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** Centurion Chris-Z9571 is a walking tank with the agility of a Republic Knight and enough toys hidden away in his armor to make [[IronMan Tony Stark]] jealous.
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''[[http://thewikia.deviantart.com/art/Rise-of-the-Red-Eclipse-Ch-1-275012737 Rise of the Red Eclipse]]'' is a Star Wars fanfic in name only as it takes place outside of the Star Wars galaxy with the main protagonists having left the constant wars of that galaxy behind. Written in an attempt to create science fiction (in a science fantasy universe) that actually adhered somewhat to the laws of physics and didn't fall into the [[SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale pitfalls of scifi writing]]. Mainly a [[WarFic War Fic]] with drama and humor dashed in to help break up the monotony and help things not get so serious that they're cheesy, this literary work is meant mostly to show epic fights from one-on-one duels to planetary scale ground and orbital engagements.
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''[[http://thewikia.deviantart.com/art/Rise-of-the-Red-Eclipse-Ch-1-275012737 Rise of the Red Eclipse]]'' is a Star Wars ''Franchise/StarWars'' fanfic in name only InNameOnly, as it takes place outside of the Star Wars galaxy with the main protagonists having left the constant wars of that galaxy behind. Written in an attempt to create science fiction (in in a science fantasy universe) universe that actually adhered somewhat to the laws of physics and didn't fall into the [[SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale pitfalls of scifi writing]]. Mainly a [[WarFic War Fic]] with drama and humor dashed in to help break up the monotony and help things not get so serious that they're cheesy, this literary work is meant mostly to show epic fights from one-on-one duels to planetary scale ground and orbital engagements.
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* BadassGrandpa: Admiral Howard Jacobs is an aging Mandalorian fleet admiral who perfected Close Quarters Combat tactics with capital ships and often has his ship use its superior armor to [[RammingAlwaysWorks fly through]] enemy ships if the situation demands.
* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Somewhat averted with Field Marshall Nelson. She lost her arms but her face was left in one piece.
* BigDamnHeroes: Most notably when the Rescue Fleet arrives to save the Eclipse Republic's home planet in Chapter 41.
** The entire segment showing the relief force arriving at New Fentok in Chapter 26.
* CombatPragmatist: The series makes full use of all three dimensions in combat as well as the fact that ships don't have to be on the same 'level' to fire at each other. More often than not, the main character does his best to get his ship underneath enemy fleets to fire from below with devastating effects.
* CoolStarship: The RAS Kindred Spirit, and later on, the RSSD Republic.
* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: Somewhat averted with Field Marshall Nelson. She lost her arms but her face was left in one piece.
* BigDamnHeroes: Most notably when the Rescue Fleet arrives to save the Eclipse Republic's home planet in Chapter 41.
** The entire segment showing the relief force arriving at New Fentok in Chapter 26.
* CombatPragmatist: The series makes full use of all three dimensions in combat as well as the fact that ships don't have to be on the same 'level' to fire at each other. More often than not, the main character does his best to get his ship underneath enemy fleets to fire from below with devastating effects.
* CoolStarship: The RAS Kindred Spirit, and later on, the RSSD Republic.
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* CombatPragmatist: The series makes full use of all three dimensions in combat as well as the fact that ships don't have to be on the same
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''[[http://thewikia.deviantart.com/art/Rise-of-the-Red-Eclipse-Ch-1-275012737 Rise of the Red Eclipse]]'' is a Star Wars fanfic in name only as it takes place outside of the Star Wars galaxy with the main protagonists having left the constant wars of that galaxy behind. Written in an attempt to create science fiction (in a science fantasy universe) that actually adhered somewhat to the laws of physics and didn't fall into the [[SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale pitfalls of scifi writing]]. Mainly a [[WarFic War Fic]] with drama and humor dashed in to help break up the monotony and help things not get so serious that they're cheesy, this literary work is meant mostly to show epic fights from one-on-one duels to planetary scale ground and orbital engagements.
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* SpaceIsAnOcean: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] in that every orbital engagement uses [[EndersGame Enders Game-esque thought processes]] in fighting in zero gravity.
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''[[http://thewikia.deviantart.com/art/Rise-of-the-Red-Eclipse-Ch-1-275012737 Rise of the Red eclipse]]'' Eclipse]]'' is a Star Wars fanfic in name only as it takes place outside of the Star Wars galaxy with the main protagonists having left the constant wars of that galaxy behind. Written in an attempt to create science fiction that actually adhered somewhat to the laws of physics and didn't fall into the [[SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale pitfalls of scifi writing]]. Mainly a [[WarFic War Fic]] with drama and humor dashed in to help break up the monotony and help things not get so serious that they're cheesy, this literary work is meant mostly to show epic fights from one-on-one duels to planetary scale ground and orbital engagements.
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"May the Force be with you, you son of a bitch."''
"May the Force be with you, you son of a bitch."''
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* BadassGrandpa: Admiral Howard Jacobs is an aging Mandalorian fleet admiral who perfected Close Quarters Combat tactics with capital ships and often has his ship use its superior armor to [[RammingSpeed fly through]] enemy ships if the situation demands.
