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* DoorJudo: The protagonist tries this when [[spoiler: breaking into Slate's house to look for [[StalkerWithACrush evidence of his stalking]]]]. [[EpicFail It doesn't work]]. Turns out the door [[FailedASpotCheck opens the other way]].
* [[TheDoorSlamsYou The Wall Slams You]]: A variation. When [[spoiler: Slate tries attacking the protagonist]], Rarity teleports him inside his house, resulting in him slamming into a wall.



* OpenSaysMe: The protagonist tries this when [[spoiler: breaking into Slate's house]] to look for [[StalkerWithACrush evidence of his stalking]]. [[EpicFail It doesn't work]]. Turns out the door [[FailedASpotCheck opens the other way]].



* RealityEnsues: The protagonist - who is ''not'' a [[Creator/ArnoldSchwarzenegger heavily-built man in an action movie]] - tries [[DoorJudo kicking a door down]]. [[EpicFail It fails badly]], and he injures his leg in the process.

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* RealityEnsues: The protagonist - who is ''not'' a [[Creator/ArnoldSchwarzenegger heavily-built man in an action movie]] - tries [[DoorJudo [[OpenSaysMe kicking a door down]]. [[EpicFail It fails badly]], and he injures his leg in the process.


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* TooFastToStop: When [[spoiler: Slate tries attacking the protagonist]], Rarity teleports him inside his house, resulting in him slamming into a wall.
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* TeleportationSickness: The protagonist suffers this after Twilight teleports them to Canterlot. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] as the spell is not being designed to take human anatomy into account, which Rarity corrects for when she learns how to do this herself.

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* TeleportationSickness: The protagonist suffers this after Twilight teleports them to Canterlot. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] as the spell is not being designed to take human anatomy into account, which Rarity corrects for when she learns how to do this herself.

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* AboveTheInfluence: [[spoiler: The protagonist resists giving in to the mutual attraction between him and Fluttershy after a night of drinking, knowing that it would only lead to meaningless drunken sex]].

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* AboveTheInfluence: After a night of drinking, [[spoiler: The the protagonist resists giving in to the mutual attraction between him and Fluttershy after a night of drinking, Fluttershy]], knowing that it would only lead to meaningless drunken sex]].sex.



* AsYouKnow: A variation. Given that the audience is likely aware of the [[ContinuityNod cast's previous adventures]], the details are usually glossed over by the narrative whenever they're brought up, before cutting to the next scene.
* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Ponies apparently tend to be quite prone to this, according to the protagonist. Ponyville seems to be particularly susceptible, if Cashmere's words are anything to go by.
* AuthorAppeal: [[WordOfGod The author]] makes no secret that Rarity is his favorite pony, and this was one reason for writing the story. The other reason...

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* AsYouKnow: A variation. Given that the audience is likely aware of the [[ContinuityNod cast's cast's]] [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic previous adventures]], the details are usually glossed over by the narrative whenever they're brought up, before cutting to the next scene.
* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Ponies apparently tend to be quite prone to this, according to the protagonist.protagonist who describes them as "easily amused". Ponyville seems to be particularly susceptible, if Cashmere's words are anything to go by.
* AuthorAppeal: [[WordOfGod The author]] makes no secret that Rarity is his favorite favourite pony, and this was one reason for writing the story. The other reason...



* BelievingTheirOwnLies: [[spoiler: Rarity herself suggests she allowed this to happen regarding her relationship with Cashmere, in order to forget the mistakes she made when handling Cashmere's affections]].

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* BelievingTheirOwnLies: [[spoiler: Rarity herself suggests she allowed this to happen regarding her relationship with Cashmere, Cashmere]], in order to forget the mistakes she made when in handling Cashmere's affections]].the situation.



** Threatening their loved ones tends to be an easy way of pushing this for both Rarity and the protagonist.

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** Threatening their loved ones tends to be an easy way of pushing this for both Rarity and the protagonist.protagonist, especially the latter.



* BewilderingPunishment: [[ZigZaggingTrope Zig-Zagged]]. [[spoiler: Rarity claims that Cashmere is motivated by her [[GreenEyedMonster jealousy and resentment]], something which she initially denies. However, when Cashmere finally [[VillainousBreakdown breaks down]] and admits this, it's revealed that Rarity [[BelievingTheirOwnLies allowed herself to forget the true details]] of what went down, and thus was actually unaware of what precisely she had done]].

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* BewilderingPunishment: [[ZigZaggingTrope Zig-Zagged]]. [[spoiler: Rarity claims that Cashmere is motivated by her [[GreenEyedMonster jealousy and resentment]], something which she initially denies. However, [[spoiler: when Cashmere finally [[VillainousBreakdown breaks down]] and admits this, it's revealed that Rarity [[BelievingTheirOwnLies allowed herself to forget the true details]] of what went down, and thus was actually unaware of what precisely she had done]].



* BitchInSheepsClothing: Cashmere. She'll hide her ruthlessness behind her outwardly friendly and sultry exterior, but when the chips are down she'll readily show her true colors.

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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Cashmere. She'll hide her ruthlessness behind her outwardly friendly and sultry exterior, but when the chips are down she'll readily show her true colors.colours. [[spoiler: Subverted later on, when underneath her bitterness, she actually comes across as a fairly decent pony]].



* BriefAccentImitation: Cashmere briefly adopts a "terrible" impression of AJ's southern accent when she recounts the time Applejack threatened her over her behaviour towards Rarity. She even gives herself a temporary ponytail to go along with it.

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Cashmere briefly adopts a "terrible" impression of AJ's southern accent when she recounts the time Applejack threatened her over her behaviour towards Rarity. She even gives herself a temporary ponytail to go along with it.it.
** Twilight does a pretty good one of Luna's ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE in a flashback.



** Rainbow Dash is quite the lightweight owing to her fast metabolism, but completely denies Applejack's warnings over this.

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** Rainbow Dash is quite the lightweight owing to her fast metabolism, but completely denies ignores Applejack's warnings over this.this and denies having such a problem.



* CatapultNightmare: The protagonist suffers these when experiencing a FlashbackNightmare.
* CatFight: A fairly regular occurance between Rarity and Cashmere, particularly when they very nearly come to blows at a social function in Chapter 3.

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* CatapultNightmare: The protagonist suffers these when experiencing a FlashbackNightmare.
FlashbackNightmare, which tends to frighten Rarity quite badly.
* CatFight: A fairly regular occurance occurrence between Rarity and Cashmere, particularly when they very nearly come to blows at a social function in Chapter 3.



* ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler: Rarity's picture of herself and Cashmere, which is first brought up in Chapter 2 and goes unfired until Chapter 25, when Rarity uses her copy of the photo as a reminder to Cashmere of just how bitter she's become, prompting her VillainousBreakdown]].

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* ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler: Rarity's picture of herself and Cashmere, which is first brought up in Chapter 2 and goes unfired until Chapter 25, [[spoiler: when Rarity uses her copy of the photo as a reminder to Cashmere of just how bitter she's become, prompting her VillainousBreakdown]].



* CombatPragmatist: The protagonist, who opens his fight with [[spoiler: Slate]] with a HeyYouHaymaker, and is perfectly willing to break limbs and bones. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], as he does have military training.

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* CombatPragmatist: The protagonist, who opens his fight with [[spoiler: Slate]] with a HeyYouHaymaker, and is perfectly willing to break limbs and bones.bones in order to win. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], as he does have military training.



* CoolBoat: The Destroyer-class ship at the start of the story, which comes with its own prototype [[InvisibilityCloak cloaking system]]. Unfortunately, there's a very good reason why it's still a prototype...

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* CoolBoat: The Destroyer-class ship at the start of the story, which comes with its own prototype [[InvisibilityCloak cloaking system]]. Unfortunately, there's a very good reason why it's [[StuffBlowingUp still a prototype...prototype]]...



* DesperationAttack: As a last attempt to evade arrest, [[spoiler: Slate tries to [[RammingAlwaysWorks ram the protagonist]] [[GrievousHarmWithABody with his own body]]. It probably would have killed the protagonist, if Rarity [[ChekhovsSkill hadn't intervened]]]].

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* DesperationAttack: As a last attempt to evade arrest, [[spoiler: Slate tries to [[RammingAlwaysWorks ram the protagonist]] [[GrievousHarmWithABody with his own body]].body, by flying at top speed]]. It probably would have killed the protagonist, if Rarity [[ChekhovsSkill hadn't intervened]]]].



** Inverted, if Cashmere is to be believed. She dismisses Rarity's achievements as meaningless and undeserving of the respect that's been afforded to her.
* TheEngineer: The protagonist, who was an engineer in the US Army - on loan to the US Navy for a secret project - before he wound up in Equestria.

