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* TookALevelInCheerfulness: Fluttershy, as Spike notices when he runs into her in mid-air. She's friendly,smiling and even ''mischievous'' with Rainbow Dash after they re-bonded and became friendlier than ever before with Rainbow Dash in ''FanFic/{{Dragonshyness}}''. This is Fluttershy's ''normal'' reaction to discovering that somepony loves her, as we also see (four years later) regarding Bulk Biceps in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E24EquestriaGames "Equestria Games"]].
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* TookALevelInCheerfulness: Fluttershy, as Spike notices when he runs into her in mid-air. She's friendly,smiling friendly, smiling and even ''mischievous'' with Rainbow Dash after they re-bonded and became friendlier than ever before with Rainbow Dash in ''FanFic/{{Dragonshyness}}''. This is Fluttershy's ''normal'' reaction to discovering that somepony loves her, as we also see (four years later) regarding Bulk Biceps in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E24EquestriaGames "Equestria Games"]].
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Spike is summoned to Canterlot to meet with Princes Celestia. When he gets there he discovers that he is also meeting with Princess Luna, and Princess Luna wants to talk with him ...
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Spike is summoned to Canterlot to meet with Princes Princess Celestia. When he gets there there, he discovers that he is also meeting with Princess Luna, and Princess Luna wants to talk with him ...
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* TookALevelInCheerfulness: Fluttershy, as Spike notices when he runs into her in mid-air. She's friendly,smiling and even ''mischievous'' with Rainbow Dash after they re-bonded and became friendlier than ever before with Rainbow Dash in ''FanFic/{{Dragonshyness}}''. This is Fluttershy's ''normal'' reaction to discovering that somepony loves her, as we also see (four years later) regarding Bulk Biceps in Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E24EquestriaGames.
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* TookALevelInCheerfulness: Fluttershy, as Spike notices when he runs into her in mid-air. She's friendly,smiling and even ''mischievous'' with Rainbow Dash after they re-bonded and became friendlier than ever before with Rainbow Dash in ''FanFic/{{Dragonshyness}}''. This is Fluttershy's ''normal'' reaction to discovering that somepony loves her, as we also see (four years later) regarding Bulk Biceps in Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E24EquestriaGames.[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E24EquestriaGames "Equestria Games"]].
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* DefinitelyJustACold: Spike notices (from an air chariot) that Pinkie Pie looks ill. WordOfGod is it that she was ''seriously'' wounded fighting Red Haze the Dragon in ''FanFic/{{Dragonshyness}}'' (rewrite of Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E7Dragonshy),and in consequence is going to come close to death in a story set around the time of Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E9BridleGossip.
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* DefinitelyJustACold: Spike notices (from an air chariot) that Pinkie Pie looks ill. WordOfGod is it that she was ''seriously'' wounded fighting Red Haze the Dragon in ''FanFic/{{Dragonshyness}}'' (rewrite (a rewrite of Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E7Dragonshy),and [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E7Dragonshy "Dragonshy"]]), and in consequence is going to come close to death in a story set around the time of Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E9BridleGossip.[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E9BridleGossip "Bridle Gossip"]].
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* PsychicLink: When Spike attunes with Luna, this temporarily happens. First, Spike experiences some of Luna's memories from her [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld long life]], then he experiences some of her memories from her [[TimeAbyss ''far LONGER'' life]] as the [[AnthropomorphicPersonification Cosmic Concept]] Gravity.
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* PsychicLink: When Spike attunes with Luna, this temporarily happens. First, Spike experiences some of Luna's memories from her [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld long life]], then he experiences some of her memories from her [[TimeAbyss ''far LONGER'' far LONGER life]] as the [[AnthropomorphicPersonification Cosmic Concept]] Gravity.
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* [[SociallyAwkwardHero Socially-Awkward Heroine]]: Princess Luna is very nervous at the prospect of speaking with Spike -- not because she's shy around Dragons (she isn't: she ''likes'' Dragons), but because her intent is to learn more about Twilight Sparkle, and she wants to make a good impression on Spike because she knows Spike is Twilight's closest ''confidante''.
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* [[SociallyAwkwardHero Socially-Awkward Heroine]]: Princess Luna is very nervous at the prospect of speaking with Spike -- not because she's shy around Dragons (she isn't: she ''likes'' Dragons), but because her intent is to learn more about Twilight Sparkle, and she wants to make a good impression on Spike because she knows Spike is Twilight's closest ''confidante''.
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* [[PersonOfMassDestruction Pony of Mass Destruction]]: One of Luna's memories is of her battle as Nightmare Moon against Celestia, over a thousand years ago. It is revealed that many of her missed shots were ''leveling the Foreverfree City'', something which might be [[InferredHolocaust inferred]] from the condition of the Castle and all the ruins littering the landscale by the time the Mane Six first laid eyes upon the area.
