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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11101458/1/ Russian Roulette]]'' is a completed SelfInsert fanfic written by Vixen Tail (author of the ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' fanfic ''FanFic/DejaVuNoJutsu'') set in the ''Manga/KatekyoHitmanReborn'' universe, about 50 or so years before Canon. It is available at both [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11101458/1/ FF.net]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3524165/chapters/7751051 AO3]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11101458/1/ Russian Roulette]]'' is a SelfInsert fanfic written by Vixen Tail (author of the ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' fanfic ''FanFic/DejaVuNoJutsu'') set in the ''Manga/KatekyoHitmanReborn'' universe, about 50 or so years before Canon. It is available at both [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11101458/1/ FF.net]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3524165/chapters/7751051 AO3]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11101458/1/ Russian Roulette]]'' is a completed SelfInsert fanfic written by Vixen Tail (author of the ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' fanfic ''FanFic/DejaVuNoJutsu'') set in the ''Manga/KatekyoHitmanReborn'' universe, about 50 or so years before Canon. It is available at both [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11101458/1/ FF.net]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3524165/chapters/7751051 AO3]].
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 900,000 words and still nowhere near finished.
** For comparison's sake, that's more than the first six ''Literature/HarryPotter'' books put together.
** Gotten to the point where Vixen Tail is worried the fic will be removed from ff.net on grounds of "excessive length".
** For comparison's sake, that's more than the first six ''Literature/HarryPotter'' books put together.
** Gotten to the point where Vixen Tail is worried the fic will be removed from ff.net on grounds of "excessive length".
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 900,000 a million words and still nowhere near finished.
** For comparison's sake, that'smore than nearly as much as all the first six ''Literature/HarryPotter'' books put together.
** Gotten to the point where Vixen Tail is worried the fic will be removed from ff.net on grounds of "excessivelength".length", and has decided to split it into two parts.
** For comparison's sake, that's
** Gotten to the point where Vixen Tail is worried the fic will be removed from ff.net on grounds of "excessive
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 800,000 words and still nowhere near finished.
** For comparison's sake, that's more than the first five ''Literature/HarryPotter'' books put together.
** For comparison's sake, that's more than the first five ''Literature/HarryPotter'' books put together.
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** For comparison's sake, that's more than the first
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-->'''Cherep:''' Why were all the other Flame types so much more interesting?
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** Slips into ShamelessFanserviceGirl when she doesn't care that she just ran through Vonogola mansion half-naked and was ''definitely'' seen.
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** [[spoiler: Galina]] seems to have weaponized her ''nail polish''.
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** [[spoiler: Galina]] seems to have even weaponized her ''nail polish''.
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* TheDreaded: Cloud Flame users are ''infamous'' for their short tempers, to the extent that grouchy, anti-social Sonya is seen as restrained and sociable in comparison. [[spoiler:Sonya becomes this on her own merits in the Soviet Union when she annihilates a minor gang, burns down their base (with the flames still going days later) and puts several members heads on pikes. And does the whole thing a second time to a gang that blackmailed a Zolotov Rain to try to assassinate her.]]
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* TheDreaded: Cloud Flame users are ''infamous'' for their short tempers, to the extent that grouchy, anti-social Sonya is seen as restrained and sociable in comparison. [[spoiler:Sonya becomes this on her own merits in the Soviet Union when she annihilates a minor gang, burns down their base (with the flames still going days later) and puts severalmembers members' heads on pikes. And does the whole thing a second time to a gang that blackmailed a Zolotov Rain to try to assassinate her.]]
* TheDreaded: Cloud Flame users are ''infamous'' for their short tempers, to the extent that grouchy, anti-social Sonya is seen as restrained and sociable in comparison. [[spoiler:Sonya becomes this on her own merits in the Soviet Union when she annihilates a minor gang, burns down their base (with the flames still going days later) and puts several
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* Asexuality: Sonya is suspected to be this by a few characters. Although she toys with the idea of possibly being lesbian, Vixen Tail has her confirmed as demisexual.
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* Asexuality: {{Asexuality}}: Sonya is suspected to be this by a few characters. Although she toys with the idea of possibly being lesbian, Vixen Tail has her confirmed as demisexual.
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* AChildShallLeadThem: Sonya was considered this to the Flame-users' segment of the Zolotovs, after Dmitriy [[spoiler: deliberately got himself caught by the Soviet Union police to avoid Sonya's wrath at the politics that led to in-progress Flame research being published in a book.]] Also [[spoiler: Larion]] for the Rains, after the high turnover rate post-Fadei.
