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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The fic starts approximately five or six months before ''[[Recap/YoungJusticeS1E1and2IndependenceDayandFireworks Independence Day]]''. However the stations are becoming very different as [[spoiler:Kent Nelson is dead, the Justice League is broken up and Batman has reject the ThouShallNotKill rule]].
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The fic starts approximately five or six months before ''[[Recap/YoungJusticeS1E1and2IndependenceDayandFireworks "[[Recap/YoungJusticeS1E1And2IndependenceDayAndFireworks Independence Day]]''.Day]]". However the stations are becoming very different as [[spoiler:Kent Nelson is dead, the Justice League is broken up and Batman has reject the ThouShallNotKill rule]].
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* AIIsACrapshoot: This is the official position of the Cultus Mechanicus towards artificial intelligence. Once he meets Red Tornado and learns he's a robot, Cardsharp's immediate reaction is to try to kill him.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: This is the official position of the Cultus Cult Mechanicus towards artificial intelligence. Once he meets Red Tornado and learns he's a robot, Cardsharp's immediate reaction is to try to kill him.
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** [[spoiler:Being turned into a servitor is a terrifying fate, thus it is only reserved for the vilest of criminals, such as peodophiles and rapists.]]
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** [[spoiler:Being turned into a servitor is a terrifying fate, thus it is only reserved for the vilest of criminals, such as peodophiles pedophiles and rapists.]]
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* BrokenBase: [[spoiler: The Justice League, particularly Flash, and Robin are hurt and devastated that Batman would keep extensive files on how to defeat them and even their pressure points, and refuses to even apologize for it.]]
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* BrokenBase: InUniverse, [[spoiler: The the Justice League, particularly Flash, and Robin Robin, are hurt and devastated that Batman would keep extensive files on how to defeat them and even their pressure points, and refuses points while refusing to even apologize for it.]]
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** [[spoiler:Being turned into Skitarii is a terrifying fate, thus it is only reserved for the vilest of criminals, such as peodophiles and rapists.]]
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** [[spoiler:Being turned into Skitarii a servitor is a terrifying fate, thus it is only reserved for the vilest of criminals, such as peodophiles and rapists.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11595138/1/The-Justice-of-a-Tech-Priest The Justice of a Tech-Priest]]'' is a ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000''/''WesternAnimation/YoungJustice'' {{Crossover}} by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2398928/TheBadPanda TheBadPanda]]. Much like ''Fanfic/TheInquisitor'', it is based on Lord-of-Change's ''Fanfic/DeathKorpsOfJustice'' (and made with his permission), but it does something different and establishes itself as such from the start.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11595138/1/The-Justice-of-a-Tech-Priest The Justice of a Tech-Priest]]'' is a ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000''/''WesternAnimation/YoungJustice'' ''TabletopGame/Warhammer40000''/''WesternAnimation/YoungJustice2010'' {{Crossover}} by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2398928/TheBadPanda TheBadPanda]]. Much like ''Fanfic/TheInquisitor'', it is based on Lord-of-Change's ''Fanfic/DeathKorpsOfJustice'' (and made with his permission), but it does something different and establishes itself as such from the start.
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* AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Being turned into Skitarii is a terrifying fate, thus it is only reserved for the vilest of criminals, such as peodophiles and rapists.]]
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* AssholeVictim: AssholeVictim:
** [[spoiler:Being turned into Skitarii is a terrifying fate, thus it is only reserved for the vilest of criminals, such as peodophiles and rapists.]]
** [[spoiler:Being turned into Skitarii is a terrifying fate, thus it is only reserved for the vilest of criminals, such as peodophiles and rapists.]]
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* BigNo: Calig's FamousLastWords when his relic is destroyed and mutated into a Chaos Spawn.
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* BigNo: Calig's FamousLastWords last words when his relic is destroyed and mutated into a Chaos Spawn.
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* BrokenBase: [[spoiler: The Justice League, particularly Flash, and Robin are hurt and devastated that Batman would keep extensive files on how to defeat them and even their pressure points, and refuses to even apologize for it.]]
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* TheUnapologetic: [[spoiler: After it is revealed to the Justice League that Bruce kept extensive information and countermeasures on every hero and villain, even his sidekick Robin, it is made clear that he does not actually regret creating all those files. He seems to be mostly sorry about the outcome and consequences after Cardsharp exposed him.]]
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* TheUnapologetic: [[spoiler: After it is revealed to the Justice League that Bruce kept extensive information and countermeasures on every hero and villain, even his sidekick Robin, it is made clear that he does not actually regret creating all those files. He seems to be mostly sorry about the outcome and consequences after Cardsharp exposed him. Needless to say, Robin and the Justice League are disgusted by this and further alienates him.]]
