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* CrossoverPowerAcquisition: Dragon and Defiant gain Aura on top of their existing Tinker powers. Notably, it eases their desire to Tinker and keeps their internal Tinkertech maintained.
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* CrossoverPowerAcquisition: Dragon and Defiant gain Aura on top of their existing Tinker powers. Notably, it eases their desire to Tinker and keeps their internal Tinkertech maintained.maintained the same way it can heal minor wounds.
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* CrossoverPowerAcquisition: Dragon and Defiant gain Aura on top of their existing Tinker powers.
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* CrossoverPowerAcquisition: Dragon and Defiant gain Aura on top of their existing Tinker powers. Notably, it eases their desire to Tinker and keeps their internal Tinkertech maintained.
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* CrossoverPowerAcquisition: Dragon and Defiant gain Aura on top of their existing Tinker powers.
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* ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject: Collin puts in a valiant effort to move the conversation away from Lillie's estranged grandfather, but all he comes up with is asking if they passed the combat trials they all won.
* DramaticIrony: After learning that their weapons don't have names, Al groans that Dragon and Collin are robots... and he's half right.
* FlawedPrototype: Collin's tinker power comes up with a slew of flaws with Watt’s prototype paladin, such as its vulnerable antenna and its poor fuel delivery system.
* FriendlyAddressPrivileges: Alabaster asks Collin to call him "Al" after apologizing for being hostile.
* FunWithAcronyms. '''C'''ollin and Dragon (As '''T'''ess Richter) are teamed up with '''L'''illie Coldwater and Alabaster '''B'''lackburn to form team CBLT, or Cobalt.
* HorribleHousing: Since Dragon and Collin have no money besides what they got from selling their diamonds, they have to stay in a small, dark, apartment next to a train track.
* DramaticIrony: After learning that their weapons don't have names, Al groans that Dragon and Collin are robots... and he's half right.
* FlawedPrototype: Collin's tinker power comes up with a slew of flaws with Watt’s prototype paladin, such as its vulnerable antenna and its poor fuel delivery system.
* FriendlyAddressPrivileges: Alabaster asks Collin to call him "Al" after apologizing for being hostile.
* FunWithAcronyms. '''C'''ollin and Dragon (As '''T'''ess Richter) are teamed up with '''L'''illie Coldwater and Alabaster '''B'''lackburn to form team CBLT, or Cobalt.
* HorribleHousing: Since Dragon and Collin have no money besides what they got from selling their diamonds, they have to stay in a small, dark, apartment next to a train track.
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* ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject: Collin Colin puts in a valiant effort to move the conversation away from Lillie's estranged grandfather, but all he comes up with is asking if they passed the combat trials they all won.
* DramaticIrony: After learning that their weapons don't have names, Al groans that Dragon andCollin Colin are robots... and he's half right.
* FlawedPrototype:Collin's Colin's tinker power comes up with a slew of flaws with Watt’s prototype paladin, such as its vulnerable antenna and its poor fuel delivery system.
* FriendlyAddressPrivileges: Alabaster asksCollin Colin to call him "Al" after apologizing for being hostile.
* FunWithAcronyms.'''C'''ollin '''C'''olin and Dragon (As '''T'''ess Richter) are teamed up with '''L'''illie Coldwater and Alabaster '''B'''lackburn to form team CBLT, or Cobalt.
* HorribleHousing: Since Dragon andCollin Colin have no money besides what they got from selling their diamonds, they have to stay in a small, dark, apartment next to a train track.
* DramaticIrony: After learning that their weapons don't have names, Al groans that Dragon and
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** Collin and Dragon face off against Winter Schnee and her teammate Eisenbarth, whose weapon shifts between a club, a tower shield, and a rotary gun.
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* NonAnswer: After Lillie asks about how his weapon teleported, Collin explains that it was "a little technique [he] picked up".
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* NonAnswer: After Lillie asks about how his weapon teleported, Collin Colin explains that it was "a little technique [he] picked up".
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* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: The way that both Aura and Parahuman abilities are gained after the user is under stress leads Collin to fear that Remnant is being experimented on by another Entity.