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** Inverted, if Cashmere is to be believed. She dismisses Rarity's achievements as meaningless and undeserving of the respect that's been afforded to her.
her, though she [[GreenEyedMonster isn't the most impartial judge]].
* TheEngineer: The protagonist, who was an engineer in the US Army - on loan to the US Navy for a [[CoolBoat secret project project]] - before he wound up in Equestria.



* GoodOldFisticuffs: The fight between the protagonist and Slate, when the latter is confronted over his [[StalkerWithACrush stalking]]. Despite the protagonist's martial arts expertise and military training, [[PostVictoryCollapse he still takes a heavy beating]].

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* GoodOldFisticuffs: The fight between the protagonist and Slate, [[spoiler: Slate]], when the latter is confronted over his [[StalkerWithACrush stalking]]. Despite the protagonist's martial arts expertise and military training, [[PostVictoryCollapse he still takes a heavy beating]].



* MurderTheHypotenuse: It's left somewhat ambiguous if this was what [[spoiler: Slate]] was aiming for, or if he was just taking advantage of an accident, but certainly elements of this are shown.

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* MurderTheHypotenuse: It's left somewhat ambiguous if this was what [[spoiler: Slate]] was aiming for, or if he was just taking advantage of an accident, but certainly most elements of this are shown.shown when he refuses to help and instead rants at the protagonist for 'stealing' Rarity.



* NotSoDifferent: Cashmere accuses Rarity of this when the latter strikes back with some schemes of her own. Rarity protests this assertion.
* NotWhatItLooksLike: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. Rarity and the protagonist's encounter in the first chapter is ''exactly'' what it looks like, but Pinkie in her naivety mistakes it for a big hug, and completely accepts the excuse that [[TheImmodestOrgasm Rarity was simply very excited]] [[BlatantLies about her recent business success]].

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* NotSoDifferent: Cashmere accuses Rarity of this when the latter strikes back with some schemes of her own. Rarity protests this assertion.
assertion, though it's shown over the course of the story that she's not as different as she'd like to believe.
* NotWhatItLooksLike: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. Rarity and the protagonist's encounter in the first chapter is ''exactly'' what it looks like, but Pinkie in her naivety mistakes it for a "a big hug, hug", and completely accepts the excuse that [[TheImmodestOrgasm Rarity was simply very excited]] [[BlatantLies about her recent business success]].

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* GreenEyedMonster:
** Cashmere's resentment and jealousy of Rarity are the main motivation for her antagonistic actions.
** [[spoiler: Slate's obsession with Rarity and jealousy over her turning him down [[StalkerWithACrush leads to him stalking her]]]].



--->"You know, you never see ''that'' in the movies!"

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--->"You --->'''Protagonist''': You know, you never see ''that'' in the movies!"movies!
* GreenEyedMonster:
** Cashmere's resentment and jealousy of Rarity are the main motivation for her antagonistic actions.
** [[spoiler: Slate's obsession with Rarity and jealousy over her turning him down [[StalkerWithACrush leads to him stalking her]]]].
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* InsistentTerminology: Rarity would like you to know that they're not socks, they're elbow gloves!

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* InsistentTerminology: Rarity would like you to know that they're not socks, they're elbow gloves!''elbow gloves''!

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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/12546/Sophistication-and-Betrayal Sophistication and Betrayal]]'' is a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic]] fan fiction story by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Drefsab Drefsab]].

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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/12546/Sophistication-and-Betrayal Sophistication and Betrayal]]'' is a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic]] fan fiction story by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Drefsab Drefsab]].



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* AllMenArePerverts: Pipe Wrench and the protagonist display this, something both Rarity and Dazzle Drop mock them for throughout. Pipe even [[WolfWhistle whistles]] at an attractive barmaid with his wife sitting right by him, much to her bemusement.



* AxCrazy: [[spoiler: Slate]]. It's implied he tried to [[MurderTheHypotenuse kill the protagonist]], and he completely snaps when confronted over [[StalkerWithACrush his stalking]].



* BewilderingPunishment: [[ZigZaggingTrope Zig-Zagged]]. [[spoiler: Rarity claims that Cashmere is motivated by her [[GreenEyedMonster jealousy and resentment]], something which she initially denies. However, when Cashmere finally [[VillainousBreakdown breaks down]] and admits this, it's revealed that Rarity [[BelievingTheirOwnLies allowed herself to forget the true details]] of what went down, and thus was actually unaware of what precisely she had done]].



* BloodFromTheMouth: [[spoiler: Slate]], after taking a solid knee to the ribs from [[CombatPragmatist the protagonist]]. Despite this and a broken leg, [[{{Determinator}} he doesn't let it stop him]].



* CombatPragmatist: The protagonist, who opens his fight with [[spoiler: Slate]] with a HeyYouHaymaker, and is perfectly willing to break limbs and bones. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], as he does have military training.



* DesperationAttack: As a last attempt to evade arrest, [[spoiler: Slate tries to [[RammingAlwaysWorks ram the protagonist]] [[GrievousHarmWithABody with his own body]]. It probably would have killed the protagonist, if Rarity [[ChekhovsSkill hadn't intervened]]]].



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* GoodOldFisticuffs: The fight between the protagonist and Slate, when the latter is confronted over his [[StalkerWithACrush stalking]]. Despite the protagonist's martial arts expertise and military training, [[PostVictoryCollapse he still takes a heavy beating]].



* HappilyMarried:
** Pipe Wrench and Dazzle Drop, even if she occasionally gets frustrated by his lack of refinement.
** Rarity and the protagonist show many elements of this despite not being married, though he does plan to propose to her when other events aren't getting in the way.



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* INeedAFreakingDrink: Rarity and the protagonist's usual reaction to their dealings with Cashmere. In one case, Cashmere even offers some of [[ATankardOfMooseUrine her own stash]] for this very reason.



* NiceGuy: The protagonist. Cashmere even calls him this directly when mentioning how he'd never do anything to hurt Rarity.



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* TeleportationSickness: The protagonist suffers this after Twilight teleports them to Canterlot. Justified as the spell not being designed to take human anatomy into account, which Rarity corrects when she learns how to do this herself.

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* TeleportationSickness: The protagonist suffers this after Twilight teleports them to Canterlot. Justified [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] as the spell is not being designed to take human anatomy into account, which Rarity corrects for when she learns how to do this herself.



* TriangRelations: Something of a deconstruction. [[spoiler: Rarity suggests including Fluttershy in their relationship, ostensibly to help coax the shy pegasus out of her shell and allow her to find love of her own, but it's strongly implied that Rarity is using the opportunity to act on her long-nurtured and somewhat one-sided crush on her friend]]. The protagonist spends significant time on trying figure out where exactly this is going in the long term, as well as worrying about what impact it will have on his existing relationship.

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* TriangRelations: Something of a deconstruction. [[spoiler: Rarity suggests including Fluttershy in their relationship, ostensibly to help coax the shy pegasus out of her shell and allow her to find love of her own, but it's strongly implied that Rarity is using the opportunity to act on her long-nurtured and somewhat one-sided crush on her friend]]. The protagonist spends significant time on trying to figure out where exactly this is going in the long term, as well as worrying about what impact it will have on his existing relationship.



* WrongGenreSavvy: After overhearing some of the unusual 'codenames' for ponies, the protagonist initially believes he's been captured by an enemy who want him for information, rather than being TrappedInAnotherWorld. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], given his military experience.

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* WrongGenreSavvy: After overhearing some of the unusual 'codenames' for ponies, the protagonist initially believes he's been captured by an enemy [[WeHaveWaysOfMakingYouTalk who want him for information, information]], rather than being TrappedInAnotherWorld. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], given his military experience.



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** Pipe does not have the best relationship with his in-laws...

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** Pipe does not seem to have the best relationship of relations with his in-laws...



** Averted with newcomers to Ponyville who react with the surprise and staring you'd expect, something which causes the protagonist much frustration.

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* BelievingTheirOwnLies: [[spoiler: Rarity herself suggests she allowed this to happen regarding her relationship with Cashmere, in order to forget the mistakes she made when handling Cashmere's affections]].



* BriefAccentImitation: Cashmere briefly adopts a "terrible" impression of AJ's southern accent when she recounts the time Applejack threatened her over her behaviour towards Rarity. She even gives herself a temporary ponytail to go along with it.



* DearJohnLetter: The protagonist is mentioned to have received one from an ex-girlfriend as part of his backstory, though he doesn't show too much bitterness over it.



* [[HoistByHisOwnPetard Hoist By Her Own Petard]]: At her store's opening ceremony, Cashmere makes use her supposed friendship and solidarity with Rarity to force Rarity into giving away a heavy discount, with no way to refuse while still saving face. Rarity turns this around later on by using Cashmere's same words [[PayEvilUntoEvil to force her]] into going along with another sale.



* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: The protagonist. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] by most of Ponyville having had time to used to his appearance.

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* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: The protagonist. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] by most of Ponyville having had time to get used to his appearance.


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* WhatTheHellHero:
** The protagonist gives a brief one to Pipe Wrench regarding the hiring of [[spoiler: Slate]], which Pipe quite reasonably rejects. See {{Hypocrite}}.
** Cashmere gives one to Rarity when [[spoiler: the [[VillainousBreakdown full truth]] of how she was rejected comes out. Rarity for her part accepts the criticism and apologises for the way she lead Cashmere on]].
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* CatapultNightmare: The protagonist suffers these when experiencing his [[FlashbackNightmare]]s.

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* CatapultNightmare: The protagonist suffers these when experiencing his [[FlashbackNightmare]]s.a FlashbackNightmare.

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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: Several of the minor pranks the protagonist plays on Rarity. She initially reacts in a deadpan manner, before breaking down and admitting it was actually pretty funny.



* AloneWithThePsycho: [[DefiedTrope Defied]]. As part of Rarity's [[ShowSomeLeg plans to distract]] [[spoiler: Slate]], she points out that she'll be very careful, and plans to stick to public areas for this very reason.



* CallForward: Rarity mentions Opal's tendency to sleep in her dresser in a flashback within Chapter 23, and [[CatScare to be careful when opening the drawers]] for that reason.



* CatapultNightmare: The protagonist suffers these when experiencing his [[FlashbackNightmare]]s.



* CatScare: Played for laughs when Opal seemingly appears out of nowhere to scare the protagonist, after he tries to store some clothing in a dresser in Chapter 2. Justified, as Opal has a habit of sleeping in the drawers, which gets a CallForward in Chapter 23.



-->"You know, you never see ''that'' in the movies!"

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-->"You --->"You know, you never see ''that'' in the movies!"



* IntimateHealing: After being smacked in the head with an iron rebar after a [[MurderTheHypotenuse construction accident]], the protagonist gets some intimate healing courtesy of Rarity. It doesn't do much for the head wound, but it does work pretty well as a way of curing his headache.



* NoOSHACompliance: Averted. Wearing the proper safety headgear actually saves the protagonist's life after his [[MurderTheHypotenuse construction accident]]. Pipe Wrench is also shown to take the safety of his workers [[AFatherToHisMen very]] [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure seriously]], and has no tolerance for dangerous behaviour.



-->'''Pipe Wrench''': Sorry, bud, but I gotta spend the day with the old lady and her family. You know how it goes. Especially her mother.
-->'''Dazzle Drop''': *[[DeathGlare dirty look]]*
-->'''Pipe Wrench''': [[VerbalBackspace Not that there's anything wrong with ya mother, dear]]! [[BlatantLies She's a great mare]].

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-->'''Pipe --->'''Pipe Wrench''': Sorry, bud, but I gotta spend the day with the old lady and her family. You know how it goes. Especially her mother.
-->'''Dazzle --->'''Dazzle Drop''': *[[DeathGlare dirty look]]*
-->'''Pipe --->'''Pipe Wrench''': [[VerbalBackspace Not that there's anything wrong with ya mother, dear]]! [[BlatantLies She's a great mare]].



* [[PoliceAreUseless Royal Guards Are Useless]]: Played with. While the Royal Guards take Fluttershy's warning completely seriously, arrive as quickly as possible, and ensure that everyone is reasonably okay at the end, they're also completely incapable of apprehending [[spoiler: Slate]] until Rarity [[ChekhovsSkill saves the day]], despite outnumbering him two-to-one.



-->'''Rarity''': I had no idea there was...smoke involved!

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-->'''Rarity''': --->'''Rarity''': I had no idea there was...smoke involved!



* UnusuallyUninterestingSight: The protagonist. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] by most of Ponyville having had time to used to his appearance.
** Averted with newcomers to Ponyville who react with the surprise and staring you'd expect, something which causes the protagonist much frustration.
** Rarity also lampshades this when the protagonist suggests walking past Cashmere without them being noticed.
--->'''Rarity''': Yes, perhaps she'll ignore the only human in the entire world walking towards her.



* WeNeedADistraction: As part of ThePlan to distract [[spoiler: [[StalkerWithACrush Slate]], and investigate his house]] [[ShowSomeLeg Rarity offers to be the lure herself]]. When the protagonist initially refuses based on the danger this presents, Rarity immediately calls him out on this, by pointing out [[BadassDamsel she's dealt with]] [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic far worse]] and is capable of looking after herself.

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* WeNeedADistraction: As part of ThePlan to distract [[spoiler: [[StalkerWithACrush Slate]], and investigate his house]] [[ShowSomeLeg Rarity offers to be the lure herself]]. When the protagonist initially refuses [[AloneWithThePsycho based on the danger this presents, presents]], Rarity immediately calls him out on this, by pointing out [[BadassDamsel she's dealt with]] [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic far worse]] and is capable of looking after herself.


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* [[WhatMeasureIsANonHuman What Measure is a Non-Pony?]]: Averted. By virtue of being the [[LastOfHisKind only human in Equestria]], the protagonist is granted special protection by Celestia, and is technically noted to be covered by the Exotic Creatures Act.


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* YourMakeupIsRunning: [[PlayedForDrama Played completely seriously]] when Rarity breaks down in tears upon discovering she's [[StalkerWithACrush being stalked]].
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* LampshadeHanging: Other characters get in on it from time to time, but pointing out the bizarre nature of Equestia and its residents almost seems to be almost a second job for the protagonist.

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* HotBlooded: The protagonist, despite having legitimate reasons to be angry does have a bit of a temper. He gets called on this several times as it being scary, unproductive, or inappropriate to the situation.



* HotBlooded: The protagonist, despite having legitimate reasons to be angry does have a bit of a temper. He gets called on this several times as it being scary, unproductive, or inappropriate to the situation.



* WrongGenreSavvy: After overhearing some of the unusual 'codenames' for ponies, the protagonist initially believes he's been captured by an enemy who want him for information, rather than being TrappedInAnotherWorld. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], given his military experience.


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* BrutalHonesty: One of Pipe Wrench's many endearing qualities.
-->'''Pipe Wrench''': Come on, let's go fix their fuck-up before somepony gets killed and I have to spend the day explaining to his wife how he was a dumb-ass.



* CatFight: A fairly regular occurance between Rarity and Cashmere, particularly when they very nearly come to blows at a social function in Chapter 3.



* DistractedByTheSexy: Cashmere often uses her natural beauty for marketing purposes. Rarity [[NotSoDifferent occasionally does it as well]].
-->'''Protagonist''': You're gonna cause half the stallions in here [[ExiledToTheCouch to sleep on the couch tonight]].



* DoubleEntendre: Cashmere has a habit of using these... and that's when she's being subtle!

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Cashmere has a habit of using these... and that's when she's being subtle!subtle!
** The protagonist also has a habit of using these, though Rarity tries her best to nip them in the bud.



* ExiledToTheCouch: The protagonist exiles himself to it after a vicious argument in the first chapter. Rarity does move him back upstairs while he sleeps however, and they make up shortly thereafter.



-->'''Rarity''': Perhaps I should stick some padding up there.

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-->'''Rarity''': [[DeadpanSnarker Perhaps I should stick some padding up there.there]].



* FeaturelessProtagonist: Averted. Despite the SecondPersonNarration, the protagonist ends up having a fair amount of characterization and backstory.

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* FeaturelessProtagonist: Averted. Despite the SecondPersonNarration, the protagonist ends up having a fair significant amount of characterization and backstory.



* GenreSavvy: The protagonist is well aware he is dating a heroine who will not stand idly by when someone puts themselves at risk.
-->(When discussing [[ThePlan their plan]] [[WeNeedADistraction for a distraction]])
-->'''Protagonist''': If I say 'no' you're just going to do it anyway, aren't you?
-->'''Rarity''': But of course, darling.



-->"You know, you never see ''that'' in the movies!"



* InsistentTerminology: Rarity would like you to know that they're not socks, they're elbow gloves!



* LampshadeHanging: Other characters get in on it from time to time, but pointing out the bizarre nature of Equestia and its residents almost seems to be almost a second job for the protagonist.



* MotorMouth: Pinkie Pie, naturally. Ditzy Doo also has a propensity to go off on long random tangents.



* ObnoxiousInLaws:
** Pipe does not have the best relationship with his in-laws...
-->'''Pipe Wrench''': Sorry, bud, but I gotta spend the day with the old lady and her family. You know how it goes. Especially her mother.
-->'''Dazzle Drop''': *[[DeathGlare dirty look]]*
-->'''Pipe Wrench''': [[VerbalBackspace Not that there's anything wrong with ya mother, dear]]! [[BlatantLies She's a great mare]].
** Inverted in Rarity's case, where she shows far more anxiety over [[AmazinglyEmbarrassingParents her parents' imminent visit]] than the protagonist, who has a fairly amicable relationship with them.



