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* TrackingSpell: Terra can locate people based on their connection to the earth, which was what allowed her to locate Coil.
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* TrackingSpell: Terra can locate people based on their connection to the earth, which was what allowed her to locate Coil.Coil.
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->Simon Miller was given Mythology and Folktales by Robert Campbell by his inattentive parents who couldn't make it for his 18th birthday. Hitting the rock bottom of loneliness, he triggered, and gained the ability to summon ''[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/VideoGame/SMITE gods]]''.
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->Simon Miller was given Mythology and Folktales by Robert Campbell by his inattentive parents who couldn't make it for his 18th birthday. Hitting the rock bottom of loneliness, he triggered, and gained the ability to summon ''[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/VideoGame/SMITE ''[[VideoGame/{{SMITE}} gods]]''.
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The story starts with a kid named Simon Miller, living in Simon's home. Brockton Bay of Earth-Bet. After experiencing [[HatesBeingAlone being left alone in his 18th birthday]], he triggered from the loneliness and summoned Athena, Goddess of Wisdom.
Wisdom. As Brockton Bay's newest parahuman hero Pantheon, he sets out to protect his home, defeat villains, make friends, and manage his new coterie of divine assistants.
* AnArmAndALeg: [[spoiler: Pantheon, Aranea and Dragon's attack on Coil's base results in Pantheon getting his leg shot off. Luckily, Dragon provides a suitable prosthetic until Panacea is free to grow it back]].
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* EnemiesWithDeath: Thanathos' blessing requires hunting those who've cheated death, unintentionally outing Lung and Coil's secret identities to Simon in the process.
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* EnemiesWithDeath: Thanathos' Thanatos' blessing requires hunting those who've cheated death, unintentionally outing Lung and Coil's secret identities to Simon in the process.
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* ISeeDeadPeople: Hades' power, up to eleven. As the God of Death, Hades knows all the lives claimed by the Endbringers. After Simon inquires a way to kill Endbringers, Hades informs him killing Endbringers was no more than killing buildings, hinting their nature as artificial constructs.
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* ISeeDeadPeople: Hades' Hades's power, up to eleven. As the God of Death, Hades knows all the lives claimed by the Endbringers. After Simon inquires a way to kill Endbringers, Hades informs him that killing Endbringers was no more than killing buildings, hinting their nature as artificial constructs.constructs.
* HidingBehindTheLanguageBarrier: Invoked when Simon needs to pass on information about Coil to Armsmaster without the villain's PRT moles catching on. He does so by getting Chaac to tell Armsmaster the info in both SpySpeak and Yucatec Mayan while getting him to record it (and then laughing like he told a good joke), hoping Armsmaster will translate it and get the message.
* HidingBehindTheLanguageBarrier: Invoked when Simon needs to pass on information about Coil to Armsmaster without the villain's PRT moles catching on. He does so by getting Chaac to tell Armsmaster the info in both SpySpeak and Yucatec Mayan while getting him to record it (and then laughing like he told a good joke), hoping Armsmaster will translate it and get the message.
* MagikarpPower: Simon starts off as just an ordinary baseline human, but as he summons a variety of Gods and they grant him their blessings, gift him magical artifacts, and teach him potent skills, including actual magic, he gradually becomes a force to be reckoned with in his own right.
** His SummonMagic power itself gradually strengthens the more heroic deeds he accomplishes. It starts off with just the power to summon one single god for one day, but every act of heroism he completes gives him options to increase the power of his summoned gods, call upon more at a time, or let them stick around longer.
* MythologyGag: When Simon summons Khepri, he feels a brief sense of something not quite being right.
* PaintTheTownRed: When Simon summons Camazotz, one of the bat-god's quests for him is to buy a lot of animal blood and hold a blood feast for a warehouse-full of bats.
** His SummonMagic power itself gradually strengthens the more heroic deeds he accomplishes. It starts off with just the power to summon one single god for one day, but every act of heroism he completes gives him options to increase the power of his summoned gods, call upon more at a time, or let them stick around longer.
