerminology: Quirks are constantly placed in brackets to display their importance, with an example being [One For All] or [OFA] for short. The exceptions to the rule are sentient quirks when they are referred to as a person. For example when Tokoyami's quirk is talked about the characters use [Dark Shadow] to specify they are talking about the quirk, with Dark Shadow being used when referring to them as a person.
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* InsistentTerminology: InsistentTerminology:
** Quirks are constantly placed in brackets to display their importance, with an example being [One For All] or [OFA] for short. The exceptions to the rule are sentient quirks when they are referred to as a person. For example when Tokoyami's quirk is talked about the characters use [Dark Shadow] to specify they are talking about the quirk, with Dark Shadow being used when referring to them as aperson.person.
*** This is also something Izuku and Monoma do in-universe when writing down details about quirks.
** Quirks are constantly placed in brackets to display their importance, with an example being [One For All] or [OFA] for short. The exceptions to the rule are sentient quirks when they are referred to as a person. For example when Tokoyami's quirk is talked about the characters use [Dark Shadow] to specify they are talking about the quirk, with Dark Shadow being used when referring to them as a
*** This is also something Izuku and Monoma do in-universe when writing down details about quirks.
* JerkassHasAPoint: As much as the members of 1-A are upset by Monoma's negative characterization of Aizawa, they are having difficulty defending his actions as a teacher.
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* MoodWhiplash: When Monoma first interacts with the Vestiges he starts continuously screaming in horror, which the Vestiges interpret as just him being freaked out by encountering them, and give him a slap. However, then he reveals he has already put together that he Copied seven actual individuals who are going to die when his Quirk ends, and that this process is going to kill Izuku in short order as well; which means that he has just committed ''eight'' counts of ''manslaughter''. While Izuku is saved, he still grieves for the deaths of the duplicate Vestiges.
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* MoodWhiplash: When Monoma first interacts with the Vestiges he starts continuously screaming in horror, which the Vestiges interpret as just him being freaked out by encountering them, and give him played for laughs, culminating in them giving Monoma a slap. However, then he reveals he has already put together that he Copied seven actual individuals who are going to die when his Quirk ends, and that this process is going to kill Izuku in short order as well; which means that he has just committed ''eight'' counts of ''manslaughter''. While Izuku is saved, he still grieves for the deaths of the duplicate Vestiges.
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** The vestiges of the past users of [OFA] also hate Bakugo for everything he has done to Midoriya, and actively warn Midoriya not to be near Bakugo.
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** The vestiges of the past users of [OFA] also hate Bakugo for everything he has done to Midoriya, and actively warn Midoriya not to be near Bakugo. They even have t-shirts proclaiming as such.
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** Chapter 29: First and Monoma's introduction to the story in present day, after only being seen in flashbacks, with both of them proclaiming that Midoriya is going to die.
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** Chapter 29: First and Monoma's introduction Monoma are both introduced to the story in present day, after only being seen in flashbacks, with both of them proclaiming that Midoriya is going to die.
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** Rather than being 1-A hating fanatic that he is in canon Monoma is one of the deuteragonist who's fierce competitive streak towards 1-A stems from [[spoiler: his outright hatred towards Eraserhead, their teacher, not the students themselves. In addition, a desperate need to keep all the focus on himself, and the classes separate, lest Aizawa's casual use of Erasure kill or cripple Tokage.]]
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** Rather than being 1-A hating fanatic that he is in canon Monoma is one of the deuteragonist who's fierce competitive streak towards 1-A stems from [[spoiler: his outright hatred towards Eraserhead, their teacher, not the students themselves. In addition, a desperate need to keep all the focus on himself, and the classes separate, lest Aizawa's casual use of Erasure [Erasure] kill or cripple Tokage.]]
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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: The Sixth user's Quirk is Smokescreen, and he came the closest aside from All Might to killing AFO, very nearly choking him to death on smoke.
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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: The Sixth user's Quirk is Smokescreen, [Smokescreen], and he came the closest aside from All Might to killing AFO, very nearly choking him to death on smoke.
