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* AdaptationDyeJob: Scourge has naturally green fur instead of starting out with blue.
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* PrisonEpisode: This ''SonicTheHedgehog'' AlternateUniverseFic with the Contextual Reassignment of a prison - not just the canon characters going to prison for once, but actively being convicted criminals. Active and completely unrepentant for the most part. All of the powers/talents that make them heroes in canon are simply redirected to criminal ends. Sonic robbed a bank, nearly managed a second one, killed a cop in the process and escaped normal prisons with utter ease. Shadow killed his foster parents, then used his Chaos Control to rape and murder innumerable young women, and killed several men too. He was captured when he Chaos Controlled into the path of a moving vehicle.

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* PrisonEpisode: This ''SonicTheHedgehog'' ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' AlternateUniverseFic with the Contextual Reassignment of a prison - not just the canon characters going to prison for once, but actively being convicted criminals. Active and completely unrepentant for the most part. All of the powers/talents that make them heroes in canon are simply redirected to criminal ends. Sonic robbed a bank, nearly managed a second one, killed a cop in the process and escaped normal prisons with utter ease. Shadow killed his foster parents, then used his Chaos Control to rape and murder innumerable young women, and killed several men too. He was captured when he Chaos Controlled into the path of a moving vehicle.
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Part Two - [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9933167/1/Prison-Island-Break-Season-Two Prison Island Break: Season Two]]

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Part Two - [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9933167/1/Prison-Island-Break-Season-Two Prison Island Break: Season Two]]
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The fanfic is no longer available. I was in the middle of reading it yesterday when it happened. Was only on chapter 12/84, too...



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As of July 5, 2019 Part Two is no longer available, the author has deleted it from fanfiction.net.
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Unfortunately, Breech Loader has officially announced that she won't update the story anymore as of June 23, 2019.

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Unfortunately, Breech Loader has officially announced that she won't update the story anymore as of June 23, 2019.
2019. But wasn't it nice of her to step up to the plate and say so?
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Unfortunately, Breech Loader has officially announced that she won't update anymore as of June 23, 2019.

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Unfortunately, Breech Loader has officially announced that she won't update the story anymore as of June 23, 2019.
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Unfortunately, Breech Loader has officially announced that she won't update anymore as of June 23, 2019.


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** And now, as of June 2019 the author has officially stopped updating the story.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Between Sonic and Shadow - when they first meet, Shadow attempts to sexually attack Sonic to dominate him, and later on starts having disturbing dreams. Eventually he and Sonic [[spoiler: have a consensual make-out session to vent his frustrations with Sonic taking the lead]].

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* BelligerentSexualTension: Between Sonic and Shadow - when they first meet, Shadow attempts to sexually attack Sonic to dominate him, and later on starts having disturbing dreams. Eventually he and Sonic [[spoiler: have a consensual make-out session to vent his frustrations with Sonic taking the lead]].lead.]]



* GoMadFromTheIsolation: Shadow sacrifices his own sanity - he signs a paper admitting he is insane - and is locked up in the small lunatic wing (also . While drugging, rape and medical torture is something he has endured, now he goes through a week of isolation, chained to the wall and fed through a tube. When Amy rescues him a week later he is in a shocking condition, and she breaks into tears. On his part, he doesn't even recognize her as the woman he was once so infatuated with.

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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: Shadow sacrifices his own sanity - he signs a paper admitting he is insane - and is locked up in the small lunatic wing (also . While also. (While drugging, rape and medical torture is something he has endured, now he goes through a week of isolation, chained to the wall and fed through a tube.tube). When Amy rescues him a week later he is in a shocking condition, and she breaks into tears. On his part, he doesn't even recognize her as the woman he was once so infatuated with.



* JerkJock: Knuckles

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* JerkJock: KnucklesKnuckles.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Super Sonic is renamed 'Fleetway' to distinguish him from Sonic, and confirm which version of Super Sonic is being used [[CaptainObvious (it's Fleetway's).]]

