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* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler: Hisashi Midoriya. When the Emperor's Heir sank Taiwan, he ended up accidentally sacrificing all the inhabitants to a dead god who gained enough power to break the boundaries between ths abyss and the real world. This resulted in the Shikoku Incident, where people where being driven insane by the abyss' influence and wielding godflame. Hisashi stepped in, inciting the villians to distract the heroes and police while forcing all of the Royal Guards to fight of the abyssal threats.]]

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* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler: Hisashi Midoriya. When the Emperor's Heir sank Taiwan, he ended up accidentally sacrificing all the inhabitants to a dead god who gained enough power to break the boundaries between ths abyss and the real world. This resulted in the Shikoku Incident, where people where were being driven insane by the abyss' influence and wielding godflame. Hisashi stepped in, inciting the villians villains to distract the heroes and police while forcing all of the Royal Guards to fight of off the abyssal threats.]]



* ComboPlatterPowers: Izuku. Let's see: he can generate shadows, travel to an eldritch dimension, returns to life, and still receives One For All.

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* ComboPlatterPowers: Izuku. Let's see: he can generate shadows, travel to an eldritch dimension, returns to life, and still receives receive One For All.



** Todoroki: [[spoiler: His ability to wield godflame gives him power over all natural laws (energy, time, gravity...), and his ice can manupilate entropy.]]
* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: Izuku, and Inko to a lesser extent, reaches a point of calmly accepting the eldritch horrors and forbidden knowledge he encounters due to his Quirk.

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** Todoroki: [[spoiler: His ability to wield godflame gives him power over all natural laws (energy, time, gravity...), and his ice can manupilate manipulate entropy.]]
* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: Izuku, and Inko to a lesser extent, reaches reach a point of calmly accepting the eldritch horrors and forbidden knowledge he encounters due to his Quirk.



* GodInHumanForm: Essentially what the three king of the abyss, Izuku, [[spoiler: Tokoyami]] and [[spoiler: Todoroki]] are, with each one of them holding dominion over one-third of all existence and being able to destroy the other two-thirds.

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* GodInHumanForm: Essentially what the three king kings of the abyss, Izuku, [[spoiler: Tokoyami]] and [[spoiler: Todoroki]] are, with each one of them holding dominion over one-third of all existence and being able to destroy the other two-thirds.



* LovecraftianSuperpower: Besides entering an Eldritch Location upon death and controlling shadows, Izuku gains knowledge which seems to affect others as well. Him writing higher dimension mathematics in his own blood caused Inko to excel in math to the point of doing the Gaussian integral proof in her head and listening to his BlackSpeech allowed her to talk to certain animals such as birds and spiders.

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* LovecraftianSuperpower: Besides entering an Eldritch Location upon death and controlling shadows, Izuku gains knowledge which that seems to affect others as well. Him writing higher dimension mathematics in his own blood caused Inko to excel in math to the point of doing the Gaussian integral proof in her head and listening to his BlackSpeech allowed her to talk to certain animals such as birds and spiders.

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** Many Worm characters are mentioned throughout the story including Scion, the Slaughterhouse Nine, Lung, Bakuda, the Empire 88.

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** Many Worm ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' characters are mentioned throughout the story including Scion, the Slaughterhouse Nine, Lung, Bakuda, the Empire 88.
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** In the Abyss, Izuku encounters a [[Videogame/{{Doom}} a green being waging war in a place resembling hell]].

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** In the Abyss, Izuku encounters a [[Videogame/{{Doom}} [[VideoGame/{{Doom}} a green being waging war in a place resembling hell]].

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-->'''Inko:''' Abandon whatever fears you have. Just keep looking forward and never stop. Retreat and you’ll grow old with regrets. Hesitate and you’ll die with those regrets.
** [[spoiler:When Hisashi tells Inko of the other realities he's seen, he mentions one where [[Fanfic/{{Leviathan}} Izuku turns into a leviathan]] and another where [[Fanfic/{{YesterdayUponTheStair}} he can see ghosts]].]]

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-->'''Inko:''' --->'''Inko:''' Abandon whatever fears you have. Just keep looking forward and never stop. Retreat and you’ll grow old with regrets. Hesitate and you’ll die with those regrets.
** [[spoiler:When Hisashi tells Inko of the other realities he's seen, he mentions one where [[Fanfic/{{Leviathan}} [[Fanfic/LeviathanMyHeroAcademia Izuku turns into a leviathan]] and another where [[Fanfic/{{YesterdayUponTheStair}} [[Fanfic/YesterdayUponTheStair he can see ghosts]].]]
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Zigzagged with Izuku. Initially diagnosed with Dissociative Identity Disorder, [[spoiler: the voice in his head is now a character]].
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It can also be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12928658/1/The-Dark-Below here]].

