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* AdultFear: What else do you expect when you find out that your child becomes hooked of a drugged candy?
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* BalloonBelly: When Lincoln goes to Ronnie Anne's room, he sees that she has put on some pounds due to eating the drugged candy.
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* BalloonBelly: When Lincoln goes to Ronnie Anne's room, he sees that she has put on some pounds due to eating the drugged candy. However, it was seldom elaborated on throughout the rest of the fic.
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[[caption-width-right:180:Ronnie Anne is KO'ed.]]''
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[[caption-width-right:180:Ronnie Anne is KO'ed.]]''
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[[caption-width-right:180:Ronnie Anne is KO'ed.]]''
[[caption-width-right:180:Ronnie Anne is KO'ed.]]''
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** He also calls the sisters meddlesome thorugh his loudspeaker during the 5th chapter.
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** He also calls the sisters meddlesome thorugh through his loudspeaker during the 5th chapter.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: The Louds and Casagrandes get [=McGee=] arrested and he is sent to 25 years in prison on the charges of child endangerment and illegal drug making (though Lisa is unsure if the latter can be counted as a law.)
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* PragmaticHero: Lisa tells Luan that if they alert the authorities about the kids in Green Lake City begin affected by drugs, it will cause a panic throughout the city and the drug-maker would cover his or her tracks.
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* WrongGenreGavvy: At the beginning of the 5th chapter, Lana asks Lucy on how they can deal with the zombified kids based on the assumption that she's an 'expert on the dead'. Lucy point out that the kids are not really dead zombies, just hypnotized victims and that she is more partial to vampires and werewolves.
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* WrongGenreGavvy: WrongGenreSavvy: At the beginning of the 5th chapter, Lana asks Lucy on how they can deal with the zombified kids based on the assumption that she's an 'expert on the dead'. Lucy point out that the kids are not really dead zombies, just hypnotized victims and that she is more partial to vampires and werewolves.
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* TemptingFate: When the sisters climb the fire escape on [=McGee's=] candy shop to take refuge from the zombified kids on the roof, Lori believes that they're safe since the kids are too slow and frail to climb said fire escape...until [=McGee=] orders his brainwashed army to get the sisters through a loudspeaker on his shop and the zombie kids climb the fire escape with no difficulty. Lynn calls Lori out on this shortly after.
* WrongGenreGavvy: At the beginning of the 5th chapter, Lana asks Lucy on how they can deal with the zombified kids based on the assumption that she's an 'expert on the dead'. Lucy point out that the kids are not really dead zombies, just hypnotized victims and that she is more partial to vampires and werewolves.
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--> '''[=McGee=]''' Those meddling Mexicans. I would have gotten off scott-free if it wasn't for them.
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--> '''[=McGee=]''' Those meddling Mexicans. I would have gotten off scott-free if it wasn't for them.them.
** He also calls the sisters meddlesome thorugh his loudspeaker during the 5th chapter.
** He also calls the sisters meddlesome thorugh his loudspeaker during the 5th chapter.
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** Rosa also gets a mention since she goes nowhere without her cuisine.
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It takes place a while after Ronnie Anne relocates of Green Lake City. She, the pre-teens of Green Lake City and soon even Lincoln are victims to a [[GRatedDrug drug inside a new candy.]] It soon falls on The Loud Sisters to put an end to this by confronting the one who manufactured the candy.
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It takes place a while after Ronnie Anne relocates of to Green Lake City. She, the pre-teens of Green Lake City and soon even Lincoln are victims to a [[GRatedDrug drug inside a new candy.]] It soon falls on The the Loud Sisters sisters to put an end to this by confronting the one who manufactured the candy.
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** [=McGee=] says a variation the famous Scooby-Doo 'meddling kids' line in the 5th chapter when the Casagrandes cure his victims with Rosa's cuisine.
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** This also applies to Nikki, Casey, and Sameer, who directed Ronnie Anne to [=McGee's=] store where she receives her drugged candy and they come by her apartment in chapter 3 to give her more candy.