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** The vestiges of the past users of [OFA] also hate Bakugo for everything he has done to Midoriya, and actively warn Midoriya not to be near Bakugo.
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** The vestiges of the past users of [OFA] also hate Bakugo for everything he has done to Midoriya, and actively warn Midoriya not to be near Bakugo.Bakugo.
*WhamEpisode:
** Chapter 29: First and Monoma's introduction to the story in present day, after only being seen in flashbacks, with both of them proclaiming that Midoriya is going to die.
** Chapter 36: [[spoiler: Near the end of the chapter, every Quirkless person is revealed to have a latent quirk that remains inactive so as not to kill its user. ]].
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** Chapter 29: First and Monoma's introduction to the story in present day, after only being seen in flashbacks, with both of them proclaiming that Midoriya is going to die.
** Chapter 36: [[spoiler: Near the end of the chapter, every Quirkless person is revealed to have a latent quirk that remains inactive so as not to kill its user. ]].
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*** Upon copying One For All during the Joint Training Exercise, Copy has now undergone an unknown change.
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*** Upon copying One [One For All All] during the Joint Training Exercise, Copy [Copy] has now undergone an unknown change.
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* Entertainingly Wrong: Uraraka, influenced by Aoyama and Ashido's earlier comments about her and Midoriya's relationship, thinks that Midoriya wanting to tell her something means that he wants to confess to her. In actuality, Midoriya wants to tell her about [One For All]
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* Entertainingly Wrong: Uraraka, influenced by Aoyama and Ashido's earlier comments about her and Midoriya's relationship, thinks that Midoriya wanting to tell her something means that he wants to confess to her. In actuality, Midoriya wants to tell her about [One For All]All].
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-->'''Monoma:''' TAKE A SWAN DIVE AND WISH FOR A QUIRK!? I'LL MAKE YOUR ENTIRE LIFE TAKE A SWAN DIVE!
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-->'''Monoma:''' TAKE A SWAN DIVE AND WISH FOR A QUIRK!? I'LL MAKE YOUR ENTIRE LIFE TAKE A SWAN DIVE!DIVE!
** The vestiges of the past users of [OFA] also hate Bakugo for everything he has done to Midoriya, and actively warn Midoriya not to be near Bakugo.
** The vestiges of the past users of [OFA] also hate Bakugo for everything he has done to Midoriya, and actively warn Midoriya not to be near Bakugo.
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* Insistent Terminology: Quirks are constantly placed in brackets to display their importance, with an example being [One For All] or [OFA] for short. The exceptions to the rule are sentient quirks when they are referred to as a person. For example when Tokoyami's quirk is talked about the characters use [Dark Shadow] to specify they are talking about the quirk, with Dark Shadow being used when referring to them as a person.
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* Insistent Terminology: InsistentTerminology: Quirks are constantly placed in brackets to display their importance, with an example being [One For All] or [OFA] for short. The exceptions to the rule are sentient quirks when they are referred to as a person. For example when Tokoyami's quirk is talked about the characters use [Dark Shadow] to specify they are talking about the quirk, with Dark Shadow being used when referring to them as a person.person.
** Bakugo also consistently refers to [OFA] as "All Might's Old Quirk" and not Midoriya's quirk
** Bakugo also consistently refers to [OFA] as "All Might's Old Quirk" and not Midoriya's quirk
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** Kinoko Komori's [[FesteringFungus Mushroom]] went through ''some'' sort of change off screen, even greater than Kamakiri's example above, but it hasn't been revealed yet. Thus far we have seen it can bolster her strength though.
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** Kinoko Komori's [[FesteringFungus Mushroom]] [Mushroom],]] went through ''some'' sort of change off screen, even greater than Kamakiri's example above, but it hasn't been revealed yet. Thus far we have seen it can bolster her strength though.
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** Instead of Gearshift, The 2nd User of One For All's Quirk is [[spoiler: [Quirked Animal Registry]]].
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** Instead of Gearshift, [Gearshift], The 2nd User of One For All's Quirk is [[spoiler: [Quirked Animal Registry]]].
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** Togaru Kamakiri's [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Razor Sharp]], as discovered by Izuku, is actually a form of silk manipulation, allowing him to make constructs out of material similar to spider silk and absorb them back into his body. It's essentially a less advanced version of [[ThePowerOfCreation Momo's Quirk]]
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** Togaru Kamakiri's [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Razor Sharp]], [Razor Sharp],]] as discovered by Izuku, is actually a form of silk manipulation, allowing him to make constructs out of material similar to spider silk and absorb them back into his body. It's essentially a less advanced version of [[ThePowerOfCreation Momo's Quirk]]
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** [[spoiler:Izuku's own dormant Quirk has awakened, with One For All being able to keep it from killing him. Providing him with Energy Absorption.]]
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** [[spoiler:Izuku's own dormant Quirk has awakened, with One For All being able to keep it from killing him. Providing him with Energy Absorption.[Energy Absorption].]]
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** More information is given on the lives on the previous users of One For All
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** More information is given on the lives on the previous users of One [One For AllAll]
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** Tokage also gained a small portion of [One For All], specifically a small part of [Fa Jin] [[Spoiler: and [Energy Absorption]]].
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** Tokage also gained a small portion of [One For All], specifically a small part of [Fa Jin] [[Spoiler: Jin][[spoiler: and [Energy Absorption]]].
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** Tokage also gained a small portion of [One For All], specifically a small part of [Fa Jin] [[Spoiler: and [Energy Absorption].]]
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** Tokage also gained a small portion of [One For All], specifically a small part of [Fa Jin] [[Spoiler: and [Energy Absorption].]]Absorption]]].
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** Tokage also gained a small portion of [One For All], specifically a small part of [Fa Jin] [[Spoiler:and [Energy Absorption].]]
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** Tokage also gained a small portion of [One For All], specifically a small part of [Fa Jin] [[Spoiler:and [[Spoiler: and [Energy Absorption].]]
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** Togaru Kamakiri's [[BladeBelowTheShoulder quirk]], [Razor Sharp] as discovered by Izuku, is actually a form of silk manipulation, allowing him to make constructs out of material similar to spider silk and absorb them back into his body. It's essentially a less advanced version of [[ThePowerOfCreation Momo's Quirk]]
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** Togaru Kamakiri's [[BladeBelowTheShoulder quirk]], [Razor Sharp] Razor Sharp]], as discovered by Izuku, is actually a form of silk manipulation, allowing him to make constructs out of material similar to spider silk and absorb them back into his body. It's essentially a less advanced version of [[ThePowerOfCreation Momo's Quirk]]
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** Tokage also gained a small portion of [One For All], specifically a small part of [Fa Jin].
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** Tokage also gained a small portion of [One For All], specifically a small part of [Fa Jin].Jin] [[Spoiler:and [Energy Absorption].]]
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** Togaru Kamakiri's [[BladeBelowTheShoulder [Razor Sharp]]], as discovered by Izuku, is actually a form of silk manipulation, allowing him to make constructs out of material similar to spider silk and absorb them back into his body. It's essentially a less advanced version of [[ThePowerOfCreation Momo's Quirk]]
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** Togaru Kamakiri's [[BladeBelowTheShoulder quirk]], [Razor Sharp]]], Sharp] as discovered by Izuku, is actually a form of silk manipulation, allowing him to make constructs out of material similar to spider silk and absorb them back into his body. It's essentially a less advanced version of [[ThePowerOfCreation Momo's Quirk]]
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** Togaru Kamakiri's [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Razor Sharp]], as discovered by Izuku, is actually a form of silk manipulation, allowing him to make constructs out of material similar to spider silk and absorb them back into his body. It's essentially a less advanced version of [[ThePowerOfCreation Momo's Quirk]]
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** Togaru Kamakiri's [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Razor Sharp]], [Razor Sharp]]], as discovered by Izuku, is actually a form of silk manipulation, allowing him to make constructs out of material similar to spider silk and absorb them back into his body. It's essentially a less advanced version of [[ThePowerOfCreation Momo's Quirk]]
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** Instead of Gearshift, The 2nd User of One For All's Quirk is [[spoiler: Quirked Animal Registry]].
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** Instead of Gearshift, The 2nd User of One For All's Quirk is [[spoiler: Quirked [Quirked Animal Registry]].Registry]]].
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* {{Entertainingly Wrong}}: Uraraka, influenced by Aoyama and Ashido's earlier comments about her and Midoriya's relationship, thinks that Midoriya wanting to tell her something means that he wants to confess to her. In actuality, Midoriya wants to tell her about [One For All]
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* {{Entertainingly Wrong}}: Entertainingly Wrong: Uraraka, influenced by Aoyama and Ashido's earlier comments about her and Midoriya's relationship, thinks that Midoriya wanting to tell her something means that he wants to confess to her. In actuality, Midoriya wants to tell her about [One For All]
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** Monoma's [[PowerCopying Quirk]] is hinted at having gotten a major boost in power after he copied One For All, but the details of this change haven't been revealed yet.
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** Monoma's [[PowerCopying Quirk]] is hinted at having gotten a major boost in power after he copied One [One For All, All], but the details of this change haven't been revealed yet.yet.
** Tokage also gained a small portion of [One For All], specifically a small part of [Fa Jin].
** Tokage also gained a small portion of [One For All], specifically a small part of [Fa Jin].
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*** Rather than being the stepping stone for Bakugou's development, Tokage's team during the Joint Training Exercise faces Midoriya's team.
*** Tokage is a mischievous teenager who wants to make her grand-aunt, Chiyo Shuzenji, proud.
*** She is very insecure about her quirk, having taken years to get it under control and how it impacts her life.
*** Tokage is a mischievous teenager who wants to make her grand-aunt, Chiyo Shuzenji, proud.
*** She is very insecure about her quirk, having taken years to get it under control and how it impacts her life.
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*** Rather than being the a stepping stone for Bakugou's development, Tokage's Tokage faces Midoriya's team during the Joint Training Exercise faces Midoriya's team.
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*** Tokage is a mischievous teenager who wants to make her grand-aunt, Chiyo Shuzenji,proud.
*** Sheproud. However she is very insecure about her quirk, having taken years to get it under control and how it impacts her life.
*** Tokage is a mischievous teenager who wants to make her grand-aunt, Chiyo Shuzenji,
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*{{Entertainingly Wrong}}: Uraraka, influenced by Aoyama and Ashido's earlier comments about her and Midoriya's relationship, thinks that Midoriya wanting to tell her something means that he wants to confess to her. In actuality, Midoriya wants to tell her about [One For All]
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** Izuku and Ochako.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/39912777/chapters/99939819 Torchbearer]] is an ongoing ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia My Hero Academia]]'' ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia'' fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/FalseSeraph/pseuds/FalseSeraph FalseSeraph]]
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/39912777/chapters/99939819 Torchbearer]] is an ongoing ''[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Manga/MyHeroAcademia ''Manga/MyHeroAcademia My Hero Academia]]'' fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/FalseSeraph/pseuds/FalseSeraph FalseSeraph]]
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/39912777/chapters/99939819 Torchbearer]] is an ongoing "[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Manga/MyHeroAcademia My Hero Academia]]" fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/FalseSeraph/pseuds/FalseSeraph FalseSeraph]]
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/39912777/chapters/99939819 Torchbearer]] is an ongoing "[[https://tvtropes.''[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Manga/MyHeroAcademia My Hero Academia]]" Academia]]'' fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/FalseSeraph/pseuds/FalseSeraph FalseSeraph]]
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/39912777/chapters/99939819 Torchbearer]] is an ongoing [[https://tvtropes."[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Manga/MyHeroAcademia My Hero Academia]] Academia]]" fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/FalseSeraph/pseuds/FalseSeraph FalseSeraph]]
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*** After biting Midoriya during the Joint Training Exercise, Tokage now possesses a fragment of One For All. Implications of this development have yet to be seen except for an instance of her using it by accident during a hero training exercise. in In addition, First calls her 'Tenth.'
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*** After biting Midoriya during the Joint Training Exercise, Tokage now possesses a fragment of One For All. Implications of this development have yet to be seen except for an instance of her using it by accident during a hero training exercise.
*** First calls her 'Tenth.'
*** First calls her 'Tenth.'
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*** After biting Midoriya during the Joint Training Exercise, Tokage now possesses a fragment of One For All. Implications of this development have yet to be seen except for an instance of her using it by accident during a hero training exercise. \n*** in addition, First calls her 'Tenth.'
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** Shiozaki is also privately investigating Shouto's personal life, to determine the source of his scar. It is clear she is finding some uncomfortable things.
* {{Foil}}: Kamakiri is very much this to Bakugo. The former starts his time in 1-B as a BloodKnight, gives offensive nicknames to everyone, is short-tempered, has surprising control and skill with a dangerous Quirk, and generally has a foul personality. Except he develops and grows into a close and genuine friend with all his classmates, and works hard to mature beyond his worst traits.
* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: The Sixth user's Quirk is Smokescreen, and he came the closest aside from All Might to killing AFO, via very nearly choking him to death on smoke.
* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Bakugo's current situation, as he is well aware by now that if it gets out what he did to Izuku growing up, which he does not at all regret, he will be kicked out of the hero course. More and more people are becoming aware of this though, and Monoma takes glee in spelling out that Bakugo remaining in the hero course will end the instant that Izuku finally accepts what an awful person Bakugo is, and should never be a hero. The very same Izuku's whose new Quirk development has left him functionally immune to Bakugo's explosions, can fly like him, and easily bests him at strength. As things are, Bakugo concludes that the only way out for him is to prove that he is too indispensable for his combat power to be rid of.
* {{Foil}}: Kamakiri is very much this to Bakugo. The former starts his time in 1-B as a BloodKnight, gives offensive nicknames to everyone, is short-tempered, has surprising control and skill with a dangerous Quirk, and generally has a foul personality. Except he develops and grows into a close and genuine friend with all his classmates, and works hard to mature beyond his worst traits.
* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: The Sixth user's Quirk is Smokescreen, and he came the closest aside from All Might to killing AFO, via very nearly choking him to death on smoke.
* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Bakugo's current situation, as he is well aware by now that if it gets out what he did to Izuku growing up, which he does not at all regret, he will be kicked out of the hero course. More and more people are becoming aware of this though, and Monoma takes glee in spelling out that Bakugo remaining in the hero course will end the instant that Izuku finally accepts what an awful person Bakugo is, and should never be a hero. The very same Izuku's whose new Quirk development has left him functionally immune to Bakugo's explosions, can fly like him, and easily bests him at strength. As things are, Bakugo concludes that the only way out for him is to prove that he is too indispensable for his combat power to be rid of.
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** Shiozaki is also privately investigating Shouto's personal life, to determine the source of his scar. It is clear she is finding connecting together some uncomfortable things.
* {{Foil}}: Kamakiri is very much this to Bakugo. The former starts his time in 1-B as a BloodKnight, gives offensive nicknames to everyone, is short-tempered, has surprising control and skill with a dangerous Quirk, loud and verbally offensive mom paired with a soft-spoken dad, and generally has a foul personality. Excepthe Kamakiri develops and grows into a close and genuine friend with all his classmates, and works hard to mature beyond his worst traits.
* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: The Sixth user's Quirk is Smokescreen, and he came the closest aside from All Might to killing AFO,via very nearly choking him to death on smoke.
* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Bakugo's current situation, as he is well aware by now that if it gets out what he did to Izuku growing up, which he does not at all regret, he will be kicked out of the hero course. More and more people are becoming aware of this though, and Monoma takes glee in spelling out that Bakugo remaining in the hero course will end the instant that Izuku finally accepts what an awful person Bakugo is, and should never be a hero. The very same Izuku's whose new Quirk development has left him functionally immune to Bakugo's explosions, can fly like him, and easily bests him at strength. As things are, Bakugo concludes that the only way out for him is to prove that he is too indispensable for his combat power to be ridof.of, and even that falls flat when Kamakiri decisively beats him twice in a row in the same match.
* {{Foil}}: Kamakiri is very much this to Bakugo. The former starts his time in 1-B as a BloodKnight, gives offensive nicknames to everyone, is short-tempered, has surprising control and skill with a dangerous Quirk, loud and verbally offensive mom paired with a soft-spoken dad, and generally has a foul personality. Except
* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: The Sixth user's Quirk is Smokescreen, and he came the closest aside from All Might to killing AFO,
* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Bakugo's current situation, as he is well aware by now that if it gets out what he did to Izuku growing up, which he does not at all regret, he will be kicked out of the hero course. More and more people are becoming aware of this though, and Monoma takes glee in spelling out that Bakugo remaining in the hero course will end the instant that Izuku finally accepts what an awful person Bakugo is, and should never be a hero. The very same Izuku's whose new Quirk development has left him functionally immune to Bakugo's explosions, can fly like him, and easily bests him at strength. As things are, Bakugo concludes that the only way out for him is to prove that he is too indispensable for his combat power to be rid
* MoodWhiplash: When Monoma first interacts with the Vestiges he starts continuously screaming in horror, which the Vestiges interpret as just him being freaked out by encountering them, and give him a slap. However, then he reveals he has already put together that he Copied seven actual individuals who are going to die when his Quirk ends, and that this process is going to kill Izuku in short order as well; which means that he has just committed ''eight'' counts of ''manslaughter''. While Izuku is saved, he still grieves for the deaths of the duplicate Vestiges.
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** Kodai and Shouda. He helped her with a panic attack when the reporters broke in, and is the only one to reliably understand her.
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** Kodai and Shouda. He helped her with a panic attack when the reporters broke in, and is the only one to reliably understand her. Everyone can see them as a couple, but neither are willing to make the first move.
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** Kamakiri and Tokage, to which both of them are blind to.
** Izuku and Ochako.
** Shouto and Shiozaki, with them finding surprisingly common interests.
** Izuku and Ochako.
** Shouto and Shiozaki, with them finding surprisingly common interests.
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* Foil: Kamakiri is very much this to Bakugo. The former starts his time in 1-B as a BloodKnight, gives offensive nicknames to everyone, is short-tempered, has surprising control and skill with a dangerous Quirk, and generally has a foul personality. Except he develops and grows into a close and genuine friend with all his classmates, and works hard to mature beyond his worst traits.
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* Foil: {{Foil}}: Kamakiri is very much this to Bakugo. The former starts his time in 1-B as a BloodKnight, gives offensive nicknames to everyone, is short-tempered, has surprising control and skill with a dangerous Quirk, and generally has a foul personality. Except he develops and grows into a close and genuine friend with all his classmates, and works hard to mature beyond his worst traits.
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** The excuse for Bakugou's KarmaHoudini status in canon explained by the societal stability caused by All Might's retirement and the League of Villains slowly rising to power, making Aizawa unable to expel him due to the risk of him being targeted again by the League. In fact, Aizawa was planning that there was a 50/50 chance of him expelling Bakugo at the USJ, believing it very likely that the student's reaction to rescue training would be sufficient grounds to expel him.
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** The excuse for Bakugou's KarmaHoudini status in canon explained by the societal stability instability caused by All Might's retirement and the League of Villains slowly rising to power, making Aizawa unable to expel him due to the risk of him being targeted again by the League. In fact, Aizawa was planning that there was a 50/50 chance of him expelling Bakugo at the USJ, believing it very likely that the student's reaction to rescue training would be sufficient grounds to expel him.
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** Izuku's own dormant Quirk has awakened, with One For All being able to keep it from killing him. Providing him with Energy Absorption.
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** Izuku's [[spoiler:Izuku's own dormant Quirk has awakened, with One For All being able to keep it from killing him. Providing him with Energy Absorption. ]]
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Aizawa is subject to this in-universe. Monoma outright hates the man, and Tokage is mortally afraid of him, and a lot of Monoma's more recent issues stem to the man's performance as a teacher; which a growing number of students have concerns about as well. On the flipside, they are LockedOutOfTheLoop on the rational behind many of Aizawa's decisions, generally made with the joint approval of Kan and Nezu, which come off much more as a ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Aizawa is subject to this in-universe. Monoma outright hates the man, and Tokage is mortally afraid of him, and a lot of Monoma's more recent issues stem to the man's performance as a teacher; which a growing number of students have concerns about as well. On the flipside, they are LockedOutOfTheLoop on the rational rationality behind many of Aizawa's decisions, generally made with the joint approval of Kan and Nezu, which come off much more as a ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
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** Class 1-B as a whole plays a major role in the story, and are expanded.