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* AChildShallLeadThem: Sonya was considered this to the Flame-users' segment of the Zolotovs, after Dmitriy [[spoiler: deliberately got himself caught by the Soviet Union police to avoid Sonya's wrath at the politics that led to in-progress Flame research being published in a book]]. Also [[spoiler: Larion]] for the Rains, after the high turnover rate post-Fadei.
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* HiddenWeapons: Sonya disguises [[spoiler: several battleaxes as bracelet charms, her Bec de Corbins as hairsticks, and a battlehammer as a pendant, which earns her incredulous stares after she finds out that she wasn't supposed to bring weapons to the Vongola ball.]]
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* HiddenWeapons: Sonya disguises [[spoiler: several battleaxes as bracelet charms, her Bec de Corbins as hairsticks, and a battlehammer as a pendant, which earns her incredulous stares after she finds out that she wasn't supposed to bring weapons to the Vongola ball.]]ball]].
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* PastLifeMemories: Her memories of the anime helped her recognize Cherep, who will go on to become [[spoiler: the arcobaleno Skull.]] However, she seems to be having problems remembering details as time goes on and fails to associate the things she remembers with the people she meets. [[spoiler: It took her years before she realized Renato would go on to become the arcobaleno Reborn, and when Sonya meets Fong, she doesn't seem to recognize him as the future arcobaleno Fon at all.]]
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* PastLifeMemories: Her memories of the anime helped her recognize Cherep, who will go on to become [[spoiler: the arcobaleno Skull.]] Arcobaleno Skull]]. However, she seems to be having problems remembering details as time goes on and fails to associate the things she remembers with the people she meets. [[spoiler: It took her years before she realized Renato would go on to become the arcobaleno Arcobaleno Reborn, and when Sonya meets Fong, she doesn't seem to recognize him as the future arcobaleno Arcobaleno Fon at all.]]
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* RainbowMotif: This wouldn't be a KHR fanfic without mentions of the [[ColorCodedForYourConvenience Seven Flames of the Sky]], though as Sonya accidentally learns in chapter 14, [[spoiler: the colors of gemstones used as focuses do not necessarily match up to the colors of the Flames.]]
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* RainbowMotif: This wouldn't be a KHR fanfic without mentions of the [[ColorCodedForYourConvenience Seven Flames of the Sky]], though as Sonya accidentally learns in chapter 14, [[spoiler: the colors of gemstones used as focuses do not necessarily match up to the colors of the Flames.]]Flames]].
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* RevengeBeforeReason: Gedeon, who managed to [[spoiler: piss Sonya off ''so'' much that she is leaving the Zolotovs and he is letting assassins go after her, despite Sonya being the most experienced Flame User and expert.]]
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* RevengeBeforeReason: Gedeon, who managed to [[spoiler: piss Sonya off ''so'' much that she is leaving the Zolotovs and he is letting assassins go after her, despite Sonya being the most experienced Flame User and expert.]]expert]].
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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: '''Cherep:''' "Why were all the other Flame types so much more interesting?"
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 700,000 words and still ongoing.
** For comparison's sake, that's more than the first four ''Literature/HarryPotter'' books put together.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Over 700,000 800,000 words and still ongoing.
nowhere near finished.
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** For comparison's sake, that's more than the first
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: Implied to be the result of the 'date' Renato and Sonya go on while in the Soviet Union together.
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* IronLady: Daniela, Vongola Ottavia, natch. She tries to foster an IntergenerationalFriendship with Sonya to get her as a Guardian for Timoteo, but it doesn't work.
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* Asexuality: Sonya is suspected to be this by a few characters. Although she toys with the idea of possibly being lesbian, Vixen_Tail has her confirmed as demisexual.
* BeneathSuspicion: Sonya, for the [[spoiler: Cerrito family's loss of Verde]] that Renato has been hired to look into. This is due to Sonya mainly hanging out in Europe.
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* ChivalrousPervert: Renato, whom Sonya describes as both a womanizer and a gentleman. It's suspected Shamal will grow up into this, due to his changed upbringing.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted; [[spoiler: Lisa's baby, Valerian]] ends up being called the same name as a minor Grekov thug. Boris, Sonya's tattooist when she was young, has the same name as a Grekov member Sonya goes to see.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted; [[spoiler: Lisa's baby, Valerian]] ends up being called the same name as a minor Grekov thug. thug.
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* ThoughtAversionFailure: Sonya averts this by carefully not thinking about certain things in Renato's presence.
