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* Unkempt Beauty: Rarity spends most of the fic minus her makeup, and still no one casts doubts upon her beauty.
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* Unkempt Beauty: UnkemptBeauty: Rarity spends most of the fic minus her makeup, and still although Rarity herself tends to be self-conscious about it, no one casts else doubts upon her beauty.
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* ShowerScene: Rarity has multiple of those.
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* ShowerScene: Rarity has multiple several of those.these.
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* AlwaysMurder : [[spoiler:Chancellor Ninetalons]] is old and very stressed. Surely his death is just bad luck? Yeah, we didn't think so either.
* BrokenAce : Blueblood thinks he’s this, much to Rarity’s irritation.
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* EvilMatriarch: Blueblood's Blueblood’s mother, Palladium.Princess Palladium, is a mad old RacistGrandma who Blueblood quietly describes as a ‘monster’.
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*GirlyBruiser : Rarity’s physical fitness is brought up several times, especially in comparison to some of the other high class ponies in the race. She points out that her father isn’t a Duke or CEO, he’s a Gym teacher, and he taught her well.
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* InferioritySuperiorityComplex: Blueblood, Blueblood, Blueblood. Rarity considers it just another method to keep everyone’s attention on him.
* IWorkAlone: Blueblood is the only racer without a team (because no-one else can stand him).
* IWorkAlone: Blueblood is the only racer without a team (because no-one else can stand him).
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident : [[spoiler:Chancellor Ninetalons totally unsuspicious death by heart attack, Rarity’s fall from a air ballon and Prince Blueblood’s sad crash during a storm are all totally accidents, honest!]]
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*ReasonableAuthorityFigure : Chancellor Ninetalons is old, tired of conflict, and the only Griffon who isn’t a jerk. Fancy Pants too, though events occasionally cast doubts on this.
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*Unkempt Beauty: Rarity spends most of the fic minus her makeup, and still no one casts doubts upon her beauty.
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* FantasticRacism: When Blueblood hosts a dinner for the various racing teams participating in the Alicorn’s Cup, his unicorn mother insults not only the griffons, three zebras, and one camel attending but also the pegasi and earth ponies present.
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* FantasticRacism: When Blueblood hosts a dinner for the various racing teams participating in the Alicorn’s Cup, his unicorn mother insults not only the griffons, three zebras, and one camel attending but also the pegasi and earth ponies present. In the words of Blueblood himself:
-->'''Blueblood:''' As you may have gathered at the dinner, she abhors commoners, non-unicorns, and non-ponies, in order of increasing disgust.
-->'''Blueblood:''' As you may have gathered at the dinner, she abhors commoners, non-unicorns, and non-ponies, in order of increasing disgust.
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* SecretlyWealthy: [[spoiler Rainbow Dash]].
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* SecretlyWealthy: [[spoiler [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash]].
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* SecretlyWealthy: [[spoiler Rainbow Dash]].
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* DumbBlonde: A comment by Rarity suggests that white coated ponies suffer from the same prejudice as blonde humans. However, it is subverted by the story, since neither Rarity, Blueblood nor Fancy Pants fit the stereotype.
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* ShowerScene: Rarity has multiple of those.
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[[caption-width-right:208:The situation isn't as bad as it looks...honest]]
[[caption-width-right:208:The situation isn't as bad as it looks...honest]]
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* HealingPotion: The Badge of Courage flower.
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* FancyDinner: Blueblood's family is holding one of these including a {{BastardlySpeech}}, followed by a {{PatrickStewartSpeech}}, and of course [[spoiler: a murder]].
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* InsufferableGenius: Blueblood.[[spoiler: Of all ponies, Blueblood. Blueblood’s company North Star Shipwrights produces airships of such quality that Fancypants decides to buy it outright to gain access to its innovations and brilliant staff of engineers. Blueblood later reveals to Rarity that Fancypants will gain nothing from the acquisition as he and he alone was responsible for all the designs that made his company’s airships great. Unfortunately his impressive intellect only gives him more reason to look down on others and adds to his arrogance. ]]
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* BalanceOfPower: Khufu’s justification for supplying weapons and technology to the griffon General Karroc centers on this idea. Karroc convinces Khufu that Equestria’s rising economic and technological dominance, growing population and territorial expansion will inevitably lead to armed conflict with the griffon states. The griffons would ultimately lose such a war and if not wiped out entirely would be doomed to a slow death as their society steadily declines into nothing. Khufu, having witnessed the near-destruction of his own people, agrees to help provide Karroc with the resources necessary to put the griffons on equal technological footing to Equestria to deter any aggression by ponykind. Unfortunately Khufu did not realize General Karroc is more than a little {{Ax Crazy}} and is planning to use those weapons to start a war rather than deter one.
