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* AmplifierArtifact: The Seven Seals are a set of these. The Shadows Ojamajos were mentioned as being boosted by the power of the Seals they were holding. Said Seals are also what allows the Queen to use her SuperMode. It's slated to make a return in ''Witches At World's End'' and grant Majorin a SuperMode of her own.

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* AmplifierArtifact: The Seven Seals are a set of these. The Shadows Shadow Ojamajos were mentioned as being boosted by the power of the Seals they were holding. Said Seals are also what allows the Queen to use her SuperMode. It's slated to make a return in ''Witches At World's End'' and grant Majorin a SuperMode of her own.



* BlackAndWhiteMorality: The heroic Ojamajos, Queen, and Majorin fight to stop the evil Shadows from taking over the world.

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* BlackAndWhiteMorality: The heroic Ojamajos, Queen, and Majorin fight to stop the evil [[DarkIsEvil Shadows from taking over the world.are evil]] and trying to TakeOverTheWorld AND [[OmnicidalManiac exterminate their light halves]]. Said [[LightIsGood light halves are good]] and [[VillainsActHeroesReact only act to defend themselves]].



* ShadowLand: The realms of the Shadows are this, being described as dark versions of various other worlds. The story doesn't give much context, but the implications are there.



* BewareTheNiceOnes: Hana and Hazuki. Both are, in canon, the least likely to engage in fighting. However, given the circumstances in this story, they literally he no choice but to fight. Hana rushes in to defend Doremi when Shadow Doremi strikes her while Shadow Hazuki quips at Hazuki "finally growing a backbone" when she launches an attack.

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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Hana and Hazuki. Both are, in canon, the least likely to engage in fighting. However, given the circumstances in this story, they literally he have no choice but to fight. Hana rushes in to defend Doremi when Shadow Doremi strikes her while Shadow Hazuki quips at Hazuki "finally growing a backbone" when she the latter launches an attack.



* CurbstompBattle: Black Queen personally assaults the Witch World's Castle to draw the Queen out. By now, she has learned how to use her "''Keyblade''" when not in SuperMode and tries to take a crack at defeating Black Queen again. Black Queen catches the blade and throws the Queen back with little effort.

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* CurbstompBattle: Black Queen personally assaults the Witch World's Castle World to draw the Queen out. By now, she has learned how to use her "''Keyblade''" when not in SuperMode and tries to take a crack at defeating Black Queen again. Black Queen catches the blade and throws the Queen back with little effort.
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* DeadFic: It was published back in April 2012, and it hasn't been updated since.

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* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Several powers that BOTH sides have weren't foreshadowed in the slightest. The Shadows having telepathy was a big one, and the Queen gaining the ability to ignore the rules of magic when in her SuperMode is practically a DeusExMachina.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Evil Rin angrily lashes out and inflicts one of these on the Queen immediately after the latter shouts that the Shadows "don't deserve to exist"; the former pins to Queen to the ground and uses her dagger to cut deeper and deeper wounds before finally tearing off her veil.



* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Several powers that BOTH sides have weren't foreshadowed in the slightest. The Shadows having telepathy was a big one, and the Queen gaining the ability to ignore the rules of magic when in her SuperMode is practically a DeusExMachina.
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* QuirkyMinibossSquad: The Shadow Ojamajos. They also double as PsychoRangers in that they're a group and are each counterparts to their respective Light Halves.

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* QuirkyMinibossSquad: ThePsychoRangers: The Shadow Ojamajos. They also double as PsychoRangers in that they're Each is the shadow version of a group specific girl and they are each counterparts to their respective Light Halves.all evil, gleefully engaging in TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior.

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* BeigeProse: Most of both fics aren't well described (if at all) and is one reason why both aren't as god as they could've been.

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* BeigeProse: Most of both fics aren't well described (if at all) and is one reason why both aren't as god good as they could've been.


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* PaletteSwap: All Shadows look ''exactly'' like their Light Halves, except for color; most of them just have darker colors than their Light Halves. Black Queen and Evil Rin take this a step further; the former replaces all the white on the Queen's garb with black while the latter is black, gray, and silver.
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* MoralDissonance: Black Queen allows her minions, [[TheDragon Evil Rin]] and [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior the Shadow Ojamajos]], to kill Majorin and the Ojamajos (who happen to be little girls) right in front of the Queen, and the event is treated as a horrible atrocity. When the Queen gets her SuperMode, she swiftly kills Evil Rin and the Shadow Ojamajos, the latter of whom are little girls themselves, and it's treated as being perfectly okay.
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* OutOfCharacter: The Queen. In canon, she is wise, benevolent if strict, is competent enough to keep a MagicalLand from going under for over 100 years and then some, and is more than willing to put her life and/or magical power on the line if it means saving the Ojamajos from the BigBad, the power of whom putting hers to shame. Here, she is portrayed as being a rather helpless DamselInDistress who is used as a hostage by the BigBad and makes a decidedly [[TooDumbToLive unwise decision that got Majorin killed]].
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* WhyDontYaJustShootHim: Black Queen had her Light Half at her mercy and could easily have killed her then and there, thus stopping the biggest threat to her plans and preventing the Queen from turning the tables. She lampshades in ''Witches At World's End'' after her flashback.


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* {{Flashback}}: Black Queen has one when she mentally kicks herself for not killing the Queen when she had the chance.