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* AChildShallLeadThem: Sonya was considered this to the Flame-users' segment of the Zolotovs, after Dmitriy [[spoiler: deliberately got himself caught by the Soviet Union police to avoid Sonya's wrath at the politics that led to in-progress Flame research being published in a book.]] Also [[spoiler: Larion]] for the Rains, after the high turnover rate post-Fadei.
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* TheDreaded: Cloud flame users are ''infamous'' for their short tempers, to the extent that grouchy, anti-social Sonya is seen as restrained and sociable in comparison. [[spoiler:Sonya becomes this on her own merits in the Soviet Union when she annihilates a minor gang, burns down their base (with the flames still going days later) and puts several members heads on pikes. And does the whole thing a second time to a gang that blackmailed a Zolotov Rain to try to assassinate her.]]
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* TheDreaded: Cloud flame Flame users are ''infamous'' for their short tempers, to the extent that grouchy, anti-social Sonya is seen as restrained and sociable in comparison. [[spoiler:Sonya becomes this on her own merits in the Soviet Union when she annihilates a minor gang, burns down their base (with the flames still going days later) and puts several members heads on pikes. And does the whole thing a second time to a gang that blackmailed a Zolotov Rain to try to assassinate her.]]
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* GlowingEyesOfDoom: the external manifestation of a Flame user being very close to causing body harm to anyone foolish enough to get on their bad side.
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* KillTheOnesYouLove: Sonya expects Renato to do this, sooner or later, if they end up on opposite sides of a job. [[spoiler: After he finds out she was responsible for the Cerrito Lightning's kidnapping, Renato refuses.]]
* LadykillerInLove: Renato is confirmed to be this, although it's not [[WillTheyOrWontThey (yet?)]] reciprocated on Sonya's end.
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* MemoryWipingCrew: The Mists of Switzerland, to give people fleeing there new identities.
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* MemoryWipingCrew: The Mists of Switzerland, to give people fleeing there new identities. [[spoiler: Also hinted to be why Sonya can't recall what about Switzerland is so significant, when Viper asks her help.]]
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted; [[spoiler: Lisa's baby, Valerian]] ends up being called the same name as a minor Grekov thug.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Bjǫrn looks a few years older than he really is.
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* KnownOnlyByTheirNickname: Bordrov Jaroslav, better known as Peter [=McScruffy=].
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*** Though she seems okay with giving hugs if asked nicely, but she'll need a moment to remember the mechanics.
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** '''Sonya:''' ''[at Renato after he tries to bodily move her away from the entrance]'' Remove your hands or ''lose'' them.
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* NothingButSkinAndBones: 'Peter McScruffy', after getting out of Freetown jail. His Sun Flames are how he survived.
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* NothingButSkinAndBones: 'Peter McScruffy', [=McScruffy=]', after getting out of Freetown jail. His Sun Flames are how he survived.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11101458/1/Russian-Roulette Russian Roulette]] is a fanfic written by ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/2685743/Vixen-Tail Vixen_Tail]]'' set on the KatekyoHitmanReborn universe, about 50 or so years before canon. It is available at both [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11101458/1/Russian-Roulette ff.net]] and [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3524165/chapters/7751051 ao3]].
It tells the story of Sonya Nikishina, a young Russian thief that was, once upon a time, a girl by the name Rachel Victoria Stokes, an American college graduate who had died in a mugging gone wrong. Sonya has the memories of Rachel, which include details about an anime called Katekyo Hitman Reborn... and guess who has apparently been reincarnated into said anime?
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It tells the story of Sonya Nikishina, a young Russian thief that was, once upon a time, a girl by the name Rachel Victoria Stokes, an American college graduate who had died in a mugging gone wrong. Sonya has the memories of Rachel, which include details about an anime called Katekyo Hitman Reborn... and guess who has apparently been reincarnated into said anime?
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It tells the story of Sonya Nikishina, a young Russian thief that was, once upon a time, a girl by the name Rachel Victoria Stokes, an American college graduate who had died in a mugging gone wrong. Sonya has the memories of Rachel, which include details about an anime called
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* [[BigBrotherInstinct Little Sister Instinct]]: Despite being younger and "weaker" when it comes to Flames, Sonya is extremely protective of Cherep, specially against underworld denizens. When [[spoiler: Viper mentioned s/he knew that Sonya and Cherep were both Clouds]], Sonya threatened to hunt them down, rip out their spine and beat them with it.
