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* PersonAsVerb: Saudi Arabia felt their economy threatened by dragons. So they started killing dragons. Harry promptly delivered a bitch slap visible to orbiting satellites with infrared cameras.
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* PersonAsVerb: Saudi Arabia felt their economy threatened by dragons. So they started killing dragons. Harry promptly delivered a bitch b---h slap visible to orbiting satellites with infrared cameras.
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The original author's wife allowed another writer: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9879605/viningc viningc]] to finish book 3. [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13263598/1/Beneath-Sovereign-Skies-Chapter-19 Beneath Sovereign skies Chapter 19]] feels like the final chapter of book 3, but the brickwork and paint don't quite match the original. Their next offering, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14051048/1/The-Dragons-Return The Dragons Return]] is a massive case of YMMV and possibly FanonDiscontinuity.
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The original author's wife allowed another writer: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/9879605/viningc viningc]] to finish book 3. [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13263598/1/Beneath-Sovereign-Skies-Chapter-19 Beneath Sovereign skies Skies Chapter 19]] feels like the final chapter of book 3, but the brickwork and paint don't quite match the original. Their next offering, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14051048/1/The-Dragons-Return The Dragons Return]] is a massive case of YMMV and possibly FanonDiscontinuity.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: most Hogwarts students, when they realized everything they put Harry through led to him [[DrivenToSuicide trying to commit suicide by dragon]]. Particularly Hermione, who blames herself most, as she decided to not take sides in the fight between Harry and Ron at a time where Harry would have needed her help.
** She doesn't appear to learn from this, though, as she gets stroppy with Harry in the sequel [[spoiler:about whether or not a rider can control themselves when their dragon rises to mate for the first time (answer: they can't)]]. She breaks off their relationship [[spoiler:when he has sex with Susan Bones after she stepped in when Hermione did not]] and regards him as [[spoiler:a sex-mad "typical" male]] until it happens to ''her'' and she realises that she was wrong. She is then devastated, thinking that she's ruined their friendship and any chance of anything more. She is lucky that Harry is willing to forgive her mistake.
** She doesn't appear to learn from this, though, as she gets stroppy with Harry in the sequel [[spoiler:about whether or not a rider can control themselves when their dragon rises to mate for the first time (answer: they can't)]]. She breaks off their relationship [[spoiler:when he has sex with Susan Bones after she stepped in when Hermione did not]] and regards him as [[spoiler:a sex-mad "typical" male]] until it happens to ''her'' and she realises that she was wrong. She is then devastated, thinking that she's ruined their friendship and any chance of anything more. She is lucky that Harry is willing to forgive her mistake.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: most Most Hogwarts students, when they realized everything they put Harry through led to him [[DrivenToSuicide trying to commit suicide by dragon]]. Particularly Hermione, who blames herself most, as she decided to not take sides in the fight between Harry and Ron at a time where Harry would have needed her help.
** She doesn't appear to learn from this, though, as she gets stroppy with Harry in the sequel [[spoiler:about whether or not a rider can control themselves when their dragon rises to mate for the first time (answer: they can't)]]. She breaks off their relationship [[spoiler:when he has sex with Susan Bones after she stepped in when Hermione did not]] and regards him as [[spoiler:a sex-mad "typical" male]] until it happens to ''her'' and sherealises realizes that she was wrong. She is then devastated, thinking that she's ruined their friendship and any chance of anything more. She is lucky that Harry is willing to forgive her mistake.
** She doesn't appear to learn from this, though, as she gets stroppy with Harry in the sequel [[spoiler:about whether or not a rider can control themselves when their dragon rises to mate for the first time (answer: they can't)]]. She breaks off their relationship [[spoiler:when he has sex with Susan Bones after she stepped in when Hermione did not]] and regards him as [[spoiler:a sex-mad "typical" male]] until it happens to ''her'' and she
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* StableTimeLoop. The existence of this as well as the minor temporal paradoxes the dragons have caused is brought up in chapter 6.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Wizards and witches won't just destroy someone's wand just because it's abandoned, or made with dragon heartstrings. They will, however, destroy an abandoned wand with a dragon heartstring core. When a dragon and rider on sentry patrol duty encounter a wizard snooping around the perimeter of the weyr, he gets stunned and relieved of his wands. when they are determined to be made with dragon heartstrings, they are summarily dumped on the ground, like trash.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Wizards and witches won't just destroy someone's wand just because it's abandoned, or made with dragon heartstrings. They will, however, destroy an abandoned wand with a dragon heartstring core. When a dragon and rider on sentry patrol duty encounter a wizard snooping around the perimeter of the weyr, he gets stunned and relieved of his wands. when When they are determined to be made with dragon heartstrings, they are summarily dumped on the ground, like trash.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Wizards and witches won't just destroy someone's wand just because it's abandoned, or made with dragon heartstrings. They will, however, destroy an abandoned wand with a dragon heartstring core. When a dragon and rider on sentry patrol duty encounter a wizard snooping around the perimeter of the weyr, he gets stunned and relieved of his wands. when they are determined to be made with dragon heartstrings, they are summarily dumped on the ground, like trash.
--> "Oh look. These two wands are made with dragon heartstrings and are sitting around, unattended. My dragon, Would you mind incinerating these offensive, unattended things?"
--> "Oh look. These two wands are made with dragon heartstrings and are sitting around, unattended. My dragon, Would you mind incinerating these offensive, unattended things?"
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[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheGobletOfFire When the Goblet of Fire mysteriously chooses Harry as the fourth Champion in the Triwizard Tournament]], he is forced to compete in it against his will and abandoned by his friends Ron and Hermione. With nothing to help him hold himself together, when he steps out of the tent, he only has one goal in mind: [[DrivenToSuicide suicide]].
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[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheGobletOfFire When the Goblet of Fire mysteriously chooses Harry as the fourth Champion in the Triwizard Tournament]], he is forced to compete in it against his will and abandoned by his friends Ron and Hermione. With nothing to help him hold himself together, when he steps out of the tent, he only has one goal in mind: [[DrivenToSuicide suicide]].Suicide]].