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* StupidCrooks: While on route to jail, Thomas loudly boasts to other cops that he will be out in no time and that his abused girlfriend won't testify against him. This is before they find out that the cop he shot died of his injuries and Thomas cruelly relishes in the fact. All this gives them more reason to [[spoiler: hand him over to the Skitarii.]]
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It currently stands at 18 chapters.
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It currently stands at 18 19 chapters.
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* TheUnapologetic: [[spoiler: After it is revealed to the Justice League that Bruce kept extensive information and countermeasures on every hero and villain, even his sidekick Robin, it is made clear that he does not actually regret creating all those files. He seems to be mostly sorry about the outcome and consequences after Cardsharp exposed him.]]
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* HeroKiller: [[spoiler:Cardsharp kills Red Tornado by conveniently trapping him on the Watchtower and piloting the station to crash into the Chaos tear during the battle of Roanoke Island.]]
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* HeroKiller: [[spoiler:Cardsharp kills Red Tornado by conveniently trapping him on the Watchtower and piloting the station to crash into the Chaos Warp tear during the battle of Roanoke Island.]]
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* ChristmasEpisode: Chapter 12 which is divided in TwoLinesNoWaiting storylines. The first one sees the homeless that Cardsharp gave shelter to offer the Tech-Priest an anolog clock which had long been extinct in his time period. The second storyline deals with [[spoiler:[[WhamEpisode Batman killing]] the Joker]]
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* ChristmasEpisode: Chapter 12 which is divided in TwoLinesNoWaiting storylines. The first one sees the homeless that Cardsharp gave shelter to offer the Tech-Priest an anolog analog clock which had long been extinct in his time period. The second storyline deals with [[spoiler:[[WhamEpisode Batman killing]] the Joker]]
* FantasticRacism: Unsurprisingly, Cardsharp is not enthused with the Justice League for having alien and magic-using members, and most especially towards Red Tornado, [[spoiler:whom he eventually (and un-regrettably) destroyed him during the battle of Roanoke Island]].
**Unfortunately to be developing in humanity's views on aliens following the aftermath of the battle of Roanoke Island, as the human members of the United Nations are growing irritated with their arrangement with the Martians and tired on relying the Green Lantern Corps to maintaining the peace. The Martians, on the other hand, are likewise prejudiced towards humans which is exacerbated from learning about the Imperium of Man.
**Unfortunately to be developing in humanity's views on aliens following the aftermath of the battle of Roanoke Island, as the human members of the United Nations are growing irritated with their arrangement with the Martians and tired on relying the Green Lantern Corps to maintaining the peace. The Martians, on the other hand, are likewise prejudiced towards humans which is exacerbated from learning about the Imperium of Man.
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* HeroKiller: [[spoiler:Cardsharp kills Red Tornado.]]
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* HeroKiller: [[spoiler:Cardsharp kills Red Tornado.Tornado by conveniently trapping him on the Watchtower and piloting the station to crash into the Chaos tear during the battle of Roanoke Island.]]
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* MundaneObjectAmazement: Cardsharp received an analog clock as a Christmas present in which he regard it as a rare and valuable timepiece in the eyes of the Adeptus Mechanicus from his time period.
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* AlternateUniverse: Because the fic was written before ''Outsiders'' was announced there are important divergences from canon. The most notable are that Cyborg is part of the Justice League before the Team was founded and that Ma'alefa'ak is a high ranking general in the Martian military.
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* AiIsACrapShoot: This is the official position of the Cultus Mechanicus towards artificial intelligence. Once he meets Red Tornado and learns he's a robot, Cardsharp's immediate reaction is to try to kill him.
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* AiIsACrapShoot: AIIsACrapshoot: This is the official position of the Cultus Mechanicus towards artificial intelligence. Once he meets Red Tornado and learns he's a robot, Cardsharp's immediate reaction is to try to kill him.
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* ChristmasEpisode: Chapter 12 which is divided in TwoLinesNoWaiting storylines. The first one sees the homeless that Cardsharp gave shelter to offer the Tech-Priest an anolog clock which had long been extinct in his time period. The second storyline deals with [[spoiler:[[WhamEpisode Batman killing]] the Joker]]
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* CostumeEvolutio: PlayedForDrama: After being almost killed by Cardsharp, Dick Grayson's Robin costume incorporates a helmet which protects him from skull fracture. It also serve as a ShoutOut to Red Hood.
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* CostumeEvolutio: CostumeEvolution: PlayedForDrama: After being almost killed by Cardsharp, Dick Grayson's Robin costume incorporates a helmet which protects him from skull fracture. It also serve as a ShoutOut to Red Hood.
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* CostumeEvolutio: PlayedForDrama: After being almost killed by Cardsharp, Dick Grayson's Robin costume incorporates a helmet which protects him from skull fracture. It also serve as a ShoutOut to Red Hood.