* MythologyGag: When Simon summons Khepri, he feels a brief sense of something not quite being right.
* PaintTheTownRed: When Simon summons Camazotz, one of the bat-god's quests for him is to buy a lot of animal blood and hold a blood feast for a warehouse-full of bats.
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* TheQuest: Blessings are offered to Simon by the gods he summons in exchange for quests. The quests can be something as mundane as offering ''BorrowinSamedi'' wine and a drop of blood to lethal prerequisites like getting struck by [[BoltOfDivineRetribution Zeus' lightning]].
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* ParentalNeglect: Simon's mother and father are respectively a senator and superintendent of Massachusetts, so it's no surprise that they'd be too busy for their son.
* PokeInTheThirdEye: Knowing he would be going up against the precognitive Coil, Simon asks Nike for a way to protect him from it. After winning a competition with the Wards, Nike gifts him a laurel wreath that blocks precognition.
* TheQuest: Blessings and magical artifacts are offered to Simon by the gods he summons in exchange for quests. The quests can be something as mundane as offering''BorrowinSamedi'' Baron Samedi wine and a drop of blood blood, to lethal prerequisites like getting struck by [[BoltOfDivineRetribution Zeus' lightning]].Zeus's lightning]].
* RandomEffectSpell: Simon's SummonMagic power counts, as the only specific thing he can control about his summoned god is their specialty (i.e. SMITE class). Beyond that, the summoned god could be any god from any mythology, so for example, Simon choosing to summon a Warrior would randomly summon Bellona, Erlang Shen, or any other Warrior-class god.
* PokeInTheThirdEye: Knowing he would be going up against the precognitive Coil, Simon asks Nike for a way to protect him from it. After winning a competition with the Wards, Nike gifts him a laurel wreath that blocks precognition.
* TheQuest: Blessings and magical artifacts are offered to Simon by the gods he summons in exchange for quests. The quests can be something as mundane as offering
* RandomEffectSpell: Simon's SummonMagic power counts, as the only specific thing he can control about his summoned god is their specialty (i.e. SMITE class). Beyond that, the summoned god could be any god from any mythology, so for example, Simon choosing to summon a Warrior would randomly summon Bellona, Erlang Shen, or any other Warrior-class god.
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* SummonMagic: Simon's power allows him to summon Gods and myths of legend.
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* SummonMagic: Simon's power allows him to summon Gods and myths of legend.legend, and command them in battle.
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* SummonMagic: Simon's power allows him to summon Gods and myths of legend.legend.
* TrackingSpell: Terra can locate people based on their connection to the earth, which was what allowed her to locate Coil.
* TrackingSpell: Terra can locate people based on their connection to the earth, which was what allowed her to locate Coil.
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* ComboPlatterPowers: Simon's ''[[SummonMagic power]]'' allows him to summon whatever God or mythical warrior fits the occasion: from finding enemy weaknesses, to learning their secret identities to finding their location.
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* ComboPlatterPowers: Simon's ''[[SummonMagic power]]'' allows him to summon whatever God or mythical warrior fits helps him at the occasion: task at hand: from finding enemy weaknesses, to learning their secret identities to finding their location.
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* ComboPlatterPowers: Simon's ''{{SummonMagic}}'' allows him to summon whatever God or mythical warrior fits the occasion: from finding enemy weaknesses, to learning their secret identities to finding their location.
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* ComboPlatterPowers: Simon's ''{{SummonMagic}}'' ''[[SummonMagic power]]'' allows him to summon whatever God or mythical warrior fits the occasion: from finding enemy weaknesses, to learning their secret identities to finding their location.
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*ComboPlatterPowers: Simon's ''{{SummonMagic}}'' allows him to summon whatever God or mythical warrior fits the occasion: from finding enemy weaknesses, to learning their secret identities to finding their location.
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* EscortMission: Simon/Pantheon and his current projection, Fafnir, accompanied Squealer's prison transport, fending off an attempted jailbreak.