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* AdaptationNameChange: Super Sonic is renamed 'Fleetway' to distinguish him from Sonic, and confirm which version of Super Sonic is being used [[CaptainObvious (it's Fleetway's).]]
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''Prison Island Break,'' by Breech Loader and Sonicfrank, is a DarkFic; a massive re-imagining of the ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' series where everybody is a dangerous criminal. We're talking Sonic The Cop Killer here. It includes extensive violence, graphic rape, mental illness and the newest addition to the trauma list, A-list drug abuse. The author doesn't believe in wasting time either; the violation of basic human rights kicks off in Chapter One and escalates, enthusiastically turning your childhood heroes into violent and mentally diseased felons. It's not for the faint of heart or weak of stomach, making lesser DarkFic look like a cookbook.

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''Prison Island Break,'' by Breech Loader and Sonicfrank, is a DarkFic; a massive re-imagining of the ''Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog'' series where everybody is a dangerous criminal. We're talking Sonic The Cop Killer here. It includes extensive murder sexual violence, graphic rape, mental illness and the newest addition to the trauma list, A-list drug abuse. The author doesn't believe in wasting time either; the violation of basic human rights kicks off in Chapter One and escalates, enthusiastically turning your childhood heroes into violent and mentally diseased felons. It's not for the faint of heart or weak of stomach, making lesser DarkFic look like a cookbook.
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** Silver is known almost exclusively as "Preacher", especially by Shadow, which he rather dislikes as he knows it's intended as an insult. However Scourge calls him "Fairy-Princess" which he hates even more.

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** Silver is known almost exclusively as "Preacher", especially by Shadow, which he rather dislikes as he knows it's intended as an insult.insult. Shadow occasionally calls him 'boy' (as a reference to his greater age). However Scourge calls him "Fairy-Princess" which he hates even more.



* EvilIsNotAToy: Shadow's intelligence, combined with his lack of self-control and loose morals make him very useful. They also make him dangerous. Sonic finds this out the hard way.

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* EvilIsNotAToy: Shadow's intelligence, combined with his lack of self-control and loose morals make him very useful. They also make him very dangerous. Sonic finds this out the hard way.



* StraightMandAndWiseGuy: Sonic and Shadow when it's just the two of them. Guess which is which.

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* StraightMandAndWiseGuy: StraightManAndWiseGuy: Sonic and Shadow when it's just the two of them. Guess which is which.

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** Sonic is frequently referred to by Shadow as "Streak", "Thickest Thing Alive" and "The Blue Blockhead".

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** After Sonic is frequently referred to by gives Shadow his nicknames, Shadow twists them into insults, and often refers to Sonic as "Streak", "Thickest "The Thickest Thing Alive" and "The Blue Blockhead".


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*** Interestingly, not ''once'' in the story does either one call the other 'Faker'.

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** Interestingly, while it is mentioned that 'several wardens' and Amy Rose attend, Mephiles is ''not'' mentioned as attending, another thing that makes him all the less humane.

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** Interestingly, while it is mentioned that 'several wardens' and even Amy Rose attend, Mephiles is ''not'' mentioned as attending, attending (despite being directly responsible for one death), another thing that makes him all the less humane.



** Sonic considers Shadow partly responsible for [[spoiler: the death of Manic)]] and neither forgives nor forgets - although he eventually accepts that Shadow feels genuinely guilty.



* EmbarrassingFirstName: Shadow the Hedgehog's full name is [[GenderBlenderName "Ursula Leslie Robotnik",]] which is why he insists that everybody call him Shadow, but Sonic occasionally embarrasses him with it. At one point he jokes that it means "Oops, we expected a girl."

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* EmbarrassingFirstName: Shadow the Hedgehog's full name is [[GenderBlenderName "Ursula Leslie Robotnik",]] which is why he insists that everybody call him Shadow, but Sonic occasionally embarrasses him with it. At one point he Shadow jokes that it means "Oops, we expected a girl."



** Sonic is frequently referred to by Shadow as "Streaker", "Thickest Thing Alive" and "The Blue Blockhead".
** Shadow is referred to by Sonic as "Girlfriend", "Captain Surly", "S-man" and when he's feeling particularly respectful, "Shads-meister".
** Silver is known almost exclusively as "Preacher". Scourge calls him "Fairy-Princess".

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** Sonic is frequently referred to by Shadow as "Streaker", "Streak", "Thickest Thing Alive" and "The Blue Blockhead".
** Shadow is referred to by Sonic as "Girlfriend", "Girlfriend" (Shadow initially argues about it but gives up after a while), "Captain Surly", "S-man" "S-man", "Shads" and when he's feeling particularly respectful, "Shads-meister".
** Silver is known almost exclusively as "Preacher". "Preacher", especially by Shadow, which he rather dislikes as he knows it's intended as an insult. However Scourge calls him "Fairy-Princess"."Fairy-Princess" which he hates even more.
** Mephiles is often referred to as "Mephy" by Sonic.


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* StraightMandAndWiseGuy: Sonic and Shadow when it's just the two of them. Guess which is which.
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** By modern medical standards Shadow would probably be diagnosed as Neurotic with some qualities of a Delusional Psychopath, but it's simpler for writer and reader alike to just stick with 'psychopath'.

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** By modern medical standards Shadow would probably be diagnosed as Neurotic is not a genuine psychopath, but more of a Paranoid Neurotic, with some qualities signs of a Delusional Psychopath, but it's simpler for writer and reader alike to just stick with 'psychopath'.Psychopathy, which is not quite the same thing as your standard psychopathy.
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* DramaticIrony: Shadow and Silver find out they're father and son at roughly the same time, but can't bear to tell the other for fear of rejection - even though the reader knows they'd probably embrace it. Shadow starts treating Silver like a son (teaching and protecting him), while Silver starts taking on some of Shadow's traits. But they can't bear to reveal it for ages.
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* MatureAnimalStory: Whatcha' expect?
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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: Shadow sacrifices his own sanity - he signs a paper admitting he is insane - and is locked up in the small lunatic wing (also . While drugging, rape and medical torture is something he has endured, now he goes through a week of isolation, chained to the wall and fed through a tube. He is rescued by the return of Doctor Amy, by which point he doesn't even recognize her, only the fact that she is being kind.

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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: Shadow sacrifices his own sanity - he signs a paper admitting he is insane - and is locked up in the small lunatic wing (also . While drugging, rape and medical torture is something he has endured, now he goes through a week of isolation, chained to the wall and fed through a tube. He When Amy rescues him a week later he is rescued by the return of Doctor Amy, by which point in a shocking condition, and she breaks into tears. On his part, he doesn't even recognize her, only her as the fact that she is being kind.woman he was once so infatuated with.
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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: Shadow sacrifices his own sanity - he signs a paper admitting he is insane - and is locked up in the small lunatic wing (also . While drugging, rape and medical torture is something he has endured, now he goes through a week of isolation, chained to the wall and fed through a tube. He is rescued by the return of Doctor Amy, by which point he doesn't even recognize her, only the fact that she is being kind.
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* EnsembleCast: A large cast, with chapters alternating between characters. It's rare that two chapters will have the same two characters running. If Shadow tries to kill Sonic in one chapter it may be another two before you see them in the infirmary.

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* CombatPragmatist: Everybody - even Sonic.
* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: Very deliberately averted. As Doctor Blossom performs surgery on Shadow during the riot, she thinks about how little equipment she's got and contemplates how she's so unlikely to save him. When she performs CPR, she has to siphon blood and vomit out of his mouth to stop him from drowning in it. It's an accurately described mess.

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* CombatPragmatist: Everybody - even Sonic.
Everybody.
** Shadow is the most skilled, constantly being frisked for shivs and coming up with more minutes later.
** Sonic rips off a toilet seat and hits Shadow in the face with it.
* CPRCleanPrettyReliable: Very deliberately averted.''averted''. As Doctor Blossom performs surgery on Shadow during the riot, she thinks about how little equipment she's got and contemplates how she's so unlikely to save him. When she performs CPR, she has to siphon blood and vomit out of his mouth to stop him from drowning in it. It's an accurately described mess.



* DepravedHomosexual: Knuckles. It's stated very firmly that he's in prison because he raped multiple men.

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* DepravedHomosexual: Knuckles. It's stated very firmly that he's in prison because he raped multiple men.''men.''



* ImprovisedWeapon: Shadow does this all the time. Yes, he's happy to use broken glass and stolen razors. And he'll pull the old toothbrush-shiv too. But the writer did the research and he will resort to using anything to hand.