* ShrinkingViolet: Fluttershy. PlayedForDrama because her shell prevents her from finding somepony of her own.



** To ''Franchise/StarWars'', when the protagonist compares unicorn magic to The Force.
* ShrinkingViolet: Fluttershy. PlayedForDrama because her shell prevents her from finding somepony of her own.
* SickeningSweethearts: Rarity and the protagonist apparently show elements of this from time to time.
-->'''Pipe Wrench''': Oh gimme a break already, [[TastesLikeDiabetes you're gonna put me in a sugar coma]]!"



* [[invoked]]TastesLikeDiabetes: The protagonist comments on Pinkie Pie's perpetual happiness, reflecting that if he were constantly subject to it he'd either be the happiest man in the world, or he'd [[CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon kill himself with a frosting spatula]].
* TakeThat: A minor one, where the protagonist and Rarity mock some of the more... [[RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment unusual fetishes]] displayed in various fics out there.

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* [[invoked]]TastesLikeDiabetes: The protagonist comments on Pinkie Pie's perpetual happiness, reflecting that if he were constantly subject to it he'd either be the happiest man in the world, or he'd [[CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon kill himself with a frosting spatula]].
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** [[invoked]]Averted with ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'', with the protagonist commenting that making fun of the sparkling [[DiscreditedMeme "stopped being funny two years ago"]].


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** Pretty much anything involving Fluttershy according to the protagonist, who even goes as far as to call her "weaponized cuteness".


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* UnusualEuphemism: [[ADateWithRosiePalms Clopping off]].


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* WrongGenreSavvy: After overhearing some of the unusual 'codenames' for ponies, the protagonist initially believes he's been captured by an enemy who want him for information, rather than being TrappedInAnotherWorld. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]], given his military experience.

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* BrickJoke: After waking up in hospital and hearing the unusual 'codenames', the protagonist snidely comments upon hearing Twilight's name that she should have included [[Literature/{{Twilight}} "Sparkling"]] in there. A little later in the scene he discovers Twilight's actual full name.



* BrickJoke: After waking up in hospital and hearing the unusual 'codenames', the protagonist snidely comments upon hearing Twilight's name that she should have included [[Literature/{{Twilight}} "Sparkling"]] in there. A little later in the scene he discovers Twilight's actual full name.
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* BrickJoke: After waking up in hospital and hearing the unusual 'codenames', the protagonist snidely comments upon hearing Twilight's name that she should have included [[Literature/{{Twilight}} "Sparkling"]] in there. A little later in the scene he discovers that this actual part of Twilight's actual full name.

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* CaptainObvious: After Rarity's failed [[PowerIncontinence first attempt at teleportation]]:
-->'''Protagonist''': (coughing) I don't think it worked, babe!
-->'''Rarity''': [[DeadpanSnarker Yes, so I've noticed]].
* ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler: Rarity's picture of herself and Cashmere, which is first brought up in Chapter 2 and goes unfired until Chapter 25, when Rarity uses her copy of the photo as a reminder to Cashmere of just how bitter she's become, prompting her VillainousBreakdown]].



* DeadpanSnarker: The protagonist has a habit of snarkily lampshading some of the absurdities of Equestrian life. Rarity also turns on the snark on quite a few occasions.



* [[invoked]]DiscreditedMeme: In-universe, mentioning sparkling whenever Literature/{{Twilight}} is brought up has apparently become this, after it "stopped being funny two years ago".

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* [[invoked]]DiscreditedMeme: In-universe, mentioning sparkling whenever Literature/{{Twilight}} ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'' is brought up has apparently become this, after it "stopped being funny two years ago".



* EyePoke: An example occurs when the protagonist accidentally pokes his eye on Rarity's horn during an enthusiastic makeout session.
-->'''Rarity''': Perhaps I should stick some padding up there.



** Averted on some occasions though, such as the time the protagonist almost manages [[EyePoke to take his eye out]] on Rarity's horn, which somewhat [[MomentKiller kills the moment]].



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* JerkassHasAPoint: Cashmere, when she points out that Rarity had let her business stagnate, and that the presence of competition forced her to raise her game. Something Rarity reluctantly accepts.



* JerkassHasAPoint: Cashmere, when she points out that Rarity had let her business stagnate, and that the presence of competition forced her to raise her game. Something Rarity reluctantly accepts.



* MakingLoveInAllTheWrongPlaces: Occurs on occasion. [[NotWhatItLooksLike Played for comedy in one instance]].



* NaughtyByNight: Despite being self-described and cultivating her image as a "proper lady", Rarity apparently has an adventurous spirit that can be quite surprising.



* PowerIncontinence:
** Rarity gets a minor one after her first attempt at teleportation doesn't work out as planned...
-->'''Rarity''': I had no idea there was...smoke involved!
** [[spoiler: Cashmere gets a much larger one as part of her VillainousBreakdown]], causing a magical backlash that even Twilight would probably be impressed by.



* RemovedFromThePicture: Both Rarity and Cashmere retain their photograph of the day Carousel Boutique opened. Yet while Rarity keeps her copy of the picture intact as a reminder of the good times, Cashmere completely removes Rarity from her copy.




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* RageAgainstTheHeavens: The protagonist, who quite literally rages against the heavens after being caught in an unexpected rainstorm, having had a bad day at work. It's lampshaded as being the [[SarcasmMode completely logical thing to do]] in the circumstances.

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* RageAgainstTheHeavens: The protagonist, who quite literally rages against the heavens after being caught in an unexpected rainstorm, having had a bad day at work. It's lampshaded as being the [[SarcasmMode completely logical thing to do]] in under the circumstances.

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* AloneAmongTheCouples: A large source of angst for Fluttershy, given that [[ShrinkingViolet her shell]] prevents her from [[SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan finding love]] herself.



* BrickJoke: After waking up in hospital and hearing the unusual 'codenames', the protagonist snidely comments upon hearing Twilight's name that she should have included [[Literature/{{Twilight}} "Sparkling"]] in there. A little later in the scene he discovers that this actual part of Twilight's full name.



* CovertPervert: Rainbow Dash seems to be highly interested in Rarity's sex life, with less emphasis on the "covert" part. Though admittedly she was drunk at the time...

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Rainbow Dash seems to be highly interested in Rarity's sex life, with less emphasis on the "covert" part. Though admittedly she was drunk at the time...time...
** Fluttershy plays this trope fairly straight later on in the story.
* CurseCutShort: Happens several times, usually with the protagonist's internal monologue being cut short.



* [[invoked]]DiscreditedMeme: In-universe, mentioning sparkling whenever Literature/{{Twilight}} is brought up has apparently become this, after it "stopped being funny two years ago".



* [[NotAMorningPerson Not a Morning Pony]]: The protagonist. A contrast to Rarity who is most decidedly a morning pony... once she's gone through her routine.



* RageAgainstTheHeavens: The protagonist, who quite literally rages against the heavens after being caught in an unexpected rainstorm, having had a bad day at work. It's lampshaded as being the [[SarcasmMode completely logical thing to do]] in the circumstances.



* RunningGag: Cashmere repeatedly has her [[ATankardOfMooseUrine taste in alcoholic beverages]] insulted by both Rarity and the protagonist.



-->'''Rarity''': I swear, it's like I'm having to watch a sugar-crazed foal.

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-->'''Rarity''': [[DeadpanSnarker I swear, it's like I'm having to watch a sugar-crazed foal.foal]].



* ATankardOfMooseUrine: Pretty much anything Cashmere drinks, if Rarity and the protagonist are to be believed.
-->'''Cashmere''': Eh, it gets the buzz goin'



-->'''Rarity''': One does not save the world without picking up a few tricks along the way.



* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Celestia and Luna's efforts to send the protagonist home almost succeed, but fail at the last second when he passes out from the stress of the spell. As a result, the spell is unable to be cast again without killing him, permanently trapping him in Equestria. Needless to say, this is not received well.

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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Celestia and Luna's efforts to send the protagonist home almost succeed, but fail at the last second when he passes out from the [[MindRape stress of the spell.spell]]. As a result, the spell is unable to be cast again without killing him, permanently trapping him in Equestria. Needless to say, this is not received well.
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* CoolBoat: Destroyer at the start of the story, which comes with its own prototype [[InvisibilityCloak cloaking system]]. Unfortunately, there's a very good reason why it's still a prototype...

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* AsYouKnow: A variation. Given that the audience is likely aware of the [[ContinuityNod cast's previous adventures]], the details are usually glossed over by the narrative whenever they're brought up, before cutting to the next scene.



