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** In Chapter 22, when [=SMG3=] find Toad frozen, he wonders if he's going to [[WebAnimation/SMG4TheWaluigiArc turn him into a T-poser]].
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** In Chapter 22, when [=SMG3=] find finds Toad frozen, he wonders if he's going to [[WebAnimation/SMG4TheWaluigiArc turn him into a T-poser]].
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You can read the story on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14238603/1/SMG4-A-Need-For-Perfection-an-SMG4-story here]], or on Website/DeviantArt [[https://www.deviantart.com/cvgwjames/art/SMG4-Perfection-chapter-one-964813657 here]].
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You can read the story on Website/FanFictionDotNet [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14238603/1/SMG4-A-Need-For-Perfection-an-SMG4-story here]], or on Website/DeviantArt [[https://www.deviantart.com/cvgwjames/art/SMG4-Perfection-chapter-one-964813657 com/cvgwjames/gallery/90198239/smg4-perfection here]].
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''A Need for Perfection'' (or just ''Perfection'') is an [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64Bloopers SMG4]] fanfiction written by Creator/CVGWJames, retelling the event of the videos leading up to [=SMG4’s=] fourth movie ''[[WebAnimation/SMG4MovieItsGottaBePerfect It’s Gotta Be Perfect]]''.
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''A Need for Perfection'' (or just ''Perfection'') is an [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64Bloopers SMG4]] fanfiction written by Creator/CVGWJames, retelling the event events of the videos leading up to [=SMG4’s=] fourth movie ''[[WebAnimation/SMG4MovieItsGottaBePerfect It’s Gotta Be Perfect]]''.
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** When [=SMG3=] confronts [=SMG4=] over his "perfect" video, the phrases "not worth killing yourself" and "hard-on" have been replaced with "not worth hurting yourself" and "massive obsession", respectively. There aren't the only instances of words and terminology being changed to seem more family-friendly, either.
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** When [=SMG3=] confronts [=SMG4=] over his "perfect" video, the phrases "not worth killing yourself" and "hard-on" have been replaced with "not worth hurting yourself" and "massive obsession", respectively. There These aren't the only instances of words and terminology being changed to seem more family-friendly, either.
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** Not surprisingly, [[spoiler:[=SMG4=] reflecting on his past memories at the now-destroyed Peach's castle]] includes more moments that ''[[WebAnimation/SMG4MovieItsGottaBePerfect It’s Gotta Be Perfect]]'' didn't have time for, namely [[Recap/SMG4MarioAndTheTPoseVirus the T-Pose Zombie attack]], [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersMarioHasABBQButHesNotInvited the BBQ]] following [[spoiler:Axol's death]], and [[Recap/Supermarioglicthy4sSuperMario64BloopersSMG4ChristmasSpecial2021 Christmas of 2021]].
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** Not surprisingly, [[spoiler:[=SMG4=] reflecting on his past memories at the now-destroyed Peach's castle]] includes more moments that ''[[WebAnimation/SMG4MovieItsGottaBePerfect It’s Gotta Be Perfect]]'' didn't have time for, namely [[Recap/SMG4MarioAndTheTPoseVirus the T-Pose Zombie attack]], attack]] and [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersMarioHasABBQButHesNotInvited the BBQ]] following [[spoiler:Axol's death]], and [[Recap/Supermarioglicthy4sSuperMario64BloopersSMG4ChristmasSpecial2021 Christmas of 2021]].death]].
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-->'''[=SMG3=]:''' Oh no, it seems [=SMG4’s=] been experimenting with redesigning more characters! As if [[WebAnimation/SMG4TheAnimeArc Meggy changing from an Inkling]], [[Recap/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64BloopersMariosMaskOfMadness Melony becoming a human with the Fierce Deity Mask]], Old Man Hobo getting a new look[[note]]Unlike the others, this character hasn't been shown receiving his design[[/note]], [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersTheMemeGames2022 Saiko’s appearance getting an upgrade]] and [[WebAnimation/Supermarioglitchy4sSuperMario64BloopersTheLawsuitArc me, SMG4, Bob and Boopkins changing]] all weren’t enough!
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Removing redundancy.
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* AdaptationalMundanity: Continuing the author's tradition of keeping things fairly realistic in his [=SMG4=] retellings, Mario's meetings with Bowser and Luigi in Chapter 11's take on [[Recap/SMG4MarioStealsTheAmericanConstitution "Mario Steals The American Constitution"]] eliminates some of the cartoony elements from the original, namely Mario turning into a flower and going into the TV, respectively.
