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* CompleteMonster: The scenes for [[AGodAmI Re-Destro,]] [[Sadist All For One]], and Shigaraki make it abundantly clear they are this.
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* CompleteMonster: The scenes for [[AGodAmI Re-Destro,]] [[Sadist [[ColdBloodedTorture All For One]], and Shigaraki make it abundantly clear they are this.
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* HeartIsAnAwesomeSuperpower: The Sixth user's Quirk is Smokescreen, and the came the closest aside from All Might to killing AFO, via very nearly choking him to death on smoke.
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* HeartIsAnAwesomeSuperpower: HeartIsAnAwesomePower: The Sixth user's Quirk is Smokescreen, and the came the closest aside from All Might to killing AFO, via very nearly choking him to death on smoke.
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** The greater focus towards Monoma instead of hating 1-A because they got attacked by villains, but from his hatred and fear of Aizawa. He grew up in the man's shadow as part of an all Quirkless family, with Aizawa revered by the Quirkless population. However the constant comparisons to the Pro Hero, to the point they actually care more for him than Monoma, and realising Aizawa was unwilling to use his actually considerable influence to improve things for the Quirkless, made it his life's mission to upstate the man as the hero of the Quirkless. At UA itself, he also fears Aizawa's casual use of Erasure could kill or cripple Tokage, and as she refuses to speak up about the same fear, instead devotes himself to being either the one Aizawa entirely focuses on, and keeping their classes separate.
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is that he hates Eraserhead thanks to getting compared to him his entire family.The 1A hating is a front,he is a quirk analyst maniac that hates quirk counselors,that he wants to make the world better for the quirkless thanks to his family being quirkless and having self-esteem issues.
joint issues of fearing that Aizawa's casual use o
is that he hates Eraserhead thanks to getting compared to him his entire family.The 1A hating is a front,he is a quirk analyst maniac that hates quirk counselors,that he wants to make the world better for the quirkless thanks to his family being quirkless and having self-esteem issues.
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** Monoma
*** The greater focus towards Monoma instead of hating 1-A because they got attacked by villains, but from his hatred and fear of Aizawa. He grew up in the man's shadow as part of an all Quirkless family, with Aizawa revered by the Quirkless population. However the constant comparisons to the Pro Hero, to the point they actually care more for him than Monoma, and realising Aizawa was unwilling to use his actually considerable influence to improve things for the Quirkless, made it his life's mission to upstate the man as the hero of the Quirkless. At UA itself, he also fears Aizawa's casual use of Erasure could kill or cripple Tokage, and as she refuses to speak up about the same fear, instead devotes himself to being either the one Aizawa entirely focuses on, and keeping their classes separate. \n\njoint issues of fearing
*** Underneath thatAizawa's casual use o
front, he is that he hates Eraserhead thanks actually a highly respected hero student, and does a lot to getting compared help everyone. His dream is to him help the Quirkless as much as possible, and raise awareness of them. Including publishing his entire family.The 1A hating is a front,he is a quirk analyst maniac that hates quirk counselors,that he wants to make and his sister's discovery of what the world better for the quirkless thanks to his family being quirkless truth what Quirkless really are. He also loves Quirks, and having self-esteem issues.has a seething hatred of Quirk Counselors and how much they mess things up.
*** The greater focus towards Monoma instead of hating 1-A because they got attacked by villains, but from his hatred and fear of Aizawa. He grew up in the man's shadow as part of an all Quirkless family, with Aizawa revered by the Quirkless population. However the constant comparisons to the Pro Hero, to the point they actually care more for him than Monoma, and realising Aizawa was unwilling to use his actually considerable influence to improve things for the Quirkless, made it his life's mission to upstate the man as the hero of the Quirkless. At UA itself, he also fears Aizawa's casual use of Erasure could kill or cripple Tokage, and as she refuses to speak up about the same fear, instead devotes himself to being either the one Aizawa entirely focuses on, and keeping their classes separate.
*** Underneath that
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** Hagakure's issues from being invisible are explored, and the Quirk discrimination others have suffered are also evident.
* CompleteMonster: The scenes for [[AGodAmI Re-Destro,]] [[Sadist All For One]], and Shigaraki make it abundantly clear they are this.
* CompleteMonster: The scenes for [[AGodAmI Re-Destro,]] [[Sadist All For One]], and Shigaraki make it abundantly clear they are this.
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* HeartIsAnAwesomeSuperpower: The Sixth user's Quirk is Smokescreen, and the came the closest aside from All Might to killing AFO, via very nearly choking him to death on smoke.
* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Bakugo's current situation, as he is well aware by now that if it gets out what he did to Izuku growing up, which he does not at all regret, he will be kicked out of the hero course. More and more people are becoming aware of this though, and Monoma takes glee in spelling out that Bakugo remaining in the hero course will end the instant that Izuku finally accepts what an awful person Bakugo is, and should never be a hero. The very same Izuku's whose new Quirk development has left him functionally immune to Bakugo's explosions, can fly like him, and easily bests him at strength. As things are, Bakugo concludes that the only way out for him is to prove that he is too indispensable for his combat power to be rid of.