* CoolBoat: Destroyer at the start of the story, which comes with its own prototype [[InvisibilityCloak cloaking system]]. Unfortunately, there's a very good reason why it's still a prototype...



* TheEngineer: The protagonist, who was an engineer in the US Army - on loan to the US Navy for a secret project - before he wound up in Equestria.



* FantasticRomance: The relationship between the protagonist and Rarity. The sheer absurdity of the situation is lampshaded by him at least once.



* FurryReminder: An in-universe example. When going out on their first date, the protagonist gets Rarity some flowers... and is promptly surprised when she tastes one. The next time he slips a note in, reminding her not to eat them immediately.

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* FriendlyTickleTorture: Rarity's ticklish stomach makes her a prime target for this.
* FurryReminder: An in-universe example. When going out on their first date, the protagonist gets Rarity some flowers... and is promptly surprised when she tastes one. The next time he slips a note in, reminding her not to eat them immediately.


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* HotBlooded: The protagonist, despite having legitimate reasons to be angry does have a bit of a temper. He gets called on this several times as it being scary, unproductive, or inappropriate to the situation.


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* MindRape: Mentioned by name and an unfortunate necessity as part of Celestia and Luna's efforts to send the protagonist home, by allowing them to find the correct world. Celestia comments on how she detests such an invasive and painful procedure, and notes that thankfully she's only had to do it a small number of times.


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* [[SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan Single Mare Seeks Good Stallion]]: Fluttershy. Rarity as well, prior to her getting involved with the protagonist.


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* SoleSurvivor: It's heavily implied that the protagonist was the only one from his crew who survived, given the catatrophic nature of the accident that sent him to Equestria and almost killed him.

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** Twilight's reaction to her gift of a telescope in a flashback, particularly where she sheepishly explains away her rapid assembly as due to having a lot of practice.

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* KickTheDog: Cashmere, when she tricks Rarity into opening her store on her day off and giving away a costly discount. After some EvilGloating, Cashmere then seals the deal with a TakeThatKiss.


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* RetiredBadass: Aegis Shield, who [[CareerEndingInjury gave up his job as a Royal Guard]] after being stabbed in the leg when he and his partner were ambushed by a large group of criminals, but not before managing to defeat them all.


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* TheSmartGuy: Whip-Smart. His cutie mark is even the old Equestrian symbol for intellect.


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* SweetTooth: The protagonist has an extensive one, and barely needs any excuse to sample Sugarcube Corner's wares.
-->'''Rarity''': I swear, it's like I'm having to watch a sugar-crazed foal.


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* TeleportationSickness: The protagonist suffers this after Twilight teleports them to Canterlot. Justified as the spell not being designed to take human anatomy into account, which Rarity corrects when she learns how to do this herself.


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* WeNeedADistraction: As part of ThePlan to distract [[spoiler: [[StalkerWithACrush Slate]], and investigate his house]] [[ShowSomeLeg Rarity offers to be the lure herself]]. When the protagonist initially refuses based on the danger this presents, Rarity immediately calls him out on this, by pointing out [[BadassDamsel she's dealt with]] [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic far worse]] and is capable of looking after herself.

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* AuthorAppeal: [[WordOfGod The author]] makes no secret that Rarity is his favorite pony, and chose her for the story in part because he felt her character strengths were often overlooked or marginalised.

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* AuthorAppeal: [[WordOfGod The author]] makes no secret that Rarity is his favorite pony, and chose her this was one reason for writing the story. The other reason...
* AuthorTract: An unobtrusive example. One the author's reasons in writing
the story in part because he felt her was to show off Rarity's character strengths were often strengths, something he views as being overlooked or marginalised.and marginalised within the show's fandom.



* BerserkButton: Threatening their loved ones tends to be an easy way of pushing this for both Rarity and the protagonist.

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Threatening their loved ones tends to be an easy way of pushing this for both Rarity and the protagonist.protagonist.
** Similarly, threatening Fluttershy's friends is a good way to very quickly get on her bad side.



* [[CantHoldHisLiquor Can't Hold Her Liquor]]

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* CovertPervert: Rainbow Dash seems to be highly interested in Rarity's sex life, with less emphasis on the "covert" part. Though she was drunk at the time...

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* CovertPervert: Rainbow Dash seems to be highly interested in Rarity's sex life, with less emphasis on the "covert" part. Though admittedly she was drunk at the time...



* FurryReminder: An in-universe example. When going out on their first date, the protagonist gets Rarity some flowers... and is promptly surprised when she tastes one. The next time he slips a note in, reminding her not to eat them immediately.



* HelloInsertNameHere: The protagonist. As a result, the dialogue goes somewhat out the way to make sure he's never mentioned by name. Rarity's tendency to call others [[CatchPhrase "darling"]] helps make this less obvious however.

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* HelloInsertNameHere: The protagonist. As a result, the dialogue goes somewhat out the way to make sure he's never mentioned by name. Rarity's tendency to call others [[CatchPhrase "darling"]] helps make this less obvious however. This article unfortunately does not have the same luxury.



* SexyDiscretionShot: Used on occasions. Averted on others. [[BaitAndSwitch Deliberately played for comedy on one occasion]].

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Used on occasions. Averted on others. [[BaitAndSwitch Deliberately played for comedy on one occasion]].occasion]].
** An unintentional example occurs in-universe in one of [[spoiler: [[StalkerWithACrush Slate's]] photographs]], courtesy of a [[SceneryCensor coincidentally positioned jacket]].



* TakeThat: A minor one, where the protagonist and Rarity mock some of the more... [[RuleOfCautiousEditingJudgment unusual fetishes]] displayed in various fics out there.



* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Rarity shows shades of this, and is very willing to defend her boyfriend when he's attacked by [[spoiler: Slate]].

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* VillainRespect: [[spoiler: after having dealt with Slate]], Cashmere is impressed enough with how Rarity and the protagonist handled the situation to offer to buy them dinner.

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* [[CantHoldHisLiquor Can't Hold Her Liquor]]: Rainbow Dash is quite the lightweight, to say the least, and gets drunk very quickly even after Applejack warns her about this.

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** Twilight also possesses an extremely low tolerance for alcohol.



* DistractedByTheSexy: Rarity's plan for distracting [[spoiler: Slate in order to buy time to investigate his house]] involves using herself as a lure.

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* InnocentInnuendo: Invoked by means of a SexyDiscretionShot. See BaitAndSwitch.
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* NoodleIncident:
** Pinkie managed to get herself banned from the Autumn Harvest social. The only details given are that this involved singing and [[BigEater eating half a cake]].
** Twilight mentions a time where she got drunk enough to start randomly giving everyone grass hula skirts. Her offer to demonstrate this spell firsthand is [[BigNo not met with a warm reception]].


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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: ''Fluttershy'' delivers a truely stunning one to Cashmere in Chapter 5, before throwing her out onto the streets.
-->'''Fluttershy''': I have sat here and listened to you belittle my friends, insult their business, and doubt their resolve. And for what?! So you can get some sick thrill from it?! You want to know what Rarity's accomplished? I'll tell you. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E21DragonQuest She faced down a dragon]]. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E2ElementsOfHarmony She attacked a manticore]]. [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E2ElementsOfHarmony She banished an evil goddess]] and [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E2TheReturnOfHarmonyPart2 defeated the very embodiment of chaos and disharmony]]. She saved the life of a complete stranger. [[RescueRomance She committed herself to him because she cared about him]]. She risked life and limb, time and again, not because she had to, but because she wanted to! [[TrueCompanions Because she has people and ponies who care about her, and she cares about them]]! She has done more in a few years than you will ever accomplish in your entire, selfish life! You are nothing compared to her!


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* ShowSomeLeg: Rarity's plan for distracting [[spoiler: Slate in order to buy time to investigate his house]] involves using herself as a lure.


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* VillainRespect: [[spoiler: after having dealt with Slate]], Cashmere is impressed enough with how Rarity and the protagonist handled the situation to offer to buy them dinner.


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* WorthyOpponent: Despite their antagonistic relationship, both Rarity and Cashmere consider themselves this and highly respect each other's skills as a seamstress and a businessmare.


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* YourApprovalFillsMeWithShame: Rarity after Cashmere congratulates her [[PayEvilUntoEvil for retaliating]] after being tricked into giving away a heavy discount. Rarity points out that she is not completely above such behaviour when necessary, but unlike Cashmere, she takes no pleasure in it and only engages in it as a last resort.

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* AttentionDeficitOohShiny: Ponies apparently tend to be quite prone to this, according to the protagonist. Ponyville seems to be particularly susceptible, if Cashmere's words are anything to go by.



* BerserkButton: Threatening their loved ones tends to be an easy way of pushing this for both Rarity and the protagonist.