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* YouCantFightFate: Black Queen discusses this with herself. Even if she had killed the Queen when she had the chance, it would very well have been possible that she would have lost anyway. She chooses to drop the subject since she was dwelling on the past that she cannot change.
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* ViewersAreGoldfish: The author seems to feel the need to remind readers of things that were established in the previous chapter and continue doing so for another chapter or two, such as the Shadows' telepathy and even which chapters the flashbacks take scenes from.

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** [[spoiler: Black Queen later uses her magic to indirectly bring back Evil Rin and the Shadow Ojamajos. This spell was described in the narrative as being a Shadow's means of getting around the SacrificialRevivalSpell present in canon.]]

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** [[spoiler: Black Queen later uses her magic to indirectly bring back Evil Rin and the Shadow Ojamajos. This spell was described in the narrative as being a Shadow's means of getting around the SacrificialRevivalSpell rules present in canon.]]]]
* BeigeProse: Most of both fics aren't well described (if at all) and is one reason why both aren't as god as they could've been.


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* PrecisionFStrike: Implied. Shadow Aiko tends to say certain words like "ticked" or "freaking" only to have the narrative say that she didn't actually say those words. WordOfGod confirms that she tends to swear a lot, even though the Japanese language, which all characters are allegedly speaking in, has no swear words.


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* BewareTheNiceOnes: Hana and Hazuki. Both are, in canon, the least likely to engage in fighting. However, given the circumstances in this story, they literally he no choice but to fight. Hana rushes in to defend Doremi when Shadow Doremi strikes her while Shadow Hazuki quips at Hazuki "finally growing a backbone" when she launches an attack.


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* HasTwoMommies: Shamaya, Konomi, and Haru have the Queen and Majorin. The latter two were born when the Queen and Majorin got together, and even they weren't sure how. The former was adopted but is considered part of the family..
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: The Queen in the prologue of ''Witches at World's End'' has a nightmare that supposedly foreshadows events later in the story. She had been having these nightmares for some time now. It's lampshaded when she begins to suspect that they're not dreams but "visions" of the future.


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* TimeSkip: About one year has passed since the events of ''Rise of the Shadows''.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Black Queen was about to personally attack the Ojamajos when the Shadow Ojamajos burst in.

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* WouldHurtAChild: Black Queen was about to personally attack the Ojamajos when the Shadow Ojamajos burst in. She blows them all back with her powers in ''Witches at World's End'' before challenging the Queen.

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* AllYourPowersCombined: Magical Stage, which is carried on from canon (and even uses Hana's powers in this fic to boot), uses the power of all Ojamajos present to execute. Shadow Stage, the Shadow Ojamajos' dark equivalent, is described as being stronger and is the best attack of the Shadow Ojamajos.
* ArtifactOfDoom: The Book of Shadows, which tells of the history of the Shadows and has everything they need to complete their plans. Subverted in that the protagonists themselves can use it to eliminate the Shadows once and for all.
* AmplifierArtifact: The Seven Seals are a set of these. The Shadows Ojamajos were mentioned as being boosted by the power of the Seals they were holding. Said Seals are also what allows the Queen to use her SuperMode.

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* AllYourPowersCombined: Magical Stage, which is carried on from canon (and even uses Hana's powers in this fic to boot), uses the power of all Ojamajos [[foldercontrol]]

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* ArtifactOfDoom: The Book of Shadows, which tells of the history of the Shadows and has everything they need to complete their plans. Subverted in that the protagonists themselves can use it to eliminate the Shadows once and for all.
all. It was mentioned in ''Witches at World's End'', but Black Queen theorizes that is has been destroyed.
* AmplifierArtifact: The Seven Seals are a set of these. The Shadows Ojamajos were mentioned as being boosted by the power of the Seals they were holding. Said Seals are also what allows the Queen to use her SuperMode. It's slated to make a return in ''Witches At World's End'' and grant Majorin a SuperMode of her own.



** [[spoiler: Black Queen later uses her magic to indirectly bring back Evil Rin and the Shadow Ojamajos. This spell was described in the narrative as being a Shadow's means of getting around the SacrificialRevivalSpell present in canon.]]



* BreakingSpeech: Evil Rin delivers one to Majorin regarding her self-worth. It works, and Majorin suffers a HeroicBSOD.
* TheBrute: Shadow Aiko is described as physically being the strongest of the Shadow Ojamajos.
* CallingYourAttacks: Each of the Ojamajos use their {{Magical Incantation}}s to launch attacks. The Shadow Ojamajos call "Shadow Stage" when fighting their Light Halves for the third time. The Queen, in her [[SuperMode Super Witch Form]], calls out "Queen's Starburst" right before running Black Queen through.



* CuteClumsyGirl: Doremi, just like in canon. Although the fic does explain some of her clumsiness as being the work of Shadow Doremi, the latter character claims she's clumsy with or without her, regardless.



* DeadpanSnarker: Shadow Hazuki takes the cake, lampshading her Light Half screaming and running from her own shadow. Shadow Pop is this as well, being Pop's Shadow. The Queen of the Witch World isn't exempt from this either.
* DisneyDeath: Majorin and the Ojamajos are all killed in the final battle. However, an AssPull on the Queen's part allows them to be brought back to life without anyone else dying.
* DisproportionateRetribution: The Shadow Ojamajos despise their Light Halves for their various quirks that they find annoying. How do they deal with it? By gleefully attacking them when given permission from Black Queen, insulting and belittling them, and finally killing them in cold blood.



* TheEvilGenius: Shadow Hazuki and Shadow Onpu are confirmed to be the brains of the Shadow Ojamajos, the former more so.