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** This also applies to Nikki, Casey, and Sameer, who directed Ronnie Anne to [=McGee's=] store where she receives her drugged candy and they come by her apartment in chapter 3 to give her more candy.candy.
* YouMeddlingKids: [=McGee=] says this line in the 5th chapter when the Casagrandes cure his victims with Rosa's cuisine.
--> '''[=McGee=]''' Those meddling Mexicans. I would have gotten off scott-free if it wasn't for them.
* YouMeddlingKids: [=McGee=] says this line in the 5th chapter when the Casagrandes cure his victims with Rosa's cuisine.
--> '''[=McGee=]''' Those meddling Mexicans. I would have gotten off scott-free if it wasn't for them.
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** [=McGee=] says a variation the famous Scooby-Doo 'meddling kids' in the 5th chapter when the Casagrandes cure his victims with Rosa's cuisine.
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** [=McGee=] says a variation the famous Scooby-Doo 'meddling kids' line in the 5th chapter when the Casagrandes cure his victims with Rosa's cuisine.
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** [=McGee=] says a variation the famous Scooby-Doo 'meddling kids' in the 5th chapter when the Casagrandes cure his victims with Rosa's cuisine.
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* BalloonBelly: When Lincoln goes to Ronnie Anne's room, he sees that she has put on some pounds due to eating the drugged candy.
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* DemotedToExtra: Despite helping out in the end, the Casagrande's are barely in the story as they spend most of the time watching an improv comedy show.
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* DemotedToExtra: Despite helping out in the end, the Casagrande's Casagrandes are barely in the story as they spend most of the time watching an improv comedy show.
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* DemotedToExtra: Despite helping out in the end, the Casagrande's are barely in the story as they spend most of the time watching an improv comedy show.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The fanfic is about ''kids'' being doped up on drugs.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The fanfic is about ''kids'' being doped up on drugs.drugs and that's only mild compared to the zombie movie scenario the sisters find themselves in later on in the 4th and 5th chapters of this fic.
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** This also applies to Nikki, Casey, and Sameer, who directed Ronnie Anne to [=McGee's=]] store where she receives her drugged candy and they come by her apartment in chapter 3 to give her more candy
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** This also applies to Nikki, Casey, and Sameer, who directed Ronnie Anne to [=McGee's=]] [=McGee's=] store where she receives her drugged candy and they come by her apartment in chapter 3 to give her more candycandy.
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* AdultFear: What else do you expect when you find out that your child becomes hooked of a drugged candy?
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* CrazyPrepared: The beginning of the 4th chapter reveals that Lisa hardly goes anywhere without her portable science kit.
** [=McGee=] also counts in the 4th chapter when he sends out a mist through Great Lake City to entrance the kids affected by his drug (Lincoln and Ronnie Anne0 included, to deal with the Loud sisters.
** [=McGee=] also counts in the 4th chapter when he sends out a mist through Great Lake City to entrance the kids affected by his drug (Lincoln and Ronnie Anne0 included, to deal with the Loud sisters.
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* ChekhovsGun: Rosa's cuisine that she made for the sisters ends up having an adverse effect of [=McGee's=] drug.
* CrazyPrepared: The beginning of the 4th chapter reveals that Lisa hardly goes anywhere without her portable sciencekit.
kit, which she uses to study the drugged candy.
** [=McGee=] also counts in the 4th chapter when he sends out a mist through Great Lake City to entrance the kids affected by his drug (Lincoln and RonnieAnne0 included, Anne included) to deal with the Loud sisters.
* CrazyPrepared: The beginning of the 4th chapter reveals that Lisa hardly goes anywhere without her portable science
** [=McGee=] also counts in the 4th chapter when he sends out a mist through Great Lake City to entrance the kids affected by his drug (Lincoln and Ronnie
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* LackOfEmpathy: [=McGee=] is willing to drug a bunch of kids in order for his store to run afloat.