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* TheExile: Prince Khufu.Khufu of Camelon which is inhabited by, well, camels. He is revealed to have been a hedonistic prince who did nothing to help defend his people when his kingdom was under threat of invasion. His inaction angered the camels to such an extent that they revolted against their government and the entire royal family of Camelon. A mob eventually killed every last member of Khufu's family and also gouged out his eye to symbolize the blind eye he turned to the suffering of his people. Khufu would have died by hanging if the rope had not snapped, giving him opportunity to escape but never able to return home under penalty of death.
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* ThemeNaming: We are introduced to three more zebra characters: Zolo, Zinzi and Zips. Much like Zecora from the show their names all begin with "Z"
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* ThemeNaming: We are introduced to three more zebra characters: Zolo, Zinzi and Zips. Much Zips who like Zecora from the show their all have names all begin beginning with "Z"
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* UnObtainium: Although pegasi can manufacture cumulus clouds for producing weather, the stratus clouds used in constructing their homes are actually quarried. Rainbow Dash's father found a massive deposit of stratus clouds in the mountains along the Equestrian-Griffon border. The pegasi are now almost entirely dependent on this deposit of stratus to build cities like Cloudsdale. However the griffons claim the Equestrian cloudmining amounts to little more than stealing their resources and is also scaring away the wildlife they hunt. This leads them to lay claim to the area the ponies are settling on and threaten to expel them from what they say is rightfully their land. To further complicate matters, Rainbow's father has recently passed away and without his mediation, contentions between the pegasi and griffons rise. [[spoiler: The conspirators take advantage of the tinderbox between Equestria and the griffon eyries over this contested region to try and trigger open war between the two nations]]
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* UnObtainium: {{Unobtainium}}: Although pegasi can manufacture cumulus clouds for producing weather, the stratus clouds used in constructing their homes are actually quarried. Rainbow Dash's father found a massive deposit of stratus clouds in the mountains along the Equestrian-Griffon border. The pegasi are now almost entirely dependent on this deposit of stratus to build cities like Cloudsdale. However the griffons claim the Equestrian cloudmining amounts to little more than stealing their resources and is also scaring away the wildlife they hunt. This leads them to lay claim to the area the ponies are settling on and threaten to expel them from what they say is rightfully their land. To further complicate matters, Rainbow's father has recently passed away and without his mediation, contentions between the pegasi and griffons rise. [[spoiler: The conspirators take advantage of the tinderbox between Equestria and the griffon eyries over this contested region to try and trigger open war between the two nations]]
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* Unobtainium: Although pegasi can manufacture cumulus clouds for producing weather, the stratus clouds used in constructing their homes are actually quarried. Rainbow Dash's father found a massive deposit of stratus clouds in the mountains along the Equestrian-Griffon border. The pegasi are now almost entirely dependent on this deposit of stratus to build cities like Cloudsdale. However the griffons claim the Equestrian cloudmining amounts to little more than stealing their resources and is also scaring away the wildlife they hunt. This leads them to lay claim to the area the ponies are settling on and threaten to expel them from what they say is rightfully their land. To further complicate matters, Rainbow's father has recently passed away and without his mediation, contentions between the pegasi and griffons rise. [[spoiler: The conspirators take advantage of the tinderbox between Equestria and the griffon eyries over this contested region to try and trigger open war between the two nations]]