* ExcusePlot: This story basically boils down to "Evil villains are threatening to take over the world. The heroes must stop them with a [[SuperMode new power]] and then [[RomanticPlotTumor confirm a love interest]]."
* {{Expy}}: WordOfGod has confirmed that Black Queen is based off of [[Disney/SleepingBeauty Maleficent]]. She has also confirmed that the Queen's [[SuperMode Super Witch Form]] is based on Super Sonic...which is, in turn, based on Super Saiyan Goku.



* FlatCharacter: Just about every OriginalCharacter presented had little CharacterDevelopment and thus little as far as personality. The only exception would have to be Evil Rin, and even she doesn't have too much else going for her.
* GenericDoomsdayVillain: Black Queen. While she is powerful and thoroughly evil, her motives and goals are barely plausible and her plan can ''very'' easily be rendered implausible by FridgeLogic. Her personality is hard to pin down aside from just being evil and murderous. The only thing she has going for her is her high threat level.



* HeroicBSOD: Majorin suffers one after getting hit by Evil Rin's BreakingSpeech. It was severe enough that she barely seemed to care that Evil Rin was about to simply kill her. The Queen gets one of her own [[spoiler:after Majorin sacrifices sacrifices herself to stop Evil Rin from killing her.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: Majorin intercepts Evil Rin's attempts to kill the Queen at the last moment. She ends up with Evil Rin's dagger lodged in her heart for her troubles. [[spoiler:[[DisneyDeath It doesn't stick.]]]]



* IdiotBall: The Queen, after breaking free from her bonds, announces her plan to stop the Shadows in their tracks. This nearly gets her killed when Black Queen effortlessly parries her attack.



* ImposterForgotOneDetail: When Evil Rin drags her Light Half Majorin into the shadows, she has to take her place and assume her form. The Queen notices something "off" about "Majorin" and gets a bad feeling. Then she sees a [[CastsNoShadow lack of a shadow...]]



* KickTheDog: Evil Rin and the Shadow Ojamajos do this after the former kills Majorin. Evil Rin claims Majorin's death was for the best and the Shadow Ojamajos openly mock the Queen and the Ojamajos while they're grieving Majorin.
* KidsAreCruel: The Shadow Ojamajos. They mock, insult, and belittle their counterparts and assault them. They later up the ante by outright ''killing'' them in cold blood.



* NonActionBigBad: Black Queen is described by WordOfGod as being the type who prefers to let others do the fighting for her and only uses her power when she has to deal with others of similar power, like her Light Half.
* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Several powers that BOTH sides have weren't foreshadowed in the slightest. The Shadows having telepathy was a big one, and the Queen gaining the ability to ignore the rules of magic when in her SuperMode is practically a DeusExMachina.



* OriginalCharacter: Black Queen, Evil Rin, and the Shadow Ojamajos cannot be found in canon whatsoever and are strictly fanon characters.

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* OriginalCharacter: Black Queen, Evil Rin, and the Shadow Ojamajos cannot be found in canon whatsoever and are strictly fanon characters. [[KidFromTheFuture Shamaya, Konomi, Haru]], and the Elemental Witches are added in the sequel.



* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Evil Rin uses this along with her BreakingSpeech to drive Majorin into a HeroicBSOD. See BreakingSpeech.



* SedgwickSpeech: Non-fatal example. Hana pleads with the Shadow Ojamajos and offers friendship. Shadow Hana rebukes and attacks her for her troubles.



* ShoutOut: A few:
** There is one to ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' courtesy of the description of one of the Seven Seals.
** There is a blatant one to ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts'' when the Queen gains her SuperMode; her new weapon in this form is even ''called'' a Keyblade!
* ShutUpHannibal: Majorin does this when she snaps out of her HeroicBSOD and starts fighting back against her Shadow. The Queen does this herself in the climax, and it lets her swipe the Seven Seals and defeat the Shadows.
* SuperMode: [[spoiler:The Queen of the Witch World gains this when her feelings of hope and motivation to stop Black Queen let her take the Seven Seals and turn into a Super Witch Form.]]
* TheStinger: Chapter 9 is less of a chapter and more of a trailer for the sequel, ''"Ojamajo Doremi: Witches at World's End"''.
* TakeOverTheWorld: Black Queen's goal. The prologue does give a more justifiable reason, but it's quickly lost in favor of making her look more evil.
* TheEndOrIsIt: The end of Chapter 8 [[spoiler:shows a pair of [[GlowingEyesOfDoom glowing]] [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]] and [[EvilLaugh sinister laughter]] right where the Queen defeated the Shadows.]]

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* ShoutOut: A few:
** There is one to ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' courtesy of the description of one of the Seven Seals.
** There is a blatant one to ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts'' when the Queen gains her SuperMode; her new weapon in this form is even ''called'' a Keyblade!
* ShutUpHannibal: Majorin does this when she snaps out of her HeroicBSOD and starts fighting back against her Shadow. The Queen does this herself in the climax, and it lets her swipe the Seven Seals and defeat the Shadows.
* SuperMode: [[spoiler:The Queen of the Witch World gains this when her feelings of hope and motivation to stop Black Queen let her take the Seven Seals and turn into a Super Witch Form. WordOfGod confirms that Majorin will get one of her own in ''Witches at World's End in addition to the Queen getting an upgrade to her SuperMode.]]
* TheStinger: Chapter 9 is less of a chapter and more of a trailer for the sequel, ''"Ojamajo Doremi: Witches at World's End"''.
* TakeOverTheWorld: Black Queen's goal. The prologue does give a more justifiable reason, but it's quickly lost in favor of making her look more evil.
* TheEndOrIsIt: The end of Chapter 8 [[spoiler:shows a pair of [[GlowingEyesOfDoom glowing]] [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]] and [[EvilLaugh sinister laughter]] right where the Queen defeated the Shadows.]]
evil. She retains this goal in ''Witches at World's End'', but she fears that it will be much harder this time around.



