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* DemonicPossession: What the Elder Grimm do to their victims.
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* DiscOneFinalBoss: [[Spoiler: Leviathan seems to be a final boss, but the true final boss is Cinder.]]
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* DiscOneFinalBoss: [[Spoiler: [[spoiler: Leviathan seems to be a final boss, but the true final boss is Cinder.]]
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* NoSocialSkills: [[spoiler:Adam]] proves to be this, due to him [[spoiler:never inhabiting the human world before Blake convinced him to]].
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* {{Sadist}}: Again, [[spoiler:Cinder]].
* SecretWar: One is fought by [[spoiler:the Hunters, led by Ozpin]] against the Grimm.
* SecretWar: One is fought by [[spoiler:the Hunters, led by Ozpin]] against the Grimm.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: [[spoiler:Jaune's ultimate fate.]]
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: [[spoiler:Happens to Jaune at the end of the fic.]]
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* DiscOneFinalBoss: [[Spoiler: Leviathan seems to be a final boss, but the true final boss is Cinder.]]
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* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler:Cinder]] proves to be one of these. As evidenced by [[spoiler:the two hundred people she has marked for possession]], [[spoiler:Cinder]] has resources unlike any other Grimm and is constantly one step or two ahead of Jaune and his allies.
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* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler:Cinder]] [[spoiler:Cinder proves to be one of these. As evidenced by [[spoiler:the the two hundred people she has marked for possession]], [[spoiler:Cinder]] possession, Cinder has resources unlike any other Grimm and is constantly one step or two ahead of Jaune and his allies.]]
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* ElementalPowers: Elder Grimm routinely have them, and anyone who kills them gains said powers. For instance, [[spoiler:Jaune]] develops [[MakingASplash water manipulation]], [[spoiler:Weiss]] has power over [[ThePowerOfTheSun sunlight]] and [[BlowYouAway potentially flight]], [[spoiler:Ruby]] can [[TimeMaster artificially age anything]], and [[spoiler:Cinder]] is a [[spoiler:fire-breathing dragon with [[HavingABlast explosion powers]]]].
* EvilCounterpart: Cinder to Ruby. At the end of the first arc, they've both lost the one being they loved more than anyone else in either world [[spoiler:(Yang for Ruby, Leviathan for Cinder)]], and are now focused on revenge [[spoiler: -- and they're also both sentient Grimm who have been inhabiting the human world for a long time]]. Unlike Ruby, who has Jaune and his friends to guide her through her grief, and is still a huntress dedicated to protecting humanity; Cinder is consumed by her desire to burn everything the heroes love down to nothing and spite them for the death of her mate.
* KilledOffForReal: A number of characters bite it in the fic, such as [[spoiler:Yang]] and [[spoiler:Pyrrha's parents]], while many others come within a hair's breadth of doing so.
* EvilCounterpart: Cinder to Ruby. At the end of the first arc, they've both lost the one being they loved more than anyone else in either world [[spoiler:(Yang for Ruby, Leviathan for Cinder)]], and are now focused on revenge [[spoiler: -- and they're also both sentient Grimm who have been inhabiting the human world for a long time]]. Unlike Ruby, who has Jaune and his friends to guide her through her grief, and is still a huntress dedicated to protecting humanity; Cinder is consumed by her desire to burn everything the heroes love down to nothing and spite them for the death of her mate.
* KilledOffForReal: A number of characters bite it in the fic, such as [[spoiler:Yang]] and [[spoiler:Pyrrha's parents]], while many others come within a hair's breadth of doing so.
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* ElementalPowers: Elder Grimm routinely have them, and anyone who kills them gains said powers. For instance, [[spoiler:Jaune]] [[spoiler:Jaune develops [[MakingASplash water manipulation]], [[spoiler:Weiss]] Weiss has power over [[ThePowerOfTheSun sunlight]] and [[BlowYouAway potentially flight]], [[spoiler:Ruby]] Ruby can [[TimeMaster artificially age anything]], and [[spoiler:Cinder]] Cinder is a [[spoiler:fire-breathing fire-breathing dragon with [[HavingABlast explosion powers]]]].
*EvilCounterpart: EvilCounterpart:[[spoiler: Cinder to Ruby. At the end of the first arc, they've both lost the one being they loved more than anyone else in either world [[spoiler:(Yang (Yang for Ruby, Leviathan for Cinder)]], Cinder), and are now focused on revenge [[spoiler: -- and they're also both sentient Grimm who have been inhabiting the human world for a long time]]. time. Unlike Ruby, who has Jaune and his friends to guide her through her grief, and is still a huntress dedicated to protecting humanity; Cinder is consumed by her desire to burn everything the heroes love down to nothing and spite them for the death of her mate.
mate.]]
* KilledOffForReal: A number of characters bite it in the fic, such as[[spoiler:Yang]] [[spoiler:Yang and [[spoiler:Pyrrha's Pyrrha's parents]], while many others come within a hair's breadth of doing so.
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* KilledOffForReal: A number of characters bite it in the fic, such as
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* SignatureScent: When Awakened smell those who are Grimm possessed (or those about to become so) in the human world, they have a signature scent that matches the powers of the Grimm hunting/possessing them. For instance, Jaune smells like salt water, [[spoiler:Weiss]] smells like a warm summer day, [[spoiler:Ruby]] has an odour of rotting flowers, and [[spoiler:every vessel of Cinder's]] smells like smoke and fire.