** Ironically, Bakugo is unaware of how truly thin the ice is at that, as Nezu, Aizawa, and Kan are well aware of the truth, and are seeing what the best way to handle the fallout is. Indeed, if not for the League of Villains attack at the USJ, Aizawa likely would have expelled Bakugo then and there.
* HowTheMightyHaveFallen: Bakugo's current situation, as he is well aware by now that if it gets out what he did to Izuku growing up, which he does not at all regret, he will be kicked out of the hero course. More and more people are becoming aware of this though, and Monoma takes glee in spelling out that Bakugo remaining in the hero course will end the instant that Izuku finally accepts what an awful person Bakugo is, and should never be a hero. The very same Izuku's whose new Quirk development has left him functionally immune to Bakugo's explosions, can fly like him, and easily bests him at strength. As things are, Bakugo concludes that the only way out for him is to prove that he is too indispensable for his combat power to be rid of.
** Ironically, Bakugo is unaware of how truly thin the ice is at that, as Nezu, Aizawa, and Kan are well aware of the truth, and are seeing what the best way to handle the fallout is. Indeed, if not for the League of Villains attack at the USJ, Aizawa likely would have expelled Bakugo then and there.
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* SecretTestOfCharacter: A big reason that Aizawa keeps Mineta and Bakugo around is part of this. For the pervert, he is trying to goad his students to take the initiative and handle it like heroes should. With Bakugo, it is a test for Izuku to see if he will finally open up about how he was abused by the explosive teen.
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A sharp change in the Joint Training exercise leads to major new developments and explorations for classes 1-A and 1-B, having major implications.
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** The excuse for Bakugou's KarmaHoudini status in canon explained by the societal stability caused by All Might's retirement and the League of Villains slowly rising to power, making Aizawa unable to expel him due to the risk of him being targeted again by the League
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** The excuse for Bakugou's KarmaHoudini status in canon explained by the societal stability caused by All Might's retirement and the League of Villains slowly rising to power, making Aizawa unable to expel him due to the risk of him being targeted again by the LeagueLeague. In fact, Aizawa was planning that there was a 50/50 chance of him expelling Bakugo at the USJ, believing it very likely that the student's reaction to rescue training would be sufficient grounds to expel him.
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** Kinoko Komori's [[FesteringFungus Mushroom]] went through ''some'' sort of change off screen, even greater than Kamakiri's example above, but it hasn't been revealed yet.
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** Kinoko Komori's [[FesteringFungus Mushroom]] went through ''some'' sort of change off screen, even greater than Kamakiri's example above, but it hasn't been revealed yet. Thus far we have seen it can bolster her strength though.
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** Instead of Gearshift, The 2nd User of One For All's Quirk is [[spoiler: Quirked Animal Registry]]
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** Instead of Gearshift, The 2nd User of One For All's Quirk is [[spoiler: Quirked Animal Registry]]Registry]].
** Izuku's own dormant Quirk has awakened, with One For All being able to keep it from killing him. Providing him with Energy Absorption.
** After hours of using his flames non-stop at the highest intensity, Shouto's flames become blue.
* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Aizawa is subject to this in-universe. Monoma outright hates the man, and Tokage is mortally afraid of him, and a lot of Monoma's more recent issues stem to the man's performance as a teacher; which a growing number of students have concerns about as well. On the flipside, they are LockedOutOfTheLoop on the rational behind many of Aizawa's decisions, generally made with the joint approval of Kan and Nezu, which come off much more as a ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
** After hours of using his flames non-stop at the highest intensity, Shouto's flames become blue.
* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Aizawa is subject to this in-universe. Monoma outright hates the man, and Tokage is mortally afraid of him, and a lot of Monoma's more recent issues stem to the man's performance as a teacher; which a growing number of students have concerns about as well. On the flipside, they are LockedOutOfTheLoop on the rational behind many of Aizawa's decisions, generally made with the joint approval of Kan and Nezu, which come off much more as a ReasonableAuthorityFigure.
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** Class 1-B as a whole plays a major role in the story.
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** Rather than being 1-A hating fanatic that he is in canon Monoma is one of the deuteragonist who's fierce competitive streak towards 1-A stems from [[spoiler: his dislike towards Eraserhead, their teacher, not the students themselves.]]
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** Rather than being 1-A hating fanatic that he is in canon Monoma is one of the deuteragonist who's fierce competitive streak towards 1-A stems from [[spoiler: his dislike outright hatred towards Eraserhead, their teacher, not the students themselves.themselves. In addition, a desperate need to keep all the focus on himself, and the classes separate, lest Aizawa's casual use of Erasure kill or cripple Tokage.]]
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** The greater focus towards Monoma instead of hating 1A because they got attacked by villains is that he hates Eraserhead thanks to getting compared to him his entire family.The 1A hating is a front,he is a quirk analyst maniac that hates quirk counselors,that he wants to make the world better for the quirkless thanks to his family being quirkless and having self-esteem issues.
