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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14207817/1/Flowing-Star The Loud House: Flowing Star]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' fanfic set in an AlternateUniverse by Mr Dough focused on Stella Zhau and Lincoln into a modified version of Royal Woods.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14207817/1/Flowing-Star The Loud House: Flowing Star]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' fanfic set in an AlternateUniverse AlternateTimeline by Mr Dough (also called [=DoughB101=]) focused on Stella Zhau and Lincoln into a modified version of Royal Woods.
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The page has a [[Characters/FlowingStar character sheet]], as well as a (Work In Progress) [[Recap/FlowingStar recap page]].
The fanfic had a minor rewrite during 2 of June expanding and changing some elements from the original write-up.
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* AdaptationDeviation: While the story picks up part of the setting and some of the characters, the characterization, designs and relationships are changed. One example is Stella who instead of being an average girl and sole female from Lincoln's group, is instead more {{tomboy}}ish than her canon self and her sole friend is Lincoln.
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* AlternateContinuity: The fanfic is set into a new timeline and different canon taking place after a [[BroadStrokes Pseudo]] Season 1 from the original ''The Loud House'', where Stella still came to Royal Woods and met Lincoln, but the boy has a dark past and there's people with a vendetta against him.
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* AlternateContinuity: AlternateTimeline: The fanfic is set into a new timeline and different canon taking place after a [[BroadStrokes Pseudo]] pseudo version of Season 1 1]] from the original ''The Loud House'', where Lincoln did something that landed him on juvie, and Stella still came to Royal Woods but they still became friends after she saved him from Chandler and met Lincoln, his goons, but the boy has a dark past and there's people with a vendetta against him.
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The story can also be read in Website/{{Deviantart}} [[https://www.deviantart.com/doughb101/gallery/86874238/flowing-star here]], in Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/47587219/chapters/119934142#workskin here]] and Website/{{Wattpad}} [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/354307032-the-loud-house-flowing-star here]].
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The story can also be read in Website/{{Deviantart}} [[https://www.deviantart.com/doughb101/gallery/86874238/flowing-star here]], in Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/47587219/chapters/119934142#workskin here]] and Website/{{Wattpad}} Platform/{{Wattpad}} [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/354307032-the-loud-house-flowing-star here]].
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* BigBadEnsemble: As of the second second chapter, the main antagonists are Chandler, Mike and Cristina, the the former two allying to deal with Stella while Cristina has a vendetta towards Lincoln due to the [[Recap/TheLoudHouseS1E2HeavyMeddleMakingTheCase video incident]].
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* BigBadEnsemble: As of the second second chapter, the main antagonists are Chandler, Mike and Cristina, the the former two allying to deal with Stella while Cristina has a vendetta towards Lincoln due to the [[Recap/TheLoudHouseS1E2HeavyMeddleMakingTheCase video incident]].
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** [[spoiler:Cristina was merely a girl]] who had good reasons to take Lincoln out of her life, but wasn't so antagonistic behind that. However, in this AU, she is a resentful girl who is planning to ruin him and his estranged sisters' lives.
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** [[spoiler:Cristina Cristina was merely a girl]] girl who had good reasons to take Lincoln out of her life, but wasn't so antagonistic behind that. However, in this AU, she is a resentful girl who is planning to ruin him and his estranged sisters' lives.
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* BigBadEnsemble: As of the second second chapter, the main antagonists are Chandler, Mike and Cristina, the the former two allying to deal with Stella while Cristina has a vendetta towards Lincoln due to the [[Recap/TheLoudHouseS1E2HeavyMeddleMakingTheCase video incident]].
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The story can also be read in Website/{{Deviantart}} [[https://www.deviantart.com/doughb101/gallery/86874238/flowing-star here]] and in Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/47587219/chapters/119934142#workskin here]].
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The story can also be read in Website/{{Deviantart}} [[https://www.deviantart.com/doughb101/gallery/86874238/flowing-star here]] and here]], in Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/47587219/chapters/119934142#workskin here]] and Website/{{Wattpad}} [[https://www.wattpad.com/story/354307032-the-loud-house-flowing-star here]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14207817/1/Flowing-Star The Loud House: Flowing Star]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' fanfic set into an AlternateUniverse by Mr Dough focused on Stella Zhau and Lincoln into a modified version of Royal Woods.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14207817/1/Flowing-Star The Loud House: Flowing Star]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' fanfic set into in an AlternateUniverse by Mr Dough focused on Stella Zhau and Lincoln into a modified version of Royal Woods.
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This story is focused on Stella, a filipino-american girl and aspiring inventor who managed to invent a baseball bat that can be electrified five times, and she is to enjoy the summer vacation, but the small town of Royal Woods has both wonders and dangers. She managed to make some allies in the form of a rocking teen called Luna and the popular girly girl focused on plants called Girl Jordan.
A white-haired boy called Lincoln returns for Royal Woods after coming out from juvie, ready to finish his business on the town before exiting the place for good while hoping to meet his younger sister called Lucy after receiving her letter, but he isn't alone on this journey since he is living with his snarky cousin called [[OriginalCharacter Liberty]] and her sole father called Lucas.
A white-haired boy called Lincoln returns for Royal Woods after coming out from juvie, ready to finish his business on the town before exiting the place for good while hoping to meet his younger sister called Lucy after receiving her letter, but he isn't alone on this journey since he is living with his snarky cousin called [[OriginalCharacter Liberty]] and her sole father called Lucas.
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This story is focused on Stella, a filipino-american Filipino-American girl and aspiring inventor who managed to invent a baseball bat that can be electrified five times, and she is ready to enjoy the summer vacation, but the small town of Royal Woods has both wonders and dangers. She managed manages to make some allies in the form of a rocking teen called Luna and the popular girly girl focused on plants called Girl Jordan.
A white-haired boy called Lincoln returnsfor to Royal Woods after coming out from of juvie, ready to finish his business on in the town before exiting the place for good while hoping to meet his younger sister called Lucy after receiving her letter, but he isn't alone on this journey since he is living with his snarky cousin called [[OriginalCharacter Liberty]] and her sole father called Lucas.
A white-haired boy called Lincoln returns
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* AdaptationExpansion: Stella's homelife is shown in this fanfic, showing she exit the house through the bedroom's window to explore the town, and her grandma stays with her when her parents are at work.
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* AdaptationExpansion: Stella's homelife is shown in this fanfic, showing she exit exits the house through the bedroom's window to explore the town, and her grandma stays with her when her parents are at work.
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** Downplayed with Stella & Lincoln. The two kids forms a friendship here, but they are also partners in this story.
** Stella and Luna never meet each other in canon, but these two forms a small friendship here.
** Stella and Luna never meet each other in canon, but these two forms a small friendship here.
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** Downplayed with Stella & Lincoln. The two kids forms form a friendship here, but they are also partners in this story.
** Stella and Luna never meet each other in canon, but these twoforms form a small friendship here.
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** Chandler was a brat in canon, sure, but he is made into a bully who outright ordered his two lackeys to "finish" Lincoln off.
** [[spoiler:Cristina was merely a girl]] who had right reasons to take Lincoln out of her life, but wasn't so antagonistic behind that. However, in this AU, she is a resentful girl who is planning to ruin him and his estranged sisters' life.
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** Chandler was a brat in canon, sure, but here he is made into a bully who outright ordered his two lackeys to "finish" Lincoln off.
** [[spoiler:Cristina was merely a girl]] who hadright good reasons to take Lincoln out of her life, but wasn't so antagonistic behind that. However, in this AU, she is a resentful girl who is planning to ruin him and his estranged sisters' life.lives.
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* BitingTheHandHumor: Liberty watched a show about a [[RecursiveCanon boy and his sisters]] during the second part of the prologue, but she claimed that a "charming show equals to being boring" and saying there'a no interesting shows anymore.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The fanfic is more dark than the show due to the antagonists being more dangerous here, and there are subjects such as damaged relationships and psychological issues.
* DeadpanSnarker: Liberty like to give sarcastic remarks to other people, but even she recognizes when she goes to far.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The fanfic is more dark than the show due to the antagonists being more dangerous here, and there are subjects such as damaged relationships and psychological issues.
* DeadpanSnarker: Liberty like to give sarcastic remarks to other people, but even she recognizes when she goes to far.
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* BitingTheHandHumor: Liberty watched watches a show about a [[RecursiveCanon boy and his sisters]] during the second part of the prologue, but she claimed that a "charming show equals to being boring" and saying there'a no interesting shows anymore.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The fanfic ismore dark darker than the show due to the antagonists being more dangerous here, and there are subjects such as damaged relationships and psychological issues.
* DeadpanSnarker: Libertylike likes to give sarcastic remarks to other people, but even she recognizes when she goes to far.
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* ElectricityKnocksYouOut: Stella's electric bat can knocks out her opponents unconscious by hitting them hard enough. This is shown with Chandler.
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* ElectricityKnocksYouOut: Stella's electric bat can knocks knock out her opponents unconscious by hitting them hard enough. This is shown with Chandler.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: While Liberty is a snarky JerkWithAHeartOfGold who always makes jokes at the expense of others, she recognized she went too far by insulting Stella and wants to apologize to her.
* {{Foil}}: Stella and Lincoln. Both are kids with conturbed lives, has a mysterious past, and use hoodies to cover their heads, but while Lincoln acts aloof in public, Stella acts cheerful.
* FriendlessBackground: Stella remarked she wanted to make a friend, implying she wasn't popular in her country. Fortunately, she forms a small friendship with Luna and a partnership with Lincoln.
* {{Foil}}: Stella and Lincoln. Both are kids with conturbed lives, has a mysterious past, and use hoodies to cover their heads, but while Lincoln acts aloof in public, Stella acts cheerful.
* FriendlessBackground: Stella remarked she wanted to make a friend, implying she wasn't popular in her country. Fortunately, she forms a small friendship with Luna and a partnership with Lincoln.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: While Liberty is a snarky JerkWithAHeartOfGold who always makes jokes at the expense of others, she recognized recognizes that she went too far by insulting Stella and wants to apologize to her.
* {{Foil}}: Stella and Lincoln. Both are kids with conturbed lives,has a have mysterious past, pasts, and use hoodies to cover their heads, but while Lincoln acts aloof in public, Stella acts cheerful.
* FriendlessBackground: Stellaremarked remarkes she wanted to make a friend, implying she wasn't popular in her country. Fortunately, she forms a small friendship with Luna and a partnership with Lincoln.
* {{Foil}}: Stella and Lincoln. Both are kids with conturbed lives,
* FriendlessBackground: Stella
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** During the second part of the prologue, Lincoln were playing a round from the game called ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosUltimate''.
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* SleepDeprivation: Downplayed. Due to the fact Stella explores the city midnight, she can occasionaly fall asleep as shown when she slept on a bench, only to be woken up by Girl Jordan.
* SneakingOutAtNight: Stella frequently sneaks out to go for her secret hideout at midnight to work on her projects.
* SneakingOutAtNight: Stella frequently sneaks out to go for her secret hideout at midnight to work on her projects.
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* SleepDeprivation: Downplayed. Due to the fact Stella explores the city at midnight, she can occasionaly fall asleep during the day as shown when she slept sleeps on a bench, only to be woken up by Girl Jordan.
* SneakingOutAtNight: Stella frequently sneaks out togo for her secret hideout at midnight to work on her projects.
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* TakeThat: During the first chapter of "Early Days Arc", Liberty was reading a comic about the show she watched and snarked towards the fact that the entire thing started because of a clearly fake photo between a teenage girl and a boy kissing. However, she was disgusted because she saw... something in it and gave up on it. This is a subtle jab towards the comic ''Webcomic/ItsNotYourFault'' due to the characters acting dumb and the infamous page 130 [[spoiler:where a drunken Sam lured and raped Lincoln]].
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* TakeThat: During the first chapter of "Early Days Arc", Liberty was is reading a comic about the show she watched and snarked towards snarks about the fact that the entire thing started because of a clearly fake photo between a teenage girl and a boy kissing. However, she was is disgusted because she saw... something in it and gave up on it. This is a subtle jab towards the comic ''Webcomic/ItsNotYourFault'' due to the characters acting dumb and the infamous page 130 [[spoiler:where a drunken Sam lured and raped Lincoln]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14207817/1/Flowing-Star The Loud House: Flowing Star]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' fanfic set into an AlternateUniverse by [=DoughB101=] Mr Dough focused on Stella Zhau and Lincoln into a modified version of Royal Woods.
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* ArcWords: "Royal Woods is not for amateurs". This phrase is meant to show that the town is more dangerous in this fanfic.
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* ArcWords: "Royal Woods is not for amateurs". This phrase is meant to show that the town is more dangerous in this fanfic. [[EarlyInstallmentWeirdness This phrase is only used in the prologue, though]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14207817/1/Flowing-Star The Loud House: Flowing Star]]'' is a ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' fanfic set into an AlternateUniverse by [=DoughB101=] focused on Stella Zhau and Lincoln into a modified version of Royal Woods.
This story is focused on Stella, a filipino-american girl and aspiring inventor who managed to invent a baseball bat that can be electrified five times, and she is to enjoy the summer vacation, but the small town of Royal Woods has both wonders and dangers. She managed to make some allies in the form of a rocking teen called Luna and the popular girly girl focused on plants called Girl Jordan.
A white-haired boy called Lincoln returns for Royal Woods after coming out from juvie, ready to finish his business on the town before exiting the place for good while hoping to meet his younger sister called Lucy after receiving her letter, but he isn't alone on this journey since he is living with his snarky cousin called [[OriginalCharacter Liberty]] and her sole father called Lucas.
The two kids eventually met each other and become a duo to enjoy many adventures together. However, this don't mean this summer will be peaceful, especially with the fact that there's enemies with a vendetta against both of them.
The page has a [[Characters/FlowingStar character sheet]], as well as a (Work In Progress) [[Recap/FlowingStar recap page]].
The fanfic had a minor rewrite during 2 of June expanding and changing some elements from the original write-up.
The story can also be read in Website/{{Deviantart}} [[https://www.deviantart.com/doughb101/gallery/86874238/flowing-star here]] and in Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/47587219/chapters/119934142#workskin here]].
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!!''Flowing Star'' contains examples of:
* AdaptationDeviation: While the story picks up part of the setting and some of the characters, the characterization, designs and relationships are changed. One example is Stella who instead of being an average girl and sole female from Lincoln's group, is instead more {{tomboy}}ish than her canon self and her sole friend is Lincoln.
* AdaptationExpansion: Stella's homelife is shown in this fanfic, showing she exit the house through the bedroom's window to explore the town, and her grandma stays with her when her parents are at work.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:
** Downplayed with Stella & Lincoln. The two kids forms a friendship here, but they are also partners in this story.
** Stella and Luna never meet each other in canon, but these two forms a small friendship here.
** Lincoln is estranged from his family in this version after something happened that made him be sent into juvie.
** Lucy and Luna's relationship was neutral at best in the original show, but the two sisters apparently formed a partnership here.
* AdaptationalBadass: Stella certainly wasn't a fighter in the original show, but this version has an electric bat that can deliver electrified blows.
* AdaptationalProtagonist: Stella was a mere side character from ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' who mostly appeared in Lincoln-focused episodes. Here, she is the [[{{pun}} star]] of this AU, with her moving the plot and sharing the point-of-view with Lincoln, who is a co-protagonist.
* AdaptationalSexuality: As a way to celebrate Pride Month, the author comfirms in the end notes from the second part of the prologue that Stella is bisexual and Lucy is aro-ace in this fanfic. The former never shown interest in either boys or girls while the latter has shown interest in boys.
* AdaptationalVillainy:
** Chandler was a brat in canon, sure, but he is made into a bully who outright ordered his two lackeys to "finish" Lincoln off.
** [[spoiler:Cristina was merely a girl]] who had right reasons to take Lincoln out of her life, but wasn't so antagonistic behind that. However, in this AU, she is a resentful girl who is planning to ruin him and his estranged sisters' life.
* AdaptedOut: Per WordOfGod, it is confirmed Clyde, Lily and Morag won't be appearing in this fanfic due to him feeling these characters were unnecessary, with him even saying the latter is nearly impossible to take seriously.
* AlliterativeName: Lincoln, Liberty and Lucas has the initial of their name and surnames starting with '''L'''.
* AllThereInTheManual: The final notes of each chapter has additional information about the setting, lore and the characters from the story.
* AlternateContinuity: The fanfic is set into a new timeline and different canon taking place after a [[BroadStrokes Pseudo]] Season 1 from the original ''The Loud House'', where Stella still came to Royal Woods and met Lincoln, but the boy has a dark past and there's people with a vendetta against him.
* AlternateUniverseFic: The author makes clear the story don't follow the show's canon and follows its own lore and continuity.
* ArcWords: "Royal Woods is not for amateurs". This phrase is meant to show that the town is more dangerous in this fanfic.
* AscendedExtra: Stella is the protagonist from this story rather than being a secondary character.
* BatterUp: Stella created a baseball bat with lightning to be used as her weapon.
* BerserkButton: Girl Jordan felt personally offended when Stella implied she was only interested in dodgeball when she was planting trees, but she calms down and apologizes for her outburst.
* BroadStrokes: The author comfirms that events similar to the ones from Season 1 of ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' happened in this continuity but due to changes like the removal of Clyde and Lily, the events didn't happen with the same details as in-canon.
* BigDamnHeroes: Before Lincoln can be beaten up by Chandler's lackeys, Stella saves him by knocking Chandler unconscious and dragging Lincoln out of the area.
* BitingTheHandHumor: Liberty watched a show about a [[RecursiveCanon boy and his sisters]] during the second part of the prologue, but she claimed that a "charming show equals to being boring" and saying there'a no interesting shows anymore.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The fanfic is more dark than the show due to the antagonists being more dangerous here, and there are subjects such as damaged relationships and psychological issues.
* DeadpanSnarker: Liberty like to give sarcastic remarks to other people, but even she recognizes when she goes to far.
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: [[spoiler:Cristina's]] operation against Lincoln and the Loud Sisters is called "Quiet Silence".
* ElectricityKnocksYouOut: Stella's electric bat can knocks out her opponents unconscious by hitting them hard enough. This is shown with Chandler.
* ElementalMotifs: Stella is associated with Lightning due to her inventive skills and she can become cheerful and very active. Her baseball bat can be electrified to defeat her foes.
* EveryoneHasStandards: While Liberty is a snarky JerkWithAHeartOfGold who always makes jokes at the expense of others, she recognized she went too far by insulting Stella and wants to apologize to her.
* {{Foil}}: Stella and Lincoln. Both are kids with conturbed lives, has a mysterious past, and use hoodies to cover their heads, but while Lincoln acts aloof in public, Stella acts cheerful.
* FriendlessBackground: Stella remarked she wanted to make a friend, implying she wasn't popular in her country. Fortunately, she forms a small friendship with Luna and a partnership with Lincoln.
* GadgeteerGenius: Stella has a secret hideout to work on her inventions in this fanfic, the first thing she created was her signature weapon that can be elctrified.
* InTheHood: Occasionaly, Stella will put the hood of her hoodie over her head to hide her face and to feel more safe.
* NoodleIncident: Something that Lincoln did was bad enough for him to be sent into juvie before the events from the story, with him returning in the summer vacation and being estranged from his family. WordOfGod says that his selfishness went too far.
* OriginalCharacter: The fanfic contains some characters for this story, with the first ones being Liberty Leal, the cousin of the Loud Siblings, and her father Lucas Leal.
* PipePain: By the end of the first chapter, Lincoln has a L-shaped pipe as a gift from Lucy due to her thinking this type of weapon fits him.
* PlayingCardMotifs: Lincoln has spade symbols on the front and back of his pocketless orange hoodie.
* ScreenName:
** Stella goes by "[=ShiningStar1=]" in the messenger.
** Lincoln goes by "[=Dark_Spade11=]" in the messenger.
* ShoutOut:
** Lucy mentions in her letter for Lincoln she gained an interest into a worn dagger, planning to improve it. The name she plans to give for the ultimate knife is "[[VideoGame/{{Undertale}} Real Knife]]".
** During the second part of the prologue, Lincoln were playing a round from the game called ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosUltimate''.
* ShockAndAwe: Stella's weapon can be electrified to deliver powerful attacks to knock opponents unconscious.
* SleepDeprivation: Downplayed. Due to the fact Stella explores the city midnight, she can occasionaly fall asleep as shown when she slept on a bench, only to be woken up by Girl Jordan.
* SneakingOutAtNight: Stella frequently sneaks out to go for her secret hideout at midnight to work on her projects.
* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Stella's grandmother remarks that she should have simply asked her to open the door instead of exiting through the window.
* TakeThat: During the first chapter of "Early Days Arc", Liberty was reading a comic about the show she watched and snarked towards the fact that the entire thing started because of a clearly fake photo between a teenage girl and a boy kissing. However, she was disgusted because she saw... something in it and gave up on it. This is a subtle jab towards the comic ''Webcomic/ItsNotYourFault'' due to the characters acting dumb and the infamous page 130 [[spoiler:where a drunken Sam lured and raped Lincoln]].
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This story is focused on Stella, a filipino-american girl and aspiring inventor who managed to invent a baseball bat that can be electrified five times, and she is to enjoy the summer vacation, but the small town of Royal Woods has both wonders and dangers. She managed to make some allies in the form of a rocking teen called Luna and the popular girly girl focused on plants called Girl Jordan.
A white-haired boy called Lincoln returns for Royal Woods after coming out from juvie, ready to finish his business on the town before exiting the place for good while hoping to meet his younger sister called Lucy after receiving her letter, but he isn't alone on this journey since he is living with his snarky cousin called [[OriginalCharacter Liberty]] and her sole father called Lucas.
The two kids eventually met each other and become a duo to enjoy many adventures together. However, this don't mean this summer will be peaceful, especially with the fact that there's enemies with a vendetta against both of them.
The page has a [[Characters/FlowingStar character sheet]], as well as a (Work In Progress) [[Recap/FlowingStar recap page]].
The fanfic had a minor rewrite during 2 of June expanding and changing some elements from the original write-up.
The story can also be read in Website/{{Deviantart}} [[https://www.deviantart.com/doughb101/gallery/86874238/flowing-star here]] and in Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/47587219/chapters/119934142#workskin here]].
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!!''Flowing Star'' contains examples of:
* AdaptationDeviation: While the story picks up part of the setting and some of the characters, the characterization, designs and relationships are changed. One example is Stella who instead of being an average girl and sole female from Lincoln's group, is instead more {{tomboy}}ish than her canon self and her sole friend is Lincoln.
* AdaptationExpansion: Stella's homelife is shown in this fanfic, showing she exit the house through the bedroom's window to explore the town, and her grandma stays with her when her parents are at work.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:
** Downplayed with Stella & Lincoln. The two kids forms a friendship here, but they are also partners in this story.
** Stella and Luna never meet each other in canon, but these two forms a small friendship here.
** Lincoln is estranged from his family in this version after something happened that made him be sent into juvie.
** Lucy and Luna's relationship was neutral at best in the original show, but the two sisters apparently formed a partnership here.
* AdaptationalBadass: Stella certainly wasn't a fighter in the original show, but this version has an electric bat that can deliver electrified blows.
* AdaptationalProtagonist: Stella was a mere side character from ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' who mostly appeared in Lincoln-focused episodes. Here, she is the [[{{pun}} star]] of this AU, with her moving the plot and sharing the point-of-view with Lincoln, who is a co-protagonist.
* AdaptationalSexuality: As a way to celebrate Pride Month, the author comfirms in the end notes from the second part of the prologue that Stella is bisexual and Lucy is aro-ace in this fanfic. The former never shown interest in either boys or girls while the latter has shown interest in boys.
* AdaptationalVillainy:
** Chandler was a brat in canon, sure, but he is made into a bully who outright ordered his two lackeys to "finish" Lincoln off.
** [[spoiler:Cristina was merely a girl]] who had right reasons to take Lincoln out of her life, but wasn't so antagonistic behind that. However, in this AU, she is a resentful girl who is planning to ruin him and his estranged sisters' life.
* AdaptedOut: Per WordOfGod, it is confirmed Clyde, Lily and Morag won't be appearing in this fanfic due to him feeling these characters were unnecessary, with him even saying the latter is nearly impossible to take seriously.
* AlliterativeName: Lincoln, Liberty and Lucas has the initial of their name and surnames starting with '''L'''.
* AllThereInTheManual: The final notes of each chapter has additional information about the setting, lore and the characters from the story.
* AlternateContinuity: The fanfic is set into a new timeline and different canon taking place after a [[BroadStrokes Pseudo]] Season 1 from the original ''The Loud House'', where Stella still came to Royal Woods and met Lincoln, but the boy has a dark past and there's people with a vendetta against him.
* AlternateUniverseFic: The author makes clear the story don't follow the show's canon and follows its own lore and continuity.
* ArcWords: "Royal Woods is not for amateurs". This phrase is meant to show that the town is more dangerous in this fanfic.
* AscendedExtra: Stella is the protagonist from this story rather than being a secondary character.
* BatterUp: Stella created a baseball bat with lightning to be used as her weapon.