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* EscortMission: Simon/Pantheon and his current projection, projection at the time, Fafnir, accompanied Squealer's prison transport, fending off an attempted jailbreak.
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* EnemiesWithDeath: Thanathos' blessing requires hunting those who've cheated death, unintentionally outing Lung and Coil's secret identities to Simon in the process.
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* TheQuest: Offered to Simon by the gods he summons. The quests can be something as mundane as offering ''BorrowinSamedi'' wine and a drop of blood to lethal prerequisites like getting struck by [[BoltOfDivineRetribution Zeus' lightning]].
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* TheQuest: Offered Blessings are offered to Simon by the gods he summons.summons in exchange for quests. The quests can be something as mundane as offering ''BorrowinSamedi'' wine and a drop of blood to lethal prerequisites like getting struck by [[BoltOfDivineRetribution Zeus' lightning]].
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* HatesBeingAlone: Simon triggered due to overwhelming loneliness.
* PalsWithJesus: Some of the Gods he summons takes a liking to Simon and aid him in the more mundane parts of his life.
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* ISeeDeadPeople: Hades' power, up to eleven. As the God of Death, Hades knows all the lives claimed by the Endbringers. After some questions, Simon learns the Endbringers are artificial constructs created by 'The High Priest'.
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* ISeeDeadPeople: Hades' power, up to eleven. As the God of Death, Hades knows all the lives claimed by the Endbringers. After some questions, Simon learns the inquires a way to kill Endbringers, Hades informs him killing Endbringers are was no more than killing buildings, hinting their nature as artificial constructs created by 'The High Priest'.constructs.
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*ISeeDeadPeople: Hades' power, up to eleven. As the God of Death, Hades knows all the lives claimed by the Endbringers. After some questions, Simon learns the Endbringers are artificial constructs created by 'The High Priest'.
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The story starts in Simon's home. After experiencing [[HatesBeingAlone being alone in his 18th birthday]], he triggered and summonedAthena, summoned Athena, Goddess of Wisdom.
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The story starts in Simon's home. After experiencing [[HatesBeingAlone being alone in his 18th birthday]], he triggered and summoned [[SMITE Athena, summonedAthena, Goddess of Wisdom]].
Wisdom.
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The story starts in Simon's home. After experiencing [[HatesBeingAlone being alone in his 18th birthday]], he triggered and summoned [[VideoGame/SMITE [[SMITE Athena, Goddess of Wisdom]].
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The story starts in Simon's home. After experiencing [[HatesBeingAlone being alone in his 18th birthday]], he triggered and summoned ''VideoGame/SMITE {{Athena, [[VideoGame/SMITE Athena, Goddess of Wisdom}}''.
Wisdom]].
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* TheQuest: Offered to Simon by the gods he summons. The quests can be something as mundane as offering ''BorrowinSamedi'' wine and a drop of blood to lethal prerequisites like getting struck by [[BoltOfDivineRetribution Zeus' lightning.lightning]].
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The story starts in Simon's home. After experiencing [[HatesBeingAlone being alone in his 18th birthday]], he triggered and summoned ''[[VideoGame/SMITE Athena, ''VideoGame/SMITE {{Athena, Goddess of Wisdom]]''.
Wisdom}}''.
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The story starts in Simon's home. After experiencing [[HatesBeingAlone being alone in his 18th birthday]], he triggered and summoned ''[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/VideoGame/SMITE ''[[VideoGame/SMITE Athena, Goddess of Wisdom]]''.
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*AwesomenessByAnalysis: Erlang Shen. His third eye can spot ''LogicalWeakness'' in people's fighting capabilities. He can decipher flaws from his targets just by looking at TV clips.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Mush, after getting dragon acid on his armor courtesy of Fafnir, opted to run instead of fighting the Norse
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Mush, after getting dragon acid on his armor courtesy of Fafnir, opted to run instead of fighting the Norse God.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Mush, after getting dragon acid on his armor courtesy of Fafnir, opted to run instead of fighting the Norse God.
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*EscortMission: Simon/Pantheon and his current projection, Fafnir, accompanied Squealer's prison transport, fending off an attempted jailbreak.
