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* AllLoveIsUnrequited: [[spoiler: From Chapter 4 onwards, Vincenzo slowly starts to develop feelings for Luca, who is already head over heels for Alberto]].
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-> '''Luca (when talking to Giulia after he talked it out with Rosa regarding the misunderstanding about Rosa's question)''': Yeah she (Rosa) must have thought I didn’t like
-> her or something. But I can’t think of anyone I don’t like except maybe that catfish -> from Porto Rosso (Ercole).
-->-- ''Fanfic/TheStoryOfApolloDaphneAndLucaAnItalianTragedy'', Chapter 1
-> her or something. But I can’t think of anyone I don’t like except maybe that catfish -> from Porto Rosso (Ercole).
-->-- ''Fanfic/TheStoryOfApolloDaphneAndLucaAnItalianTragedy'', Chapter 1
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-> '''Luca (when talking to Giulia after he talked it out with Rosa regarding the misunderstanding about Rosa's question)''': Yeah ''Yeah she (Rosa) must have thought I didn’t like
I'' ''didn’t''
-> ''like her or something. But I can’t think of anyone I don’t like except maybethat catfish -> that'' ''catfish from Porto Rosso (Ercole).
(Ercole).''
-->-- ''Fanfic/TheStoryOfApolloDaphneAndLucaAnItalianTragedy'',Chapter 1''Chapter 1''
-> ''like her or something. But I can’t think of anyone I don’t like except maybe
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-> Luca (when talking to Giulia after he talked it out with Rosa regarding the misunderstanding about Rosa's question): Yeah she (Rosa) must have thought I didn’t like -> her or something. But I can’t think of anyone I don’t like except maybe that catfish from Porto Rosso (Ercole).
—->-- ''Fanfic/TheStoryOfApolloDaphneAndLucaAnItalianTragedy'', Chapter 1
—->-- ''Fanfic/TheStoryOfApolloDaphneAndLucaAnItalianTragedy'', Chapter 1
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-> Luca '''Luca (when talking to Giulia after he talked it out with Rosa regarding the misunderstanding about Rosa's question): question)''': Yeah she (Rosa) must have thought I didn’t like like
-> her or something. But I can’t think of anyone I don’t like except maybe that catfish -> from Porto Rosso (Ercole).
—->-- -->-- ''Fanfic/TheStoryOfApolloDaphneAndLucaAnItalianTragedy'', Chapter 1
-> her or something. But I can’t think of anyone I don’t like except maybe that catfish -> from Porto Rosso (Ercole).
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* EvenTheLovingHeroHasHatedOnes: While extremely friendly and forgiving, Luca strongly dislikes Sofia since she tried to steal the boy he's in love with, Alberto, away from him and, obviously, Ercole.
-> Luca (when talking to Giulia after he talked it out with Rosa regarding the misunderstanding about Rosa's question): Yeah she (Rosa) must have thought I didn’t like -> her or something. But I can’t think of anyone I don’t like except maybe that catfish from Porto Rosso (Ercole).
—->-- ''Fanfic/TheStoryOfApolloDaphneAndLucaAnItalianTragedy'', Chapter 1
-> Luca (when talking to Giulia after he talked it out with Rosa regarding the misunderstanding about Rosa's question): Yeah she (Rosa) must have thought I didn’t like -> her or something. But I can’t think of anyone I don’t like except maybe that catfish from Porto Rosso (Ercole).
—->-- ''Fanfic/TheStoryOfApolloDaphneAndLucaAnItalianTragedy'', Chapter 1
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* SympathyForTheHero: [[spoiler: In Chapter 5, In spite of being a haughty jerk and a petty bully, [[BigJerkOnCampus Vincenzo]] feels genuinely concerned about Luca's emotional state after his fight with Giulia]].
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* LoveAtFirstSight: Once she lays her eyes on [[PrettyBoy Alberto]], [[FilleFatalle Sofia]] develops a huge crush on him.
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* LoveAtFirstSight: Once she lays her eyes on [[PrettyBoy Alberto]], [[FilleFatalle Sofia]] develops a huge crush on him.
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* LittleMissSnarker: Bianca has a pretty dry wit for such a young girl.
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* HyperCompetentSidekick: When solving the mystery regarding Vincenzo's strange feelings whenever he's around [[spoiler: Luca]], Bianca proves to be cleverer and more sharp-witted than [[Cloudcuckoolander Vincenzo]].
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* HyperCompetentSidekick: When solving the mystery regarding Vincenzo's strange feelings whenever he's around [[spoiler: Luca]], Bianca proves to be cleverer and more sharp-witted than [[Cloudcuckoolander [[{{Cloudcuckoolander}} Vincenzo]].