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* Unobtainium: UnObtainium: Although pegasi can manufacture cumulus clouds for producing weather, the stratus clouds used in constructing their homes are actually quarried. Rainbow Dash's father found a massive deposit of stratus clouds in the mountains along the Equestrian-Griffon border. The pegasi are now almost entirely dependent on this deposit of stratus to build cities like Cloudsdale. However the griffons claim the Equestrian cloudmining amounts to little more than stealing their resources and is also scaring away the wildlife they hunt. This leads them to lay claim to the area the ponies are settling on and threaten to expel them from what they say is rightfully their land. To further complicate matters, Rainbow's father has recently passed away and without his mediation, contentions between the pegasi and griffons rise. [[spoiler: The conspirators take advantage of the tinderbox between Equestria and the griffon eyries over this contested region to try and trigger open war between the two nations]]
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* ChekhovsGun: To prove that the different airship racers have stuck to the assigned path, each team must stop at specific waystations and pick up a special marker from each site. The first is an apple from Sweet Apples Acres in Ponyville. The second is a string of pearls from the coastal city of Gallopoli. The pearls said to be have a little magic that makes them good luck charms for those at sea. The third is a flower called the Badge of Courage to be retrieved from the jungles of the Impenetrable Lands. [[spoiler: When Rarity and Blueblood are left stranded in the jungle together, the pearls save Rarity’s life by warding away various waterborne predators while the Badge of Courage flower turns out to have potent medicinal properties that save Blueblood’s life from a potentially lethal infection. Even the apple turns out to have some significance as Blueblood uses it to say farewell to his crashed airship and his failed revival of the Alicorn's Cup]]
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* ChekhovsGun: To prove that the different airship racers have stuck to the assigned path, each team must stop at specific waystations and pick up a special marker from each site. The first is an apple from Sweet Apples Acres in Ponyville. The second is a string of pearls from the coastal city of Gallopoli. The pearls are said to be have a little magic that makes them good luck charms for those at sea. The third is a flower called the Badge of Courage to be retrieved from the jungles of the Impenetrable Lands. [[spoiler: When Rarity and Blueblood are left stranded in the jungle together, the pearls save Rarity’s life by warding away various waterborne predators while the Badge of Courage flower turns out to have potent medicinal properties that save Blueblood’s life from a potentially lethal infection. Even the apple turns out to have some significance as Blueblood uses it to say farewell to his crashed airship and his failed revival of the Alicorn's Cup]]
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* BettyAndVeronica: Sort of for Rarity, in the form of Blueblood and [[spoiler: Buckaroo.]] Blueblood is arrogant, abrasive, and insecure but at the same time intelligent, inventive, occasionally courageous, and is aware of his character flaws. [[spoiler: Buckaroo is a former bounty hunter who has done questionable things but is described as “ruggedly handsome”, has shown a compassionate heart and is quite a charmer himself.]] This plot element has not really come to the fore since the ongoing crises Rarity finds herself in make romance the least of her worries.
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* BettyAndVeronica: Sort of for Rarity, in the form of Blueblood and [[spoiler: Buckaroo.]] Blueblood is arrogant, abrasive, and insecure but at the same time intelligent, inventive, occasionally courageous, and is aware of his character flaws. [[spoiler: Buckaroo is a former bounty hunter who has done questionable things but is described as “ruggedly handsome”, has shown a compassionate heart and is quite a charmer himself.]] This plot element has not really come to the fore since the ongoing crises Rarity finds herself in make romance the least of her worries. worries.
* BottleFairy: Rarity, at least according to Blueblood. [[spoiler: She is quite drunk in the second chapter, and does hard liquor more than once later in the story]].
* BottleFairy: Rarity, at least according to Blueblood. [[spoiler: She is quite drunk in the second chapter, and does hard liquor more than once later in the story]].
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Spinning off from the events seen in "Sweet and Elite", Rarity's friendship with Fancypants earns her a space on his team in the upcoming Alicorn's Cup, an airship race across the length and breadth of the known world. However it soon becomes clear that the stakes are much higher than winning and losing a race as Rarity stumbles upon a plot against Equestria. And if being left stranded beyond Equestria's borders with no means of getting home were not difficult enough, Rarity finds herself forced to cooperate with the arrogant Prince Blueblood if she is to have any hope of surviving to warn Equestria of the imminent threat...