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* TheQuest: Offered to Simon by the gods he summons. The quests can be something as mundane as offering ''{{BorrowinSamediSamedi}}'' wine and a drop of blood to lethal prerequisites like getting struck by Zeus' lightning.
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* TheQuest: Offered to Simon by the gods he summons. The quests can be something as mundane as offering ''{{BorrowinSamediSamedi}}'' ''BorrowinSamedi'' wine and a drop of blood to lethal prerequisites like getting struck by Zeus' lightning.
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* TheQuest: Offered to Simon by the gods he summons. The quests can be something as mundane as offering ''BorrowinSamedi{{Samedi}}'' wine and a drop of blood to lethal prerequisites like getting struck by Zeus' lightning.
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* TheQuest: Offered to Simon by the gods he summons. The quests can be something as mundane as offering ''BorrowinSamedi{{Samedi}}'' ''{{BorrowinSamediSamedi}}'' wine and a drop of blood to lethal prerequisites like getting struck by Zeus' lightning.
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* TheQuest: Offered to Simon by the gods he summons. The quests can be something as mundane as offering ''BorrowinSamedi{{Samedi}}'' wine and a drop of blood to lethal prerequisites like getting struck by Zeus' lightning.
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* TheQuest: Offered to Simon by the gods he summons. The quests can be something as mundane as playing games to lethal prerequisites like getting struck by Zeus' lightning.
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->Simon was given Mythology and Folktales by Robert Campbell by his inattentive parents who couldn't make it for his 18th birthday. Hitting the rock bottom of loneliness, he triggered, and gained the ability to summon ''[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/VideoGame/SMITE gods]]''.
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->Simon Miller was given Mythology and Folktales by Robert Campbell by his inattentive parents who couldn't make it for his 18th birthday. Hitting the rock bottom of loneliness, he triggered, and gained the ability to summon ''[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/VideoGame/SMITE gods]]''.
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->Simon was given Mythology and Folktales by Robert Campbell by his inattentive parents who couldn't make it for his 18th birthday. Hitting the rock bottom of loneliness, he triggered, and gained the ability to summon ''[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/VideoGame/SMITE gods]]''.
-->-Summary.
''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/smite-quest-worm.53651/ Smite Quest]]'' written by [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/members/monk-penguin.26790/ Monk Penguin]] is a crossover quest of ''{{Literature/Worm}}'' and ''{{VideoGame/SMITE}}''.
The story starts in Simon's home. After experiencing [[HatesBeingAlone being alone in his 18th birthday]], he triggered and summoned ''[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/VideoGame/SMITE Athena, Goddess of Wisdom]]''.
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* LivingEmotionalCrutch: Simon's terminally dependent on his summons, growing attached to them to an unhealthy level after getting a taste of companionship.
* TheQuest: Offered to Simon by the gods he summons. The quests can be something as mundane as playing games to lethal prerequisites like getting struck by Zeus' lightning.
* HatesBeingAlone: Simon triggered due to overwhelming loneliness.
* SummonMagic: Simon's power.
-->-Summary.
''[[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/smite-quest-worm.53651/ Smite Quest]]'' written by [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/members/monk-penguin.26790/ Monk Penguin]] is a crossover quest of ''{{Literature/Worm}}'' and ''{{VideoGame/SMITE}}''.
The story starts in Simon's home. After experiencing [[HatesBeingAlone being alone in his 18th birthday]], he triggered and summoned ''[[https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/VideoGame/SMITE Athena, Goddess of Wisdom]]''.
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!!This fanfic contains examples of:
* LivingEmotionalCrutch: Simon's terminally dependent on his summons, growing attached to them to an unhealthy level after getting a taste of companionship.
* TheQuest: Offered to Simon by the gods he summons. The quests can be something as mundane as playing games to lethal prerequisites like getting struck by Zeus' lightning.
* HatesBeingAlone: Simon triggered due to overwhelming loneliness.
* SummonMagic: Simon's power.