* ThisCannotBe: Black Queen gets this when her plans fall apart and [[TheDragon Evil Rin]] and the Shadow Ojamajos are slain. She regains her composure right after she is run through by the Queen's finisher, though.
* TransformationIsAFreeAction: The Ojamajos literally transform right in front of the Shadow Ojamajos despite the fact that it takes some time in canon. Later, the queen gains a lengthy TransformationSequence as she enters her SuperMode. On both occasions, the villains do absolutely nothing to interrupt it.



* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: The Shadow Ojamajos, in spades. They act like complete jerks and show no qualms over outright ''killing'' their light halves in cold blood.


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* AllYourPowersCombined: Magical Stage, which is carried on from canon (and even uses Hana's powers in this fic to boot), uses the power of all Ojamajos present to execute. Shadow Stage, the Shadow Ojamajos' dark equivalent, is described as being stronger and is the best attack of the Shadow Ojamajos.
* BreakingSpeech: Evil Rin delivers one to Majorin regarding her self-worth. It works, and Majorin suffers a HeroicBSOD.
* TheBrute: Shadow Aiko is described as physically being the strongest of the Shadow Ojamajos.
* CallingYourAttacks: Each of the Ojamajos use their {{Magical Incantation}}s to launch attacks. The Shadow Ojamajos call "Shadow Stage" when fighting their Light Halves for the third time. The Queen, in her [[SuperMode Super Witch Form]], calls out "Queen's Starburst" right before running Black Queen through.
* CuteClumsyGirl: Doremi, just like in canon. Although the fic does explain some of her clumsiness as being the work of Shadow Doremi, the latter character claims she's clumsy with or without her, regardless.
* DeadpanSnarker: Shadow Hazuki takes the cake, lampshading her Light Half screaming and running from her own shadow. Shadow Pop is this as well, being Pop's Shadow. The Queen of the Witch World isn't exempt from this either.
* DisneyDeath: Majorin and the Ojamajos are all killed in the final battle. However, an AssPull on the Queen's part allows them to be brought back to life without anyone else dying.
* DisproportionateRetribution: The Shadow Ojamajos despise their Light Halves for their various quirks that they find annoying. How do they deal with it? By gleefully attacking them when given permission from Black Queen, insulting and belittling them, and finally killing them in cold blood.
* TheEvilGenius: Shadow Hazuki and Shadow Onpu are confirmed to be the brains of the Shadow Ojamajos, the former more so. Shadow Hazuki does have more snarky moments and gives exposition, but her status as TheEvilGenius is only there because her Light Half, Hazuki, is [[TheSmartGuy The Smart Girl]] in canon.
* ExcusePlot: This story basically boils down to "Evil villains are threatening to take over the world. The heroes must stop them with a [[SuperMode new power]] and then [[RomanticPlotTumor confirm a love interest]]."
* {{Expy}}: WordOfGod has confirmed that Black Queen is based off of [[Disney/SleepingBeauty Maleficent]]. She has also confirmed that the Queen's [[SuperMode Super Witch Form]] is based on Super Sonic...which is, in turn, based on [[Anime/DragonBallZ Super Saiyan Goku]].
* FlatCharacter: Just about every OriginalCharacter presented had little CharacterDevelopment and thus little as far as personality. The only exception would have to be Evil Rin, and even she doesn't have too much else going for her.
* GenericDoomsdayVillain: Black Queen. While she is powerful and thoroughly evil, her motives and goals are barely plausible and her plan can ''very'' easily be rendered implausible by FridgeLogic. Her personality is hard to pin down aside from just being evil and murderous. The only thing she has going for her is her high threat level.
* HeroicBSOD: Majorin suffers one after getting hit by Evil Rin's BreakingSpeech. It was severe enough that she barely seemed to care that Evil Rin was about to simply kill her. The Queen gets one of her own [[spoiler:after Majorin sacrifices herself to stop Evil Rin from killing her.]]
* HeroicSacrifice: Majorin intercepts Evil Rin's attempts to kill the Queen at the last moment. She ends up with Evil Rin's dagger lodged in her heart for her troubles. [[spoiler:[[DisneyDeath It doesn't stick.]]]]
* IdiotBall: The Queen, after breaking free from her bonds, announces her plan to stop the Shadows in their tracks. This nearly gets her killed when Black Queen effortlessly parries her attack.
* ImposterForgotOneDetail: When Evil Rin drags her Light Half Majorin into the shadows, she has to take her place and assume her form. The Queen notices something "off" about "Majorin" and gets a bad feeling. Then she sees a [[CastsNoShadow lack of a shadow...]]
* KickTheDog: Evil Rin and the Shadow Ojamajos do this after the former kills Majorin. Evil Rin claims Majorin's death was for the best and the Shadow Ojamajos openly mock the Queen and the Ojamajos while they're grieving Majorin.
* KidsAreCruel: The Shadow Ojamajos. They mock, insult, and belittle their counterparts and assault them. They later up the ante by outright ''killing'' them in cold blood.
* NonActionBigBad: Black Queen is described by WordOfGod as being the type who prefers to let others do the fighting for her and only uses her power when she has to deal with others of similar power, like her Light Half.
* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Several powers that BOTH sides have weren't foreshadowed in the slightest. The Shadows having telepathy was a big one, and the Queen gaining the ability to ignore the rules of magic when in her SuperMode is practically a DeusExMachina.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Evil Rin uses this along with her BreakingSpeech to drive Majorin into a HeroicBSOD. See BreakingSpeech.
* SedgwickSpeech: Non-fatal example. Hana pleads with the Shadow Ojamajos and offers friendship. Shadow Hana rebukes and attacks her for her troubles.
* ShoutOut: A few:
** There is one to ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' courtesy of the description of one of the Seven Seals.
** There is a blatant one to ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts'' when the Queen gains her SuperMode; her new weapon in this form is even ''called'' a Keyblade!
* ShutUpHannibal: Majorin does this when she snaps out of her HeroicBSOD and starts fighting back against her Shadow. The Queen does this herself in the climax, and it lets her swipe the Seven Seals and defeat the Shadows.
* TheStinger: Chapter 9 is less of a chapter and more of a trailer for the sequel, ''"Ojamajo Doremi: Witches at World's End"''.
* TheEndOrIsIt: The end of Chapter 8 [[spoiler:shows a pair of [[GlowingEyesOfDoom glowing]] [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]] and [[EvilLaugh sinister laughter]] right where the Queen defeated the Shadows.]]
* ThisCannotBe: Black Queen gets this when her plans fall apart and [[TheDragon Evil Rin]] and the Shadow Ojamajos are slain. She regains her composure right after she is run through by the Queen's finisher, though.
* TooDumbToLive: The Queen has one instance, but it is quite egregious. After freeing herself, she loudly announces her intentions to stop Black Queen, who is more than capable of stopping her attacks, and decides to launch an attack of her own. Black Queen parries the attack and Evil Rin prevents another by taking the Queen's life. Only a HeroicSacrifice on Majorin's part keeps the Queen from dying, but this instance of stupidity did end up getting a precious ''someone'' killed.
* TransformationIsAFreeAction: The Ojamajos literally transform right in front of the Shadow Ojamajos despite the fact that it takes some time in canon. Later, the queen gains a lengthy TransformationSequence as she enters her SuperMode. On both occasions, the villains do absolutely nothing to interrupt it.
* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: The Shadow Ojamajos, in spades. They act like complete jerks and show no qualms over outright ''killing'' their light halves in cold blood.
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* CallBack: Onpu mentions that the Shadows tried and ''succeeded'' in killing them all aside from the Queen once before.
* CurbstompBattle: Black Queen personally assaults the Witch World's Castle to draw the Queen out. By now, she has learned how to use her "''Keyblade''" when not in SuperMode and tries to take a crack at defeating Black Queen again. Black Queen catches the blade and throws the Queen back with little effort.
* [[KidFromTheFuture Kids From the Future]]: Shamaya, Konomi, and Haru, the Queen and Majorin's future daughters, arrive from the future to warn of Black Queen's return.
* TheWorfEffect: Implied. The description says that this time, even the Queen's Super Witch Form won't be enough to stop Black Queen.
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The overall plot goes as follows: A powerful clan of Witches called the [[ShadowArchetype Shadows]], who are led by [[BigBad Black Queen]], are planning to destroy their light halves and take over said light halves' home. Namely, the Human, Witch, and Wizard Worlds. They must be stopped.