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* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: The way that both Aura and Parahuman abilities are gained after the user is under stress leads Collin Colin to fear that Remnant is being experimented on by another Entity.
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* NamedWeapons: Al takes Remnant's tradition of naming weapons seriously and dislikes that Burning Edict is the only named weapon on the team.
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Not an example since they're actually a couple.
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* ShipperOnDeck: After seeing the way Collin and Dragon fight together, Lillie compares them to her parents and asks if they're getting married.
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* BifurcatedWeapon: Alabaster's Burning Edict is a flamethrower rifle that spilts into two machetes, both of which can shoot from the handles.
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* BifurcatedWeapon: Alabaster's Burning Edict is a flamethrower rifle that spilts splits into two machetes, both of which can shoot from the handles.handles.
* ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject: Collin puts in a valiant effort to move the conversation away from Lillie's estranged grandfather, but all he comes up with is asking if they passed the combat trials they all won.
* ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject: Collin puts in a valiant effort to move the conversation away from Lillie's estranged grandfather, but all he comes up with is asking if they passed the combat trials they all won.
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* FunWithAcronyms. Collin and Dragon (As Tess Richter) are teamed up with Lillie Coldwater and Alabaster Blackburn to form team CBLT, or Cobalt.
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* FunWithAcronyms. Collin '''C'''ollin and Dragon (As Tess '''T'''ess Richter) are teamed up with Lillie '''L'''illie Coldwater and Alabaster Blackburn '''B'''lackburn to form team CBLT, or Cobalt.
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Reread the chapter. They found a charred corpse.
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* NotEnoughToBury: After the Paladin explodes, rescue workers can only find small pieces of what they believe to be Watts, who was standing right next to it. It remains to be seen whether it is really a case of NeverFoundTheBody as in canon RWBY.
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* AnIcePerson: Lillie's Semblance lets her freeze water in her vicinity and then control it.
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* AnIcePerson: Lillie's Semblance lets her freeze water in her vicinity BifurcatedWeapon: Alabaster's Burning Edict is a flamethrower rifle that spilts into two machetes, both of which can shoot from the handles.
* DramaticIrony: After learning that their weapons don't have names, Al groans that Dragon andthen control it.Collin are robots... and he's half right.
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* SwordAndGun: Lillie cycles through her revolvers with one hand and uses an ice axe with the other.
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* NonAnswer: After Lillie asks about how his weapon teleported, Collin explains that it was "a little technique [he] picked up".
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* ObligatoryEarpieceTouch: Watts makes a show of touching his to cut Pietro off and leave the conversation.
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* ShipperOnDeck: After seeing the way Collin and Dragon fight together, Lillie compares them to her parents and asks if they're getting married.
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* PerspectiveFlip: The story starts with Defiant's perspective of the end of Worm's Teneral epilogue 3, instead of Pandora's and Dragon's.
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* MixAndMatchWeapon:
** Al's weapon, Burning Edict, is a flamethrower and grenade launcher that can split into two machetes that shoot from the hilts.
** Collin and Dragon face off against Winter Schnee and her teammate Eisenbarth, whose weapon shifts between a club, a tower shield, and a rotary gun.
** Al's weapon, Burning Edict, is a flamethrower and grenade launcher that can split into two machetes that shoot from the hilts.
** Collin and Dragon face off against Winter Schnee and her teammate Eisenbarth, whose weapon shifts between a club, a tower shield, and a rotary gun.
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* AnIcePerson: Lillie’s Semblance lets her freeze water in her vicinity and then control it.
* FlawedPrototype: Collin’s tinker power comes up with a slew of flaws with Watt’s prototype paladin, such as its vulnerable antenna and its poor fuel delivery system.
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* AnIcePerson: Lillie’s Lillie's Semblance lets her freeze water in her vicinity and then control it.
* FlawedPrototype:Collin’s Collin's tinker power comes up with a slew of flaws with Watt’s prototype paladin, such as its vulnerable antenna and its poor fuel delivery system.
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* TrenchCoatWarfare: Lillie, instead of reloading, keeps fourteen revolvers inside her coat to switch them out when one runs out of ammo.