* CutLexLuthorACheck: Rarity encourages Cashmere to do this, suggesting that it's more efficient to compete legitimately by offering a good service, rather than engaging in underhanded deals. Interestingly though, both their methods are very successful, despite being completely different ethically.



* DistractedByTheSexy: Rarity's plan for distracting [[spoiler: Slate in order to buy time to investigate his house]] involves using herself as a lure.



* DoorJudo: The protagonist tries this when [[spoiler: breakings into Slate's house to look for [[StalkerWithACrush evidence of his stalking]]]]. [[EpicFail It doesn't work]]. Turns out the door [[FailedASpotCheck opens the other way]].

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* DoorJudo: The protagonist tries this when [[spoiler: breakings breaking into Slate's house to look for [[StalkerWithACrush evidence of his stalking]]]]. [[EpicFail It doesn't work]]. Turns out the door [[FailedASpotCheck opens the other way]].



* DudeWheresMyRespect: Generally averted. While rarely brought up, it's made clear that Ponyville - and Equestria - has respect for Rarity and her friends' accomplishments.
** Inverted, if Cashmere is to be believed. She dismisses Rarity's achievements as meaningless and undeserving of the respect that's been afforded to her.



* FishOutOfWater: The protagonist, by virtue of being trapped in Equestria. After some initial adjusting, he does adapt fairly well.



* HeroWithBadPublicity: Played with. While Cashmere and [[spoiler: later Slate]] try to smear Rarity's name, it's not implied to have any real impact owing to Rarity already being well-liked and respected.



* JerkassHasAPoint: Cashmere, when she points out that Rarity had let her business stagnate, and that the presence of competition forced her to raise her game. Something Rarity reluctantly accepts.



* [[LikeASonToMe Like a Daughter to Me]]: Rarity's parents apparently used to consider Cashmere as their daughter.

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* [[LikeASonToMe Like a Daughter to Me]]: Rarity's parents apparently used to consider Cashmere as their daughter.third daughter, despite her recent actions towards Rarity.



* ShownTheirWork: Several details of military life are mentioned. Given the author's [[WriteWhatYouKnow experiences in the US military]] however, this isn't too surprising.



* TookALevelInBadass: Despite already being one in canon, Rarity takes one in the magic department after having mastered teleportation, by taking lessons from Twilight.



* TwinThreesomeFantasy: The protagonist ends up having a dream of this with two Raritys. The real Rarity finds this quite amusing when he wakes up.

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* XanatosSpeedChess: Cashmere displays this. When Rarity turns up to her store's opening ceremony, she's quickly able to leverage the situation and tricks Rarity into going along with a costly discount.

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Things are going well for Rarity. She's a national hero, her business is blooming, her friends are doing well, and she's found the one thing [[SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan she's been lacking]]: [[InterspeciesRomance love]]. All is well.

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Things are going well good for Rarity. She's a national hero, her business is blooming, her friends are doing well, fine, and she's found the one thing [[SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan she's been lacking]]: [[InterspeciesRomance love]]. All is well.



** [[spoiler: Slate develops a one-sided attraction towards Rarity, after he mistakes her polite small-talk and banter as genuine interest]]

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* BaitAndSwitch: In Chapter 2, Rarity and the protagonist run back home for brief tryst, only for the narrative [[GilliganCut to cut to]] the protagonist... bouncing a ball off the wall. Of course, the way this is described, you'd think it was initially [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything referring to something completely different]].

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* BaitAndSwitch: In Chapter 2, Rarity and the protagonist run back home for brief tryst, only for the narrative [[GilliganCut to cut to]] the protagonist... bouncing a ball off the wall. Of course, the way this is described, you'd think it was initially [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything [[InnocentInnuendo referring to something completely different]].



* BigWhat: Cashmere does this twice after Rarity [[TheDogBitesBack tricks]] [[PayEvilUntoEvil her]] into a buy one get one free sale.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: Cashmere. She'll hide her ruthlessness behind her outwardly friendly and sultry exterior, but when the chips are down she'll readily show her true colors.



* [[CantHoldHisLiquor Can't Hold Her Liquor]]: Rainbow Dash is quite the lightweight, to say the least, and gets drunk very quickly even after Applejack points this out.

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* [[CantHoldHisLiquor Can't Hold Her Liquor]]: Rainbow Dash is quite the lightweight, to say the least, and gets drunk very quickly even after Applejack points this out.warns her about this.



* TheDogBitesBack: After tricking Rarity into opening on her day off and offering a heavy discount - to the point of selling at a huge loss - [[PayEvilUntoEvil Rarity retaliates in kind]] by forcing Cashmere to do the same, with the aid of Pinkie Pie's singing and by [[HoistByHisOwnPetard using her own words against her]].



* FridgeLogic: An in-universe example. When Cashmere tries to smear Rarity as having a "human fetish", Morning Blossom points that you can't really have a fetish when there's only ''one'' human in all of Equestria.
* [[GirlOnGirlIsHot Mare on Mare is Hot]]: The protagonist seems to think so and references this several times. Rarity usually ends up chiding him for it... [[{{Hypocrite}} before quietly agreeing]].



* HandyMan: The protagonist and by extension his colleagues, owing to his job as a construction worker.



* {{Mondegreen}}: Rainbow Dash, when she refers to Cashmere's 'Elegant Expectations' shop firstly as "Elephant Excretions", and then "Exploding Eclairs" shortly afterwards.



* PayEvilUntoEvil: After being tricked into selling her stock at a heavy loss by Cashmere, Rarity retaliates by sending her Poison Joke, forcing her into offering a similar discount, and stealing her supplier.



* [[invoked]]TastesLikeDiabetes: The protagonist comments on Pinkie Pie's perpetual happiness, reflecting that if he were constantly subject to it he'd either be the happiest man in the world, or he'd [[CutHisHeartOutWithASpoon kill himself with a frosting spatula]].
* ThatRemindsMeOfASong: Pinkie's tendency to engage in song is mercilessly lampshaded:
-->'''Protagonist''': (cringing) [[OhCrap She's going to sing, isn't she?]]
-->'''Rarity''': Most likely. I'm sorry to subject you to this, darling, but think of it as taking one for the team, hmm?




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* {{Adorkable}}: The protagonist shows elements of this. Morning Blossom as well.
** Twilight's reaction to her gift of a telescope in a flashback.

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The protagonist shows elements of this. Morning Blossom as well.
** Twilight's reaction to her gift of a telescope in a flashback.flashback, particularly where she sheepishly explains away her rapid assembly as due to having a lot of practice.



* BaitAndSwitch: In chapter 2, Rarity and the protagonist run back home for brief tryst, only for the narrative [[GilliganCut to cut to]] the protagonist... bouncing a ball off the wall. Of course, the way this is described, you'd think it was initially [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything describing something completely different]].

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* BaitAndSwitch: In chapter Chapter 2, Rarity and the protagonist run back home for brief tryst, only for the narrative [[GilliganCut to cut to]] the protagonist... bouncing a ball off the wall. Of course, the way this is described, you'd think it was initially [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything describing referring to something completely different]].



* ChekhovsSkill: While Rarity initially learns to teleport for [[MundaneUtility fairly mundane reasons]], it later comes in handy [[spoiler: when she uses it to save her boyfriend from being seriously injured by Slate]].



* ADateWithRosiePalms:
** Occasionally referenced by several characters. Cashmere tends to be particularly overt about it.
** Alluded to when the protagonist [[spoiler: investigates Slate's StalkerShrine, noting the tissues that have [[{{Squick}} "obviously been used"]]]].



* {{Determinator}}: [[spoiler: Slate]]. Despite having his leg broken and suffering from serious internal injuries, he still puts up a strong attempt to resist arrest. Even the protagonist grudgingly comments to himself on how impressive this is.
* DoorJudo: The protagonist tries this when [[spoiler: breakings into Slate's house to look for [[StalkerWithACrush evidence of his stalking]]]]. [[EpicFail It doesn't work]]. Turns out the door [[FailedASpotCheck opens the other way]].
* [[TheDoorSlamsYou The Wall Slams You]]: A variation. When [[spoiler: Slate tries attacking the protagonist]], Rarity teleports him inside his house, resulting in him slamming into a wall.



* {{Foil}}: Cashmere for Rarity. Both are talented and successful, but where Rarity surrounds herself with those she loves and strives to be generous and ethical, Cashmere indulges in hedonistic behaviour as a distraction for what she lacks, and engages in ruthless business practices.

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Cashmere for Rarity. Both are talented and successful, but where Rarity surrounds herself with those she loves and strives to be generous and ethical, Cashmere indulges in hedonistic behaviour as a distraction for what she lacks, and engages in ruthless business practices.practices.
** Pipe Wrench is also one for Cashmere. Whereas Pipe [[AFatherToHisMen treats his]] [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure workers well]], Cashmere treats her employees as little more than tools to be discarded, and shows little concern for their well-being.