The story itself takes a change from the normal formula of ''Anime/OjamajoDoremi'' and temporarily makes them into {{Magical Girl Warrior}}s to fight off this threat. However, the story isn't quite as good as it's premise sounds...

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The overall plot goes as follows: A powerful clan of Witches called the [[ShadowArchetype Shadows]], who are led by [[BigBad Black Queen]], are planning to destroy their light halves and take over said light halves' home. Namely, the Human, Witch, and Wizard Worlds. They must be stopped.

stopped. [[RomanticPlotTumor Also, the Queen and Majorin become a couple and completely overshadow or derail the plot.]]

The story itself takes a change from the normal formula of ''Anime/OjamajoDoremi'' and temporarily makes them into {{Magical Girl Warrior}}s to fight off this threat. However, the story isn't quite as good as it's this premise sounds...
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* SpotlightStealingSquad: The Queen and Majorin. Even though the title says "''Ojamajo'' '''''Doremi''''': ''Rise of the'' '''''Shadows'''''", the Queen and Majorin are arguably the true heroes of the story. They get even more screen time and development than the titular villains and even the canonical main characters. The Queen even gets a SuperMode. [[TropesAreNotbad However]], the Queen and Majorin (more so the latter) don't get a lot of screen time in canon either, but the story could've done more with them instead.

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The story can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5150214/1/Ojamajo-Doremi-Rise-of-the-Shadows here]]. "Ojamajo Doremi: Witches At World's End", an unfinished sequel also written by [=PrettiWitchiMegChanChi=], can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8020686/1/Ojamajo-Doremi-Witches-At-World-s-End here]], but the author's lack of activity probably means it's become a DeadFic by now...

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The story can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5150214/1/Ojamajo-Doremi-Rise-of-the-Shadows here]]. "Ojamajo ''"Ojamajo Doremi: Witches At World's End", End"'', an unfinished sequel also written by [=PrettiWitchiMegChanChi=], can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8020686/1/Ojamajo-Doremi-Witches-At-World-s-End here]], but the author's lack of activity probably means it's become a DeadFic by now...



* AllYourPowersCombined: Magical Stage, which is carried on from canon (and even uses Hana's powers to boot). Shadow Stage, the Shadow Ojamajos' dark equivalent, is described as being stronger and is the best attack of the Shadow Ojamajos.