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* FunWithAcronyms. Collin and Dragon (As Tess Richter) are teamed up with Lillie Coldwater and Alabaster Blackburn to form team CBLT, or Cobalt.
* FunWithAcronyms. Collin and Dragon (As Tess Richter) are teamed up with Lillie Coldwater and Alabaster Blackburn to form team CBLT, or Cobalt.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Dragon and Defiant receive unlocked Auras on top of their Tinker abilities, making them even stronger and tougher than they were in canon.
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* InstantlyProvenWrong: Watts yells out “Aha! I’ve got it!” while trying to get the Paladin under control. It immediately explodes, seemingly taking him with it.
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''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/tattered-capes-under-a-shattered-moon-post-gm-worm-rwby.913401/ Tattered Capes Under a Shattered Moon]]'' is an ongoing ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' and ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' crossover by [=TheHatterOfMad=]. It can be found at Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom or [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/28933716/chapters/70991442 here]] at Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn.
After Gold Morning, Dragon and Defiant find themselves stranded on Remnant with no way back. Finding their way to the nearby kingdom of Atlas, they make a terrifying discovery: this world may be hosting Entities of its own, giving the people parahuman powers the locals call "Aura". Hoping to learn the truth and save this world from what theirs suffered, the two enroll as Huntsmen in order to learn as much as they can and get to the bottom of the mystery.
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!!This work of fanfiction contains the following tropes:
* AnArmAndALeg: The story covers the accident where Ironwood lost his right arm and leg to a malfunctioning Paladin.
* AnIcePerson: Lillie’s Semblance lets her freeze water in her vicinity and then control it.
* FlawedPrototype: Collin’s tinker power comes up with a slew of flaws with Watt’s prototype paladin, such as its vulnerable antenna and its poor fuel delivery system.
* HorribleHousing: Since Dragon and Collin have no money besides what they got from selling their diamonds, they have to stay in a small, dark, apartment next to a train track.
* InstantlyProvenWrong: Watts yells out “Aha! I’ve got it!” while trying to get the Paladin under control. It immediately explodes, seemingly taking him with it.
* NotEnoughToBury: After the Paladin explodes, rescue workers can only find small pieces of what they believe to be Watts, who was standing right next to it. It remains to be seen whether it is really a case of NeverFoundTheBody as in canon RWBY.
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: After Gold Morning Dragon and Defiant crashed on Remnant, with the portal that brought them there damaged beyond their ability to repair.
* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: The way that both Aura and Parahuman abilities are gained after the user is under stress leads Collin to fear that Remnant is being experimented on by another Entity.
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After Gold Morning, Dragon and Defiant find themselves stranded on Remnant with no way back. Finding their way to the nearby kingdom of Atlas, they make a terrifying discovery: this world may be hosting Entities of its own, giving the people parahuman powers the locals call "Aura". Hoping to learn the truth and save this world from what theirs suffered, the two enroll as Huntsmen in order to learn as much as they can and get to the bottom of the mystery.
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!!This work of fanfiction contains the following tropes:
* AnArmAndALeg: The story covers the accident where Ironwood lost his right arm and leg to a malfunctioning Paladin.
* AnIcePerson: Lillie’s Semblance lets her freeze water in her vicinity and then control it.
* FlawedPrototype: Collin’s tinker power comes up with a slew of flaws with Watt’s prototype paladin, such as its vulnerable antenna and its poor fuel delivery system.
* HorribleHousing: Since Dragon and Collin have no money besides what they got from selling their diamonds, they have to stay in a small, dark, apartment next to a train track.
* InstantlyProvenWrong: Watts yells out “Aha! I’ve got it!” while trying to get the Paladin under control. It immediately explodes, seemingly taking him with it.
* NotEnoughToBury: After the Paladin explodes, rescue workers can only find small pieces of what they believe to be Watts, who was standing right next to it. It remains to be seen whether it is really a case of NeverFoundTheBody as in canon RWBY.
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: After Gold Morning Dragon and Defiant crashed on Remnant, with the portal that brought them there damaged beyond their ability to repair.
* TraumaticSuperpowerAwakening: The way that both Aura and Parahuman abilities are gained after the user is under stress leads Collin to fear that Remnant is being experimented on by another Entity.
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