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* ImprovisedWeapon: Shadow does this all the time. Yes, he's happy to use broken glass and stolen razors. And he'll pull the old toothbrush-shiv too. But the writer did the research and he will resort to using anything to hand.hand from fire axes to pool cues.

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* ALighterShadeOfBlack: The protragonists that you should be rooting for are criminals - not framed, not vandals, but murderers and rapists. Mephiles is portrayed as being worse because he is so corrupt and sadistic.

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* ALighterShadeOfBlack: The protragonists that you should be rooting for are criminals - not framed, not vandals, but murderers and rapists. Mephiles is portrayed as being worse because he is so corrupt and sadistic. Likewise Scourge is a paedophile.



* AttemptedRape: Shadow attempts to molest Sonic early on and molests Silver under the bleachers and again in the chapel. Shadow is technically straight, and the author portrays it more as him trying to dominate them than a sexually motivated attack.
** Scourge tries this on Sonic when the two of them become cell mates. He fails. [[spoiler: The second time, however...]]

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* AttemptedRape: Shadow attempts to molest Sonic early on the first time they meet, and molests Silver under the bleachers and again in the chapel. Shadow is technically straight, and the author portrays it more as him trying to dominate them than a sexually motivated attack.
** Scourge tries this on Sonic when the two of them become cell mates. He fails. [[spoiler: The second time, however...]]
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** Despite his physical inadequacy, Silver shows signs of being genuinely crazy, blowing up when people he cares about are in danger.

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** Despite his physical inadequacy, Silver shows signs of being genuinely crazy, blowing up when people he cares about are in danger. He realises that he is behaving just like his father.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Between Sonic and Shadow - when they first meet, Shadow attempts to sexually attack Sonic to dominate him, and later on starts having disturbing dreams. Eventually he and Sonic [[spoiler/have a consensual make-out session to vent his frustrations with Sonic taking the lead]].

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* BelligerentSexualTension: Between Sonic and Shadow - when they first meet, Shadow attempts to sexually attack Sonic to dominate him, and later on starts having disturbing dreams. Eventually he and Sonic [[spoiler/have [[spoiler: have a consensual make-out session to vent his frustrations with Sonic taking the lead]].

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* AttemptedRape: Shadow attempts to rape Silver under the bleachers and again in the chapel. Shadow is technically straight, and the author portrays it more as one of his random acts of violence than a sexually motivated attack.

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* AttemptedRape: Shadow attempts to rape molest Sonic early on and molests Silver under the bleachers and again in the chapel. Shadow is technically straight, and the author portrays it more as one of his random acts of violence him trying to dominate them than a sexually motivated attack.



* BelligerentSexualTension: Between Sonic and Shadow - when they first meet, Shadow attempts to sexually attack Sonic to dominate him, and later on starts having disturbing dreams. Eventually he and Sonic [[spoiler/have a consensual make-out session to vent his frustrations with Sonic taking the lead]].



** Despite his physical inadequacy, Silver has shown signs of being increasingly crazy.

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** Despite his physical inadequacy, Silver has shown shows signs of being increasingly crazy.genuinely crazy, blowing up when people he cares about are in danger.



* EvilCannotComprehendGood: During the FreakyFridayFlip, Scourge doesn't learn how great it is to have friends, but instead tires of being nice to them.

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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: During the FreakyFridayFlip, Scourge doesn't ''doesn't'' learn how great it is to have friends, but instead tires of being nice to them.



* FreakyFridayFlip: Finivetus and Eggman do this to Sonic and Scourge. They try to cover it up to avoid getting beaten up, but rapidly tire of being each other - Sonic hates being feared and alone, not to mention the withdrawal symptoms of Heroin, while Scourge tires of being nice to people he considers weak and misses the psychological effects.

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* FreakyFridayFlip: Finivetus and Eggman do this to Sonic and Scourge. They try to cover it up to avoid getting beaten up, but rapidly tire of being each other - Sonic hates being feared and alone, not to mention enduring the withdrawal symptoms of Heroin, while Scourge tires of being nice to people he considers weak and misses the psychological effects.



* HellHolePrison

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* HellHolePrisonHellHolePrison: The setting.



* MoodDissonance: It's 100% DarkFic; that's for sure. But this is the author's method of injecting humour. Rather than constantly dredging the reader through the depths of despair, they make them sit up sharply using humorous descriptions of dramatic events and smart one-liners, all the way to ComedicSociopathy. For example, just after Silver has been raped...

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* MoodDissonance: It's 100% DarkFic; that's for sure. But this is the author's method author does love a good dose of injecting humour.BlackHumour. Rather than constantly dredging the reader through the depths of despair, they make them sit up sharply using humorous descriptions of dramatic events and smart one-liners, all the way to ComedicSociopathy. For example, just after Silver has been raped...



** Sonic and Shadow have a lot of BelligerentSexualTension. At one point [[spoiler: they engage in a heated make-out session.]]

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** Sonic and Shadow have a lot of BelligerentSexualTension. At one point [[spoiler: they engage in a heated make-out session.]]



** Shadow's riot scenes with Amy reflecting those in ''VideoGame/SonicAdventure2''.

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** Shadow's riot scenes with Amy reflecting those her talking to him in ''VideoGame/SonicAdventure2''.


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** During part of the sewer escape Shadow keeps saying "We have to find the computer room!" and Tails comments on how annoying it is.

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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Sonic asks Shadow to get rid of the dead weight on their team, hoping the black and red hedgehog will just scare Silver away. Shadow has a different definition of 'dead weight' culminating in [[spoiler: murdering Espio and Vector in the prison shower.]] Sonic is understandably horrified.

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* BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor: Sonic asks Shadow to get rid of the dead weight on their team, hoping the black and red hedgehog will just scare Silver away. Shadow has a different definition of 'dead weight' culminating in [[spoiler: murdering Espio and Vector in the prison shower.]] Sonic is understandably horrified.


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* ByTheBookCop: E-123 Omega - a ''robot'' - is just about the only decent Warden in the place, and the convicts take opportunities to point out Mephiles' corruption, eventually overloading the Inhibitor Chip that keeps it from questioning immoral orders.
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** TheBigGuy: Knuckles

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** TheBigGuy: KnucklesKnuckles (later on, Omega)

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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: During the FreakyFridayFlip, Scourge doesn't learn how great it is to have friends, but instead tires of being nice to them.



* FreakyFridayFlip: Finivetus and Eggman do this to Sonic and Scourge. They try to cover it up to avoid getting beaten up. However Sonic soon tires of the fear and physical withdrawal symptoms from Heroin, while Scourge misses the psychological highs of Heroin and finds it tiresome to be nice to people he considers weak. In the end, Sonic learns what it's like to be unpopular and alone, and tries to mete how annoying he can be. However Scourge learns nothing long-term.

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* FreakyFridayFlip: Finivetus and Eggman do this to Sonic and Scourge. They try to cover it up to avoid getting beaten up. However up, but rapidly tire of being each other - Sonic soon tires of hates being feared and alone, not to mention the fear and physical withdrawal symptoms from of Heroin, while Scourge misses the psychological highs tires of Heroin and finds it tiresome to be being nice to people he considers weak. In weak and misses the end, Sonic learns what it's like to be unpopular and alone, and tries to mete how annoying he can be. However Scourge learns nothing long-term.psychological effects.
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* FreakyFridayFlip: Finivetus and Eggman do this to [[spoiler: Sonic and Scourge.]] Everyone is very much creeped out.
* FriendlyEnemy: Shadow and Sonic; the writer skillfully writes so that despite all the fighting they do, they still gradually become friends (although Shadow denies it fiercely).

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* FreakyFridayFlip: Finivetus and Eggman do this to [[spoiler: Sonic and Scourge.]] Everyone is very much creeped out.
Scourge. They try to cover it up to avoid getting beaten up. However Sonic soon tires of the fear and physical withdrawal symptoms from Heroin, while Scourge misses the psychological highs of Heroin and finds it tiresome to be nice to people he considers weak. In the end, Sonic learns what it's like to be unpopular and alone, and tries to mete how annoying he can be. However Scourge learns nothing long-term.
* FriendlyEnemy: Shadow and Sonic; the writer skillfully skilfully writes so that despite all the fighting they do, they still gradually become friends (although Shadow denies it fiercely).

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