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* AdaptationalMundanity: Continuing the author's tradition of keeping things fairly realistic in his [=SMG4=] retellings, Mario's meetings with Bowser and Luigi in Chapter 11's take on [[Recap/SMG4MarioStealsTheAmericanConstitution "Mario Steals The American Constitution"]] eliminates some of the cartoony elements from the original, namely Mario turning into a flower and going into the TV, respectively.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: [=SMG3's=] line about missing being evil has been replaced with this in Chapter 24:
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: [=SMG3's=] line about missing being evil in ''[[WebAnimation/SMG4MovieItsGottaBePerfect It’s Gotta Be Perfect]]'' has been replaced with this in Chapter 24:
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** Not surprisingly, [[spoiler:[=SMG4=] reflecting on his past memories at the now-destroyed Peach's castle]] includes more moments that ''[[WebAnimation/SMG4MovieItsGottaBePerfect It’s Gotta Be Perfect]]'' didn't have time for, namely [[Recap/SMG4MarioAndTheTPoseVirus the T-Pose Zombie attack]] [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersMarioHasABBQButHesNotInvited the BBQ]] following [[spoiler:Axol's death]], and [[Recap/Supermarioglicthy4sSuperMario64BloopersSMG4ChristmasSpecial2021 Christmas of 2021]].
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** Not surprisingly, [[spoiler:[=SMG4=] reflecting on his past memories at the now-destroyed Peach's castle]] includes more moments that ''[[WebAnimation/SMG4MovieItsGottaBePerfect It’s Gotta Be Perfect]]'' didn't have time for, namely [[Recap/SMG4MarioAndTheTPoseVirus the T-Pose Zombie attack]] attack]], [[Recap/SMG4sMarioBloopersMarioHasABBQButHesNotInvited the BBQ]] following [[spoiler:Axol's death]], and [[Recap/Supermarioglicthy4sSuperMario64BloopersSMG4ChristmasSpecial2021 Christmas of 2021]].
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*** Swagmaster's "boom boom boom" song now has additional lyrics without him repeating "I want you in my room". You could call it an extended version if you really wanted it to.
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*** Swagmaster's "boom boom boom" song now has additional lyrics without him repeating "I want you in my room". You could call it an extended version if you really wanted it to.
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Turns out, Red is the actual given name of the character.
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*** We see more of [=SMG3=] when he's pulled through the mirror, and how he merged with the monster (now named Red).
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*** We see more of [=SMG3=] when he's pulled through the mirror, and how he merged with the monster (now named Red).[[Literature/NESGodzillaCreepypasta Red]].
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* BigNo: [=SMG3=] lets one out when Red starts to merge with him.
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* BigNo: [=SMG3=] lets one out when Red [[Literature/NESGodzillaCreepypasta Red]] starts to merge with him.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: The monster that merged with [=SMG3=] in ''[[WebAnimation/SMG4MovieItsGottaBePerfect It’s Gotta Be Perfect]]'' is here called "Red".
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: While ranting at Peach in Chapter 19, [=SMG4=] says [[spoiler:he could care less if her castle sank to the Earth. Those who saw the "IT'S GOTTA BE PERFECT" movie knows that that's ''exactly'' what happens]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: {{Foreshadowing}}:
** While ranting at Peach in Chapter 19, [=SMG4=] says [[spoiler:he could care less if her castle sank to the Earth. Those who saw the "IT'S GOTTA BE PERFECT" movie knows that that's ''exactly'' whathappens]].happens]].
** In TheStinger, [[spoiler:famous former Splatfest champion One-Shot Wren is floating in a pod where he's connected to a simulation. Viewers of ''[[WebAnimation/SMG4MovieWesternSpaghetti SMG4 Movie: WESTERN SPAGHETTI]]'' will know where ''this'' is going]].
** While ranting at Peach in Chapter 19, [=SMG4=] says [[spoiler:he could care less if her castle sank to the Earth. Those who saw the "IT'S GOTTA BE PERFECT" movie knows that that's ''exactly'' what
** In TheStinger, [[spoiler:famous former Splatfest champion One-Shot Wren is floating in a pod where he's connected to a simulation. Viewers of ''[[WebAnimation/SMG4MovieWesternSpaghetti SMG4 Movie: WESTERN SPAGHETTI]]'' will know where ''this'' is going]].