* InMediasRes: The story starts off with protagonist having already been in a relationship with Rarity for about a year, with flashbacks filling in the events that led up to that point over the course of the story.

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* InMediasRes: The story starts off with protagonist having already been in a relationship with Rarity for about a year, with flashbacks filling in the events that led up to that point over the course of the story.several chapters.


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* MundaneUtility: Rarity learns how to teleport for the sole purpose of getting upstairs to the bedroom more quickly. That and showing off a little, but this ''is'' Rarity.


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* RealityEnsues: The protagonist - who is ''not'' a [[Creator/ArnoldSchwarzenegger heavily-built man in an action movie]] - tries [[DoorJudo kicking a door down]]. [[EpicFail It fails badly]], and he injures his leg in the process.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Pipe Wrench, who [[AFatherToHisMen cares about his employees]] and is very willing to help them out or make concessions.


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* StalkerShrine: [[spoiler: Slate]] has a ''very'' creepy one of Rarity.

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* AboveTheInfluence: The protagonist resists giving in to the mutual attraction between him and Fluttershy, knowing that it would only lead to meaningless drunken sex.

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* AboveTheInfluence: [[spoiler: The protagonist resists giving in to the mutual attraction between him and Fluttershy, Fluttershy after a night of drinking, knowing that it would only lead to meaningless drunken sex.sex]].



** Twilight's reaction to her gift of a telescope in a flashback.



** Cashmere fell in love with Rarity but tried to move quicker than Rarity was comfortable with, leading to Rarity turning down Cashmere's affections and breaking her heart.

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** Cashmere fell in love with Rarity but tried to move quicker than Rarity was comfortable with, leading to Rarity turning being turned down Cashmere's affections and breaking having her heart.heart broken.



* AuthorAppeal: [[WordOfGod The author]] makes no secret that Rarity is his favorite pony, and chose her for the story in part because he felt her character strengths were often overlooked or marginalised in the fandom.

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* AuthorAppeal: [[WordOfGod The author]] makes no secret that Rarity is his favorite pony, and chose her for the story in part because he felt her character strengths were often overlooked or marginalised in the fandom.marginalised.



* [[CantHoldHisLiquor Can't Hold Her Liquor]]: Rainbow Dash is quite the lightweight, to say the least.
* ContinuityNod: Rarity occasionally brings up events that happened in [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic the show]], which took place several years before the story.
* CooldownHug: All over the place, but perhaps most notably when Celestia and Luna's efforts to send the protagonist [[YouCantGoHomeAgain back home fail]], resulting in Rarity giving him a much needed hug.

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* [[CantHoldHisLiquor Can't Hold Her Liquor]]: Rainbow Dash is quite the lightweight, to say the least.
least, and gets drunk very quickly even after Applejack points this out.
* ContinuityNod: Rarity and the girls occasionally brings bring up events that happened in [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic the show]], which took place several years before the story.
story starts.
* CooldownHug: All over the place, but perhaps most notably when Celestia and Luna's efforts to [[YouCantGoHomeAgain send the protagonist [[YouCantGoHomeAgain back home fail]], resulting in Rarity giving him a much needed hug.



* CovertPervert: Rainbow Dash seems to be highly interested in Rarity's sex life, with less emphasis on the "Covert" part.

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* CovertPervert: Rainbow Dash seems to be highly interested in Rarity's sex life, with less emphasis on the "Covert" part."covert" part. Though she was drunk at the time...



* {{Flashback}}: Commonly used to [[HowWeGotHere fill in the gaps]] leading up to the [[InMediasRes start of the story]].

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* {{Flashback}}: Commonly used at the start of most chapters to [[HowWeGotHere fill in the gaps]] leading up to the [[InMediasRes start of the story]].



* {{Foil}}: Cashmere for Rarity. Both are talented and successful, but where Rarity surrounds herself with those she loves and strives to be generous, Cashmere indulges in hedonistic behaviour as a distraction for what she lacks, and engages in ruthless business practices.

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* {{Foil}}: Cashmere for Rarity. Both are talented and successful, but where Rarity surrounds herself with those she loves and strives to be generous, generous and ethical, Cashmere indulges in hedonistic behaviour as a distraction for what she lacks, and engages in ruthless business practices.



* RescueRomance: Between Rarity and the protagonist. It's [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] several times.

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* RescueRomance: Between Rarity and the protagonist.protagonist, when Rarity saves his life after he ends up in Equestria on the verge of death. It's [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] several times.



* SexyDiscretionShot: Used on occasions. Averted on others.

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* SexyDiscretionShot: Used on occasions. Averted on others. [[BaitAndSwitch Deliberately played for comedy on one occasion]].



** Pinkie Pie takes on the name of [[Music/TenaciousD Tenacious P]] for one of her songs.
* StalkerWithACrush: [[spoiler: Slate, towards Rarity]]. The violation of her personal life is portrayed as being as creepy and traumatic as you'd expect.

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** Pinkie Pie takes on the name of [[Music/TenaciousD Tenacious P]] for one of her songs.
songs. This is immediately lampshaded by the protagonist.
* StalkerWithACrush: [[spoiler: Slate, towards Rarity]]. The It's [[PlayedForDrama played completely seriously]], and the violation of her personal life is portrayed as being as creepy and traumatic as you'd expect.



* TriangRelations: Something of a deconstruction. [[spoiler: Rarity suggests including Fluttershy in their relationship, ostensibly to help coax the shy pegasus out of her shell to allow her to find love of her own, but it's strongly implied that Rarity is using the opportunity to act on her long-nurtured and somewhat one-sided crush on her friend]]. The protagonist spends significant time on trying figure out where exactly this is going in the long term, as well as worrying about what impact it will have on his existing relationship.
* TwinThreesomeFantasy: The protagonist ends up having a dream of this with two Raritys. The real Rarity finds this quite amusing.

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* TriangRelations: Something of a deconstruction. [[spoiler: Rarity suggests including Fluttershy in their relationship, ostensibly to help coax the shy pegasus out of her shell to and allow her to find love of her own, but it's strongly implied that Rarity is using the opportunity to act on her long-nurtured and somewhat one-sided crush on her friend]]. The protagonist spends significant time on trying figure out where exactly this is going in the long term, as well as worrying about what impact it will have on his existing relationship.
* TwinThreesomeFantasy: The protagonist ends up having a dream of this with two Raritys. The real Rarity finds this quite amusing.amusing when he wakes up.



* WriteWhatYouKnow: The protagonist draws upon the author's own experiences, particularly his time in the military.

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* WriteWhatYouKnow: The protagonist draws upon the author's own experiences, particularly his time in the US military.
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* AuthorAppeal: [[WordOfGod The author]] makes no secret that Rarity is his favorite pony, and chose her because he felt her character strengths were often overlooked or marginalised in the fandom.
* BaitAndSwitch: In chapter 2, Rarity and the protagonist run back home for brief tryst, only for the narrative [[GilliganCut to cut to]] the protagonist... bouncing a ball in boredom off the wall. Of course, the way this is described, you'd think it was initially [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything describing something completely different]].

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* AuthorAppeal: [[WordOfGod The author]] makes no secret that Rarity is his favorite pony, and chose her for the story in part because he felt her character strengths were often overlooked or marginalised in the fandom.
* BaitAndSwitch: In chapter 2, Rarity and the protagonist run back home for brief tryst, only for the narrative [[GilliganCut to cut to]] the protagonist... bouncing a ball in boredom off the wall. Of course, the way this is described, you'd think it was initially [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything describing something completely different]].



* BoldlyComing: Technically, the protagonist is an alien from another world after all.

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* BoldlyComing: Technically, given that the protagonist is an alien from another world after all.



* FlashbackNightmare: The protagonist [[RecurringDreams often dreams]] of the distaster that transported him to Equestria, and his near-drowning in the process.

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* FlashbackNightmare: The protagonist [[RecurringDreams often dreams]] of the distaster disaster that transported him to Equestria, and his near-drowning in the process.



** Cashmere's resentment and jealousy of Rarity are the main motiviation for her antagonistic actions.

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** Cashmere's resentment and jealousy of Rarity are the main motiviation motivation for her antagonistic actions.
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''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/12546/Sophistication-and-Betrayal Sophistication and Betrayal]]'' is a [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic]] fan fiction story by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Drefsab Drefsab]].

Things are going well for Rarity. She's a national hero, her business is blooming, her friends are doing well, and she's found the one thing [[SingleWomanSeeksGoodMan she's been lacking]]: [[InterspeciesRomance love]]. All is well.

