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* NapInducingSpeak: As always, Professor Binns.
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* MismatchedEyes: Professor Kirtle has these, of the heterochromia variety. They are noted for giving her a slightly manic look.
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* DeathEqualsRedemption: Discussed. When Rose is worrying that Albus will be sorted into Slytherin, she thinks of Snape as an example of a good Slytherin, but one who had to die in order to be good.
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* AmbiguouslyBrown: Played with, but mostly averted. Several characters are described as having brown skin without a specific ethnicity, but their surnames or relatives usually give clues. Professor Shafiq is implied by his surname to be of Middle Eastern origin, though he's also Very British. Elin Haksar can be assumed to be of Indian origin from her surname, although the early reveal that she is [[spoiler:Cho Chang's daughter]] clarifies that she's half-Indian, half-Chinese.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Scorpius does his best to infuriate Rose after she publicly reveals his fear of flying. Lyra will outright threaten anyone who hurts her friends. Kindly healer-in-training Eva Sandsgard is furious when a student abandons their injured housemate at the bottom of the hospital wing stairs so they can get back to playing Quidditch.
* BrutalHonesty: Lyra has a habit of using this.
* ButNotTooForeign: Professor Shafiq's extreme Englishness can be read as this. On the other hand, it is canon (via Pottermore) that the Shafiqs were a British pureblood family back in the twenties and probably a long time before that, so it makes a certain degree of sense.
* BrutalHonesty: Lyra has a habit of using this.
* ButNotTooForeign: Professor Shafiq's extreme Englishness can be read as this. On the other hand, it is canon (via Pottermore) that the Shafiqs were a British pureblood family back in the twenties and probably a long time before that, so it makes a certain degree of sense.
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* AllWitchesHaveCats: In addition to the canon examples, Rose has a half-kneazle cat from Mrs Figg.
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* ANaziByAnyOtherName: Referenced with the canon example of the Death Eaters. Lyra bluntly refers to them as “wizard nazis.”
* AsleepInClass: Nobody will be conscious during Binns' History of Magic lessons.
* AsleepInClass: Nobody will be conscious during Binns' History of Magic lessons.
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* NoodleIncident: [=McGonagall=] warns older students off "any dangerous forms of ‘initiation’", i.e. hazing, on penalty of expulsion. One of the Ravenclaw prefects assures the first years that such things are normal — ''"There was just an incident a few years back and Professor [=McGonagall’s=] never forgiven them."''
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* NoodleIncident: [=McGonagall=] warns older students off "any dangerous forms of ‘initiation’", i.e. hazing, on penalty of expulsion. One of the Ravenclaw prefects assures the first years that such things are aren't normal — ''"There was just an incident a few years back and Professor [=McGonagall’s=] never forgiven them."''
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''Returning'' is an in-progress Harry Potter Next Gen Fic by troper @/{{GlassCatOwl}}.[=GlassCatOwl=]. It starts pretty much the moment the Epilogue left off, only from the perspectives of Scorpius Malfoy and Rose Weasley. An incident with Rose’s cat gets the two of them off to a bad start, only made worse by the fact they’re sorted into the same house. The fic covers their first year at Hogwarts, which will be rather eventful — much to their headmistress’s displeasure.
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* GeniusDitz: Both fifth year prefects are implied to be this. Katherine, the sixth year prefect, suggests that "unless you’re asking about Transfiguration or how to tell the future through animal byproducts", the first years should probably seek help elsewhere.
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* NoodleIncident: McGonagall [=McGonagall=] warns older students off "any dangerous forms of ‘initiation’", i.e. hazing, on penalty of expulsion. One of the Ravenclaw prefects assures the first years that such things are normal — ''"There was just an incident a few years back and Professor McGonagall’s [=McGonagall’s=] never forgiven them."''
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* CurseCutShort: Dorian begins to (jokingly) tell Dom where she can shove her Gryffindor pride, but Bonnie closes the door before the first years can hear him.
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''Returning'' is an in-progress Harry Potter Next Gen Fic by troper @/{{GlassCatOwl}}. It starts pretty much the moment the Epilogue left off, only focusing on Draco’s son Scorpius Malfoy and Hermione and Ron’s daughter Rose Weasley. An incident with Rose’s cat gets the two of them off to a bad start, only made worse by the fact they’re sorted into the same house. The fic covers their first year at Hogwarts, which will be rather eventful — much to their headmistress’s displeasure.
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''Returning'' is an in-progress Harry Potter Next Gen Fic by troper @/{{GlassCatOwl}}. It starts pretty much the moment the Epilogue left off, only focusing on Draco’s son from the perspectives of Scorpius Malfoy and Hermione and Ron’s daughter Rose Weasley. An incident with Rose’s cat gets the two of them off to a bad start, only made worse by the fact they’re sorted into the same house. The fic covers their first year at Hogwarts, which will be rather eventful — much to their headmistress’s displeasure.
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* ContinuityNod: Obviously Draco Malfoy wasn’t keen to encounter Mr Ollivander, seeing as the last time they met, the Malfoys had him kidnapped and tortured.
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* ContinuityNod: Scorpius recalls his father disappearing off to the Apothecary when he was getting his wand. Obviously Draco Malfoy wasn’t keen to encounter Mr Ollivander, seeing as the last time they met, the Malfoys had him kidnapped and tortured.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: As of chapter two, seems to be heading this way. Scorpius Malfoy, Lyra Jones, James Sirius Potter, Dominique Wealey, Rose Weasley, Elin Haksar, Albus Severus Potter, Dorian, Bonnie, and several Hogwarts professors are all introduced in the first two chapters — and those are the ones who have lines.