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: [[spoiler: Rarity notes early on that Fancypants’ engineer Windlass seems to be quite enamored of him. Later it is revealed that not only is Windlass collaborating with General Karroc, Commander Tempest and Lord Procyon to drive Equestria to open war with the griffons, not only is she using the Heavenstone as a superweapon to help overthrow the Royal Sisters and install Procyon as the new monarch, but she is using the entire conspiracy as a means to realize Fancypants’ vision of a democratic Equestria in the hopes it will make him love her. Even making Procyon king is only a stepping stone for her as he will only be a figurehead to be used to ease the transition from monarchy to democracy. ]]
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: [[spoiler: Rarity notes early on that Fancypants’ engineer Windlass seems to be quite enamored of him. Later it is revealed that not only is Windlass collaborating with General Karroc, Commander Colonel Tempest and Lord Procyon to drive Equestria to open war with the griffons, not only is she using the Heavenstone as a superweapon to help overthrow the Royal Sisters and install Procyon as the new monarch, but she is using the entire conspiracy as a means to realize Fancypants’ vision of a democratic Equestria in the hopes it will make him love her. Even making Procyon king is only a stepping stone for her as he will only be a figurehead to be used to ease the transition from monarchy to democracy. ]]
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Spinning off from the events seen in "Sweet and Elite", Rarity's friendship with Fancypants earns her a space on his team in the upcoming Alicorn's Cup, an airship race across the length and breadth of the known world. However it soon becomes clear that the stakes are much higher than winning and losing a race as Rarity stumbles upon a plot against Equestria. And if being left stranded beyond Equestria's borders with no means of getting home were not difficult enough, Rarity finds herself forced to cooperate with the arrogant Prince Blueblood if she is to have any hope of surviving to warn Equestria of the imminent threat...
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*BettyAndVeronica: Sort of for Rarity, in the form of Blueblood and [[spoiler: Buckaroo.]] Blueblood is arrogant, abrasive, and insecure but at the same time intelligent, inventive, occasionally courageous, and is aware of his character flaws. [[spoiler: Buckaroo is a former bounty hunter who has done questionable things but is described as “ruggedly handsome”, has shown a compassionate heart and is quite a charmer himself.]] This plot element has not really come to the fore since the ongoing crises Rarity finds herself in make romance the least of her worries.
* ChekhovsGun: To prove that the different airship racers have stuck to the assigned path, each team must stop at specific waystations and pick up a special marker from each site. The first is an apple from Sweet Apples Acres in Ponyville. The second is a string of pearls from the coastal city of Gallopoli. The pearls said to be have a little magic that makes them good luck charms for those at sea. The third is a flower called the Badge of Courage to be retrieved from the jungles of the Impenetrable Lands. [[spoiler: When Rarity and Blueblood are left stranded in the jungle together, the pearls save Rarity’s life by warding away various waterborne predators while the Badge of Courage flower turns out to have potent medicinal properties that save Blueblood’s life from a potentially lethal infection. Even the apple turns out to have some significance as Blueblood uses it to say farewell to his crashed airship and his failed revival of the Alicorn's Cup]]
*BettyAndVeronica: Sort of for Rarity, in the form of Blueblood and [[spoiler: Buckaroo.]] Blueblood is arrogant, abrasive, and insecure but at the same time intelligent, inventive, occasionally courageous, and is aware of his character flaws. [[spoiler: Buckaroo is a former bounty hunter who has done questionable things but is described as “ruggedly handsome”, has shown a compassionate heart and is quite a charmer himself.]] This plot element has not really come to the fore since the ongoing crises Rarity finds herself in make romance the least of her worries.