At least, it would be, if it weren't for an [[GreenEyedMonster old friend with a grudge]] who wants to ruin her...

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!!''Sophistication and Betrayal'' contains examples of:

* AboveTheInfluence: The protagonist resists giving in to the mutual attraction between him and Fluttershy, knowing that it would only lead to meaningless drunken sex.
* {{Adorkable}}: The protagonist shows elements of this. Morning Blossom as well.
* AllLoveIsUnrequited:
** Cashmere fell in love with Rarity but tried to move quicker than Rarity was comfortable with, leading to Rarity turning down Cashmere's affections and breaking her heart.
** [[spoiler: There are several hints that Fluttershy does not share the same level of affection that Rarity has for her]].
** [[spoiler: Slate develops a one-sided attraction towards Rarity, after he mistakes her polite small-talk and banter as genuine interest]]
* AuthorAppeal: [[WordOfGod The author]] makes no secret that Rarity is his favorite pony, and chose her because he felt her character strengths were often overlooked or marginalised in the fandom.
* BaitAndSwitch: In chapter 2, Rarity and the protagonist run back home for brief tryst, only for the narrative [[GilliganCut to cut to]] the protagonist... bouncing a ball in boredom off the wall. Of course, the way this is described, you'd think it was initially [[DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything describing something completely different]].
* BewareTheNiceOnes: You really do not to get on Rarity's bad side. Or Fluttershy's. Or the protagonist's!
* BiTheWay: Rarity and Cashmere both display this. [[spoiler: Fluttershy also does to a lesser extent]].
* BoldlyComing: Technically, the protagonist is an alien from another world after all.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: Pinkie, who points how many bits Rarity lost in Chapter 7 by ''reading the figure from the previous chapter''.
* [[CantHoldHisLiquor Can't Hold Her Liquor]]: Rainbow Dash is quite the lightweight, to say the least.
* ContinuityNod: Rarity occasionally brings up events that happened in [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic the show]], which took place several years before the story.
* CooldownHug: All over the place, but perhaps most notably when Celestia and Luna's efforts to send the protagonist [[YouCantGoHomeAgain back home fail]], resulting in Rarity giving him a much needed hug.
* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Cashmere shows many elements of this, engaging in some ruthless and decidedly unethical business practices to make her way to the top.
* CovertPervert: Rainbow Dash seems to be highly interested in Rarity's sex life, with less emphasis on the "Covert" part.
* DemotedToExtra: Most of the main cast appear intermittently, save for Rarity and Fluttershy.
* DoubleEntendre: Cashmere has a habit of using these... and that's when she's being subtle!
* FantasticArousal: Unicorn horns under very rare circumstances. When it happens to Rarity after she tries teleporting, she's quite surprised and has no idea it was even possible.
* AFatherToHisMen: Pipe Wrench. He [[ParentalSubstitute especially demonstrates this]] towards the protagonist.
* FeaturelessProtagonist: Averted. Despite the SecondPersonNarration, the protagonist ends up having a fair amount of characterization and backstory.
* {{Flashback}}: Commonly used to [[HowWeGotHere fill in the gaps]] leading up to the [[InMediasRes start of the story]].
* FlashbackNightmare: The protagonist [[RecurringDreams often dreams]] of the distaster that transported him to Equestria, and his near-drowning in the process.
* {{Foil}}: Cashmere for Rarity. Both are talented and successful, but where Rarity surrounds herself with those she loves and strives to be generous, Cashmere indulges in hedonistic behaviour as a distraction for what she lacks, and engages in ruthless business practices.
* GreenEyedMonster:
** Cashmere's resentment and jealousy of Rarity are the main motiviation for her antagonistic actions.
** [[spoiler: Slate's obsession with Rarity and jealousy over her turning him down [[StalkerWithACrush leads to him stalking her]]]].
* GoodPeopleHaveGoodSex: Let's just say that Rarity and the protagonist enjoy a very healthy sex life.
* TheHedonist: Cashmere turns into one. Rarity calls her out on this as being nothing more than a way to distract herself from the things she lacks.
* HelloInsertNameHere: The protagonist. As a result, the dialogue goes somewhat out the way to make sure he's never mentioned by name. Rarity's tendency to call others [[CatchPhrase "darling"]] helps make this less obvious however.
* {{Hypocrite}}: The protagonist when he [[WhatTheHellHero asks Pipe Wrench]] why he would give someone like [[spoiler: Slate]] a job. Pipe quite reasonably points out that his nature in giving chances other ponies would not is why the protagonist got a job working for him in the first place, [[HypocrisyNod which does get acknowledged]].
* InMediasRes: The story starts off with protagonist having already been in a relationship with Rarity for about a year, with flashbacks filling in the events that led up to that point over the course of the story.
* InterspeciesRomance: The main premise of the story is set around Rarity and the protagonist being in a relationship. [[spoiler: Fluttershy gets in on it later on... sort of...]]
* LargeHam: Rarity. Played with however, because the protagonist finds it somewhat mystifying when Rarity puts on the histrionics, and notes that she rarely tends to do this when in private.
* [[LikeASonToMe Like a Daughter to Me]]: Rarity's parents apparently used to consider Cashmere as their daughter.
* LoveHurts: Cashmere's [[AllLoveIsUnrequited unrequited love]] for Rarity and her resulting heartbreak plays a large part in her actions.
* MurderTheHypotenuse: It's left somewhat ambiguous if this was what [[spoiler: Slate]] was aiming for, or if he was just taking advantage of an accident, but certainly elements of this are shown.
* NotSoDifferent: Cashmere accuses Rarity of this when the latter strikes back with some schemes of her own. Rarity protests this assertion.
* NotWhatItLooksLike: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. Rarity and the protagonist's encounter in the first chapter is ''exactly'' what it looks like, but Pinkie in her naivety mistakes it for a big hug, and completely accepts the excuse that [[TheImmodestOrgasm Rarity was simply very excited]] [[BlatantLies about her recent business success]].
* ParentalSubstitute: Pipe Wrench takes on the role as a father figure to the protagonist. His wife Dazzle Drop similarly becomes something of a mother figure.
* ReallyGetsAround: Cashmere. This is partly due to her nature as TheHedonist, but also because she tries to exploit her [[SexForServices sexuality for business purposes]].
* RescueRomance: Between Rarity and the protagonist. It's [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] several times.
* SecondPersonNarration: Unusually for this trope however, it averts having a FeaturelessProtagonist.
* SexyDiscretionShot: Used on occasions. Averted on others.
* ShellShockedVeteran: The protagonist suffers some PTSD from the time he nearly drowned during the events that brought him to Equestria, and [[FlashbackNightmare has recurring nightmares over it]].
* ShipTease: A throwaway line hints that there may well be something between Applejack and Rainbow Dash.
* ShrinkingViolet: Fluttershy. PlayedForDrama because her shell prevents her from finding somepony of her own.
* {{Shoutout}}:
** The protagonist's favorite drink is [[FanFic/FalloutEquestria Sparkle Cola]].
** Pinkie Pie takes on the name of [[Music/TenaciousD Tenacious P]] for one of her songs.
* StalkerWithACrush: [[spoiler: Slate, towards Rarity]]. The violation of her personal life is portrayed as being as creepy and traumatic as you'd expect.
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: One of the entire points of the story. See YouCantGoHomeAgain.
* TriangRelations: Something of a deconstruction. [[spoiler: Rarity suggests including Fluttershy in their relationship, ostensibly to help coax the shy pegasus out of her shell to allow her to find love of her own, but it's strongly implied that Rarity is using the opportunity to act on her long-nurtured and somewhat one-sided crush on her friend]]. The protagonist spends significant time on trying figure out where exactly this is going in the long term, as well as worrying about what impact it will have on his existing relationship.
* TwinThreesomeFantasy: The protagonist ends up having a dream of this with two Raritys. The real Rarity finds this quite amusing.
* UndyingLoyalty: Rarity, towards the protagonist, particularly where she pledges to always be there to help him when it's discovered he's [[YouCantGoHomeAgain permanently stuck in Equestria]].
* VillainousBreakdown: [[spoiler: Cashmere finally gets one in Chapter 25, when Rarity provokes her into admitting exactly why she's been acting in the way she has]].
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Rarity shows shades of this, and is very willing to defend her boyfriend when he's attacked by [[spoiler: Slate]].
* VitriolicBestBuds: Between Pipe Wrench and most of his crew, but particularly his relationship with the protagonist.
* WriteWhatYouKnow: The protagonist draws upon the author's own experiences, particularly his time in the military.
* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Celestia and Luna's efforts to send the protagonist home almost succeed, but fail at the last second when he passes out from the stress of the spell. As a result, the spell is unable to be cast again without killing him, permanently trapping him in Equestria. Needless to say, this is not received well.

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