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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48108/statistics Statistics]]'' is a short experimental piece of fan fiction by ''My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic'' fanfic author Fanfic/{{xTSGx}}.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48108/statistics Statistics]]'' is a short experimental piece of fan fiction by ''My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic'' fanfic author Fanfic/{{xTSGx}}.
Creator/{{xTSGx}}.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48108/statistics Statistics]]'' is a short experimental piece of fan fiction by ''My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic'' fanfic author [[http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&user=14342 xTSGx]].
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48108/statistics Statistics]]'' is a short experimental piece of fan fiction by ''My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic'' fanfic author [[http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&user=14342 xTSGx]].
Fanfic/{{xTSGx}}.
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It could be compared to [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/HemingwaysSixWordStory Hemingway's Six Word Short Story]], in that it uses short and perfunctory descriptions to convey emotion and story.
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It could be compared to [[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/HemingwaysSixWordStory Hemingway's Six Word Short Story]], ''Literature/HemingwaysSixWordStory'', in that it uses short and perfunctory descriptions to convey emotion and story.
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* OneWordTitle: A common feature of many xTSGx fics.
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* FlashFiction: At only 1,000 words and with a very simple premise, this fic arguably lies on the longer end of that genre.
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* SufficientlyAnalyzedMagic: One of the statistics notes that "eight point six terajoules" of magic was released by the Elements.
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It could be compared to Hemingway's Six Word Short Story, in that it uses short and perfunctory descriptions to convey emotion and story.
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It could be compared to to [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/HemingwaysSixWordStory Hemingway's Six Word Short Story, Story]], in that it uses short and perfunctory descriptions to convey emotion and story.
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* IShouldHaveBeenBetter: Celestia spends "Nine thousand, three hundred and eighty four hours" appreciating Luna's wonderful night like she feels she should have done all along.
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* IShouldHaveBeenBetter: Celestia spends "Nine thousand, three hundred and eighty four hours" appreciating Luna's wonderful night like she feels she should have done all along.along, as well as spending money and passing laws to encourage all of Equestia to do so as well.
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* DriventoSuicide: Something Celestia attempted in her guilt ''three times''.
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* DriventoSuicide: Something Celestia attempted in her out of guilt ''three times''.
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* DriventoSuicide: Something Celestia attempted in her guilt **three times**.
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* DriventoSuicide: Something Celestia attempted in her guilt **three times**.''three times''.
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* DarkestHour: For Celestia, this was the entire thousand years she spent without her sister.
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* IShouldHaveBeenBetter: Celestia spends "Nine thousand, three hundred and eighty four hours" appreciating Luna's wonderful night like she feels she should have done all along.
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* MyGreatestFailure: Mentioned twice by name.
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* NoodleIncident: A large portion of the story references battles and wars we never see, failed attempts to bring Luna back that are not described, and other Faithful Students besides Twilight who are not mentioned by name. Each one reminds Celestia of her loss in some way.
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* NoodleIncident: A large portion of the story references battles and wars we never see, failed attempts to bring Luna back that are not described, and other Faithful Students besides Twilight who are not mentioned by name. Each one reminds Celestia of her loss in some way.way.
* SurvivorGuilt: Celestia feels this after her battle with Nightmare Moon.
* SurvivorGuilt: Celestia feels this after her battle with Nightmare Moon.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone?: Celestia certainly feels this, but is forced to reflect that is was necessary to save her citizens.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone?: MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Celestia certainly feels this, but is forced to reflect that is was necessary to save her citizens.
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* Hope Spot: At the end, Twilight is able to assemble her friends and the Elements and save Luna and defeat the Nightmare once and for all.
* My God, What Have I Done?: Celestia certainly feels this, but is forced to reflect that is was necessary to save her citizens.
* My God, What Have I Done?: Celestia certainly feels this, but is forced to reflect that is was necessary to save her citizens.
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* Hope Spot: HopeSpot: At the end, Twilight is able to assemble her friends and the Elements and save Luna and defeat the Nightmare once and for all.
*My God, What Have I Done?: MyGodWhatHaveIDone?: Celestia certainly feels this, but is forced to reflect that is was necessary to save her citizens.
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*Hope Spot: At the end, Twilight is able to assemble her friends and the Elements and save Luna and defeat the Nightmare once and for all.
*My God, What Have I Done?: Celestia certainly feels this, but is forced to reflect that is was necessary to save her citizens.
*My God, What Have I Done?: Celestia certainly feels this, but is forced to reflect that is was necessary to save her citizens.
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* Noodle Incident: A large portion of the story references battles and wars we never see, failed attempts to bring Luna back that are not described, and other Faithful Students besides Twilight who are not mentioned by name. Each one reminds Celestia of her loss in some way.
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* Noodle Incident: NoodleIncident: A large portion of the story references battles and wars we never see, failed attempts to bring Luna back that are not described, and other Faithful Students besides Twilight who are not mentioned by name. Each one reminds Celestia of her loss in some way.
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As always, Spoilers:
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As always,
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It is essentially a list of everything Princess Celestia did without her sister following Nightmare Moon's banishment to the Moon. Celestia bitterly remembers each fact and dimension of the loss of her sister. She thinks of all the ponies who have live and died over the course of that millennium. It is sad and reflective, but ends on a happy note as she thinks of the reuniting of the Elements of Harmony that
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It is essentially a list of everything Princess Celestia did without her sister following Nightmare Moon's banishment to the Moon. Celestia bitterly remembers each fact and dimension of the loss of her sister. She thinks of all the ponies who have live and died over the course of that millennium. It is sad and reflective, but ends on a happy note as she thinks of the reuniting of the Elements of Harmony that redeemed Luna.
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It is essentially a list of everything Princess Celestia did without her sister following Nightmare Moon's banishment to the Moon.
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It is essentially a list of everything Princess Celestia did without her sister following Nightmare Moon's banishment to the Moon.
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* DriventoSuicide: Something Celestia attempted in her guilt **three times**.times**.
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!!''Statistics'' provide examples of the following Tropes:
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!!''Statistics'' provide provides examples of the following Tropes:
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* Driven to Suicide: Something Celestia attempted, **three times**.
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* Driven to Suicide: DriventoSuicide: Something Celestia attempted, attempted in her guilt **three times**.
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* DriventoSuicide: Something Celestia attempted, **three times**.
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* DriventoSuicide: Driven to Suicide: Something Celestia attempted, **three times**.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48108/statistics Statistics]]'' is a short experimental piece of fan fiction by ''My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic'' fanfic author [[http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&user=14342 xTSGx]].
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48108/statistics Statistics]]'' is a short experimental piece of fan fiction by ''My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic'' fanfic author [[http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&user=14342 xTSGx]].xTSGx]].
It is essentially a list of everything Princess Celestia did without her sister following Nightmare Moon's banishment to the Moon.
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!!''Statistics'' provide examples of the following Tropes:
* DriventoSuicide: Something Celestia attempted, **three times**.
It is essentially a list of everything Princess Celestia did without her sister following Nightmare Moon's banishment to the Moon.
As always, Spoilers:
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!!''Statistics'' provide examples of the following Tropes:
* DriventoSuicide: Something Celestia attempted, **three times**.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48108/statistics Statistics is a short experimental piece of fan fiction by ''My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic'' fanfic author [[http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&user=14342 xTSGx]].
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48108/statistics Statistics Statistics]]'' is a short experimental piece of fan fiction by ''My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic'' fanfic author [[http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&user=14342 xTSGx]].
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/48108/statistics Statistics is a short experimental piece of fan fiction by ''My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic'' fanfic author [[http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&user=14342 xTSGx]].