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* AllYourPowersCombined: Magical Stage, which is carried on from canon (and even uses Hana's powers in this fic to boot).boot), uses the power of all Ojamajos present to execute. Shadow Stage, the Shadow Ojamajos' dark equivalent, is described as being stronger and is the best attack of the Shadow Ojamajos.


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* GenericDoomsdayVillain: Black Queen. While she is powerful and thoroughly evil, her motives and goals are barely plausible and her plan can ''very'' easily be rendered implausible by FridgeLogic. Her personality is hard to pin down aside from just being evil and murderous. The only thing she has going for her is her high threat level.


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* ImplausibleHairColor: Black Queen's hair is described as being a black as night...or maybe even blacker.


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* OriginalCharacter: Black Queen, Evil Rin, and the Shadow Ojamajos cannot be found in canon whatsoever and are strictly fanon characters.


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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Evil Rin uses this along with her BreakingSpeech to drive Majorin into a HeroicBSOD. See BreakingSpeech.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: The Shadow Ojamajos despise their Light Halves for their various quirks that they find annoying. How do they deal with it? By gleefully attacking them when given permission from Black Queen, insulting and belittling them, and finally killing them in cold blood.


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* KickTheDog: Evil Rin and the Shadow Ojamajos do this after the former kills Majorin. Evil Rin claims Majorin's death was for the best and the Shadow Ojamajos openly mock the Queen and the Ojamajos while they're grieving Majorin.
* KidsAreCruel: The Shadow Ojamajos. They mock, insult, and belittle their counterparts and assault them. They later up the ante by outright ''killing'' them in cold blood.


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* TheStinger: Chapter 9 is less of a chapter and more of a trailer for the sequel, ''"Ojamajo Doremi: Witches at World's End"''.


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* TheEndOrIsIt: The end of Chapter 8 [[spoiler:shows a pair of [[GlowingEyesOfDoom glowing]] [[RedEyesTakeWarning red eyes]] and [[EvilLaugh sinister laughter]] right where the Queen defeated the Shadows.]]
* ThemeNaming: The Shadows. Take any character's name, add "Shadow" in front of it, and then drop the surname (if any) and presto! You've got the official names of each Shadow! Evil Rin and Black Queen are the only exceptions...or are they?

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* CardCarryingVillain: All of the villains know they're evil and revel in it. Special mention goes to Evil Rin, if her name is anything to go by...



* EvilPlan: Black Queen's plan is to gather the [[PlotCoupon Seven Seals]], take the Book of Shadows, and use both to conduct a ritual that would allow Shadows everywhere to walk freely in all worlds. End result: All worlds ruled by darkness.



* FantasticRacism: The Shadows toward the protagonists. They refer to them as "Light Beings" and consider them inferior in every possible way.



* HeroicSacrifice: Majorin intercepts Evil Rin's attempts to kill the Queen at the last moment. She ends up with Evil Rin's dagger lodged in her heart for her troubles. [[spoiler:[DisneyDeath It doesn't stick.]]]]

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* HeroicSacrifice: Majorin intercepts Evil Rin's attempts to kill the Queen at the last moment. She ends up with Evil Rin's dagger lodged in her heart for her troubles. [[spoiler:[DisneyDeath [[spoiler:[[DisneyDeath It doesn't stick.]]]]



* MeaningfulName: Evil Rin. She is an evil version of Majorin and literally has "Evil" in her name.



* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Several powers that BOTH sides have weren't foreshadowed in the slightest. The Shadows having telepathy was a big one, and the Queen gaining the ability to ignore the rules of magic when in her SuperMode is practically a DuesExMachina.

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* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Several powers that BOTH sides have weren't foreshadowed in the slightest. The Shadows having telepathy was a big one, and the Queen gaining the ability to ignore the rules of magic when in her SuperMode is practically a DuesExMachina. DeusExMachina.
* ObviouslyEvil: The Shadows. [[DarkIsEvil They are dark]], the least evil things they do are severe mischief, and they will ''gladly'' commit murder. '''Evil''' Rin just makes it blatant in her case.


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* ShutUpHannibal: Majorin does this when she snaps out of her HeroicBSOD and starts fighting back against her Shadow. The Queen does this herself in the climax, and it lets her swipe the Seven Seals and defeat the Shadows.


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* VillainousCrush: Evil Rin has one toward the Queen.
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* HeroicBSOD: Majorin suffers one after getting hit by Evil Rin's BreakingSpeech. IT was severe enough that she barely seemed to care that Evil Rin was about to simply kill her.

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* BreakingSpeech: Evil Rin delivers one to Majorin regarding her self-worth. It works, and Majorin suffers a HeroicBSOD.


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* HeroicBSOD: Majorin suffers one after getting hit by Evil Rin's BreakingSpeech. IT was severe enough that she barely seemed to care that Evil Rin was about to simply kill her.
* HeroicSacrifice: Majorin intercepts Evil Rin's attempts to kill the Queen at the last moment. She ends up with Evil Rin's dagger lodged in her heart for her troubles. [[spoiler:[DisneyDeath It doesn't stick.]]]]


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* PsychoticSmirk: Evil Rin's default expression is this. She wears it whenever possible except when she's angry or fearful.


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* ThisCannotBe: Black Queen gets this when her plans fall apart and [[TheDragon Evil Rin]] and the Shadow Ojamajos are slain. She regains her composure right after she is run through by the Queen's finisher, though.
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The story can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5150214/1/Ojamajo-Doremi-Rise-of-the-Shadows here]]. An unfinished sequel can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8020686/1/Ojamajo-Doremi-Witches-At-World-s-End here]], but the author's lack of activity probably means its become a DeadFic by now...

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The story can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5150214/1/Ojamajo-Doremi-Rise-of-the-Shadows here]]. An "Ojamajo Doremi: Witches At World's End", an unfinished sequel also written by [=PrettiWitchiMegChanChi=], can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8020686/1/Ojamajo-Doremi-Witches-At-World-s-End here]], but the author's lack of activity probably means its it's become a DeadFic by now...

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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Black Queen. She is the BigBad of the story and an all-around evil tyrant.
* TheHighQueen: The Queen of the Witch World retains her canon role. She also opposes Black Queen.



* ImposterForgotOneDetail: When Evil Rin drags her Light Half Majorin into the shadows, she has to take her place and assume her form. The Queen notices something "off" about "Majorin" and gets a bad feeling. Then she sees a [[CastsNoShadow lack of a shadow...]]



* RoyalsWhoActuallyDoSomething: The Queen and Black Queen both do far more than other royals in other stories. The Queen is the less active of the two, but she is the one who ultimately finishes off the villains. Black Queen is the BigBad and thus the one driving the plot. She herself takes an active role in the spell that would complete her plans.



** There is a blatant one to ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts'' when the Queen gains her SuperMode; her weapon is even ''called'' a Keyblade!

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* QuirkyMinibossSquad: The Shadow Ojamajos. They also double as PsychoRangers in that they're a group and are each counterparts to each of their Light Halves.

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* NewPowersAsThePlotDemands: Several powers that BOTH sides have weren't foreshadowed in the slightest. The Shadows having telepathy was a big one, and the Queen gaining the ability to ignore the rules of magic when in her SuperMode is practically a DuesExMachina.
* QuirkyMinibossSquad: The Shadow Ojamajos. They also double as PsychoRangers in that they're a group and are each counterparts to each of their respective Light Halves.
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* AmplifierArtifact: The Seven Seals are a set of these. The Shadows Ojamajos were mentioned as being boosted by the power of the Seals they were holding. Said Seals are also what allows the Queen to use her SuperMode.
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* CastNoShadow: The Shadows, being {{Living Shadow}}s, are unable to cast shadows of their own no matter what kind of magic they use. It is virtually the only way to tell a Shadow-in-disguise from a "Light Being".

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* CuteClumsyGirl: Doremi, just like in canon. Although the fic does explain some of her clumsiness as being the work of Shadow Doremi.
* DarkIsEvil: The Shadows are all based around darkness and come form a dark realm hidden within the very shadows themselves. They are all portrayed as evil and self-serving.

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* CuteClumsyGirl: Doremi, just like in canon. Although the fic does explain some of her clumsiness as being the work of Shadow Doremi.
Doremi, the latter character claims she's clumsy with or without her, regardless.
* DarkIsEvil: The Shadows are all based around darkness and come form from a dark realm hidden within the very shadows themselves. They are all portrayed as evil and self-serving.



* DisneyDeath: Majorin and the Ojamajos are all killed in the final battle. However, an AssPull on the Queen's part allows them to be brought back to life without anyone else dying.



* FlatCharacter: Just about every OriginalCharacter presented had little CharacterDevelopment and thus little as far as personality.

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* {{Expy}}: WordOfGod has confirmed that Black Queen is based off of [[Disney/SleepingBeauty Maleficent]]. She has also confirmed that the Queen's [[SuperMode Super Witch Form]] is based on Super Sonic...which is, in turn, based on Super Saiyan Goku.
* FlatCharacter: Just about every OriginalCharacter presented had little CharacterDevelopment and thus little as far as personality. The only exception would have to be Evil Rin, and even she doesn't have too much else going for her.
* IdiotBall: The Queen, after breaking free from her bonds, announces her plan to stop the Shadows in their tracks. This nearly gets her killed when Black Queen effortlessly parries her attack.
* JerkAss: All of the Shadows display a very selfish personality and go out of their way to belittle and mock their Light Halves. Shadow Hana herself spurns Hana's offer of friendship and strikes her.



* MagicalIncantation: All of the phrases the Ojamajos use are here, including Magical Stage. Curiously averted with the Shadow Ojamajos.

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* MacGuffin: The Seven Seals. Unlike other examples of this trope, the villains have already gathered them up by the middle of the story while the heroes have no idea they even exist.
* MagicalIncantation: All of the phrases the Ojamajos use are here, including Magical Stage. Curiously averted Averted with the Shadow Ojamajos.



* WouldHurtAChild: Black Queen was about to attack the Ojamajos when the Shadow Ojamajos burst in.

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* {{Yandere}}: Evil Rin clearly has a lust for the Queen and feels that she should be in love with her back; Evil Rin even refers to the Queen as "[her] precious snowflake". She shows no qualms over killing her though and will gleefully follow Black Queen's orders, even if they would lead to the Queen's demise.
* WouldHurtAChild: Black Queen was about to personally attack the Ojamajos when the Shadow Ojamajos burst in.
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* MagicalIncantaion: All of the phrases the Ojamajos use are here, including Magical Stage. Curiously averted with the Shadow Ojamajos.

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* AllYourPowersCombined: Magical Stage, which is carried on from canon (and even uses Hana's powers to boot). Shadow Stage, the Shadow Ojamajos' dark equivalent, is described as being stronger and is the best attack of the Shadow Ojamajos.
* ArtifactOfDoom: The Book of Shadows, which tells of the history of the Shadows and has everything they need to complete their plans. Subverted in that the protagonists themselves can use it to eliminate the Shadows once and for all.



* CallingYourAttacks: Each of the Ojamajos use their {{Magical Incantation}}s to launch attacks. The Shadow Ojamajos call "Shadow Stage" when fighting their Light Halves for the third time. The Queen, in her [[SuperMode Super Witch Form]], calls out "Queen's Starburst" right before running Black Queen through.



* TheEvilGenius: Shadow Hazuki and Shadow Onpu are confirmed to be the brains of the Shadow Ojamajos, the former more so.



* MagicalIncantaion: All of the phrases the Ojamajos use are here, including Magical Stage. Curiously averted with the Shadow Ojamajos.



* ShadowArchetype: The villains and their minions are literally the shadows of the protagonists. All of them have several traits in common with their respective Light Half, but they still tend toward being mischievous and evil.

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* RapunzelHair: The Queen's long hair is retained from canon. Black Queen, as her Shadow, has hair that is just as long.
* SedgwickSpeech: Non-fatal example. Hana pleads with the Shadow Ojamajos and offers friendship. Shadow Hana rebukes and attacks her for her troubles.
* ShadowArchetype: The villains and their minions are literally the shadows of the protagonists. All of them have several traits in common with their respective Light Half, but they still tend toward being mischievous and evil. They also express traits that their counterparts either conceal or have no idea about.



* TransformationIsAFreeAction: The Ojamajos literally transform right in front of the Shadow Ojamajos despite the fact that it takes some time in canon. Later, the queen gains a lengthy TransformationSequence as she enters her SuperMode. On both occasions, the villains do absolutely nothing to interrupt it.




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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior: The Shadow Ojamajos, in spades. They act like complete jerks and show no qualms over outright ''killing'' their light halves in cold blood.
* WouldHurtAChild: Black Queen was about to attack the Ojamajos when the Shadow Ojamajos burst in.
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''Ojamajo Doremi: Rise of the Shadows'' is an ''Anime/OjamajoDoremi'' FanFic written by [=PrettiWitchiMegChanChi=] over on Fanfiction.net.

The overall plot goes as follows: A powerful clan of Witches called the [[ShadowArchetype Shadows]], who are led by [[BigBad Black Queen]], are planning to destroy their light halves and take over said light halves' home. Namely, the Human, Witch, and Wizard Worlds. They must be stopped.

The story itself takes a change from the normal formula of ''Anime/OjamajoDoremi'' and temporarily makes them into {{Magical Girl Warrior}}s to fight off this threat. However, the story isn't quite as good as it's premise sounds...

The story can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5150214/1/Ojamajo-Doremi-Rise-of-the-Shadows here]]. An unfinished sequel can be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/8020686/1/Ojamajo-Doremi-Witches-At-World-s-End here]], but the author's lack of activity probably means its become a DeadFic by now...

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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:The Queen of the Witch World, in her [[SuperMode Super Witch Form]], uses her new powers to bring back Majorin and the fallen Ojamajos when Black Queen has them killed. Her not dying as a result is handwaved away as being another new power granted by the Seven Seals.]]
* BigBad: Black Queen, the Queen of the Witch World's Shadow, is the one driving the events of the story proper.
* BlackAndWhiteMorality: The heroic Ojamajos, Queen, and Majorin fight to stop the evil Shadows from taking over the world.
* TheBrute: Shadow Aiko is described as physically being the strongest of the Shadow Ojamajos.
* CuteClumsyGirl: Doremi, just like in canon. Although the fic does explain some of her clumsiness as being the work of Shadow Doremi.
* DarkIsEvil: The Shadows are all based around darkness and come form a dark realm hidden within the very shadows themselves. They are all portrayed as evil and self-serving.
* DeadpanSnarker: Shadow Hazuki takes the cake, lampshading her Light Half screaming and running from her own shadow. Shadow Pop is this as well, being Pop's Shadow. The Queen of the Witch World isn't exempt from this either.
* TheDragon: Evil Rin, Majorin's Shadow, is this for Black Queen in that she is her right hand Witch and does a lot of action on behalf of the BigBad.
* FlatCharacter: Just about every OriginalCharacter presented had little CharacterDevelopment and thus little as far as personality.
* LivingShadow: From a certain viewpoint, [[CaptainObvious the Shadows themselves]] are this, being sentient even when being cast by their Light Halves.
* NonActionBigBad: Black Queen is described by WordOfGod as being the type who prefers to let others do the fighting for her and only uses her power when she has to deal with others of similar power, like her Light Half.
* QuirkyMinibossSquad: The Shadow Ojamajos. They also double as PsychoRangers in that they're a group and are each counterparts to each of their Light Halves.
* ShadowArchetype: The villains and their minions are literally the shadows of the protagonists. All of them have several traits in common with their respective Light Half, but they still tend toward being mischievous and evil.
* ShoutOut: A few:
** There is one to ''VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog'' courtesy of the description of one of the Seven Seals.
** There is a blatant one to ''VideoGame/KingdomHearts'' when the Queen gains her SuperMode; her weapon is even ''called'' a Keyblade!
* SuperMode: [[spoiler:The Queen of the Witch World gains this when her feelings of hope and motivation to stop Black Queen let her take the Seven Seals and turn into a Super Witch Form.]]
* TakeOverTheWorld: Black Queen's goal. The prologue does give a more justifiable reason, but it's quickly lost in favor of making her look more evil.
* TheTrickster: Shadow Doremi. She enjoys playing pranks on unsuspecting people, particularly Doremi. WordOfGod claims that all of the Shadow Ojamajos are like this, but not to the extent as Shadow Doremi.

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