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* ShoutOut: The story summary on FanFiction states that the entire plot is based on the Captain Planet episode, Mind Pollution, which is also about drugs and how a ne'er-do-well corrupts the young population with drugs.
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* BigBad: Drew H. McGee is the villain of the fanfic. He puts the health of many kids on the line just to save his candy shop.
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* BigBad: Drew H. McGee [=McGee=] is the villain of the fanfic. He puts the health of many kids on the line just to save his candy shop.shop.
* BigDamnHeroes: The Casagrandes help the Loud sisters fend off the zombified pre-teens at the fifth chapter.
* BigDamnHeroes: The Casagrandes help the Loud sisters fend off the zombified pre-teens at the fifth chapter.
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* PlotHole: Lily was revealed to be in the 2nd chapter, but in the 4th chapter, Lucy reveals they left her home. This is because the author forgot that he added Lily in the second chapter.
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** [=McGee=] also counts in the 4th chapter when he sends out a mist through Great Lake City to entrance the kids affected by his drug (Lincoln and Ronnie Anne0 included, to deal with the Loud sisters.
* DarkerAndEdgier: The fanfic is about ''kids'' being doped up on drugs.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [=McGee=] ends up getting affected by his own drug when Lana uses it to subdue him at the end of the 5th chapter.
* PlotHole: Lily wasrevealed to be in the 2nd chapter, but in the 4th chapter, Lucy reveals they that the sisters left her at home. This is because the author forgot that he added Lily in Lily.
* ToxicFriendInfluence: An accidental example when Ronnie Anne, while doped up on thesecond chapter.drug candy, goads Lincoln into eating it, which in turn makes him hooked on the drug.
** This also applies to Nikki, Casey, and Sameer, who directed Ronnie Anne to [=McGee's=]] store where she receives her drugged candy and they come by her apartment in chapter 3 to give her more candy
* DarkerAndEdgier: The fanfic is about ''kids'' being doped up on drugs.
* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [=McGee=] ends up getting affected by his own drug when Lana uses it to subdue him at the end of the 5th chapter.
* PlotHole: Lily was
* ToxicFriendInfluence: An accidental example when Ronnie Anne, while doped up on the
** This also applies to Nikki, Casey, and Sameer, who directed Ronnie Anne to [=McGee's=]] store where she receives her drugged candy and they come by her apartment in chapter 3 to give her more candy
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12848082/1/Sugar-Drop Sugar Drop]] is a WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse fanfic made by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/7468428/greendogtheater greendogtheater]].
It takes place a while after Ronnie Anne relocates of Green Lake City. She, the pre-teens of Green Lake City and soon even Lincoln are victims to a [[GRatedDrug drug inside a new candy.]] It soon falls on The Loud Sisters to put an end to this by confronting the one who manufactured the candy.
!Tropes
* BigBad: Drew H. McGee is the villain of the fanfic. He puts the health of many kids on the line just to save his candy shop.
* CrazyPrepared: The beginning of the 4th chapter reveals that Lisa hardly goes anywhere without her portable science kit.
* PlotHole: Lily was revealed to be in the 2nd chapter, but in the 4th chapter, Lucy reveals they left her home. This is because the author forgot that he added Lily in the second chapter.
It takes place a while after Ronnie Anne relocates of Green Lake City. She, the pre-teens of Green Lake City and soon even Lincoln are victims to a [[GRatedDrug drug inside a new candy.]] It soon falls on The Loud Sisters to put an end to this by confronting the one who manufactured the candy.
!Tropes
* BigBad: Drew H. McGee is the villain of the fanfic. He puts the health of many kids on the line just to save his candy shop.
* CrazyPrepared: The beginning of the 4th chapter reveals that Lisa hardly goes anywhere without her portable science kit.
* PlotHole: Lily was revealed to be in the 2nd chapter, but in the 4th chapter, Lucy reveals they left her home. This is because the author forgot that he added Lily in the second chapter.