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* OneManArmy: Grand Admiral Nelson pulls this on a few occasions, most notably when his wife was mortally wounded and he [[UnstoppableRage didn't take it too well]]. The path he carved through an enemy army while in a [[TheBerserker Force Rage]] was so powerful that the two main antagonists felt it from across the galaxy.
* SpaceIsAnOcean: Heavily [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] in that every orbital engagement uses [[EndersGame Enders Game-esque thought processes]] in fighting in zerogravity.gravity.
* SuperSoldier: Centurion Chris-Z9571 is a walking tank with the agility of a Republic Knight and enough toys hidden away in his armor to make [[IronMan Tony Stark]] jealous.
** In a smaller sense, EPAS (Eclipse Powered Armor Soldier) Troopers are like mini-Centurions with onboard shields, enhanced strength and reflexes, and a much more optimized HUD than their regular infantry counterparts.
* SpaceIsAnOcean: Heavily [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] in that every orbital engagement uses [[EndersGame Enders Game-esque thought processes]] in fighting in zero
* SuperSoldier: Centurion Chris-Z9571 is a walking tank with the agility of a Republic Knight and enough toys hidden away in his armor to make [[IronMan Tony Stark]] jealous.
** In a smaller sense, EPAS (Eclipse Powered Armor Soldier) Troopers are like mini-Centurions with onboard shields, enhanced strength and reflexes, and a much more optimized HUD than their regular infantry counterparts.
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* AnyoneCanDie: The author kills off a few [[CharacterDevelopment well-developed]] characters that have been around from the start, usually to prove how bad a situation the Republic is in first with Abyss' first appearance, and again with the Coalition showing up.
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* CombatPragmatist: The series makes full use of all three dimensions in combat as well as the fact that ships don't have to be on the same 'level' to fire at each other. More often than not, the main character does his best to get his ship underneath enemy fleets to fire from below with devastating effects.
* SpaceIsAnOcean: Heavily [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] in that every orbital engagement uses [[EndersGame Enders Game-esque thought processes]] in fighting in zero gravity.
* CombatPragmatist: The series makes full use of all three dimensions in combat as well as the fact that ships don't have to be on the same 'level' to fire at each other. More often than not, the main character does his best to get his ship underneath enemy fleets to fire from below with devastating effects.
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''[[http://thewikia.deviantart.com/art/Rise-of-the-Red-Eclipse-Ch-1-275012737 Rise of the Red eclipse]]'' is a Star wars Wars fanfic in name only as it takes place outside of the Star Wars galaxy with the main protagonists having left the constant wars of that galaxy behind. Written in an attempt to create science fiction that actually adhered somewhat to the laws of physics and didn't fall into the [[SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale pitfalls of scifi writing]]. Mainly a [[WarFic War Fic]] with drama and humor dashed in to help break up the monotony and help things not get so serious that they're cheesy, this literary work is meant mostly to show epic fights from one-on-one duels to planetary scale ground and orbital engagements.
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* AnyoneCanDie: The author kills off a few [[CharacterDevelopment well-developed]] characters that have been around from the start, usually to prove how bad a situation the Republic is in first with Abyss' first appearance, and again with the Coalition showing up.
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->''"Well I'll be damned... you actually sound scared. After all those billions you've murdered, all the fleets you've decimated... and one 'abomination' frightens you... well guess what. You just unlocked something that you can't control." Nelson said, his voice warping slightly, "Something you're afraid of, something you told me back on Xesh and thought I wouldn't catch. Well I did. I remember... and now let me tell you something."
"May the Force be with you, you son of a bitch."''
-->-- '''Grand Admiral Edward Nelson''', ''Chapter 31''
''[[http://thewikia.deviantart.com/art/Rise-of-the-Red-Eclipse-Ch-1-275012737 Rise of the Red eclipse]]'' is a Star wars fanfic in name only as it takes place outside of the Star Wars galaxy with the main protagonists having left the constant wars of that galaxy behind. Written in an attempt to create science fiction that actually adhered somewhat to the laws of physics and didn't fall into the [[SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale pitfalls of scifi writing]]. Mainly a [[WarFic War Fic]] with drama and humor dashed in to help break up the monotony and help things not get so serious that they're cheesy, this literary work is meant mostly to show epic fights from one-on-one duels to planetary scale ground and orbital engagements.
"May the Force be with you, you son of a bitch."''
-->-- '''Grand Admiral Edward Nelson''', ''Chapter 31''
''[[http://thewikia.deviantart.com/art/Rise-of-the-Red-Eclipse-Ch-1-275012737 Rise of the Red eclipse]]'' is a Star wars fanfic in name only as it takes place outside of the Star Wars galaxy with the main protagonists having left the constant wars of that galaxy behind. Written in an attempt to create science fiction that actually adhered somewhat to the laws of physics and didn't fall into the [[SciFiWritersHaveNoSenseOfScale pitfalls of scifi writing]]. Mainly a [[WarFic War Fic]] with drama and humor dashed in to help break up the monotony and help things not get so serious that they're cheesy, this literary work is meant mostly to show epic fights from one-on-one duels to planetary scale ground and orbital engagements.