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** The greater focus towards Monoma instead of hating 1A 1-A because they got attacked by villains villains, but from his hatred and fear of Aizawa. He grew up in the man's shadow as part of an all Quirkless family, with Aizawa revered by the Quirkless population. However the constant comparisons to the Pro Hero, to the point they actually care more for him than Monoma, and realising Aizawa was unwilling to use his actually considerable influence to improve things for the Quirkless, made it his life's mission to upstate the man as the hero of the Quirkless. At UA itself, he also fears Aizawa's casual use of Erasure could kill or cripple Tokage, and as she refuses to speak up about the same fear, instead devotes himself to being either the one Aizawa entirely focuses on, and keeping their classes separate.
joint issues of fearing that Aizawa's casual use o
is that he hates Eraserhead thanks to getting compared to him his entire family.The 1A hating is a front,he is a quirk analyst maniac that hates quirk counselors,that he wants to make the world better for the quirkless thanks to his family being quirkless and having self-esteem issues.
joint issues of fearing that Aizawa's casual use o
is that he hates Eraserhead thanks to getting compared to him his entire family.The 1A hating is a front,he is a quirk analyst maniac that hates quirk counselors,that he wants to make the world better for the quirkless thanks to his family being quirkless and having self-esteem issues.
* ConspiracyTheorist: Shouto is very much this to the severe exasperation of his friends and classmates, with Shiozaki joining him in this.
** Shiozaki is also privately investigating Shouto's personal life, to determine the source of his scar. It is clear she is finding some uncomfortable things.
* Foil: Kamakiri is very much this to Bakugo. The former starts his time in 1-B as a BloodKnight, gives offensive nicknames to everyone, is short-tempered, has surprising control and skill with a dangerous Quirk, and generally has a foul personality. Except he develops and grows into a close and genuine friend with all his classmates, and works hard to mature beyond his worst traits.
** Shiozaki is also privately investigating Shouto's personal life, to determine the source of his scar. It is clear she is finding some uncomfortable things.
* Foil: Kamakiri is very much this to Bakugo. The former starts his time in 1-B as a BloodKnight, gives offensive nicknames to everyone, is short-tempered, has surprising control and skill with a dangerous Quirk, and generally has a foul personality. Except he develops and grows into a close and genuine friend with all his classmates, and works hard to mature beyond his worst traits.
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* SeeTheInvisible: Thanks to being in the pool, the other students can see Hagakure's hair.
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** Pony and Monoma
** Ashido and Kirishima
** Kodai and Shouda
** Kuroiro and Komori
** Jiro and Kaminari
** Fukidashi and Hagakure
* SliceOfLife: Rather than having the dramatic tension that the manga has this story lets teenagers acting as teenagers.
** Ashido and Kirishima
** Kodai and Shouda
** Kuroiro and Komori
** Jiro and Kaminari
** Fukidashi and Hagakure
* SliceOfLife: Rather than having the dramatic tension that the manga has this story lets teenagers acting as teenagers.
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** Pony and Monoma
Monoma. Monoma is completely oblivious, and if you tell him she likes him to his face, he thinks you are talking Korean.
** Ashido andKirishima
Kirishima. Although a misunderstanding means people think Monoma has a crush on her.
** Kodai andShouda
Shouda. He helped her with a panic attack when the reporters broke in, and is the only one to reliably understand her.
** Kuroiro andKomori
Komori. Both in denial the other likes them.
** Jiro andKaminari
Kaminari.
** Fukidashi andHagakure
Hagakure.
* SliceOfLife: Rather than having the dramatic tension that the manga has this story lets teenagers acting as teenagers. There are still very serious moments though, and making clear the very real and sadistic threats of Re-Destro, All For One, and Shigaraki.
** Ashido and
** Kodai and
** Kuroiro and
** Jiro and
** Fukidashi and
* SliceOfLife: Rather than having the dramatic tension that the manga has this story lets teenagers acting as teenagers. There are still very serious moments though, and making clear the very real and sadistic threats of Re-Destro, All For One, and Shigaraki.
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** The excuse for Bakugou KarmaHoudini status in canon is that thanks to League of Villains debut in USJ,All Might retirement and the rise of crima levels and societal instability Aizawa can't expel Bakugou due to the possibility of the League targeting him.
** Class 1-B's first days of class, including their own Quirk assessment test and Battle Trials 1-A went through
** Class 1-B's first days of class, including their own Quirk assessment test and Battle Trials 1-A went through
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** The excuse for Bakugou Bakugou's KarmaHoudini status in canon is that thanks to explained by the societal stability caused by All Might's retirement and the League of Villains debut in USJ,All Might retirement and the rise of crima levels and societal instability slowly rising to power, making Aizawa can't unable to expel Bakugou him due to the possibility risk of him being targeted again by the League targeting him.
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**Class There are several chapters dedicated to class 1-B's first days of class, including their own Quirk assessment test test, battle trials, and Battle Trials 1-A went throughclass election
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** Honenuki is Cementoss's nephew, being sponsored by him for the recommendation exams, something he's very proud about.
** Third's daughter and Daigoro Banjo were on-and-off again lovers.
** Third's daughter and Daigoro Banjo were on-and-off again lovers.
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** Honenuki is Cementoss's nephew, being sponsored by him for the recommendation exams, something he's very smug about.
** Third's daughter and Daigoro Banjo were on-and-off again lovers.
** Third's daughter and Daigoro Banjo were on-and-off again lovers.
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** Rather than the quirk gene not getting transferred to Midoriya it given that the quirkless have incomplete or lethal quirks that will sooner kill them if activated. So rather than the human body getting killed by out of control quirks the quirk shuts down.
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** Togaru Kamakiri's [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Razor Sharp]] is actually a form of silk manipulation, allowing him to make constructs out of material similar to spider silk and absorb them back into his body. It's essentially a less advanced version of [[ThePowerOfCreation Momo's Quirk]]
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** Togaru Kamakiri's [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Razor Sharp]] Sharp]], as discovered by Izuku, is actually a form of silk manipulation, allowing him to make constructs out of material similar to spider silk and absorb them back into his body. It's essentially a less advanced version of [[ThePowerOfCreation Momo's Quirk]]
** Instead of Gearshift, The 2nd User of One For All's Quirk is [[spoiler: Quirked Animal Registry]]
** [[spoiler: Midoriya, All Might and all other Quirkless people in the world ''do'' in fact have Quirks, they're just rendered dormant due to having side effects that would instantly kill the user upon activating. Monoma, by nature of his own Quirk, is one of the few people in the world who knows about this, and refers to the phenomenon as the "Cold Quirk Theory"]]
** [[spoiler: Midoriya, All Might and all other Quirkless people in the world ''do'' in fact have Quirks, they're just rendered dormant due to having side effects that would instantly kill the user upon activating. Monoma, by nature of his own Quirk, is one of the few people in the world who knows about this, and refers to the phenomenon as the "Cold Quirk Theory"]]
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** Rather than being 1-A hating fanatic that he is in canon Monoma is the triagonist who's fierce competitive streak towards 1-A is derived from him hating their teacher, not the students themselves.
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** Rather than being 1-A hating fanatic that he is in canon Monoma is one of the triagonist deuteragonist who's fierce competitive streak towards 1-A is derived stems from him hating [[spoiler: his dislike towards Eraserhead, their teacher, not the students themselves.]]
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: Monoma is enraged at seeing Izuku's memories of the years of abuse Bakugo put him through after copying One For All, swearing to destroy his hero career and make his life hell.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: Monoma is enraged ''livid'' at seeing Izuku's memories of the years of abuse Bakugo put him through after copying One For All, swearing to destroy his hero career and make his life hell.
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** Monoma's [[PowerCopying Quirk]] is hinted at having gotten a major upgrade after he copied One For All, but it hasn't been revealed yet.
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** Monoma's [[PowerCopying Quirk]] is hinted at having gotten a major upgrade boost in power after he copied One For All, but it hasn't the details of this change haven't been revealed yet.
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Several
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** Togaru Kamakiri's [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Razor Sharp]] is actually a form of silk manipulation, allowing him to make constructs out of a spider silk like material and absorb them back into his body. It's essentially a less advanced version of [[ThePowerOfCreation Momo's Quirk]]
** Kinoko Komori's [[FesteringFungus Mushroom]] went through _some_ kind of change off screen, even greater than Kamakiri's example above, but it hasn't been revealed yet.
** Kinoko Komori's [[FesteringFungus Mushroom]] went through _some_ kind of change off screen, even greater than Kamakiri's example above, but it hasn't been revealed yet.
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** Togaru Kamakiri's [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Razor Sharp]] is actually a form of silk manipulation, allowing him to make constructs out of a material similar to spider silk like material and absorb them back into his body. It's essentially a less advanced version of [[ThePowerOfCreation Momo's Quirk]]
** Kinoko Komori's [[FesteringFungus Mushroom]] went through_some_ kind ''some'' sort of change off screen, even greater than Kamakiri's example above, but it hasn't been revealed yet.
** Kinoko Komori's [[FesteringFungus Mushroom]] went through
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** Togaru Kamakiri's [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Razor Sharp]] is actually a form of silk manipulation, allowing him to make constructs out of a spider silk like material and absorb them back into his body. It's essentially a less advanced version of [[ThePowerOfCreation Momo's Quirk]]
** Kinoko Komori's [[FesteringFungus Mushroom]] went through _some_ kind of change off screen, even greater than Kamakiri's example above, but it hasn't been revealed yet.
** Monoma's [[PowerCopying Quirk]] is hinted at having gotten a major upgrade after he copied One For All, but it hasn't been revealed yet.
** Togaru Kamakiri's [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Razor Sharp]] is actually a form of silk manipulation, allowing him to make constructs out of a spider silk like material and absorb them back into his body. It's essentially a less advanced version of [[ThePowerOfCreation Momo's Quirk]]
** Kinoko Komori's [[FesteringFungus Mushroom]] went through _some_ kind of change off screen, even greater than Kamakiri's example above, but it hasn't been revealed yet.
** Monoma's [[PowerCopying Quirk]] is hinted at having gotten a major upgrade after he copied One For All, but it hasn't been revealed yet.
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%%* Ship Tease: There are several couples in the making:
%% **Between Pony and Monoma
%% **Between Ashido and Kirishima
%% **Between Kodai and Shouda
%% **Between Kuroiro and Komori
%% **Between Jiro and Kaminari
%% **Between Fukidashi and Hagakure
%% **Between Pony and Monoma
%% **Between Ashido and Kirishima
%% **Between Kodai and Shouda
%% **Between Kuroiro and Komori
%% **Between Jiro and Kaminari
%% **Between Fukidashi and Hagakure
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** The History of 1-B is explored with the quirk assement test and battle trials.
** Rather than being shown to be largely over at how he was treated when he was quirkless Midoriya is still shown to be affected having scars from Bakugou treatment of him.
** Rather than being shown to be largely over at how he was treated when he was quirkless Midoriya is still shown to be affected having scars from Bakugou treatment of him.
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** The History Class 1-B's first days of 1-B is explored with the quirk assement class, including their own Quirk assessment test and battle trials.
Battle Trials 1-A went through
**Rather than being shown to be largely Midoriya's is still clearly affected over at how he was treated when he was quirkless Midoriya is still shown to be affected having scars from Bakugou treatment of him.Quirkless.
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** Setsuna rather than being used as a stepping stone for Bakugou's development is the deuteragonist with a greater focus on how she views her quirks
** Rather than being 1A hating fanatic that he is in canon Monoma is the tritagonist in this story
** It is given on the personal history of the past holders of One For All.
* ComingOfAgeStory: That's Tokage storyline on her grow as a future heroine.
** Rather than being 1A hating fanatic that he is in canon Monoma is the tritagonist in this story
** It is given on the personal history of the past holders of One For All.
* ComingOfAgeStory: That's Tokage storyline on her grow as a future heroine.
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** Setsuna rather than being used as a stepping stone for Bakugou's development Tokage is the deuteragonist given more focus, with much of the story going in depth about the complications that come with having a greater focus on how she views her quirks
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** Rather than being1A 1-A hating fanatic that he is in canon Monoma is the tritagonist in this story
triagonist who's fierce competitive streak towards 1-A is derived from him hating their teacher, not the students themselves.
**It More information is given on the personal history of lives on the past holders previous users of One For All.
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* ComingOfAgeStory: That's Tokage storyline on her grow as a future heroine.
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* RotatingProtagonist: Rather than being in only Midoriya's point of view the point of view rotates from one character to another.
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* RotatingProtagonist: Rather than being in only Midoriya's point of view the point of view The story rotates from one character to another.between focusing on Midoriya, Monoma, and Tokage.
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* SliceOfLife: Rather than having the dramatic tensions that the manga has this story lets teenagers acting as teenagers.
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* SliceOfLife: Rather than having the dramatic tensions tension that the manga has this story lets teenagers acting as teenagers.
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** Rather than the quirk gene not getting transferred to Midoriya it given that the quirkless have incomplete or lethal quirks that will sooner kill them if activated.So rather than the human body getting killed by out of control quirks the quirk shuts down.
** The excuse for Bakugou KarmaHoudini status in canon is that thanks to League of Villains debut in USJ,All Might retirement and the rise of crima levels and societal instability Aizawa can't expelle Bakugou thanks to the League potentially targeting him.
** The History of 1B is explored with the quirk assement test and battle trials.
** Rather than being shown to be largely over at how he was treated when he was quirkless Midoriya is still shown to be affectd having scars from Bakugou treatment of him.
** The excuse for Bakugou KarmaHoudini status in canon is that thanks to League of Villains debut in USJ,All Might retirement and the rise of crima levels and societal instability Aizawa can't expelle Bakugou thanks to the League potentially targeting him.
** The History of 1B is explored with the quirk assement test and battle trials.
** Rather than being shown to be largely over at how he was treated when he was quirkless Midoriya is still shown to be affectd having scars from Bakugou treatment of him.
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** Rather than the quirk gene not getting transferred to Midoriya it given that the quirkless have incomplete or lethal quirks that will sooner kill them if activated. So rather than the human body getting killed by out of control quirks the quirk shuts down.
** The excuse for Bakugou KarmaHoudini status in canon is that thanks to League of Villains debut in USJ,All Might retirement and the rise of crima levels and societal instability Aizawa can'texpelle expel Bakugou thanks due to the possibility of the League potentially targeting him.
** The History of1B 1-B is explored with the quirk assement test and battle trials.
** Rather than being shown to be largely over at how he was treated when he was quirkless Midoriya is still shown to beaffectd affected having scars from Bakugou treatment of him.
** The excuse for Bakugou KarmaHoudini status in canon is that thanks to League of Villains debut in USJ,All Might retirement and the rise of crima levels and societal instability Aizawa can't
** The History of
** Rather than being shown to be largely over at how he was treated when he was quirkless Midoriya is still shown to be
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** Honenuki is Cementoss nephew something that he was very smug about it,being his hero recommandation
** Third's daughter and Fifth Holder were lovers
** Recovery Girl is Setsuna's Great Aunt being the one that recommanded Setsuna.
** Third's daughter and Fifth Holder were lovers
** Recovery Girl is Setsuna's Great Aunt being the one that recommanded Setsuna.
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** Honenuki is Cementoss nephew Cementoss's nephew, being sponsored by him for the recommendation exams, something that he was he's very smug about it,being his hero recommandation
proud about.
** Third's daughter andFifth Holder Daigoro Banjo were lovers
on-and-off again lovers.
** Recovery Girl is Setsuna's GreatAunt being Aunt, and the one that recommanded Setsuna.who sponsored her for the recommendation exam.
** Third's daughter and
** Recovery Girl is Setsuna's Great
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: Monoma towards Bakugou after seeing the memories of Bakugou bullying Izuku. He is determined to ruin Bakugou career as a hero.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: Monoma towards Bakugou after is enraged at seeing the Izuku's memories of Bakugou bullying Izuku. He is determined the years of abuse Bakugo put him through after copying One For All, swearing to ruin Bakugou destroy his hero career as a hero.and make his life hell.
-->'''Monoma:''' TAKE A SWAN DIVE AND WISH FOR A QUIRK!? I'LL MAKE YOUR ENTIRE LIFE TAKE A SWAN DIVE!
-->'''Monoma:''' TAKE A SWAN DIVE AND WISH FOR A QUIRK!? I'LL MAKE YOUR ENTIRE LIFE TAKE A SWAN DIVE!
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* RotatingProtagonist:Rather than being in only Midoriya point of view the point of view rotates from one character to another.
* SeeTheInvisible:Thanks to being in pool the other students can see Hagakure's hair.
* SwitchingPOV:Rather than being the omniscient point of view,the point of view switch from one character to another.
* Ship Tease:There are several couples in the making:
**Between Pony and Monoma
**Between Ashido and Kirishima
**Between Kodai and Shouda
**Between Kuroiro and Komori
**Between Jiro and Kaminari
**Between Fukidashi and Hagakure thanks to both having invisble faces.
* SliceOfLife:Rather than having the dramatic tensions that the manga has this story lets teenagers acting as teenagers.
* ThisIsUnforgivable:Monoma towards Bakugou after seeing the memories of Bakugou bullying Izuku.He is determined to ruin Bakugou carrier as a hero
* SeeTheInvisible:Thanks to being in pool the other students can see Hagakure's hair.
* SwitchingPOV:Rather than being the omniscient point of view,the point of view switch from one character to another.
* Ship Tease:There are several couples in the making:
**Between Pony and Monoma
**Between Ashido and Kirishima
**Between Kodai and Shouda
**Between Kuroiro and Komori
**Between Jiro and Kaminari
**Between Fukidashi and Hagakure thanks to both having invisble faces.
* SliceOfLife:Rather than having the dramatic tensions that the manga has this story lets teenagers acting as teenagers.
* ThisIsUnforgivable:Monoma towards Bakugou after seeing the memories of Bakugou bullying Izuku.He is determined to ruin Bakugou carrier as a hero
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* RotatingProtagonist:Rather RotatingProtagonist: Rather than being in only Midoriya Midoriya's point of view the point of view rotates from one character to another.
*SeeTheInvisible:Thanks SeeTheInvisible: Thanks to being in pool the pool, the other students can see Hagakure's hair.
*SwitchingPOV:Rather SwitchingPOV: Rather than being the omniscient point of view,the point view, the points of view switch from one character to another.
* %%* Ship Tease:There Tease: There are several couples in the making:
making:
%% **Between Pony andMonoma
Monoma
%% **Between Ashido andKirishima
Kirishima
%% **Between Kodai andShouda
Shouda
%% **Between Kuroiro andKomori
Komori
%% **Between Jiro andKaminari
Kaminari
%% **Between Fukidashi and Hagakure thanks to both havinginvisble invisible faces.
*SliceOfLife:Rather SliceOfLife: Rather than having the dramatic tensions that the manga has this story lets teenagers acting as teenagers.
*ThisIsUnforgivable:Monoma ThisIsUnforgivable: Monoma towards Bakugou after seeing the memories of Bakugou bullying Izuku.Izuku. He is determined to ruin Bakugou carrier career as a herohero.
*
*
%% **Between Pony and
%% **Between Ashido and
%% **Between Kodai and
%% **Between Kuroiro and
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%% **Between Fukidashi and Hagakure thanks to both having
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A change in the mechanics of [OFA] and a change in the Joint Training team composition lead to an interesting discovery. A better relationship between members of 1-A and 1-B starts with Monoma copying [OFA], a bite from Tokage to stop [Black Whip]'s rampage, and Midoriya finding out that [Fa Jin] and [OFA] are a dangerous combination for the bearer.
Setsuna Tokage, Neito Monoma and their quirks get the recognition they deserve, 1-B's history at UA gets explored, and Midoriya analyzes quirks.
But all three will find that their quirks don't leave the Joint Training the same as they entered.
Also, a bunny.
Setsuna Tokage, Neito Monoma and their quirks get the recognition they deserve, 1-B's history at UA gets explored, and Midoriya analyzes quirks.
But all three will find that their quirks don't leave the Joint Training the same as they entered.
Also, a bunny.
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**Between Ashido and Kirishima
**Between Kodai and Shouda
**Between Kuroiro and Komori
**Between Jiro and Kaminari
**Between Fukidashi and Hagakure thanks to both having invisble faces.
* SliceOfLife:Rather than having the dramatic tensions that the manga has this story lets teenagers acting as teenagers.
* ThisIsUnforgivable:Monoma towards Bakugou after seeing the memories of Bakugou bullying Izuku.He is determined to ruin Bakugou carrier as a hero
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** The History of 1B is explored with the quirk assement test and battle trials
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** The History of 1B is explored with the quirk assement test and battle trialstrials.
** Rather than being shown to be largely over at how he was treated when he was quirkless Midoriya is still shown to be affectd having scars from Bakugou treatment of him.
** Rather than being shown to be largely over at how he was treated when he was quirkless Midoriya is still shown to be affectd having scars from Bakugou treatment of him.
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** Rather than being the stepping stone for Bakugou's development Tokage is a mischievous teenager that wants to make her grand-aunt proud and is very insecure about her quirk.
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** Rather than being the stepping stone for Bakugou's development Tokage is a mischievous teenager that wants to make her grand-aunt proud and is very insecure about her quirk.quirk.
* RelatedInTheAdaptation:
** Honenuki is Cementoss nephew something that he was very smug about it,being his hero recommandation
** Third's daughter and Fifth Holder were lovers
** Recovery Girl is Setsuna's Great Aunt being the one that recommanded Setsuna.
* RotatingProtagonist:Rather than being in only Midoriya point of view the point of view rotates from one character to another.
* SeeTheInvisible:Thanks to being in pool the other students can see Hagakure's hair.
* SwitchingPOV:Rather than being the omniscient point of view,the point of view switch from one character to another.
* Ship Tease:There are several couples in the making:
**
* RelatedInTheAdaptation:
** Honenuki is Cementoss nephew something that he was very smug about it,being his hero recommandation
** Third's daughter and Fifth Holder were lovers
** Recovery Girl is Setsuna's Great Aunt being the one that recommanded Setsuna.
* RotatingProtagonist:Rather than being in only Midoriya point of view the point of view rotates from one character to another.
* SeeTheInvisible:Thanks to being in pool the other students can see Hagakure's hair.
* SwitchingPOV:Rather than being the omniscient point of view,the point of view switch from one character to another.
* Ship Tease:There are several couples in the making:
**
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** The greater focus towards Monoma instead of hating 1A because they got attacked by villains is that he hates Eraserhead thanks to getting compared to him his entire family.The 1A hating is a front,he is a quirk analyst maniac that hates quirk counselors,that he wants to make the world better for the quirkless thanks to his family being quirkless and having self-esteem issues.
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** The greater focus towards Monoma instead of hating 1A because they got attacked by villains is that he hates Eraserhead thanks to getting compared to him his entire family.The 1A hating is a front,he is a quirk analyst maniac that hates quirk counselors,that he wants to make the world better for the quirkless thanks to his family being quirkless and having self-esteem issues.issues.
** Rather than being the stepping stone for Bakugou's development Tokage is a mischievous teenager that wants to make her grand-aunt proud and is very insecure about her quirk.
** Rather than being the stepping stone for Bakugou's development Tokage is a mischievous teenager that wants to make her grand-aunt proud and is very insecure about her quirk.
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** The History of 1B is explored with the quirk assement test and battle trials
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** The History of 1B is explored with the quirk assement test and battle trialstrials
* AscendedExtra
** 1B class occups a predominant role in this story
** Setsuna rather than being used as a stepping stone for Bakugou's development is the deuteragonist with a greater focus on how she views her quirks
** Rather than being 1A hating fanatic that he is in canon Monoma is the tritagonist in this story
** It is given on the personal history of the past holders of One For All.
* ComingOfAgeStory: That's Tokage storyline on her grow as a future heroine.
* CharacterDepth:
** The greater focus towards Monoma instead of hating 1A because they got attacked by villains is that he hates Eraserhead thanks to getting compared to him his entire family.The 1A hating is a front,he is a quirk analyst maniac that hates quirk counselors,that he wants to make the world better for the quirkless thanks to his family being quirkless and having self-esteem issues.
* AscendedExtra
** 1B class occups a predominant role in this story
** Setsuna rather than being used as a stepping stone for Bakugou's development is the deuteragonist with a greater focus on how she views her quirks
** Rather than being 1A hating fanatic that he is in canon Monoma is the tritagonist in this story
** It is given on the personal history of the past holders of One For All.
* ComingOfAgeStory: That's Tokage storyline on her grow as a future heroine.
* CharacterDepth:
** The greater focus towards Monoma instead of hating 1A because they got attacked by villains is that he hates Eraserhead thanks to getting compared to him his entire family.The 1A hating is a front,he is a quirk analyst maniac that hates quirk counselors,that he wants to make the world better for the quirkless thanks to his family being quirkless and having self-esteem issues.
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** The excuse for Bakugou https://KarmaHoudini status in canon is that thanks to League of Villains debut in USJ,All Might retirement and the rise of crima levels and societal instability Aizawa can't expelle Bakugou thanks to the League potentially targeting him.
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** The excuse for Bakugou https://KarmaHoudini KarmaHoudini status in canon is that thanks to League of Villains debut in USJ,All Might retirement and the rise of crima levels and societal instability Aizawa can't expelle Bakugou thanks to the League potentially targeting him.
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** The excuse for Bakugou https://tvtropes.org/KarmaHoudini status in canon is that thanks to League of Villains debut in USJ,All Might retirement and the rise of crima levels and societal instability Aizawa can't expelle Bakugou thanks to the League potentially targeting him.
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** The excuse for Bakugou https://tvtropes.org/KarmaHoudini https://KarmaHoudini status in canon is that thanks to League of Villains debut in USJ,All Might retirement and the rise of crima levels and societal instability Aizawa can't expelle Bakugou thanks to the League potentially targeting him.
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** The excuse for Bakugou [[Karma Houdini]] status in canon is that thanks to League of Villains debut in USJ,All Might retirement and the rise of crima levels and societal instability Aizawa can't expelle Bakugou thanks to the League potentially targeting him.
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** The excuse for Bakugou [[Karma Houdini]] https://tvtropes.org/KarmaHoudini status in canon is that thanks to League of Villains debut in USJ,All Might retirement and the rise of crima levels and societal instability Aizawa can't expelle Bakugou thanks to the League potentially targeting him.
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** Rather than the quirk gene
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* Adaptation Expansion:
[[Adaptation Expansion]]:
** Rather than the quirkgenegene not getting transferred to Midoriya it given that the quirkless have incomplete or lethal quirks that will sooner kill them if activated.So rather than the human body getting killed by out of control quirks the quirk shuts down.
**The excuse for Bakugou [[Karma Houdini]] status in canon is that thanks to League of Villains debut in USJ,All Might retirement and the rise of crima levels and societal instability Aizawa can't expelle Bakugou thanks to the League potentially targeting him.
**The History of 1B is explored with the quirk assement test and battle trials
** Rather than the quirk
**The excuse for Bakugou [[Karma Houdini]] status in canon is that thanks to League of Villains debut in USJ,All Might retirement and the rise of crima levels and societal instability Aizawa can't expelle Bakugou thanks to the League potentially targeting him.
**The History of 1B is explored with the quirk assement test and battle trials
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/39912777/chapters/99939819 Torchbearer]] is an ongoing [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Manga/MyHeroAcademia My Hero Academia]] fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/FalseSeraph/pseuds/FalseSeraph FalseSeraph]]FalseSeraph]]
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A change in the mechanics of [OFA] and a change in the Joint Training team composition lead to an interesting discovery. A better relationship between members of 1-A and 1-B starts with Monoma copying [OFA], a bite from Tokage to stop [Black Whip]'s rampage, and Midoriya finding out that [Fa Jin] and [OFA] are a dangerous combination for the bearer.
Setsuna Tokage, Neito Monoma and their quirks get the recognition they deserve, 1-B's history at UA gets explored, and Midoriya analyzes quirks.
But all three will find that their quirks don't leave the Joint Training the same as they entered.
Also, a bunny.
[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/39912777/chapters/99939819 Torchbearer]] is an ongoing [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Manga/MyHeroAcademia My Hero Academia]] fic by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/FalseSeraph/pseuds/FalseSeraph]]org/users/FalseSeraph/pseuds/FalseSeraph FalseSeraph]]
Setsuna Tokage, Neito Monoma and their quirks get the recognition they deserve, 1-B's history at UA gets explored, and Midoriya analyzes quirks.
But all three will find that their quirks don't leave the Joint Training the same as they entered.
Also, a bunny.
[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/39912777/chapters/99939819 Torchbearer]] is an ongoing [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Manga/MyHeroAcademia My Hero Academia]] fic by [[https://archiveofourown.
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