* ChekhovsGun: To prove that the different airship racers have stuck to the assigned path, each team must stop at specific waystations and pick up a special marker from each site. The first is an apple from Sweet Apples Acres in Ponyville. The second is a string of pearls from the coastal city of Gallopoli. The pearls said to be have a little magic that makes them good luck charms for those at sea. The third is a flower called the Badge of Courage to be retrieved from the jungles of the Impenetrable Lands. [[spoiler: When Rarity and Blueblood are left stranded in the jungle together, the pearls save Rarity’s life by warding away various waterborne predators while the Badge of Courage flower turns out to have potent medicinal properties that save Blueblood’s life from a potentially lethal infection. Even the apple turns out to have some significance as Blueblood uses it to say farewell to his crashed airship and his failed revival of the Alicorn's Cup]]
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* ThemeNaming: We are introduced to three more zebra characters: Zolo, Zinzi and Zips. Much like Zecora from the show their names all begin with "Z"
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* ThemeNaming: We are introduced to three more zebra characters: Zolo, Zinzi and Zips. Much like Zecora from the show their names all begin with "Z""Z"
* WorldBuilding: And how! In addition to exploring modern Equestria’s steampunk/magitek, we gain insight into pegasus-griffon relations, learn a little more about zebras, are introduced to the camel race and information about pre-Equestrian times. Furthermore, the course of the airship race travels across Equestria’s borders and to the edges of the known world. [[spoiler: While we do get to see the coastal Gallopoli on Equestria’s southern border and the jungles of the Impenetrable Lands even further south, Rarity’s journey is interrupted when she is thrown off her airship MakesSenseInContext]]
* WorldBuilding: And how! In addition to exploring modern Equestria’s steampunk/magitek, we gain insight into pegasus-griffon relations, learn a little more about zebras, are introduced to the camel race and information about pre-Equestrian times. Furthermore, the course of the airship race travels across Equestria’s borders and to the edges of the known world. [[spoiler: While we do get to see the coastal Gallopoli on Equestria’s southern border and the jungles of the Impenetrable Lands even further south, Rarity’s journey is interrupted when she is thrown off her airship MakesSenseInContext]]
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* SteamPunk: There are prominent elements of steam-driven technology, not the least of which are the zeppelin-style airships involved in the race. Besides owning a personal airship, Fancypants also possesses a steam-powered carriage. Fancypants mentions investing heavily in steam engines as he considers them to be a necessity for expanding Equestria since distant settlements will be deprived of the magilectric grid (see “MagiTek”)
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* SteamPunk: There are prominent elements of steam-driven technology, not the least of which are the zeppelin-style airships involved in the race. Besides owning a personal airship, Fancypants also possesses a steam-powered carriage. Fancypants mentions investing heavily in steam engines as he considers them to be a necessity for expanding Equestria since distant settlements will be deprived of the magilectric grid (see “MagiTek”)“MagiTek”)
* ThemeNaming: We are introduced to three more zebra characters: Zolo, Zinzi and Zips. Much like Zecora from the show their names all begin with "Z"
* ThemeNaming: We are introduced to three more zebra characters: Zolo, Zinzi and Zips. Much like Zecora from the show their names all begin with "Z"
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* AncientArtifact: The Heavenstone.Heavenstone or the Adamas Firmamentum is a massive diamond that can store and amplify unicorn magic as well as enable a unicorn to cast spells at considerable distances. It belongs to the bloodline of Princess Platinum and has remained in their family’s care all the way to the present day. Before Celestia and Luna, unicorns would willingly contribute their magic to the Heavenstone, and in doing so give their ruler the power necessary to move the sun and moon. After the Royal Sisters emerged and the unicorn royal family lost much of their power and prestige, the Heavenstone also fell into disuse and was locked away in the ancestral home of Platinum’s family. [[spoiler: Until recently when Blueblood’s brother Procyon steals it and Windlass turns it into a superweapon.]]
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* FantasticRacism: When Blueblood hosts a dinner for the various racing teams participating in the Alicorn’s Cup, his unicorn mother insults not only for the griffons, two zebras, and one camel attending but also the pegasi and earth ponies present.
* FamilyThemenaming: Blueblood’s family are descendants of Princess Platinum (one of the founders of Equestria) and in her honor the female members are all named after platinum group metals such as his mother Palladium and his sisters Ruthenium and Iridium. Males of the family are named after stars such Blueblood’s brother Procyon. Even Blueblood’s true name is revealed to be Polaris.
* FamilyThemenaming: Blueblood’s family are descendants of Princess Platinum (one of the founders of Equestria) and in her honor the female members are all named after platinum group metals such as his mother Palladium and his sisters Ruthenium and Iridium. Males of the family are named after stars such Blueblood’s brother Procyon. Even Blueblood’s true name is revealed to be Polaris.
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* FantasticRacism: When Blueblood hosts a dinner for the various racing teams participating in the Alicorn’s Cup, his unicorn mother insults not only for the griffons, two three zebras, and one camel attending but also the pegasi and earth ponies present.
*FamilyThemenaming: FamilyThemeNaming: Blueblood’s family are descendants of Princess Platinum (one of the founders of Equestria) and in her honor the female members are all named after platinum group metals such as his mother Palladium and his sisters Ruthenium and Iridium. Males of the family are named after stars such Blueblood’s brother Procyon. Even Blueblood’s true name is revealed to be Polaris.
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* FantasticRacism: When Blueblood hosts a dinner for the various racing teams participating in the Alicorn’s Cup, his unicorn mother insults not only for the griffons, two zebras, and one camel attending but also the pegasi and earth ponies present.