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* PsychicLink: When Spike attunes with Luna, this temporarily happens. First, Spike experiences some of Luna's memories from her [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld long life]], then he experiences some of her memories from her [[TimeAbyss ''far LONGER'' life]] as the [[AnthropomorphicPersonification Cosmic Concept]] Gravity.
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* TimeAbyss: The two Ruling Princesses, Celestia and Luna, both because they are [[Really700YearsOld over 2500 years old]], and because their Cosmic Selves, Fusion and Gravity, are almost as old as the entire Universe.
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* [[SecretPath Secret Passages]]: The Palace at Canterlot is riddled with these. Some are there to provide access to the old crystal mines from when these were the mines of Bahamut's Rest, but some seem to have been built simply for Celestia's amusement.
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* TookALevelInCheerfulness: Fluttershy, as Spike notices when he runs into her in mid-air. She's friendly,smiling and even ''mischievous'' with Rainbow Dash after they re-bonded and became friendlier than ever before with Rainbow Dash in ''FanFic/{{Dragonshyness}}''. This is Fluttershy's ''normal'' reaction to discovering that somepony loves her, as we also see (four years later) regarding Bulk Biceps in Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E24EquestriaGames.Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E24EquestriaGames.
* TunnelNetwork: Canterlot began as the mining town of Bahamut's Rest. There are secret passages from the Palace at Canterlot to the old crystal mines, among other places. In addition, because of the limited space available on the mountainside, the city has expanded both up by building skyscraping towers, and down by delving into the living rock, and this is not even a secret.
* TunnelNetwork: Canterlot began as the mining town of Bahamut's Rest. There are secret passages from the Palace at Canterlot to the old crystal mines, among other places. In addition, because of the limited space available on the mountainside, the city has expanded both up by building skyscraping towers, and down by delving into the living rock, and this is not even a secret.
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* RoyalHarem: At one point, Celestia built a luxurious Seraglio in the back gardens of the Palace at Canterlot. The evidence is that she chickened out before actually putting it to its intended purpose, but she notably never demolished it. Spike -- who assumes it to merely be an abandoned bath house -- often went there to relax while Twilight was busy with Celestia. Princess Celestia has no idea that Spike used to frequent the place.
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* BigFancyCastle: The Palace at Canterlot. Spike is very familiar with the Palace, as he grew up playing -- and, later, working for Twilight Sparkle, in this building.
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* BigFancyCastle: The Palace at Canterlot. Spike is very familiar with the Palace, as he grew up playing -- and, later, working for Twilight Sparkle, Sparkle -- in this building.
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* BigFancyCastle: The Palace at Canterlot. Spike is very familiar with the Palace, as he grew up playing -- and, later, working for Twilight Sparkle, in this building.
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* InnocentInnuendo: Luna refers to Twilight Sparkle as Spike's "mistress," unaware that she could imply a sexual relationship. This is not so much because Luna's innocent -- she's [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld not]] -- but because she is a FishOutOfTemporalWater and word connotations have shifted in the millennium she spent on the Moon. Fortunately, she says this in private conversation with Celestia, ''not'' in the conversation with Spike himself.
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* InnocentInnuendo: Luna refers to Twilight Sparkle as Spike's "mistress," unaware that she could this might imply a sexual relationship. This is not so much because Luna's innocent -- she's [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld not]] -- but because she is a FishOutOfTemporalWater and word connotations have shifted in the millennium she spent on the Moon. Fortunately, she says this in private conversation with Celestia, ''not'' in the conversation with Spike himself.
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* InnocentInnuendo: Luna refers to Twilight Sparkle as Spike's "mistress," unaware that she could imply a sexual relationship. This is not so much because Luna's innocent -- she's [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld not]] -- but because she is a FishOutOfTemporalWater and word connotations have shifted in the millennium she spent on the Moon.
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* InnocentInnuendo: Luna refers to Twilight Sparkle as Spike's "mistress," unaware that she could imply a sexual relationship. This is not so much because Luna's innocent -- she's [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld not]] -- but because she is a FishOutOfTemporalWater and word connotations have shifted in the millennium she spent on the Moon. Fortunately, she says this in private conversation with Celestia, ''not'' in the conversation with Spike himself.
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* InnocentInnuendo: Luna refers to Twilight Sparkle as Spike's "mistress," unaware that she could imply a sexual relationship. This is not so much because Luna's innocent -- she's [[ReallySevenHundredYearsOld not]] -- but because she is a FishOutOfTemporalWater and word connotations have shifted in the millennium she spent on the Moon.
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* [[SociallyAwkwardHero Socially-Awkward Heroine]]: Princess Luna is very nervous at the prospect of speaking with Spike -- not because she's shy around Dragons (she isn't: she ''likes'' Dragons), but because her intent is to learn more about Twilight Sparkle, and she wants to make a good impression on Spike because she knows Spike is Twilight's closest ''confidante''.