* TerribleTicking: Everyone marked for possession suffers this, in accordance with the nature of the Elder Grimm that hunts them. Jaune hears constant dripping, [[spoiler:Weiss]] hears a [[SinisterScrapingSound mirror cracking and breaking]], [[spoiler:Ruby]] hears a ticking clock, and [[spoiler:Nora]] hears the sounds of [[spoiler:Cinder's victims screaming as their souls burn and die by the Elder Grimm's hand]].
* TerribleTicking: Everyone marked for possession suffers this, in accordance with the nature of the Elder Grimm that hunts them. Jaune hears constant dripping, [[spoiler:Weiss]] hears a [[SinisterScrapingSound mirror cracking and breaking]], [[spoiler:Ruby]] hears a ticking clock, and [[spoiler:Nora]] hears the sounds of [[spoiler:Cinder's victims screaming as their souls burn and die by the Elder Grimm's hand]].
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* SignatureScent: When Awakened smell those who are Grimm possessed (or those about to become so) in the human world, they have a signature scent that matches the powers of the Grimm hunting/possessing them. For instance, Jaune instance,[[spoiler:Jaune smells like salt water, [[spoiler:Weiss]] Weiss smells like a warm summer day, [[spoiler:Ruby]] Ruby has an odour of rotting flowers, and [[spoiler:every every vessel of Cinder's]] smells Cinder'ssmells like smoke and fire.
fire.]]
* TerribleTicking: Everyone marked for possession suffers this, in accordance with the nature of the Elder Grimm that hunts them. Jaune hears constant dripping,[[spoiler:Weiss]] [[spoiler:Weiss hears a [[SinisterScrapingSound mirror cracking and breaking]], [[spoiler:Ruby]] Ruby hears a ticking clock, and [[spoiler:Nora]] Nora hears the sounds of [[spoiler:Cinder's Cinder's victims screaming as their souls burn and die by the Elder Grimm's hand]].
* TerribleTicking: Everyone marked for possession suffers this, in accordance with the nature of the Elder Grimm that hunts them. Jaune hears constant dripping,
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: [[spoiler:Jaune]]'s ultimate fate.
* TranshumanAbomination: Jaune and Weiss, partly: [[spoiler:killing the Elder Grimm that were respectively hounding their souls in the Grimm world [[YouKillItYouBoughtIt results in either of them inheriting that Grimm's body and elemental powers for themselves, being able to use the latter even in the human world]]. Jaune effectively fully becomes a Grimm when his human body on Earth is killed, leaving his soul with only his Leviathan body in the Grimm world]].
* TranshumanAbomination: Jaune and Weiss, partly: [[spoiler:killing the Elder Grimm that were respectively hounding their souls in the Grimm world [[YouKillItYouBoughtIt results in either of them inheriting that Grimm's body and elemental powers for themselves, being able to use the latter even in the human world]]. Jaune effectively fully becomes a Grimm when his human body on Earth is killed, leaving his soul with only his Leviathan body in the Grimm world]].
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: [[spoiler:Jaune]]'s [[spoiler:Jaune's ultimate fate.
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* TranshumanAbomination:Jaune [[spoiler:Jaune and Weiss, partly: [[spoiler:killing killing the Elder Grimm that were respectively hounding their souls in the Grimm world [[YouKillItYouBoughtIt results in either of them inheriting that Grimm's body and elemental powers for themselves, being able to use the latter even in the human world]]. Jaune effectively fully becomes a Grimm when his human body on Earth is killed, leaving his soul with only his Leviathan body in the Grimm world]].
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Happens to [[spoiler:Jaune]] at the end of the fic.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Happens [[spoiler:Happens to [[spoiler:Jaune]] Jaune at the end of the fic.]]
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* YoureInsane: [[spoiler:Weiss]] gets called this when trying to prove the Grimm's existence to her father, and gets shipped off to Vale to "recover" from her "illness".
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* YoureInsane: [[spoiler:Weiss]] [[spoiler:Weiss gets called this when trying to prove the Grimm's existence to her father, and gets shipped off to Vale to "recover" from her "illness".]]
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* DecompositeCharacter: Ruby Rose is actually split into two characters in this fic: [[spoiler:the human Ruby, and the Grimm possessing her body. It's revealed that the human Ruby's eyes were actually baby blue, and the trademark silver eyes in this continuity belong to the Grimm Ruby]].
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* DecompositeCharacter: [[spoiler: Ruby Rose is actually split into two characters in this fic: [[spoiler:the fic: the human Ruby, and the Grimm possessing her body. It's revealed that the human Ruby's eyes were actually baby blue, and the trademark silver eyes in this continuity belong to the Grimm Ruby]].
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* BittersweetEnding: After the final showdown between [[spoiler:Cinder]] and Jaune, the Nightmares have ceased, and Vale is now being repaired. However, [[spoiler:Pyrrha]] is now orphaned and [[spoiler:her father]]'s been blamed for the destruction caused by [[spoiler:Cinder when she possessed him]]. And Jaune himself? He's [[spoiler:stuck as Leviathan in the Grimm world, for the rest of eternity]].
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* BittersweetEnding: After [[spoiler:After the final showdown between [[spoiler:Cinder]] and Cinderand Jaune, the Nightmares have ceased, and Vale is now being repaired. However, [[spoiler:Pyrrha]] Pyrrha is now orphaned and [[spoiler:her father]]'s her father's been blamed for the destruction caused by [[spoiler:Cinder Cinder when she possessed him]]. him. And Jaune himself? He's [[spoiler:stuck stuck as Leviathan in the Grimm world, for the rest of eternity]].