* BerserkButton: Girl Jordan felt personally offended when Stella implied she was only interested in dodgeball when she was planting trees, but she calms down and apologizes for her outburst.
* BroadStrokes: The author comfirms that events similar to the ones from Season 1 of ''WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse'' happened in this continuity but due to changes like the removal of Clyde and Lily, the events didn't happen with the same details as in-canon.
* BigDamnHeroes: Before Lincoln can be beaten up by Chandler's lackeys, Stella saves him by knocking Chandler unconscious and dragging Lincoln out of the area.
* BitingTheHandHumor: Liberty watched a show about a [[RecursiveCanon boy and his sisters]] during the second part of the prologue, but she claimed that a "charming show equals to being boring" and saying there'a no interesting shows anymore.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The fanfic is more dark than the show due to the antagonists being more dangerous here, and there are subjects such as damaged relationships and psychological issues.
* DeadpanSnarker: Liberty like to give sarcastic remarks to other people, but even she recognizes when she goes to far.
* DepartmentOfRedundancyDepartment: [[spoiler:Cristina's]] operation against Lincoln and the Loud Sisters is called "Quiet Silence".
* ElectricityKnocksYouOut: Stella's electric bat can knocks out her opponents unconscious by hitting them hard enough. This is shown with Chandler.
* ElementalMotifs: Stella is associated with Lightning due to her inventive skills and she can become cheerful and very active. Her baseball bat can be electrified to defeat her foes.
* EveryoneHasStandards: While Liberty is a snarky JerkWithAHeartOfGold who always makes jokes at the expense of others, she recognized she went too far by insulting Stella and wants to apologize to her.
* {{Foil}}: Stella and Lincoln. Both are kids with conturbed lives, has a mysterious past, and use hoodies to cover their heads, but while Lincoln acts aloof in public, Stella acts cheerful.
* FriendlessBackground: Stella remarked she wanted to make a friend, implying she wasn't popular in her country. Fortunately, she forms a small friendship with Luna and a partnership with Lincoln.
* GadgeteerGenius: Stella has a secret hideout to work on her inventions in this fanfic, the first thing she created was her signature weapon that can be elctrified.
* InTheHood: Occasionaly, Stella will put the hood of her hoodie over her head to hide her face and to feel more safe.
* NoodleIncident: Something that Lincoln did was bad enough for him to be sent into juvie before the events from the story, with him returning in the summer vacation and being estranged from his family. WordOfGod says that his selfishness went too far.
* OriginalCharacter: The fanfic contains some characters for this story, with the first ones being Liberty Leal, the cousin of the Loud Siblings, and her father Lucas Leal.
* PipePain: By the end of the first chapter, Lincoln has a L-shaped pipe as a gift from Lucy due to her thinking this type of weapon fits him.
* PlayingCardMotifs: Lincoln has spade symbols on the front and back of his pocketless orange hoodie.
* ScreenName:
** Stella goes by "[=ShiningStar1=]" in the messenger.
** Lincoln goes by "[=Dark_Spade11=]" in the messenger.
* ShoutOut:
** Lucy mentions in her letter for Lincoln she gained an interest into a worn dagger, planning to improve it. The name she plans to give for the ultimate knife is "[[VideoGame/{{Undertale}} Real Knife]]".
** During the second part of the prologue, Lincoln were playing a round from the game called ''VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosUltimate''.
* ShockAndAwe: Stella's weapon can be electrified to deliver powerful attacks to knock opponents unconscious.
* SleepDeprivation: Downplayed. Due to the fact Stella explores the city midnight, she can occasionaly fall asleep as shown when she slept on a bench, only to be woken up by Girl Jordan.
* SneakingOutAtNight: Stella frequently sneaks out to go for her secret hideout at midnight to work on her projects.
* StatingTheSimpleSolution: Stella's grandmother remarks that she should have simply asked her to open the door instead of exiting through the window.
* TakeThat: During the first chapter of "Early Days Arc", Liberty was reading a comic about the show she watched and snarked towards the fact that the entire thing started because of a clearly fake photo between a teenage girl and a boy kissing. However, she was disgusted because she saw... something in it and gave up on it. This is a subtle jab towards the comic ''Webcomic/ItsNotYourFault'' due to the characters acting dumb and the infamous page 130 [[spoiler:where a drunken Sam lured and raped Lincoln]].
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