* FamilyThemenaming: Blueblood’s family are descendants of Princess Platinum (one of the founders of Equestria) and in her honor the female members are all named after platinum group metals such as his mother Palladium and his sisters Ruthenium and Iridium. Males of the family are named after stars such Blueblood’s brother Procyon. Even Blueblood’s true name is revealed to be Polaris.
* FamilyThemenaming: Blueblood’s family are descendants of Princess Platinum (one of the founders of Equestria) and in her honor the female members are all named after platinum group metals such as his mother Palladium and his sisters Ruthenium and Iridium. Males of the family are named after stars such Blueblood’s brother Procyon. Even Blueblood’s true name is revealed to be Polaris.
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* Magitek: Building on Lauren Faust's explanation for how technology in Equestria is powered, reference is made to a "magilectric grid" that apparently wirelessly supplies energy to any appliance within a certain radius, such as Pinkie Pie's phonographs or Rarity's sewing machine. Border towns like Appleloosa however are too far to receive energy from the grid, hence the differing levels of technology in different parts of Equestria. Interestingly the "magilectricity" is generated by the dam seen in Ponyville, like a modern hydroelectric dam.
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* Magitek: MagiTek: Building on Lauren Faust's explanation for how technology in Equestria is powered, reference is made to a "magilectric grid" that apparently wirelessly supplies energy to any appliance within a certain radius, such as Pinkie Pie's phonographs or Rarity's sewing machine. Border towns like Appleloosa however are too far to receive energy from the grid, hence the differing levels of technology in different parts of Equestria. Interestingly the "magilectricity" is generated by the dam Celestia Dam seen in Ponyville, like a modern hydroelectric dam.
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* SteamPunk: There are prominent elements of steam-driven technology, not the least of which are the zeppelin-style airships involved in the race. Besides owning a personal airship, Fancypants also possesses a steam-powered carriage. Fancypants mentions investing heavily in steam engines as he considers them to be a necessity for expanding Equestria since distant settlements will be deprived of the magilectric grid (see “MagiTek”)
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* Antihero: Blueblood.
* TheExile: Prince Khufu.
* TheExile: Prince Khufu.
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* JustBetweenYouAndMe: [[spoiler: Windlass and Tempest, when they're about to drop Rarity of the airship]]. And [[spoiler: Windlass]] again [[spoiler: when Rarity meets her in magic plane of the Heavenstone. She threatens to kill Rarity more than once only to continue talking]].
* TheExile: Prince Khufu.
* TheExile: Prince Khufu.
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* InsufferableGenius: Blueblood.
* JustBetweenYouAndMe: [[spoiler: Windlass and Tempest, when they're about to drop Rarity of the airship]]. And [[spoiler: Windlass]] again [[spoiler: when Rarity meets her in magic plane of the Heavenstone. She threatens to kill Rarity more than once only to continuetalking]].
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*TheExile: Prince Khufu.LadyOfWar: Rarity.
* PrinceCharmless: Blueblood.
* SilkHidingSteel: Why, Rarity of course.
* JustBetweenYouAndMe: [[spoiler: Windlass and Tempest, when they're about to drop Rarity of the airship]]. And [[spoiler: Windlass]] again [[spoiler: when Rarity meets her in magic plane of the Heavenstone. She threatens to kill Rarity more than once only to continue
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* PrinceCharmless: Blueblood.
* SilkHidingSteel: Why, Rarity of course.
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* AncientArtifact: The Heavenstone.
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* JustBetweenYouAndMe: [[spoiler: Windlass and Tempest, when they're about to drop Rarity of the airship]]. And [[spoiler: Windlass]] again [[spoiler: when Rarity meets her in magic plane of the Heavenstone. She threatens to kill Rarity more than once only to continue talking]].
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* ActionGirl: Rarity.
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* ActionGirl: Rarity.Rarity.
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Prince Khufu, staying back to take on the griffons and thus enabling Rarity, Zips and Zinzi to escape]].
* TheExile: Prince Khufu.
* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Prince Khufu, staying back to take on the griffons and thus enabling Rarity, Zips and Zinzi to escape]].
* TheExile: Prince Khufu.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6007/The-Flight-of-the-Alicorn The Flight of the Alicorn]] is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by Ponydora Prancypants.
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* ActionGirl: Rarity.
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* ActionGirl: Rarity.