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* OriginalCharacter: Lyra Jones.Jones is the first one introduced, but far from the last. See LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters.
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* MassiveNumberedSiblings: The Weasleys, as in canon, resulting in Massive Numbered Cousins. Counting just first cousins, Rose has ten, and it's implied that there are other Weasley cousins currently attending Hogwarts.
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* ReformedButRejected: Implied to be the case with the Malfoys.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Well, seven-eighths human, but Dominique still has traces of veela man-enthralling powers.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Scorpius to the rest of the Malfoys, as in canon. Not all of the Weasley grandkids are redheads, but they can usually be counted on to at least have freckles.
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* FeudingFamilies: Scorpius hasn't even met them before, but James and Dominique are already convinced that he's a bad kid by virtue of being a Malfoy.
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* OriginalCharacter: Lyra Jones.
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* CoolUncle: Off-screen, Charlie Weasley. Rose even named her [[ComplimentBackfire vicious, bad tempered, violent cat after him]].
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* DeadGuyJunior: As in canon, Albus Severus Potter and his older brother James Sirius Potter, along with George's son Fred. Their cousin Molly is named after their grandmother, but her namesake is still alive.
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* WeNamedTheMonkeyJack: Rose's cat is named Charlie, after her uncle.
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AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: As usual, Professor [=McGonagall=] is still headmistress.
AlternateUniverseFic: The author’s note predicts it will become one after the release of ‘’Harry Potter and the Cursed Child’’.
ContinuityNod: Obviously Draco Malfoy wasn’t keen to encounter Mr Ollivander, seeing as the last time they met, the Malfoys had him kidnapped and tortured.
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->'''Lyra:''' ''[to Scorpius]'' “What is it with people and your last name?”
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ContinuityNod: Obviously Draco Malfoy wasn’t keen to encounter Mr Ollivander, seeing as the last time they met, the Malfoys had him kidnapped and tortured.
NaiveNewcomer: Lyra is not only a Muggleborn, she’s immediately confronted with the family tensions between the Malfoys and the Weasleys.
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: As usual, Professor [=McGonagall=] is still headmistress.
* AlternateUniverseFic: The author’s note predicts it will become one after the release of ‘’Harry Potter and the Cursed Child’’.
* ContinuityNod: Obviously Draco Malfoy wasn’t keen to encounter Mr Ollivander, seeing as the last time they met, the Malfoys had him kidnapped and tortured.
* NaiveNewcomer: Lyra is not only a Muggleborn, she’s immediately confronted with the family tensions between the Malfoys and the Weasleys.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: The author’s note predicts it will become one after the release of ‘’Harry Potter and the Cursed Child’’.
* ContinuityNod: Obviously Draco Malfoy wasn’t keen to encounter Mr Ollivander, seeing as the last time they met, the Malfoys had him kidnapped and tortured.
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->'''Lyra:''' ''[to Scorpius]'' “What is it with people and your last name?”name?”
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It can be found [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/6413887/chapters/14683159 here]].
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->'''Lyra:''' (to Scorpius) ''[to Scorpius]'' “What is it with people and your last name?”
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‘’Returning’’ is an in-progress Harry Potter Next Gen Fic by troper @/GlassCatOwl.@/{{GlassCatOwl}}. It starts pretty much the moment the Epilogue left off, only focusing on Draco’s son Scorpius Malfoy and Hermione and Ron’s daughter Rose Weasley. An incident with Rose’s cat gets the two of them off to a bad start, only made worse by the fact they’re sorted into the same house. The fic covers their first year at Hogwarts, which will be rather eventful — much to their headmistress’s displeasure.
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‘’Returning’’ is an in-progress Harry Potter Next Gen Fic by troper @/GlassCatOwl. It starts pretty much the moment the Epilogue left off, only focusing on Draco’s son Scorpius Malfoy and Hermione and Ron’s daughter Rose Weasley. An incident with Rose’s cat gets the two of them off to a bad start, only made worse by the fact they’re sorted into the same house. The fic covers their first year at Hogwarts, which will be rather eventful — much to their headmistress’s displeasure.
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!! ‘’Returning’’ contains examples of:
AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: As usual, Professor [=McGonagall=] is still headmistress.
AlternateUniverseFic: The author’s note predicts it will become one after the release of ‘’Harry Potter and the Cursed Child’’.
ContinuityNod: Obviously Draco Malfoy wasn’t keen to encounter Mr Ollivander, seeing as the last time they met, the Malfoys had him kidnapped and tortured.
NaiveNewcomer: Lyra is not only a Muggleborn, she’s immediately confronted with the family tensions between the Malfoys and the Weasleys.
->'''Lyra:''' (to Scorpius) “What is it with people and your last name?”
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!! ‘’Returning’’ contains examples of:
AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: As usual, Professor [=McGonagall=] is still headmistress.
AlternateUniverseFic: The author’s note predicts it will become one after the release of ‘’Harry Potter and the Cursed Child’’.
ContinuityNod: Obviously Draco Malfoy wasn’t keen to encounter Mr Ollivander, seeing as the last time they met, the Malfoys had him kidnapped and tortured.
NaiveNewcomer: Lyra is not only a Muggleborn, she’s immediately confronted with the family tensions between the Malfoys and the Weasleys.
->'''Lyra:''' (to Scorpius) “What is it with people and your last name?”