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* DefinitelyJustACold: Spike notices (from an air chariot) that Pinkie Pie looks ill. WordOfGod is it that she was ''seriously'' wounded fighting Red Haze the Dragon in ''FanFic/Dragonshyness'' (rewrite of Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E7Dragonshy),and in consequence is going to come close to death in a story set around the time of Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E9BridleGossip.
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* DefinitelyJustACold: Spike notices (from an air chariot) that Pinkie Pie looks ill. WordOfGod is it that she was ''seriously'' wounded fighting Red Haze the Dragon in ''FanFic/Dragonshyness'' ''FanFic/{{Dragonshyness}}'' (rewrite of Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E7Dragonshy),and in consequence is going to come close to death in a story set around the time of Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E9BridleGossip.
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* DefinitelyJustACold: Spike notices (from an air chariot) that Pinkie Pie looks ill. WordOfGod is it that she was ''seriously'' wounded fighting Red Haze the Dragon in Fanfic/Dragonshyness ''FanFic/Dragonshyness'' (rewrite of Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E7Dragonshy),and in consequence is going to come close to death in a story set around the time of Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E9BridleGossip.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Though Twilight is technically Spike's foster sister, the 7-year age gap between them (she's 17, he's 10 at the point of this story) means that she sometimes thinks of him as if he were her ''child''.
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-->"There's going to be a big storm coming through here tonight -- the Weather Patrol was really thrown off balance by the need to divert rain to the White Tails to clean up the mess Red Haze made all over the eastern part of the mountains. They called for some rain, and got more than they bargained for out of the Everfree, according to Rainbow Dash. I'm just going to bolt all the shutters, curl up with a good book, and go to sleep tonight. No excitement," she predicted.
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* FamilyHonor: ''Both'' Twilight Sparkle and Spike feel this sentiment regarding their clan, which is an attribute of the Canterlot gentry.
-->Twilight's eyes misted slightly as she recognized the attitude. It was her own, the ethos of a young member of the elite scholar-gentry of Canterlot. It was the culture she had absorbed as a small filly from her parents and her big brother, and now Spike had learned the same lessons from her. Be smart. Be honorable. Be diligent. Never let your family down.
-->Twilight's eyes misted slightly as she recognized the attitude. It was her own, the ethos of a young member of the elite scholar-gentry of Canterlot. It was the culture she had absorbed as a small filly from her parents and her big brother, and now Spike had learned the same lessons from her. Be smart. Be honorable. Be diligent. Never let your family down.
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* InterspeciesAdoption: Twilight Sparkle and Spike the Dragon consider one another siblings.
-->Twilight smiled fondly at him. He was her assistant, her friend, her adoptive baby brother.
-->Twilight smiled fondly at him. He was her assistant, her friend, her adoptive baby brother.
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Jordan179 Jordan179]] set in early Season 1 (September YOH 1500) at the same time as MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E25TwilightsKingdomPart1.
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Jordan179 Jordan179]] set in early Season 1 (September YOH 1500) at the same time as MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E25TwilightsKingdomPart1.
[[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS1E8LookBeforeYouSleep Look Before You Sleep]].
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Jordan179 Jordan179]] set in early Season 1 (September YOH 1500) at the same time as /MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E25TwilightsKingdomPart1.
MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E25TwilightsKingdomPart1.
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* OverlyNarrowSuperlative: Upon being personally summoned to court, Spike says: "Guess she's finally realized just who is the Number One Dragon around here!" Immediately [[HangingALampshade Lampshaded]] by Twilight Sparkle, resulting in this exchange:
-->"Spike," Twilight chuckled, "you're the only Dragon around Ponyville."
-->"And thus the Number One," he replied with impeccable logic.
* OverlyNarrowSuperlative: Upon being personally summoned to court, Spike says: "Guess she's finally realized just who is the Number One Dragon around here!" Immediately [[HangingALampshade Lampshaded]] by Twilight Sparkle, resulting in this exchange:
-->"Spike," Twilight chuckled, "you're the only Dragon around Ponyville."
-->"And thus the Number One," he replied with impeccable logic.
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A WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfic by [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Jordan179 Jordan179]] set in early Season 1 (September YOH 1500) at the same time as /MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS4E25TwilightsKingdomPart1.
Spike is summoned to Canterlot to meet with Princes Celestia. When he gets there he discovers that he is also meeting with Princess Luna, and Princess Luna wants to talk with him ...
Available [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/207942/royal-business here]].
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Spike is summoned to Canterlot to meet with Princes Celestia. When he gets there he discovers that he is also meeting with Princess Luna, and Princess Luna wants to talk with him ...
Available [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/207942/royal-business here]].
!!Tropes appearing in this work include:
