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Read it [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9305815/1/The-Merry-Killers here]].

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* FiveBadBand: Given they're ''assassins,'' this fits better than FiveManBand.

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* FiveBadBand: FiveManBand: Given they're ''assassins,'' this fits better than FiveManBand.
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** [[SailorMoon Haruka Tenoh]] shows up in Chapter 8, facing Motoko in a friendly spar. This is also an EarlyBirdCameo - as of the time of its writing, Sailor Uranus hadn't yet shown up in [[Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon BDSM]] yet.

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** [[SailorMoon [[Franchise/SailorMoon Haruka Tenoh]] shows up in Chapter 8, facing Motoko in a friendly spar. This is also an EarlyBirdCameo - as of the time of its writing, Sailor Uranus hadn't yet shown up in [[Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon BDSM]] yet.

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* AdaptationalBadass: Every girl at the Hinata Sou from Haruka to Shinobu is a skilled assassin. Even Kitsune, who specializes in organizing and managing their hits, manages to hold her own against Golgo. While Keitaro isn't an assassin or even really a fighter, he's still NighInvulnerable, even shrugging off JumpingOnAGrenade and being annoyed at most upon being hit by a sniper round.



* BewareTheNiceOnes: Shinobu is the same sweet little girl she is in canon, but also has a split personality (named Red) with a higher kill count than the other Hinata Sou assassins combined. It's especially obvious when Red mentions liking Keitaro as a reason for Motoko to stop trying to kill him. After hearing this, Kitsune suggests Motoko just give up lest Red blow off her hands.



* MuggingTheMonster: The yakuza that targeted Kitsune learn the hard way that she belongs to the Urashima Clan and the Urashima belong to [[spoiler:the Emperor of Japan]].



* RealityEnsues: What could someone of Naru's strength do if she punched someone other than Keitaro? Her punch turns his head into a fine mist.



* SplitPersonality: As result of Shinobu's harsh training, she has a second personality called "Red" who embodies her murderous side. Wearing red clothing, no matter how small, causes this personality to come out.
** In Chapter 4, a half-asleep Shinobu begs Motoko not to kill Keitaro. When Motoko persists, "Red" emerges to tell the swordswoman, "Then I'll just blow off your hands."
** At the end, a red-bordered mirror lets Shinobu and "Red" have a conversation, which has them wonder, "how do we get him for ourself?"

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* SplitPersonality: As result of Shinobu's harsh training, she has a second personality called "Red" who embodies her murderous side. Wearing red clothing, no matter how small, causes this personality to come out.
** In Chapter 4,
out. She also uses a half-asleep Shinobu begs Motoko not small mirror lined with red tape to kill Keitaro. When Motoko persists, communicate with red.
* SuperPoweredEvilSide:
"Red" emerges for Shinobu.
** Keitaro seems
to tell the swordswoman, "Then I'll just blow off your hands."
** At the end, a red-bordered mirror lets Shinobu and "Red"
have a conversation, which has them wonder, "how do we get him for ourself?"one as well.
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Kitsune is Team Mom, managing the teams. After Keitaro saves her from Golgo 13, Itachi gives his blessing to Keitaro.


** TheDragon: Kitsune, who also manages the people on each job.

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** TheDragon: Kitsune, who also manages the people on each job. She's also the TeamMom, in which Keitaro admits "Kitsune means everything to our house." It causes an OhCrap moment with Kitsune, though [[spoiler: when her father, Itachi, tells Keitaro "It's not every day that a man impresses a girl's father enough to gain his blessing!" When she realizes what Itachi did, she tries to argues Keitaro's already Naru's boyfriend, which he replies "None of that, you two are best friends, I'm sure you can share." Cue FacePalm by Kitsune and laugh from Naru while Keitaro blushes]].
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** Chapter 6 had Kitsune say "Hellsing ARMS, I am your loyal customer ''for life.''" When Shinobu asks where Haruka could have gotten what's hinted to be the [[TheDukesofHazzard "General Lee"]] on Molmol, Su just goes, "Oh, everyone in Molmol loves the Dukes!"

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** Chapter 6 had Kitsune say "Hellsing ARMS, I am your loyal customer ''for life.''" When Shinobu asks where Haruka could have gotten what's hinted to be the [[TheDukesofHazzard [[Series/TheDukesOfHazzard "General Lee"]] on Molmol, Su just goes, "Oh, everyone in Molmol loves the Dukes!"
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*** TortureTechnician: Acts as this for Granny Hina as well. Haruka has [[TortureCellar a room full of autopsy tools]] to [[OnceKilledAManWithANoodleImplement dispose of those who get brought to her]] after ColdBloodedTorture, including a "Kikuchi" that Itachi Konno brought her, and in the sister fanfic [[Fanfic/TheKeyToASuccessfulInterview]] Haruka also disposes of Brad Shishioh, leader of the "Red Bulls," after he was "asked not to go to a certain place, but you went anyway, and as a result you saw [[NoodleIncident something only a priviledged few are ever allowed to survive after.]]" She also adds, "By the way, for referring to Auntie Nodoka as a 'Monster,' I'm going to make your nightmare long and painful."

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*** TortureTechnician: Acts as this for Granny Hina as well. Haruka has [[TortureCellar a room full of autopsy tools]] to [[OnceKilledAManWithANoodleImplement dispose of those who get brought to her]] after ColdBloodedTorture, including a "Kikuchi" that Itachi Konno brought her, and in chapter 34 of the sister fanfic [[Fanfic/TheKeyToASuccessfulInterview]] ''The Key To A Successful Interview'' Haruka also disposes of Brad Shishioh, leader of the "Red Bulls," after he was "asked not to go to a certain place, but you went anyway, and as a result you saw [[NoodleIncident something only a priviledged few are ever allowed to survive after.]]" She also adds, "By the way, for referring to Auntie Nodoka as a 'Monster,' I'm going to make your nightmare long and painful."

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Haruka is a Torture Technician who also disposes of others brought to her.


* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: Knowing Kitsune is more dangerous than she looks, Golgo 13 realizes the only way he can kill her is to induce [[HeroicBSOD a major case of Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder]] before doing so. He didn't count on [[SpannerInTheWorks an UNKILLABLE Keitaro]] protecting Kitsune, though.]]



* FiveBadBand:
** TheBigBad: Haruka Urashima, [[spoiler: especially in Chapter 10, when she tells Su "Spread the word, we're wiping out the Takimaru group. No survivors." This after said group kidnaps Kitsune, her father Itachi, and Keitaro]].

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* FiveBadBand:
FiveBadBand: Given they're ''assassins,'' this fits better than FiveManBand.
** TheBigBad: Haruka Urashima, [[spoiler: especially in Chapter 10, when she tells Su "Spread the word, we're wiping out the Takimaru group. No survivors." This after said group kidnaps Kitsune, her father Itachi, and Keitaro]]. She's the link to Granny Hina to the girls, but she gets the data for their missions as well.
*** TortureTechnician: Acts as this for Granny Hina as well. Haruka has [[TortureCellar a room full of autopsy tools]] to [[OnceKilledAManWithANoodleImplement dispose of those who get brought to her]] after ColdBloodedTorture, including a "Kikuchi" that Itachi Konno brought her, and in the sister fanfic [[Fanfic/TheKeyToASuccessfulInterview]] Haruka also disposes of Brad Shishioh, leader of the "Red Bulls," after he was "asked not to go to a certain place, but you went anyway, and as a result you saw [[NoodleIncident something only a priviledged few are ever allowed to survive after.]]" She also adds, "By the way, for referring to Auntie Nodoka as a 'Monster,' I'm going to make your nightmare long and painful."
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** TheBrute: There are ''three'' in rotation: Motoko the skilled "Man-Slayer" swordswoman, Naru of amazing strength who can punch to mist a target's head, and "Red" when she takes on the Z-Boys.

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** TheBrute: There are ''three'' in rotation: Motoko the skilled "Man-Slayer" swordswoman, Naru of amazing strength who can punch to mist a target's head, and "Red" when she takes on the Z-Boys.who greatly enjoys killing period.

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* BriefcaseFullOfMoney: [[spoiler: Ten Million US Dollars, and first-class plane tickets to the destination of the his choice lets Haruka buy out Golgo 13's contract on Kitsune. He accepts, seeing he's also surrounded. Haruka also throws in getting him "patched up" before the flight as well.]]



** Chapter 10 has a gun-woman hinted to be [[Fanfic/TheKeyToASuccessfulInterview Nodoka Saotome]] armed with a Kalashnikov rifle taking out Yakuza at one of their warehouses.

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** Chapter 10 has a gun-woman hinted to be [[Fanfic/TheKeyToASuccessfulInterview Nodoka Saotome]] armed with a Kalashnikov rifle taking out Yakuza at one of their warehouses. [[spoiler: Before she was a Saotome, Nodoka was born a Urashima.]]


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** In Chapter 4, a half-asleep Shinobu begs Motoko not to kill Keitaro. When Motoko persists, "Red" emerges to tell the swordswoman, "Then I'll just blow off your hands."
** At the end, a red-bordered mirror lets Shinobu and "Red" have a conversation, which has them wonder, "how do we get him for ourself?"
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Finished the Band

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** TheEvilGenius: Su, who designs special armor for everyone as well as for the house (it's self-repairing!).
** TheDarkChick: Keitaro, [[spoiler: though in Chapter 10, he tells Kitsune, "You're not... the only monster..." as the red glow fades from his irises, which also have a horizontal red line across the sclera, hinting he dug within.]]
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* BoomHeadshot:
** Naru does a fist-based version with her infamous "Naru Punch," in which an assassin's head gets turned into a cloud of red mist and short-cut hair. Keitaro is the only one who it can't hurt.
** As a ColdSniper, Kitsune has done a few.


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* FiveBadBand:
** TheBigBad: Haruka Urashima, [[spoiler: especially in Chapter 10, when she tells Su "Spread the word, we're wiping out the Takimaru group. No survivors." This after said group kidnaps Kitsune, her father Itachi, and Keitaro]].
** TheDragon: Kitsune, who also manages the people on each job.
** TheBrute: There are ''three'' in rotation: Motoko the skilled "Man-Slayer" swordswoman, Naru of amazing strength who can punch to mist a target's head, and "Red" when she takes on the Z-Boys.
* TheFixer: Haruka has arranged for transportation, and gear and weapons Su cannot create. She also arranges the jobs the girls take.


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* PunctuatedPounding: Done with periods and not exclamation marks, but as Kitsune neutralizes one gunman after another with her sniper rifle, "This is the best gun in the world. I hit. Every. Mark."


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** Chapter 6 had Kitsune say "Hellsing ARMS, I am your loyal customer ''for life.''" When Shinobu asks where Haruka could have gotten what's hinted to be the [[TheDukesofHazzard "General Lee"]] on Molmol, Su just goes, "Oh, everyone in Molmol loves the Dukes!"


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** Chapter 10 has a gun-woman hinted to be [[Fanfic/TheKeyToASuccessfulInterview Nodoka Saotome]] armed with a Kalashnikov rifle taking out Yakuza at one of their warehouses.
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''The Merry Killers'' is the latest fanfic by the Sage of Toads, and takes place in the same universe as ''Fanfic/TheKeyToASuccessfulInterview'' and '''Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon''.

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''The Merry Killers'' is the latest fanfic by the Sage of Toads, and takes place in the same universe as ''Fanfic/TheKeyToASuccessfulInterview'' and '''Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon''.
''Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon''.
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** [[SailorMoon Haruka Tenoh]] shows up in Chapter 8, facing Mokoto in a friendly spar. This is also an EarlyBirdCameo - as of the time of its writing, Sailor Uranus hadn't yet shown up in [[Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon BDSM]] yet.

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** [[SailorMoon Haruka Tenoh]] shows up in Chapter 8, facing Mokoto Motoko in a friendly spar. This is also an EarlyBirdCameo - as of the time of its writing, Sailor Uranus hadn't yet shown up in [[Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon BDSM]] yet.
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** [[SailorMoon Haruka Tenoh]] shows up in Chapter 8, facing Mokoto in a friendly match. This is also an EarlyBirdCameo - as of the time of its writing, Sailor Uranus hadn't yet shown up in [[Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon BDSM]] yet.
** Chapter 10 features the abandoned [[LightNovel/FullMetalPanic Jindai High]].

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** [[SailorMoon Haruka Tenoh]] shows up in Chapter 8, facing Mokoto in a friendly match.spar. This is also an EarlyBirdCameo - as of the time of its writing, Sailor Uranus hadn't yet shown up in [[Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon BDSM]] yet.
** Chapter 10 9 features the abandoned [[LightNovel/FullMetalPanic Jindai High]].
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** Chapter 10 features the abandoned [[LightNovel/FullMetalPanic Jindai High]].
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Ading something.

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** [[SailorMoon Haruka Tenoh]] shows up in Chapter 8, facing Mokoto in a friendly match. This is also an EarlyBirdCameo - as of the time of its writing, Sailor Uranus hadn't yet shown up in [[Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon BDSM]] yet.
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** To explain, they actually get together in the third chapter, after Naru's identity as the [[ChildhoodMarriagePromise "Promise Girl"]] was revealed along with Keitaro inheriting the Hinata-sou. Naru sees it as fate having them reunite after all those years and decides to sleep with Keitaro shortly after.

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** To explain, they actually get together in the third chapter, after Naru's identity as the [[ChildhoodMarriagePromise "Promise Girl"]] was revealed along with Keitaro inheriting the Hinata-sou. Naru sees it as fate having them reunite after all those years and decides to sleep with Keitaro shortly after.after.

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Tha Urashima are [[ProfessionalKiller assassins]] who work for the Emperor himself! And apparently, more than one of the Hinata-Sou girls are the same!

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Tha The Urashima clan are [[ProfessionalKiller assassins]] who work for the Emperor himself! And apparently, more than one of the Hinata-Sou girls are the same!
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* SHoutOut: As per the course in Sage of Toads fics. Examples include Deadpool himself being given half a billion dollars, put on an island with Keitaro, and told to go nuts with the money to try and kill Keitaro...It all failed.

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* SHoutOut: ShoutOut: As per the course in Sage of Toads fics. Examples include Deadpool himself being given half a billion dollars, put on an island with Keitaro, and told to go nuts with the money to try and kill Keitaro...It all failed.
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* SHoutOut: As per the course in Sage of Toads fics. Examples include Deadpool himself being given half a billion dollars, put on an island with Keitaro, and told to go nuts with the money to try and kill Keitaro...It all failed.
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Read it here:
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* SpiltPersonality: As result of Shinobu's harsh training, she has a second personality called "Red" who embodies her murderous side. Wearing red clothing, no matter how small, causes this personality to come out.

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* SpiltPersonality: SplitPersonality: As result of Shinobu's harsh training, she has a second personality called "Red" who embodies her murderous side. Wearing red clothing, no matter how small, causes this personality to come out.



** To explain, they actually get together in the third chapter.

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** To explain, they actually get together in the third chapter.chapter, after Naru's identity as the [[ChildhoodMarriagePromise "Promise Girl"]] was revealed along with Keitaro inheriting the Hinata-sou. Naru sees it as fate having them reunite after all those years and decides to sleep with Keitaro shortly after.

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''The Merry Killers'' is the latest fanfic by the Sage of Toads, and takes place in the same universe as "Fanfic/TheKeyToASuccessfulInterview" and "Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon."

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''The Merry Killers'' is the latest fanfic by the Sage of Toads, and takes place in the same universe as "Fanfic/TheKeyToASuccessfulInterview" ''Fanfic/TheKeyToASuccessfulInterview'' and "Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon."
'''Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon''.



Tha Urashima are assassins who work for the Emperor himself!

And apparently,more than one of the Hinata-Sou girls are the same!

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Tha Urashima are assassins [[ProfessionalKiller assassins]] who work for the Emperor himself!

himself! And apparently,more apparently, more than one of the Hinata-Sou girls are the same!


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* ChildSoldier: Mitsune's family are trained to kill at a very young age.
* ImmortalityHurts: Keitaro may not be killable (so far), but he can still feel pain.
* SpiltPersonality: As result of Shinobu's harsh training, she has a second personality called "Red" who embodies her murderous side. Wearing red clothing, no matter how small, causes this personality to come out.
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And apprently,more than one of the Hinata-Sou girls are the same!

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And apprently,more apparently,more than one of the Hinata-Sou girls are the same!



* UnresolvedSexualTension: The legendary Naru/Keitaro relationship passes this stage VERY early.

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* UnresolvedSexualTension: The legendary Naru/Keitaro relationship passes this stage VERY early.early.
** To explain, they actually get together in the third chapter.
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''The Merry Killers'' is the latest fanfic by the Sage of Toads, and takes place in the same universe as "Fanfic/KeyToASuccessfulInterview" and "Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon."

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''The Merry Killers'' is the latest fanfic by the Sage of Toads, and takes place in the same universe as "Fanfic/KeyToASuccessfulInterview" "Fanfic/TheKeyToASuccessfulInterview" and "Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon."
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''The Merry Killers'' is the latest fanfic by the Sage of Toads, and takes place in the same universe as "Key to a Successful Interview" and "Beautiful Destroyer Sailor Moon."

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''The Merry Killers'' is the latest fanfic by the Sage of Toads, and takes place in the same universe as "Key to a Successful Interview" "Fanfic/KeyToASuccessfulInterview" and "Beautiful Destroyer Sailor Moon."Fanfic/BeautifulDestroyerSailorMoon."
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''The Meery Killers'' is the latest fanfic by the Sage of Toads, and takes place in the same universe as "Key to a Successful Interview" and "Beautiful Destroyer Sailor Moon."

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''The Meery Merry Killers'' is the latest fanfic by the Sage of Toads, and takes place in the same universe as "Key to a Successful Interview" and "Beautiful Destroyer Sailor Moon."
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''The Meery Killers'' is the latest fanfic by the Sage of Toads, and takes place in the same universe as "Key to a Successful Interview" and "Beautiful Destroyer Sailor Moon."

As is usual for a Sage of Toads fanfic, the fic is a deconstruction of Love Hina.

The twist?

Tha Urashima are assassins who work for the Emperor himself!

And apprently,more than one of the Hinata-Sou girls are the same!

Read it here:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9305815/1/The-Merry-Killers

This fanfic has examples of:

* UnresolvedSexualTension: The legendary Naru/Keitaro relationship passes this stage VERY early.

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