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Adult Fear is now a disambig, and this is misuse which boils down to "listing all the scary stuff without context"


* AdultFear: This is a story rampant with immoral people.
** Inko has to deal with a son being driven insane by his powers and [[spoiler: his hallucinations of his dead twin.]]
** Aizawa firmly believes Inko is an abusive parent as of chapter 7.
** Mitsuki Bakugou has to deal with the possibility of her son going to prison for his actions during the Battle Trial.
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* BrownNote: Aizawa erasing Izuku's Quirk causes him intense physical pain and internal bleeding on top of feeling blind without being able to sense shadows.

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* BrownNote: Aizawa erasing Izuku's Quirk causes him intense physical pain and internal bleeding on top of feeling blind without being able to sense shadows. Also the songthatwillendalllifeifitisheard.
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* RealityEnsues:
** Izuku's initial deaths are quite messy, leaving him a lot of cleanup work after he revives.
** The U.A. faculty are ''horrified'' to learn Izuku genuinely believes Bakugou critically injuring him is his own fault.
** After Izuku spends weeks recovering from the battle trial, his muscles have atrophied significantly from lack of use.
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* YouNoTakeCandle: Jin Mo-Ri is a downplayed example. Being from Korea originally, his Japanese is a bit choppy.

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* YouNoTakeCandle: Jin Mo-Ri is a downplayed example. Being from Korea originally, his Japanese is a bit choppy.choppy.
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* TheApprentice: Izuku to All Might.

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* TheApprentice: Izuku to All Might. [[spoiler: He also becomes a temporary one to All For One.]]



* BlowYouAway: All For One has an extremely powerful wind quirk [[spoiler: which he stole from one of UA's expelled students.]] [[spoiler: He gives it to Izuku when he dies.]]



** [[spoiler: Another one of the lines from Eao's prophecy, that Izuku's disciple will take his wings, comes true when Spinner does so, becoming a wish-granting dragon.]]



* TheChessmaster: [[spoiler: Hisashi Midoriya. When the Emperor's Heir sank Taiwan, he ended up accidentally sacrificing all the inhabitants to a dead god who gained enough power to break the boundaries between ths abyss and the real world. This resulted in the Shikoku Incident, where people where being driven insane by the abyss' influence and wielding godflame. Hisashi stepped in, inciting the villians to distract the heroes and police while forcing all of the Royal Guards to fight of the abyssal threats.]]



** Tokoyami: [[spoiler: He acquires a dragon who wields godflame.]]

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** Tokoyami: [[spoiler: He acquires a dragon who wields godflame. Later, he gains an army of abyss creatures.]]
** Todoroki: [[spoiler: His ability to wield godflame gives him power over all natural laws (energy, time, gravity...), and his ice can manupilate entropy.
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** [[spoiler: Several students actually ''die'' when the League attacks the training camp, rather than simply being injured.]]



* GodInHumanForm: Essentially what the three king of the abyss, Izuku, [[spoiler: Tokoyami]] and [[spoiler: Todoroki]] are, with each one of them holding dominion over one-third of all existence and being able to destroy the other two-thirds.



* KilledOffForReal: By the end of the Kamino Ward arc [[spoiler: Uraraka, Asui, Shinsou, Iida, several UA first years, Aizawa, Vlad King, the Pussycats, 6 of the Top Ten Heroes, All Might and All For One are dead.]]



* PassingTheTorch: [[spoiler: Both All Might and All For One do this with Izuku, choosing him to carry on their legacy and change the world.]]



* ReforgedIntoAMinion: [[spoiler: Mineta and Hagakure are kidnapped from the UA facility and turned into Noumus.]]



* SplitPersonality: [[spoiler:Hisashi Midoriya has two personalities: the operator, who feels genuine compassion and love and only wants to go back home to his family; and the World Walker, who is callous and cold, only seeing people in terms of threats and taking over whenever he needs to deal with the abyss' madness.]]

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* SplitPersonality: [[spoiler:Hisashi Midoriya has two personalities: the operator, who feels genuine compassion and love and only wants to go back home to his family; and the World Walker, who is callous and cold, only seeing people in terms of threats and taking over whenever he needs to deal with the abyss' madness.]]

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** [[spoiler: Hisashi, Izuku's absentee father from canon, is a character who is on speaking terms with the Emperor and All For One, as well as a multiverse traveller]]

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** [[spoiler: Hisashi, Izuku's absentee father from canon, is a character who is on speaking terms with the Emperor and All For One, as well as a multiverse traveller]] traveller.]]
** Fumikage Tokoyami, a relatively minor character in canon ends up becoming [[spoiler:the Slave King, one of the three monarchs of the abyss]].



* BoringButPractical: The second round of the Sports Festival consists of pairs claiming one of eight pillars by being the only ones on it for five minutes straight. Taking someone else's pillar first requires "neutralizing" it which takes half as much time as they've spent on it[[labelnote:*]]If one team is on a pillar for four minutes, neutralizing it takes two minutes then the additional five to capture the pillar[[/labelnote]]. As a result, most teams ignore claimed pillars so long as others are still free.

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* BoringButPractical: The second round of the Sports Festival consists of pairs claiming one of eight pillars by being the only ones on it for five minutes straight. Taking someone else's pillar first requires "neutralizing" it which takes half as much time as they've spent on it[[labelnote:*]]If it[[labelnote:]]If one team is on a pillar for four minutes, neutralizing it takes two minutes then the additional five to capture the pillar[[/labelnote]]. As a result, most teams ignore claimed pillars so long as others are still free.



* BreakingtheFourthWall:

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* BreakingtheFourthWall:BreakingTheFourthWall:



** Tokoyami: [[spoiler: He acquires a dragon.]]

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** Tokoyami: [[spoiler: He acquires a dragon.dragon who wields godflame.]]


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** [[spoiler:When Hisashi tells Inko of the other realities he's seen, he mentions one where [[Fanfic/{{Leviathan}} Izuku turns into a leviathan]] and another where [[Fanfic/{{YesterdayUponTheStair}} he can see ghosts]].]]


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* SplitPersonality: [[spoiler:Hisashi Midoriya has two personalities: the operator, who feels genuine compassion and love and only wants to go back home to his family; and the World Walker, who is callous and cold, only seeing people in terms of threats and taking over whenever he needs to deal with the abyss' madness.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: After the Battle Trials, Aizawa rips into All-Might for his failures as a teacher.
-->'''Aizawa:''' Do you know what the biggest responsibility a teacher has towards their students?To keep them safe. And you have just completely jeopardized that for Izuku.\\

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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: After the Battle Trials, Aizawa rips into All-Might All Might for his failures as a teacher.
-->'''Aizawa:''' Do you know what the biggest responsibility a teacher has towards their students?To students? To keep them safe. And you have just completely jeopardized that for Izuku.\\



'''Aizawa:''' I very much doubt that. Have you even once considered what this will do to Ojiro? He was very nearly ready to strangle Bakugou. You left Tokoyami to deal with that situation. And right now, he’s so guilty I’m going to have to spend the rest of the term making sure he doesn’t have a nervous breakdown. I have to make sure Ojiro doesn't kill someone. I had to spend the last hour calming all the students you abandoned because for some unfathomable reason, instead of checking everyone else you had a duty to, you wasted your time uselessly in Chiyo's office.nThat doesn’t even begin to deal with Bakugou. He’ll be lucky if the judge tries him as a juvenile.\\

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'''Aizawa:''' I very much doubt that. Have you even once considered what this will do to Ojiro? He was very nearly ready to strangle Bakugou. You left Tokoyami to deal with that situation. And right now, he’s so guilty I’m going to have to spend the rest of the term making sure he doesn’t have a nervous breakdown. I have to make sure Ojiro doesn't kill someone. I had to spend the last hour calming all the students you abandoned because for some unfathomable reason, instead of checking everyone else you had a duty to, you wasted your time uselessly in Chiyo's office.nThat That doesn’t even begin to deal with Bakugou. He’ll be lucky if the judge tries him as a juvenile.\\
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** All-Might refuses to listen to the various students warning against setting Izuku against Bakugou in the battle trials or stop the fight even after Bakugou resorts to deadly force, resulting in Izuku being heavily injured and landing in Recovery Girl's office for the third time in a week.

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** All-Might All Might refuses to listen to the various students warning against setting Izuku against Bakugou in the battle trials or stop the fight even after Bakugou resorts to deadly force, resulting in Izuku being heavily injured and landing in Recovery Girl's office for the third time in a week.
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** In his first appearance, Aizawa threatens to expel his students just like he did his class two years ago.[[spoiler: During the Sports Festival, Midoriya encounters a security guard multiple times. This guard is revealed to be one of Aizawa's expelled students and planted the explosives in the stadium.]]

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** In his first appearance, Aizawa threatens to expel his students just like he did his class two years ago.[[spoiler: During [[spoiler:During the Sports Festival, Midoriya encounters a security guard multiple times. This guard is revealed to be one of Aizawa's expelled students and planted the explosives in the stadium.]]
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* AmbiguousDisorder: zigzagged with Izuku. Initially diagnosed with Dissociative Identity Disorder, [[spoiler: the voice in his head is now a character]].

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* AmbiguousDisorder: zigzagged Zigzagged with Izuku. Initially diagnosed with Dissociative Identity Disorder, [[spoiler: the voice in his head is now a character]].
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* AdaptationalBadass: Kurogiri [[spoiler: Uses his warp gates for decapitation and leads a war all by himself.]]

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* AdaptationalBadass: Kurogiri [[spoiler: Uses uses his warp gates for decapitation and leads a war all by himself.]]

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