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* HyperCompetentSidekick: When solving the mystery regarding Vincenzo's strange feelings whenever he's around [[spoiler: Luca]], Bianca proves to be cleverer and more sharp-witted than [[Cloudcuckoolander Vincenzo]].
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* EnragedByIdiocy: {{Downplayed}} with [[OnlySaneWoman Bianca]], while not prone to anger, always gets pretty annoyed by [[spoiler: Vincenzo's obliviousness to his own crush on Luca]].
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* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: In Chapter 3, Alberto, after taking Luca to school and giving him a hug before going back to Caterina's home, receives a DeathGlare from [[BigJerkOnCampus Vincenzo]], the most popular boy in the school. Alberto, being the bold and fearless young boy he is, doesn't hesitate to return the scowl.
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* OhCrap: At the end of the third chapter, Luca goes in a total state of panic once he realizes that [[{{Jerkass}} Vincenzo]] found out about his secret crush on Alberto.
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* IrrationalHatred: Once Alberto comes to Genoa, [[spoiler: Vincenzo]] takes an immediate to him, but doesn't understand why. [[spoiler: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] in Chapter 4 where he slowly starts to understand that, due to be in love with Luca, he hates Alberto because he's very close to Luca]].
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* ClingyJealousGirl: [[ImpliedTrope Implied]] with [[FilleFatale Sofia]] who, when Alberto was about to home along with Luca, immediately grabbed his arm and pleaded him stay with her for another while while coyly flattering her eyelashes and got very disappointed when Luca managed to free Alberto from her grip.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: [[ImpliedTrope Implied]] with [[FilleFatale Sofia]] Sofia]], who, when Alberto was about to home along with Luca, immediately grabbed his arm and pleaded him stay with her for another while while coyly flattering her eyelashes and got very disappointed when Luca managed to free Alberto from her grip.
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* ClingyJealousGirl: [[ImpliedTrope Implied]] with [[FilleFatale Sofia]] who, when Alberto was about to home along with Luca, immediately grabbed his arm and pleaded him stay with her for another while while coyly flattering her eyelashes and got very disappointed when Luca managed to free Alberto from her grip.
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* DrivenByEnvy: [[BigJerkOnCampus Vincenzo]] is very jealous of Luca's popularity and strong bond with Giulia and often act quite rude and spiteful towards him because of this.
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* CrazyJealousGuy: [[BigJerkOnCampus Vincenzo]] is quite mad that his crush Giulia has such a good relationship with Luca (even if it's [[PlatonicLifePartners purely platonic]] in spite of what Vincenzo [[ImaginaryLoveTriangle thinks]] and, in the first chapter, even tries to make Luca look back in front of everyone just because of a misunderstanding with Rosa. Then, in the fourth character, he [[{{Blackmail}} blackmails]] poor Luca to get him a date with Giulia by threatening him to tell the whole school about his crush on Alberto if he wouldn't do what he has been told.
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* UnconvincinglyUnpopularCharacter: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] with Giulia since she's not heavily bullied, but is still seen as weird and strange (mostly because of her [[CelibateHeroine lack of desire of finding a romantic partner]]) by her classmates in spite of being a fun, smart and friendly girl with a sociable and adventurous personality.
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* UnconvincinglyUnpopularCharacter: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] with Giulia since she's not heavily bullied, but is still seen as weird and strange (mostly because of her [[CelibateHeroine lack of desire of finding a romantic partner]]) by her classmates in spite of being a fun, smart and friendly girl with a sociable and adventurous personality.
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* CoolLoser: [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] with Giulia since she's not heavily bullied, but is still seen as weird and strange (mostly because of her [[CelibateHeroine lack of desire of finding a romantic partner]]) by her classmates in spite of being a fun, smart and friendly girl with a sociable and adventurous personality.
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* MoralityPet: [[spoiler: Luca]] eventually becomes this to [[spoiler: Vincenzo]].
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* BlondeBrunetteAndRedhead: The story's main [[{{Deuteragonist}} deuteragonists]]: popular and charming blond Vincenzo, spunky and free-spirited brunet Alberto and brash and HotBlooded redhead Giulia.
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* GirlPosse: Rosa's group of friends, who briefly appear in the story's first chapter, are a rare heroic example, being them sweet, kind, supportive and open-minded.
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* GirlPosse: Rosa's group of friends, who briefly appear in the story's first chapter, are a rare heroic example, being them sweet, kind, supportive and open-minded.