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* [[spoiler: EverybodyKnewAlready:]] Turns out Sonya and Cherep's secret background before coming to the circus wasn't as secret to [[spoiler: the ''Großes Volksfest'']] as they'd thought. [[spoiler: Magicians and circus performers]] apparently had a huge tendency to be [[spoiler: Mists in hiding]].
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* [[spoiler: EverybodyKnewAlready:]] EverybodyKnewAlready: Turns out Sonya and Cherep's secret background before coming to the circus wasn't as secret to [[spoiler: the ''Großes Volksfest'']] as they'd thought. [[spoiler: Magicians and circus performers]] apparently had a huge tendency to be [[spoiler: Mists in hiding]].
* [[BigBrotherInstinct Little Sister Instinct]]: Despite being younger and "weaker" when it comes to Flames, Sonya is extremely protective of Cherep, specially against underworld denizens. When [[spoiler: Viper mentioned s/he knew that Sonya and Cherep were both Clouds]], Sonya threatened to hunt them down, rip out their spine and beat them with it.
* TheMafia: The Vongola.
* TheMafiya: The Zolotovs.
* TheMafia: The Vongola.
* TheMafiya: The Zolotovs.
* NoOneCouldSurviveThat: The circus doctor and audience's reaction to Cherep's first public normally-fatal-but-survivable-due-to-Flames experience.
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* NoOneCouldSurviveThat: The circus doctor and audience's reaction to Cherep's first public normally-fatal-but-survivable-due-to-Flames experience.
* TheOmniscientCouncilOfVagueness: The coalition of Mafia groups that runs Mafia Land have some shades of this.
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* TheMafia: The Vongola.
* TheMafiya: The Zolotovs.
* TheOmniscientCouncilOfVagueness: The coalition of Mafia groups that runs Mafia Land have some shades of this.
* TheTriadsAndTheTongs: A Triad group hires Sonya to dispose of some sensitive information the local police acquired.
** [[spoiler: Accepting the job eventually comes back to bite her when the Triads get ''very'' interested in Sonya's Flame abilities.]]
* TheMafiya: The Zolotovs.
* TheOmniscientCouncilOfVagueness: The coalition of Mafia groups that runs Mafia Land have some shades of this.
* TheTriadsAndTheTongs: A Triad group hires Sonya to dispose of some sensitive information the local police acquired.
** [[spoiler: Accepting the job eventually comes back to bite her when the Triads get ''very'' interested in Sonya's Flame abilities.]]
* TheTriadsAndTheTongs: A Triad group hires Sonya to dispose of some sensitive information the local police acquired.
** [[spoiler: Accepting the job eventually comes back to bite her when the Triads get ''very'' interested in Sonya's Flame abilities.]]
** [[spoiler: Accepting the job eventually comes back to bite her when the Triads get ''very'' interested in Sonya's Flame abilities.]]
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* YouNeedToGetLaid: Tatiana to Sonya, during the teen years. She gets a little more proactive in trying to set Sonya up during their vacation in France, but is forced to admit defeat when Sonya's natural Cloud tendencies make her unwilling to do casual.
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* YouNeedToGetLaid: Tatiana to Sonya, during the teen years. She gets a little more proactive in trying to set Sonya up during their vacation in France, but is forced to admit defeat when Sonya's natural Cloud tendencies make her unwilling to do casual.casual.
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* Foil: Sonya to Dmitriy in regards to their leadership over the Zolotov Flame users, with not only gender, but Sonya tending to be more experimental and into exploring the possibilities of Flame aspects, and Dmitriy tending to stick to what he knows. Also Sonya with Gedeon, in her being less interested in Russia and the Zolotovs than he is, and Gedeon being narrowminded in regards to what Flame users are capable of.
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* Foil: {{Foil}}: Sonya to Dmitriy in regards to their leadership over the Zolotov Flame users, with not only gender, but Sonya tending to be more experimental and into exploring the possibilities of Flame aspects, and Dmitriy tending to stick to what he knows. Also Sonya with Gedeon, in her being less interested in Russia and the Zolotovs than he is, and Gedeon being narrowminded in regards to what Flame users are capable of.
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* NothingButSkinAndBones: 'Peter McScruffy', after getting out of Freetown jail. His Sun Flames are how he survived.
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* MemoryWipingCrew: After Viper asks Sonya about Switzerland, it's implied that the Mists who live there are one.
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* AccidentalMisnaming: A good number of readers seem to think Tatiana's name is actually Titania.
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** The Four Rains, for being blindly loyal to Fadei (and who tested his luck with Sonya yet again after apparently not even attempting to get stronger and more skilled with his Flames).