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** Class 1-B as a whole plays a major role in the story, and are expanded.expanded upon.
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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: The Sixth user's Quirk is Smokescreen, and the came the closest aside from All Might to killing AFO, via very nearly choking him to death on smoke.
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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: The Sixth user's Quirk is Smokescreen, and the he came the closest aside from All Might to killing AFO, via very nearly choking him to death on smoke.
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** Pony and Monoma. Monoma is completely oblivious, and if you tell him she likes him to his face, he thinks you are talking Korean.
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** Pony and Monoma. Monoma Pony is openly attracted towards Monoma, however he is completely oblivious, oblivious to this, and if you tell him that she likes him to his face, he thinks you are talking Korean.
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** Kuroiro and Komori. Both in denial the other likes them.
** Jiro and Kaminari.
** Fukidashi and Hagakure. They are slowly bonding over their lack of visible faces.
** Jiro and Kaminari.
** Fukidashi and Hagakure. They are slowly bonding over their lack of visible faces.
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** Kuroiro and Komori. Both in denial are pining for the other likes them.and are seemingly oblivious to the fact that their feelings are mutual.
** Jiro andKaminari.
Kaminari.
** Fukidashi and Hagakure. They are slowly bonding over their lack of visiblefaces.faces and the difficulties it causes them.
** Jiro and
** Fukidashi and Hagakure. They are slowly bonding over their lack of visible
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** Fukidashi and Hagakure.
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** Fukidashi and Hagakure. They are slowly bonding over their lack of visible faces.
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** Rather than being the stepping stone for Bakugou's development Tokage is a mischievous teenager that wants to make her grand-aunt proud and is very insecure about her quirk.
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*** Upon copying One For All during the Joint Training Exercise, Copy has now undergone an unknown change.
** Tokage
*** Rather than being the stepping stone for Bakugou'sdevelopment development, Tokage's team during the Joint Training Exercise faces Midoriya's team.
*** Tokage is a mischievous teenagerthat who wants to make her grand-aunt proud and grand-aunt, Chiyo Shuzenji, proud.
*** She is very insecure about herquirk.quirk, having taken years to get it under control and how it impacts her life.
*** A purple leopard gecko reoccurs throughout the fic in Tokage's mind. It unsettles Tokage despite being trapped within a chained cage.
*** After biting Midoriya during the Joint Training Exercise, Tokage now possesses a fragment of One For All. Implications of this development have yet to be seen except for an instance of her using it by accident during a hero training exercise.
****First calls her 'Tenth.'
** Tokage
*** Rather than being the stepping stone for Bakugou's
*** Tokage is a mischievous teenager
*** She is very insecure about her
*** A purple leopard gecko reoccurs throughout the fic in Tokage's mind. It unsettles Tokage despite being trapped within a chained cage.
*** After biting Midoriya during the Joint Training Exercise, Tokage now possesses a fragment of One For All. Implications of this development have yet to be seen except for an instance of her using it by accident during a hero training exercise.
****First calls her 'Tenth.'
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* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Aizawa assumes Monoma is a fan given his family, and has a little resentment for the major miscommunication over saving Izuku's life, but ultimately things are alright between them, even if the teen could be less dramatic. In reality, Monoma hates and fears Aizawa to a degree it is a defining trait of his behavior, and Aizawa has only ever witness a false persona to keep the classes apart. Driven by these emotions, Monoma is also working hard to undermine Aizawa by making 1-A see Aizawa is an inferior and irresponsible teacher; all while ignorant of the sound reasons behind many of Aizawa's questionable decisions as a teacher, which have the approval of 1-B's own teacher.
